This book is in serious need of an editor, the most glaring mistake being the sentence that claimed that UK time is an hour ahead of European time, when the reality is in fact the opposite... Characters' names kept changing, particularly Michael to Martin and Martin to Michael, and there was a Jason/Jonas as well. A few basic typos that could have easily been picked up cropped up.
*SOME SPOILERS AHEAD*
As usual with these thriller books, the characters were not particularly likeable - in this book I found them more so than usual, though, but I still didn't care for them very much. I found the romance to be unnecessary and rather farcical, and I despised the way Josh kept talking about Dee early on as if she were his property, or at least his girlfriend - he's always jealous when she laughs with another man, and at one point he actually uses the word 'disapproval' when she so much as spoke to another man! Not to mention when he first met her, all he could do was eye her up, and we were treated to a long, detailed description of how her skirt length was short enough to be interesting (hmmm) but long enough to be "modest". Even when she was working professionally - as his bodyguard no less - he doesn't seem to treat her very seriously at first, even though he is impressed with how she works. And then all of a sudden they're engaged after twelve days!
Too many stereotypes/clichés, from the geeky analyst to the red-headed Scot, to the "Sharia Islamic Bank of Arabia". Yeah, if that's a real place in London, someone let me know, but Google turned up no results and it sounds like the most ignorant name I've ever heard (though as I said, my indignation could be unjustified). People looked "Arabic" and "Latin", and a young girl's accent was described as "more East End than Middle East", as if a Muslim girl can't have been born in and grew up in East End London. None of it sat well with me, and I'm sure if I were to Google, the author would be white. (That's just been confirmed, actually. No surprises there.)
The character Don Fisher is a complete copy-and-paste of Sir Bob Geldof, right down to the three oddly-named daughters. Why this author felt he couldn't write his own background for this character remains to be seen, but it's as if he's taken the Geldof family and literally done nothing but rename the lot.
A few procedural discrepancies are present, and of course criminals who are touted as quick-thinking and careful make stupid and transparent mistakes to conveniently aid the police investigation. It's fine for a Kindle freebie, fine for a run-of-the-mill thriller, but needs a few things ironed out. Not sure whether I'll read the next two books in the series, but since this one only took me a day, I might end up trying. I just hope the next one doesn't have a painfully elaborate description of a football match like this one does!