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Mer Tales #3
Everlost
With one kiss, Tatiana has discovered a love for a man she’d hated—the prince of Natatoria. Through the botched rescue attempt by her father against this union, an army of rebels has revealed their identity and intentions—treason. When the King is fatally injured, Azor takes things into his own hands. No one is safe as mers are forced to take sides. Betamers take the blame, including Tatiana’s family’s closest friend, Badger, and the punishment is death.
Caught between the bond and her true feelings, Tatiana, the future Queen, must overcome the promise to fight for what’s right and uncover the truths of the past or all will become Everlost.
Caught between the bond and her true feelings, Tatiana, the future Queen, must overcome the promise to fight for what’s right and uncover the truths of the past or all will become Everlost.
374 pages, Paperback
First published March 12, 2013
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February 26, 2013
My best novel yet! Releasing 2/28/2013 (Sorry, I couldn't leave a comment below yours)
UPDATE ** new release projected 3/14/13 **
UPDATE ** new release projected 3/14/13 **
April 11, 2013
Ok, so I read the first two installments of this series, and the premise was a little messed up for me. I kept on reading because I have a thing for mermaids. I consider myself to be pretty tolerant of poor writing or world-building or whatever. In this case, my perceived tolerance was a mistake. There were several problematic aspects with the 3rd book in the series, on top of the whole insta-infatuation kiss thing. This is really long and ranty. Read at your own risk!
Mermish
One common feature of mermaid-centered novels is the desire of the author to create a vocabulary and pattern of speech native to the mermaid culture. Most authors accomplish this goal by taking common expressions and proverbs in English, and adapting them to the oceanic setting. This trend was particularly bad in this book (though the Forgive My Fins books closely follow). In some cases, this can be pretty effective and fit the expression perfectly. Here are some examples (sorry I don't have page numbers):
"As she grabbed his arm, determined to latch onto him like a starfish, a wall of churning white water ricocheted from the gate's opening and blasted into them, pushing Azor's body into hers."
"He'd known Queen Desiree to be strong in the presence of adversity, but apart from approval of the King, the promise molded her into a spineless jellyfish."
"She'd stayed in Natatoria--wild and frantic like a dying fish--for Azor."
"The last time you gave me something, you drugged me to sleep, you slippery little grunion."
Most of those examples are actually metaphors and similes, and not attempts to fit English expressions to the mermaid world. Other times this is used (a lot) come off as cheesy and even nonsensical. Here are some examples:
"Once they all woke up, they'd be mad as a school of hornet fish and ready to continue the fight."
There is no such thing as a hornet fish. She uses this example several times, but it makes no sense. Maybe just say barracudas or another aggressive species of fish?
"Caught you red finned."/Tatiana: "Because you're a slimy sea snake. I caught you, red-handed and..."
Here is an example of the same character using two opposing expressions for the same thing. If she grew up around humans, why would she think of the mermish term, but say the human term?
Tatiana: "I know. You'd be hung by your scales. Blah blah blah. Tube worms! I need to know where my husb- mate is. I am the princess, remember."
How does that even work?
"She almost told him he could stick his sympathy up his vent, but bit back her retort."
This just sounds ridiculous.
"Sure, Ash had explained the birds and the bees to her, but fishy style?"
WTF is fishy style?
"Someone said her mate let sharkish side take over and he bit during a moment of passion. Would Azor do the same if she tried to tickle his thing?"
Why would she try to tickle his thing (I only say thing because I have no idea what mermen have). Are mermen supposed to be like sharks? Sharks typically do bite their mates, but it serves a biological function. They're trying to keep their mates in place during sex. Do mermen need to keep their mates in place? That has some horrific implications.
"She looked up, hoping Azor had come to apologize, and bit her lip so she wouldn't spill the crabs about the magnificent dinner she'd planned."
Crabs may have many characteristics, but they are not particularly spill-able. The expression makes no sense.
"The healer's large bugged-out eyes sent a shiver down Tatiana's fin."
This would make more sense if mermaids had no spines, which they, and many species of fish, do seem to have.
"Tatiana sighed in disappointment, but feared angering her mother-in-mer further."
Mother-in-mer?! Mother-in-mer! That's the best you could come up with?
"Dorian still had control of the Scotland gate, and since the distance took hours to traverse, even at merlightning speed, and Azor hadn't paid much attention in securing it, they should be able to escape undetected."
WTF is merlightning? Is that lightning under the sea? How can that even be a thing?
Jacob: "Az-hole is a son of a bass, but if Tatiana were mine, you wouldn't be able to keep me away from her. And thank Poseidon he's not tickling her regular, or you'd be one mad hornet fish. And you know they're definitely not--doing the nasty."
"She trailed her fingers lightly down his chest; her man in shining scales was finally ready to be her mate."
Are shining scales particularly more noble than non-shining scales?
Sunfish are huge.
Jax: "Azor, that jackfish!"
For the record, I couldn't even find what a jackfish was. The closest thing was a historical name for another species (sea bass, I think). Note to the author, adding "fish" to the end of an English expression does not make it appropriate for mermaids.
Oberon: "Do you, Jacob Vanamar James take Tatiana Renee Helton to be your lawfully promised mermaid? [...] Then by the power bestowed upon me by Chancellor Merric and the United Mers of Natatoria, I now pronounce you mermaid and mate. You may kiss your maid."
If the mer culture is so opposed to humans in general (the books have several instances of open hostility and disdain for humans), why would their wedding ceremony and vows be so similar to the American wedding ceremony? They don't even like the term husband, but their vows are word for word identical (minus the mermish). How hard was it to come up with something original, really? Especially after co-opting the names Oberon and Galadriel.
"They turned, hand in hand, and Ash, her mermaid of honor, handed her official sister-in-mer a seashell bouquet as the boys choir broke into a soft ballad."
Non-Mermish
These are examples of when the mers use terms or rely on things that they would not be familiar with normally.
Azor: "Cassava poison on the barbs will stop them if they're feeling brave."
Where are the mers going to stockpile cassava to make poison out of it? There are plenty of poisonous life forms in the ocean. Some are pretty deadly.
"The fear in the water matched her face, chilling his bones as her frantic eyes darted from him to the door--like a caged animal knowing the slaughter was coming."
How often does Jacob see an animal slaughtered from a cage?
"On the floor were shoes--expensive designer shoes--of every type imaginable."
You're telling me those shoes manage to last underwater?
Queen Desiree: "It's stale and where are my croissants and jam?"
Okay, I can suspend disbelief that they transport human food from land to the palace, but croissants would not do well in the humidity.
"In the center was a huge oak four poster bed."
How the fuck did the mers transport an oak four poster bed to the palace?!!
Terrible Implications About Sex and Rape
On top of the mermish/non-mermish stuff, the series has some serious problems with sex and rape. Most of the scenes that mention sex are very problematic, even coming from the heroes.
"To her shock, both Shanleigh and Coralade were naked under their aprons, confirming the gossip floating around at mermaid school."
Tatiana slut-shames the hell out of her servants. I am supposed to believe that the servants, who wear skirts out of modesty, are totally cool with going topless just to get attention from men? They could wear a seashell bra and achieve the same objective, really.
Tatiana: "I don't care what you did before, you will not be topless in my mate's or any guard's presence here in my home. Do you understand? You're to be chaste at this compound, no excuses."
Yeah, those stupid, slutty servants can't keep it in their skirts at work? What kind of society is this?
"But now that she could finally see his thing, she wasn't all that impressed."
If you can't refer to sex organs appropriately, you probably shouldn't be having sex.
"She muffled a gasp and unpinned herself from his appendage, rubbing at the bleeding cuts on her tail."
What the hell is this?
"His hands made contact with her tulle covered[sic] boobs first."
Again, maybe you should wait a while.
"If Tatiana were his, she wouldn't get a moment's peace. well, maybe to eat and occasionally sleep."
This is from Jacob's POV. He's supposed to be Tatiana's soul mate. This kind of shit is not ok.
Azor: "I don't need your permission to impregnate you."
Okay, I realize that Azor is the antagonist here, but this is way too much. It's bad enough that he kissed her against her will, now he is trying to get her pregnant against her will? I'd feel less bad if he had been appropriately shut down by the heroes about this, but Jacob seems more interested in the fact that she might not be a virgin anymore (how does fishtail virginity work), than the fact that she might have been raped.
Azor: "To finally show you what it's like to care for someone and have them reject you. And when your father made a fool of the King, I couldn't think of a fitting punishment than to steal his daughter, make her mine. Too bad I couldn't steal your virginity, too."
How does fishtail virginity work???
"Without waiting, he covered her mouth with is and his soul exploded into light, feeling her, breathing her. Her mouth, so soft and warm, sweet and tangy, trembling and deepening. He was hers and she was his. They were one soul. Alive."
This scene was supposed to be romantic. I can't help but feel disgusted at this whole situation. Jacob spends the entire book trying to get her to fight the promise, but he barely gives her enough time to break from it before starting his own promise.
"Hope that his girl was still untouched."
Jacob, get your priorities in order. Seriously.
Editing Mishaps
Here I have a few of the glaring mistakes I found throughout the text. These are easy to spot, and it makes me question the editor's competence.The correct forms are in brackets.
Tatiana: "You act as if I've been given free reign[rein] because the Queen has let me out of the dog house."
"She couldn't bare [bear] the thought."
"If his injury took Tatiana from him... he couldn't bare[bear] the thought."
Lily: "Yes, I am. After Fin left me at the alter[altar], Kiernan asked for my hand."
Queen Desiree: "All mighty, Poseidon [Almighty Poseidon]. Heal the King and our city. Give mercy to those who suffer. Help us through this difficult time and grant me wisdom to know who is friend and who is foe. Amen."
Why the hell would a mermaid prayer to Poseidon be phrased in the exact same way as a Christian prayer. Amen? Really?
"Jax, [comma splice] was a catfish with his nine lives, but he'd need to get the bracelet off before leaving for Tahoe or for Florida to find Galadriel."
Miscellaneous WTF Moments
"Typically, only the severely maimed--or worse, the orphaned--were royal servants. Though sacrificing your life to the royal family was deemed honorable, everyone knew the real reason why they'd been volunteered to serve no one wanted to promise their 'perfect' child to the maimed for fear their genes would carry on to their offspring. And orphans, the lowliest of the mer, whose mothers weren't discussed and fathers were unknown, had no one to petition their hand. Gloves hid the fingers of servants as a symbol of their commitment not to promise."
I don't understand why illegitimate children are known as "orphans" throughout the book. It's also fucked up that their servants all have disabilities, and that those jobs are their only prospects. Why would they not be able to marry each other? I also like how it's surprising to everyone that they have been marrying this whole time. Uh, you messed up your enforcement mechanism when you made them wear gloves. Of course they are getting married in secret.
"In the main room, a dozen mermen milled about, stinking up the place with their fishy musk."
"Bubbles made their way up to the ceiling from his backside vent, bathing her with a fowl stench she could taste on her tongue."
Why is there a fart scene in the middle of a quasi-sex scene?
"She glared, wishing she had laser eyes like the mermaid movies often depicted."
What mermaid movies is she watching?
"The healer pressed into her skin where her tail started and tugged on Tatiana's scales with a hum. Then with a quick lift of the cloth encircling Tatiana's hips, the healer squished her fingers into the spot where only her mate should ever touch, releasing her mating scent into the water. Tatiana flipped her tail and slid out from the healer's probing touch."
This scene just seems way more graphic than necessary. Beyond that, has Tatiana never been to a doctor before?
"If she didn't look pregnant soon, she'd be labeled defective."
"Then he thought of his mother, a beta-mer and a Christian, who never prayed to Poseidon like the rest of the mer. Instead of placing hope on Poseidon, God of the Sea, she said her God had a plan, to trust in Him, to choose to do the right thing and let Him do the rest. Jacob only placated her beliefs, thinking her cross and prayers useless. He believed in a god, yes, but he didn't think that her God really cared; too far away to actually see the gritty details of all the people on the planet; too busy to be bothered. And who would want to beg help from Him? Jacob didn't need God anyway."
'I give her to you, then,' he whispered. 'Protect and keep her. May your justice be done.'
And for the first time, peace filled his broken soul and understanding of what his mother was so passionate about suddenly made sense.
Thanks for the preachiness out of nowhere. I know that the author is a Christian, and that's fine, but it seems tacked on and nonsensical in this story.
Mermish
One common feature of mermaid-centered novels is the desire of the author to create a vocabulary and pattern of speech native to the mermaid culture. Most authors accomplish this goal by taking common expressions and proverbs in English, and adapting them to the oceanic setting. This trend was particularly bad in this book (though the Forgive My Fins books closely follow). In some cases, this can be pretty effective and fit the expression perfectly. Here are some examples (sorry I don't have page numbers):
"As she grabbed his arm, determined to latch onto him like a starfish, a wall of churning white water ricocheted from the gate's opening and blasted into them, pushing Azor's body into hers."
"He'd known Queen Desiree to be strong in the presence of adversity, but apart from approval of the King, the promise molded her into a spineless jellyfish."
"She'd stayed in Natatoria--wild and frantic like a dying fish--for Azor."
"The last time you gave me something, you drugged me to sleep, you slippery little grunion."
Most of those examples are actually metaphors and similes, and not attempts to fit English expressions to the mermaid world. Other times this is used (a lot) come off as cheesy and even nonsensical. Here are some examples:
"Once they all woke up, they'd be mad as a school of hornet fish and ready to continue the fight."
There is no such thing as a hornet fish. She uses this example several times, but it makes no sense. Maybe just say barracudas or another aggressive species of fish?
"Caught you red finned."/Tatiana: "Because you're a slimy sea snake. I caught you, red-handed and..."
Here is an example of the same character using two opposing expressions for the same thing. If she grew up around humans, why would she think of the mermish term, but say the human term?
Tatiana: "I know. You'd be hung by your scales. Blah blah blah. Tube worms! I need to know where my husb- mate is. I am the princess, remember."
How does that even work?
"She almost told him he could stick his sympathy up his vent, but bit back her retort."
This just sounds ridiculous.
"Sure, Ash had explained the birds and the bees to her, but fishy style?"
WTF is fishy style?
"Someone said her mate let sharkish side take over and he bit during a moment of passion. Would Azor do the same if she tried to tickle his thing?"
Why would she try to tickle his thing (I only say thing because I have no idea what mermen have). Are mermen supposed to be like sharks? Sharks typically do bite their mates, but it serves a biological function. They're trying to keep their mates in place during sex. Do mermen need to keep their mates in place? That has some horrific implications.
"She looked up, hoping Azor had come to apologize, and bit her lip so she wouldn't spill the crabs about the magnificent dinner she'd planned."
Crabs may have many characteristics, but they are not particularly spill-able. The expression makes no sense.
"The healer's large bugged-out eyes sent a shiver down Tatiana's fin."
This would make more sense if mermaids had no spines, which they, and many species of fish, do seem to have.
"Tatiana sighed in disappointment, but feared angering her mother-in-mer further."
Mother-in-mer?! Mother-in-mer! That's the best you could come up with?
"Dorian still had control of the Scotland gate, and since the distance took hours to traverse, even at merlightning speed, and Azor hadn't paid much attention in securing it, they should be able to escape undetected."
WTF is merlightning? Is that lightning under the sea? How can that even be a thing?
Jacob: "Az-hole is a son of a bass, but if Tatiana were mine, you wouldn't be able to keep me away from her. And thank Poseidon he's not tickling her regular, or you'd be one mad hornet fish. And you know they're definitely not--doing the nasty."
"She trailed her fingers lightly down his chest; her man in shining scales was finally ready to be her mate."
Are shining scales particularly more noble than non-shining scales?
Sunfish are huge.
Jax: "Azor, that jackfish!"
For the record, I couldn't even find what a jackfish was. The closest thing was a historical name for another species (sea bass, I think). Note to the author, adding "fish" to the end of an English expression does not make it appropriate for mermaids.
Oberon: "Do you, Jacob Vanamar James take Tatiana Renee Helton to be your lawfully promised mermaid? [...] Then by the power bestowed upon me by Chancellor Merric and the United Mers of Natatoria, I now pronounce you mermaid and mate. You may kiss your maid."
If the mer culture is so opposed to humans in general (the books have several instances of open hostility and disdain for humans), why would their wedding ceremony and vows be so similar to the American wedding ceremony? They don't even like the term husband, but their vows are word for word identical (minus the mermish). How hard was it to come up with something original, really? Especially after co-opting the names Oberon and Galadriel.
"They turned, hand in hand, and Ash, her mermaid of honor, handed her official sister-in-mer a seashell bouquet as the boys choir broke into a soft ballad."
Non-Mermish
These are examples of when the mers use terms or rely on things that they would not be familiar with normally.
Azor: "Cassava poison on the barbs will stop them if they're feeling brave."
Where are the mers going to stockpile cassava to make poison out of it? There are plenty of poisonous life forms in the ocean. Some are pretty deadly.
"The fear in the water matched her face, chilling his bones as her frantic eyes darted from him to the door--like a caged animal knowing the slaughter was coming."
How often does Jacob see an animal slaughtered from a cage?
"On the floor were shoes--expensive designer shoes--of every type imaginable."
You're telling me those shoes manage to last underwater?
Queen Desiree: "It's stale and where are my croissants and jam?"
Okay, I can suspend disbelief that they transport human food from land to the palace, but croissants would not do well in the humidity.
"In the center was a huge oak four poster bed."
How the fuck did the mers transport an oak four poster bed to the palace?!!
Terrible Implications About Sex and Rape
On top of the mermish/non-mermish stuff, the series has some serious problems with sex and rape. Most of the scenes that mention sex are very problematic, even coming from the heroes.
"To her shock, both Shanleigh and Coralade were naked under their aprons, confirming the gossip floating around at mermaid school."
Tatiana slut-shames the hell out of her servants. I am supposed to believe that the servants, who wear skirts out of modesty, are totally cool with going topless just to get attention from men? They could wear a seashell bra and achieve the same objective, really.
Tatiana: "I don't care what you did before, you will not be topless in my mate's or any guard's presence here in my home. Do you understand? You're to be chaste at this compound, no excuses."
Yeah, those stupid, slutty servants can't keep it in their skirts at work? What kind of society is this?
"But now that she could finally see his thing, she wasn't all that impressed."
If you can't refer to sex organs appropriately, you probably shouldn't be having sex.
"She muffled a gasp and unpinned herself from his appendage, rubbing at the bleeding cuts on her tail."
What the hell is this?
"His hands made contact with her tulle covered[sic] boobs first."
Again, maybe you should wait a while.
"If Tatiana were his, she wouldn't get a moment's peace. well, maybe to eat and occasionally sleep."
This is from Jacob's POV. He's supposed to be Tatiana's soul mate. This kind of shit is not ok.
Azor: "I don't need your permission to impregnate you."
Okay, I realize that Azor is the antagonist here, but this is way too much. It's bad enough that he kissed her against her will, now he is trying to get her pregnant against her will? I'd feel less bad if he had been appropriately shut down by the heroes about this, but Jacob seems more interested in the fact that she might not be a virgin anymore (how does fishtail virginity work), than the fact that she might have been raped.
Azor: "To finally show you what it's like to care for someone and have them reject you. And when your father made a fool of the King, I couldn't think of a fitting punishment than to steal his daughter, make her mine. Too bad I couldn't steal your virginity, too."
How does fishtail virginity work???
"Without waiting, he covered her mouth with is and his soul exploded into light, feeling her, breathing her. Her mouth, so soft and warm, sweet and tangy, trembling and deepening. He was hers and she was his. They were one soul. Alive."
This scene was supposed to be romantic. I can't help but feel disgusted at this whole situation. Jacob spends the entire book trying to get her to fight the promise, but he barely gives her enough time to break from it before starting his own promise.
"Hope that his girl was still untouched."
Jacob, get your priorities in order. Seriously.
Editing Mishaps
Here I have a few of the glaring mistakes I found throughout the text. These are easy to spot, and it makes me question the editor's competence.The correct forms are in brackets.
Tatiana: "You act as if I've been given free reign[rein] because the Queen has let me out of the dog house."
"She couldn't bare [bear] the thought."
"If his injury took Tatiana from him... he couldn't bare[bear] the thought."
Lily: "Yes, I am. After Fin left me at the alter[altar], Kiernan asked for my hand."
Queen Desiree: "All mighty, Poseidon [Almighty Poseidon]. Heal the King and our city. Give mercy to those who suffer. Help us through this difficult time and grant me wisdom to know who is friend and who is foe. Amen."
Why the hell would a mermaid prayer to Poseidon be phrased in the exact same way as a Christian prayer. Amen? Really?
"Jax, [comma splice] was a catfish with his nine lives, but he'd need to get the bracelet off before leaving for Tahoe or for Florida to find Galadriel."
Miscellaneous WTF Moments
"Typically, only the severely maimed--or worse, the orphaned--were royal servants. Though sacrificing your life to the royal family was deemed honorable, everyone knew the real reason why they'd been volunteered to serve no one wanted to promise their 'perfect' child to the maimed for fear their genes would carry on to their offspring. And orphans, the lowliest of the mer, whose mothers weren't discussed and fathers were unknown, had no one to petition their hand. Gloves hid the fingers of servants as a symbol of their commitment not to promise."
I don't understand why illegitimate children are known as "orphans" throughout the book. It's also fucked up that their servants all have disabilities, and that those jobs are their only prospects. Why would they not be able to marry each other? I also like how it's surprising to everyone that they have been marrying this whole time. Uh, you messed up your enforcement mechanism when you made them wear gloves. Of course they are getting married in secret.
"In the main room, a dozen mermen milled about, stinking up the place with their fishy musk."
"Bubbles made their way up to the ceiling from his backside vent, bathing her with a fowl stench she could taste on her tongue."
Why is there a fart scene in the middle of a quasi-sex scene?
"She glared, wishing she had laser eyes like the mermaid movies often depicted."
What mermaid movies is she watching?
"The healer pressed into her skin where her tail started and tugged on Tatiana's scales with a hum. Then with a quick lift of the cloth encircling Tatiana's hips, the healer squished her fingers into the spot where only her mate should ever touch, releasing her mating scent into the water. Tatiana flipped her tail and slid out from the healer's probing touch."
This scene just seems way more graphic than necessary. Beyond that, has Tatiana never been to a doctor before?
"If she didn't look pregnant soon, she'd be labeled defective."
"Then he thought of his mother, a beta-mer and a Christian, who never prayed to Poseidon like the rest of the mer. Instead of placing hope on Poseidon, God of the Sea, she said her God had a plan, to trust in Him, to choose to do the right thing and let Him do the rest. Jacob only placated her beliefs, thinking her cross and prayers useless. He believed in a god, yes, but he didn't think that her God really cared; too far away to actually see the gritty details of all the people on the planet; too busy to be bothered. And who would want to beg help from Him? Jacob didn't need God anyway."
'I give her to you, then,' he whispered. 'Protect and keep her. May your justice be done.'
And for the first time, peace filled his broken soul and understanding of what his mother was so passionate about suddenly made sense.
Thanks for the preachiness out of nowhere. I know that the author is a Christian, and that's fine, but it seems tacked on and nonsensical in this story.
August 27, 2013
I enjoyed this series as a whole, but this book was definitely my least favorite of the three. I think my major complaint was that there was so little of Ash and Fin in this one. This book focused on Tati, whom I loved, but the first two focused so much more on Ash and Fin that it seemed abrupt to have them so much a lesser presence. The change in voices and in how the story was told was also different, not bad, but different. The first two were told in alternating first person POVs between Ash and Fin. This installment was written as a third person narrative and felt older than the other two, far less YA than the others.
Aside from that, Tati''s story was an engaging one. Azor was as likable in this book as in the previous ones. That is to say... not at all likable. There were times when I want to reach into the book and just slap the stupid out of him. There was a whole lot of mystery and intrigue in this book, a lot of action. That part of story was pretty engaging. I think I just really connected with Ash and Fin as characters and missed their strong presence.
My only other complaint is a little one, that there were parts of it that came off as a little preachy. This may be a personal taste thing, however, as I am not generally a fan of religious fiction.
Things to love about Everlost...
-The mystery. I love suspense and twists and turns and there was a bunch of that.
Things I wanted more of...
--Ash and Fin. I really loved their story.
My recommendation: Still a good book and a must read for the end of this fun series. I gave it 3.5 mugs.
Aside from that, Tati''s story was an engaging one. Azor was as likable in this book as in the previous ones. That is to say... not at all likable. There were times when I want to reach into the book and just slap the stupid out of him. There was a whole lot of mystery and intrigue in this book, a lot of action. That part of story was pretty engaging. I think I just really connected with Ash and Fin as characters and missed their strong presence.
My only other complaint is a little one, that there were parts of it that came off as a little preachy. This may be a personal taste thing, however, as I am not generally a fan of religious fiction.
Things to love about Everlost...
-The mystery. I love suspense and twists and turns and there was a bunch of that.
Things I wanted more of...
--Ash and Fin. I really loved their story.
My recommendation: Still a good book and a must read for the end of this fun series. I gave it 3.5 mugs.
March 13, 2013
WOW....WOW...WOW!!!!! That's a total understatement for Everlost. Although I am sad the series is over, I have to say what a way to finish it. I was fortunate enough to work with Brenda on Everlost so I got an early read of the story. Brenda once again amazed me with her weaving of this tale. I was literally on the edge of my seat. The plot twists were abundant as well as the love and hate for the individual characters. I actually screamed out loud "NO WAY!" at certain points in this book. I will not go into any details because I don't want to spoil it for anyone, but hang onto your fins everyone, Brenda did amazing as usual! If you haven't read Evergreen and Everblue I highly suggest you do so prior to reading Everlost. It's a story for all ages. Congratulation Brenda on another fin-tastic book! I do believe it is by far your best book to date.
May 28, 2013
You can be a bad writer, or even a bad story teller and have a good story to tell. But this was a mediocre story, written in a mediocre way. There were no real surprises. The characters were flat. I've said this in my other reviews, these books had SO much potential. But falls flat on its face. No character growth. No character development. Nothing really separates the characters from each other, including their thoughts. Everythings tied up in a nice bow at the end. While this story was entertaining, so was Green Eggs and Ham. Green Eggs and Ham was at least clever and rhymed. "Would you eat them in a box? Would you eat them with a fox?" Come on, thats cute and clever.
March 15, 2013
OMG!! This really is the best book yet from Brenda Pandos!! It was first scheduled to be released in February, but was delayed two weeks. That made the waiting even more suspenseful! I really wanted to know what happened to Tatchi, Fin, Ash, Glad and Jax. Boy, I wasn't dissapointed!!
Last year I won a contest that Brenda Pandos was hosting, and my prize was to have a character with my name!! EKK!! I bought Everlost the day, well the day before, it came out, and finished it in under 8 hours. I devoured it. I was hooked from the frist two chapters and by the time I left work I had gotten to where my character was mentioned, I didn't want to stop!
But truly, the places and the writing Brenda has, it really is like you're there, underwater, or in Tahoe or even in Florida. She describes these places with such detail, not to mention the fins on the mer people!! The only spoiler I'll mention, well it's not really a spoiler I think, is it's nice that the mermaids have the pretty, bright colors and the mermen don't!!
Last year I won a contest that Brenda Pandos was hosting, and my prize was to have a character with my name!! EKK!! I bought Everlost the day, well the day before, it came out, and finished it in under 8 hours. I devoured it. I was hooked from the frist two chapters and by the time I left work I had gotten to where my character was mentioned, I didn't want to stop!
But truly, the places and the writing Brenda has, it really is like you're there, underwater, or in Tahoe or even in Florida. She describes these places with such detail, not to mention the fins on the mer people!! The only spoiler I'll mention, well it's not really a spoiler I think, is it's nice that the mermaids have the pretty, bright colors and the mermen don't!!
May 26, 2018
This followed our MC of the last books best friend and I thought that maybe I would hate it but I didn't.
October 26, 2016
Actual rating 2.5
I love mermaid books, but this series has gone down hill for me. I dislike how the 'promising' was used in the book. It was like the author wanted certain things to happen and the only way was to make it so that when females are kissed they become love sick puppies who forget all their morals in exchenge for loving the one who kissed them- whether or not they actually like the male who kissed them. It just doesn't sit well for me as it makes all the female characters appear that much more vulnerable and weak- not the best message.
the first 2/3 of the book also was just a lot of whining, sex crazed Tatiana trying to seduce Azor. And I'm sorry- I can't take it serious when the private parts are referred to a vent and a thing- could we not have better terminology- what are we 5?
The end was very predictable and too unclimatic. I wish there was a lot more detail on the rebel plans, Who the forgotten where and it hadn't just been
I think this series would have benefited from other POV- Like Jax, or Ferdinand or Fins mom and dad. Anything to give it more depth and excietment, because after hearing Tati be mad over not mating with Azor for the 3rd or 4th time I got very bored. I kept reading only in hopes that Ash and Fin would join the story soon adn things would get good. But no. they came in in the last couple chapters with very little explination.
Plus so many things were left undone- like who is ferdinand, whats his story? What happened to Colin and his dad? What changes happened after the Chancellor took over? How was ash's introduction to her biological family?
I'll read book 4 because it'll be quick and I might get more insight into the world after the overthrow of the monarchy, but my hopes aren't very high.
I love mermaid books, but this series has gone down hill for me. I dislike how the 'promising' was used in the book. It was like the author wanted certain things to happen and the only way was to make it so that when females are kissed they become love sick puppies who forget all their morals in exchenge for loving the one who kissed them- whether or not they actually like the male who kissed them. It just doesn't sit well for me as it makes all the female characters appear that much more vulnerable and weak- not the best message.
the first 2/3 of the book also was just a lot of whining, sex crazed Tatiana trying to seduce Azor. And I'm sorry- I can't take it serious when the private parts are referred to a vent and a thing- could we not have better terminology- what are we 5?
The end was very predictable and too unclimatic. I wish there was a lot more detail on the rebel plans, Who the forgotten where and it hadn't just been
I think this series would have benefited from other POV- Like Jax, or Ferdinand or Fins mom and dad. Anything to give it more depth and excietment, because after hearing Tati be mad over not mating with Azor for the 3rd or 4th time I got very bored. I kept reading only in hopes that Ash and Fin would join the story soon adn things would get good. But no. they came in in the last couple chapters with very little explination.
Plus so many things were left undone- like who is ferdinand, whats his story? What happened to Colin and his dad? What changes happened after the Chancellor took over? How was ash's introduction to her biological family?
I'll read book 4 because it'll be quick and I might get more insight into the world after the overthrow of the monarchy, but my hopes aren't very high.
July 23, 2013
The problem is that Everlost is part three of a YA trilogy and yet the construction is completely different from Everblue and Evergreen and the characters behave much older than teens. Parts 1 & 2 are written in first person, alternating between Ashlyn and Fin and completely submerged in teen angst - who is taking whom to the dance, first kisses, underage drinking, competitive sports, conflicts with siblings and parents, and the struggle to be taken seriously as the adult every teen is certain he or she is despite all the adults insisting they are still children. In the first two parts, when they appear, Tatiana and Azur behave like 17 year olds.
Then along comes Everlost and suddenly the human world is left behind in favor of Nataturia exclusively and Azur and Tatiana are mature adults. Azur no longer has child like petulance. Now he is a thwarted heir who has been waiting too long for his father to vacate the throne. Where did the immature bully go? While Tatiana has poise and maturity that is impossible to believe of a character that was just obsessed with boy bands and living vicariously through her school going friend Ashlyn. Add to that the inconsistency of supporting characters such as Xirene who is portrayed as conniving and evil or at least distant until she is pregnant at which point she turns into a victim of circumstance and a person to be pitied.
I understand writing Everlost in third person so that more characters can have their own chapters instead of only hearing from the hero and heroine. Unfortunately, combined with the other differences listed above, it causes too much of a disconnect. Everlost has good tension and pulled me along, but it is not a YA and other than their birth as mer twins, Fin and Tatiana's stories have no common ground.
Then along comes Everlost and suddenly the human world is left behind in favor of Nataturia exclusively and Azur and Tatiana are mature adults. Azur no longer has child like petulance. Now he is a thwarted heir who has been waiting too long for his father to vacate the throne. Where did the immature bully go? While Tatiana has poise and maturity that is impossible to believe of a character that was just obsessed with boy bands and living vicariously through her school going friend Ashlyn. Add to that the inconsistency of supporting characters such as Xirene who is portrayed as conniving and evil or at least distant until she is pregnant at which point she turns into a victim of circumstance and a person to be pitied.
I understand writing Everlost in third person so that more characters can have their own chapters instead of only hearing from the hero and heroine. Unfortunately, combined with the other differences listed above, it causes too much of a disconnect. Everlost has good tension and pulled me along, but it is not a YA and other than their birth as mer twins, Fin and Tatiana's stories have no common ground.
April 25, 2013
To be honest, I skipped the middle of this book. I really didn't like it, and here's some of why.
1. It was a TOTALLY different style. Going to 3rd person, mainly focused on Tatiana, as opposed to 1st person switching from Finn to Ash and back, was a total shock. It didn't flow as well.
2. You went back in time. You went from Finn and Ash going to Natatoria straight to Tatiana after the promise. Again, it didn't flow right. Especially when I, as a reader, was stuck on Fin and Ash and didn't want to leave them. I would've suggested Brenda merged this book into the last, adding chapters from Tatiana and Jacob in parallel to chapters from Fin and Ash. This way, the book could've lead up to the battle. The next book could've been the battle and how they fixed up Natatoria, who took rule, etc. I think it would've worked better.
3. A whole new cast of people were introduced, and only one or two old members were involved. Again, a total shock. You get stuck on characters, and this book didn't fit with the other ones.
4. I got bored. Was not gripping, and took me many hours of PROCRASTINATING before I read. That's unheard of for me, I procrastinate BY reading, not procrastinate to stop reading. Ugh.
Overall, not a great finish to a series I loved and previously devoured. To be honest, Im gonna pretend this book doesn't exist and the series will finish after book 2.
Sorry to burst someone's bubble, these are my thoughts and if you don't agree that's fine. Please don't let my review stop you from reading this book, it's just my honest thoughts.
Playlist:
Gravity by Sara Barellis
1. It was a TOTALLY different style. Going to 3rd person, mainly focused on Tatiana, as opposed to 1st person switching from Finn to Ash and back, was a total shock. It didn't flow as well.
2. You went back in time. You went from Finn and Ash going to Natatoria straight to Tatiana after the promise. Again, it didn't flow right. Especially when I, as a reader, was stuck on Fin and Ash and didn't want to leave them. I would've suggested Brenda merged this book into the last, adding chapters from Tatiana and Jacob in parallel to chapters from Fin and Ash. This way, the book could've lead up to the battle. The next book could've been the battle and how they fixed up Natatoria, who took rule, etc. I think it would've worked better.
3. A whole new cast of people were introduced, and only one or two old members were involved. Again, a total shock. You get stuck on characters, and this book didn't fit with the other ones.
4. I got bored. Was not gripping, and took me many hours of PROCRASTINATING before I read. That's unheard of for me, I procrastinate BY reading, not procrastinate to stop reading. Ugh.
Overall, not a great finish to a series I loved and previously devoured. To be honest, Im gonna pretend this book doesn't exist and the series will finish after book 2.
Sorry to burst someone's bubble, these are my thoughts and if you don't agree that's fine. Please don't let my review stop you from reading this book, it's just my honest thoughts.
Playlist:
Gravity by Sara Barellis
June 13, 2013
Just finished reading the last page and I must say I am totally DISAPPOINTED :'( I really love the first 2 books.. Everblue and Evergreen and was excited to read the 3rd book knowing that it will have a great ending.. but I was wrong.. I continued reading non-stop in spite of all the bad reviews and accepting the fact that the 3rd installment centered more about tatiana, jacob, azur and nattatoria but hoping that Brenda pandos would at least spare a couple of chapters to focus on Ash and Fin... About what happened to them and how they lived happily ever after in "details" since they were the original characters in the story. Also, I was waiting for the author to explain more about what happened to ash and how she was reunited to her mother and her sister in the palace... But As I have read chapter after chapter i just ended up disappointed. The exciting and one of a kind story of mermaids and merman and their world ended up a big disappointment and waste of time. The author centered too much on fights and never ending hurdles which was very exhausting to read. Don't get me wrong I loved the first 2 books but EVERLOST was a complete let down...
Lastly, Tatiana and Jocob should have just been supporting characters... She should have centered and continue Ash and Fin's love story. Haaaaayyy
Lastly, Tatiana and Jocob should have just been supporting characters... She should have centered and continue Ash and Fin's love story. Haaaaayyy
April 8, 2013
I hate when i have to give an author that i love a bad review...but honesty truly is the best policy right?? So here goes....It is very rare that an entire series leaves me breathless but it does happen.
~Hunger Games
~Bad girls don't die
~Talisman Series
~Wanderlove series by Belle Mallory
~Jinn Series by Samantha Young....
And then there's this series...sigh. The first book was amazingly done. I loved every page of it. It was entirely too sweet. But this book fell so short...it all started going downhill for me by book two honestly. But book 3 was by far the most disappointing of the three :-(
In the firt book the promise seemed beautiful...i pretty much fantasized about it being real for months. But in this book its more like a curse. It gives off the idea that women become slaves after one simple kiss. I don't have much to say on this because 1. i'm too disappointed
and 2. i didn't finish the book :-(
But good luck to those of you who do finish it.
Please don't let me stop you from reading it.
We all have different opinions of course
~Hunger Games
~Bad girls don't die
~Talisman Series
~Wanderlove series by Belle Mallory
~Jinn Series by Samantha Young....
And then there's this series...sigh. The first book was amazingly done. I loved every page of it. It was entirely too sweet. But this book fell so short...it all started going downhill for me by book two honestly. But book 3 was by far the most disappointing of the three :-(
In the firt book the promise seemed beautiful...i pretty much fantasized about it being real for months. But in this book its more like a curse. It gives off the idea that women become slaves after one simple kiss. I don't have much to say on this because 1. i'm too disappointed
and 2. i didn't finish the book :-(
But good luck to those of you who do finish it.
Please don't let me stop you from reading it.
We all have different opinions of course
March 22, 2013
Everlost had me glued to my Kobo to finish it. It was so exciting and funny and romantic! It was nice getting the POV from Tatiana and Azor's side of things. We have action with the army against the rebels, we have romance, we have lies and deceit. Being royal is tough, so much is so fake and hidden behind closed doors.
It was a great way to end this series and it closed up alot of loose ends.
It was a great way to end this series and it closed up alot of loose ends.
September 5, 2016
Don't be fooled by the YA classification; this is one of the best series I've read in a while.
The author makes the world of mermaids totally believable. Ms. Pandos also has a handle on the emotions of teenagers.
The story is too involved to relay in a review; besides, I don't want to spoil the story for anyone making the very wise decision to read the entire series. (In fact, she has all four books for one price - TOTALLY worth the price!!!
The author makes the world of mermaids totally believable. Ms. Pandos also has a handle on the emotions of teenagers.
The story is too involved to relay in a review; besides, I don't want to spoil the story for anyone making the very wise decision to read the entire series. (In fact, she has all four books for one price - TOTALLY worth the price!!!
August 5, 2013
The following is a detailed review of the Young Adult novel, Everlost, by Brenda Pandos. It is the longest review that Howard has penned to date.
For those readers who do wish to bypass the folderol and cut to the chase, here is what Howard thinks about Everlost:
It is really, really good and you should really, really read it.
In 2011, Brenda Pandos – an established author of Young Adult fiction – released Everblue , the first book in her Mer Tales series. This exciting story was followed in 2012 by Evergreen and now her eager followers have been rewarded with Everlost , the capstone of the series.
In order to appreciate the present, one must first understand the past. Everblue centered around three main characters:
Ashlyn a.k.a. Ash, a very human and personable high school senior living with her parents, grandmother and somewhat bratty younger sister on the shores of Lake Tahoe
Tatianna a.k.a. Tatchi, her next door neighbour and BFF
Finley a.k.a. Fin, Tatianna’s twin brother upon whom Ash has an ongoing crush.
Fin and Tatchi have a secret; they’re not really human – at least in the conventional sense. They are merfolk from the subterranean aquatic kingdom of Natatoria. The powers that be in Natatoria are very picky about whom is allowed to live outwith the bounds of the kingdom and both Fin and his twin sister are quite lucky indeed to experience the world of humankind. Their sojourn on land is interrupted when the family is summoned home because of a crisis in the realm. There, Prince Azor – who has fancied Tatchi for quite some time – decides to claim her as his mate through the simple act of a kiss; something that binds all Natatorian couples in perpetual bliss. Tatiana loathes Azor and all hell breaks loose when her father - at the head of a small rebel army - attempts a rescue at her promising ceremony. Sadly, Azor kisses her first. Fin and his parents flee Natatoria while Tatchi – now bonded to Azor – stays behind. There’s also another kiss involved here. On one of his surreptitious visits to Tahoe, Fin rescued a drowning Ash and the kiss of life now has more than one meaning.
In its sequel, Evergreen , Fin and his parents are wanted by the Natatorian authorities and take it on the lam for a safe house in Florida leaving Ash behind, lonely and longing for her wandering merman. At the Florida safe house, Fin encounters the princess Galadriel - the underlying cause of the whole crisis in Everblue - who bears an uncanny resemblance to Ash and becomes the third central character of this installment. Ash discovers that she is actually a Natatorian herself; Galadriel’s long lost sister who was switched at birth with Azor in order to give their father a male heir. Along the way, Ash is reunited with her tail and accompanies Fin and Galadriel home to Natatoria in order to spring Tatchi and straighten out the mess that the kingdom has become.
There are several differences between Everlost and its predecessors. The first two stories centered on three main characters: one male and two females. Everlost focuses on Tatchi and the two men in her not-so-happy life: Jacob – who made a (very) brief appearance in Everblue – and Prince Azor. The first two stories were told in alternating first person narratives by Ash and Fin. In Everlost , Brenda, volte-face, spins her story with a third-person narrative. Although the first two stories had an ample share of action in addition to romance, Everlost is most definitely a romantic thriller.
Back in Natatoria, all is not well between the newly bonded Tatchi and Azor and in the ensuing two weeks after their disastrous promising ceremony, things will go from bad to worse.
Tatiana is in thrall of the bond and when she is with Azor, her mind turns to mush while free will and self-determination are swept away on an almost obsessive current of infatuation with him. Prince Azor has other ideas and doles out his affection sparingly; just enough to keep this fish on the line but not enough to fulfill Tachie’s needs and expectations. Her only real companionship comes from her handmaiden – royalty hath its privileges -- and her body-guard, Jacob.
Prince Azor can only be described as “a real piece of work” and the main villain of this drama. While other bad guys may be known for their duplicity, Azor is an overachiever when it comes to quadruplicity. He is a grasping, conniving individual who always manages to get what he wants no matter who has to suffer – including the kingdom of Natatoria. His multi-faceted schemes are aided and abetted by his small but quickly growing squad of goons known as the Dradux. His goal is to have control of the kingdom, a trophy mate and a male heir -- all by his 18th birthday – and he very nearly succeeds.
Jacob is the direct antithesis of Azor. He is a warrior assigned to protect as well as keep an eye on Titania. He is also a member of the rebels seeking to show Azor and his father, King Phaleon, the door and rescue Princess Tatiana from the living hell of her Promising. Physically, he looks as if he could grace the cover of almost any “bodice-ripper”. Through all of this, Jacob develops feeling for Tatchi. For her part, Tatiana finds him somewhat attractive and starts to develop feelings of her own until Azor throws her a bone of attention and, to her besotted eyes, becomes “da man” . . . at least for the next fifteen minutes until Azor can find the excuse and opportunity to stall her and get back to the business at hand.
At this point, it is worth considering a similarity between Ash and Azor. His true parents are the mom and dad that Ash has always known growing up in Tahoe and her real parents, the king and queen of Natatoria, are the only ones that Azor has ever known. Though she has grown up as a human, there is a thing or two about Ash that harkens back to her Natatorian birthright. She loves to swim and always has loved to swim. As captain of her high school swim team, she is one of the fastest and most able girls in the water and her academic career at FAU will be underwritten by an athletic scholarship in swimming. Though she now knows about the underwater world of Fin and his sister, joining them below the surface is still just an option until she is forcibly converted to a mermaid by Fin’s uncle and cousin. Ash seems to almost instinctively know how she should move and act in her new environment. One could say that she had been yearning for the world taken from her at birth.
Azor seems in some way to instinctively long for what he was at his beginning. Because he is unable to have that, he compensates by grabbing more and more of what he can have and is ultimately never satisfied. This ongoing want of power and privilege feeds upon itself and will not end with his becoming king. His dislike of humans is common knowledge and though he ascribes many a negative trait to them, he exhibits almost every one of these traits himself. It could well be that, in some subconscious way, Azor knows that he doesn’t really belong in Natatoria and he consciously reacts by hating what he really is. Unfortunately, the kingdom suffers for it and a prevailing suspicion and distrust of beta mers – former humans who have chosen to join their promised mates in Natatoria – is exacerbated as part of his reign of terror. In fine, both Ash and Azor are affected by what they once were as much as what they are now.
Everlost is Breda Pandos’ opportunity to examine the aquatic world she has created for her characters. Its citizens are almost unilaterally forbidden from exploring and understanding life on land. Although many Natatorians consider their realm a utopian one, they exhibit the same faults and prejudices that beset their cousins supra mare. The palace is dependent upon luxury goods from the world above and this desire for better things extends to as well to John Q. Mer and his fellow hoi palloi.
A telling moment comes when Ash – now a newly minted mermaid - enters a Natatorian home and is gob-smacked by the similarities to human homes on land.
Though the Mer of Natatoria consider themselves to be first and foremost fish, they are decidedly human fish and suffer from the same types of failings that humans do. The rights of women have yet to make their way to Natatoria and mermaids are relegated attracting a mate and producing merlings. This kind of life does not appeal to an independent minded Tatchi and has thus been one of the factors behind her desire to join the human world . . . completely.
Everlost is a bumper serving of thrills, chills, action and excitement. There are narrow escapes and daring rescues such as the scene where Tatchi arrives to save the life of Jacob whom she is now decidedly interested in after successfully breaking the bond that tied her to Azor.
Even though Jacob is the rescuee rather than the rescurer, he finds all of this to be quite the turn on. If anything, Tatchi is a stellar example of an empowered mermaid. She loves Jacob as much as he has come to love her and this time, she – not Azor – is in control of her life.
Both Tatchi and Fin have found their life mates is this saga thus easing the ache and loneliness that has fueled their desire to permanently leave the mer world behind. This does not necessarily mean that they will turn their backs on the surface world and live happily ever after with their promised mates in Natatoria. At the end of the day, it seems that Ash, Fin and Tatchi want to be a part of both worlds and it is left to the reader to imagine how that will ultimately unfold.
Brenda Pandos seems to have a knack for writing a about true love – this is a YA romance after all. She is more than adept at telling her target audience about those tender, loving and passionate moments about which almost every Young Adult female wants to hear.
She speaks of the love and attraction between her characters in such a warm and compelling way that even this reviewer is prompted to remember just how much he loves his wife of thirty-eight years and thus recommends her books as required reading for any Young Adult male enrolled in Girls 101.
Ms Pandos also deserves a gold star for one small thing. Back at the beginning of the series, Tatchi is conspiring with Ash to follow her to Florida Atlantic University – Go Owls!! – on scholarship. This reviewer has read more than one YA novel where the heroine decides that, since she’s a mermaid now, she doesn’t need to finish high school and/or go to college. At the end of it all, Ash and Tatchi are still looking forward to attending FAU together. That one wee bit of positive reinforcement for the target audience draws top marks from this reviewer every time.
Throughout this story and the ones preceding it, Brenda Pandos has carefully crafted her characters and imbued them with a warmth and humanity –or is it mermanity? – that renders them as real and tangible individuals. The reader naturally both feels and fears for Tatiana and spends the better part of the story wondering when the cavalry will finally arrive. For those who have read Everblue and Evergreen, Brenda has scattered a number of clues throughout the story as to what is happening with her family and Ash on the surface.
At the same time, Ms Pandos does not skimp on the villains in her stories. The baddies are appropriately bad and have an air of rotting marine life about them. All are definitely “hiss-worthy” and the only things that Brenda does not do is have them speaking in rhymed couplets and exiting stage-left.
For the observant, Brenda Pandos has woven several lessons into her tale of tails and one is well worth mentioning here. Since time immemorial, young adults – of both genders – have often practiced the art of stringing a person along and preying on their emotions for whatever end they may have in mind. In Everlost , Tatchi is strung along by Prince Azor and the mental anguish and emotional suffering she must endure is plainly obvious to the reader. This reviewer hopes that at least some of Brenda’s Young Adult fans will get the hint and pass it along to their peers.
Brenda Pandos has spun a thrilling and timeless tale that is arguably her best work to date and one of which she may be justly proud. Read it for the drama. Read it for the action. Read it for the romance but by all means, read it.
When an author comes to the end of a series, he or she packs away their characters and moves on to other projects. Things are somewhat different for those who have followed that series from its inception. Over the past years, Ash, Fin and Tatchi have become familiar friends as readers have followed each twist and turn and pondered where Brenda Pandos would take the story in the next installment. Here, the reader is wont to say: “Please don’t go . . . not just yet”.
Ms Pandos should seriously consider penning a “Where Are They Now?” kind of short story as readers will be dying to know things like:
How does Ash finally square things with her parents?
Will Fin be able to sing himself out of this sticky situation?
How will Ash explain to her mother that she’d rather sleep in the lake than her own room?
Will Fin’s design for Velcro enhanced board shorts take the Natatorian runways by storm?
How about Ash and Tatchi a few years hence when they’ve got several merlings under foot and/or fin?
Will Fin ever get his beloved red Jeep back?
Will Uncle Alaster finally be brought to justice?
What happened to Ferdinand?
So many questions that fans of the Mer Tales series will want answers for. Brenda’s final installment in her Mer Tales series is undoubtedly a success in that it leaves the reader wishing for more.
There are more reviews of Mer-fiction at The Parsons' Rant
For those readers who do wish to bypass the folderol and cut to the chase, here is what Howard thinks about Everlost:
It is really, really good and you should really, really read it.
In 2011, Brenda Pandos – an established author of Young Adult fiction – released Everblue , the first book in her Mer Tales series. This exciting story was followed in 2012 by Evergreen and now her eager followers have been rewarded with Everlost , the capstone of the series.
In order to appreciate the present, one must first understand the past. Everblue centered around three main characters:
Ashlyn a.k.a. Ash, a very human and personable high school senior living with her parents, grandmother and somewhat bratty younger sister on the shores of Lake Tahoe
Tatianna a.k.a. Tatchi, her next door neighbour and BFF
Finley a.k.a. Fin, Tatianna’s twin brother upon whom Ash has an ongoing crush.
Fin and Tatchi have a secret; they’re not really human – at least in the conventional sense. They are merfolk from the subterranean aquatic kingdom of Natatoria. The powers that be in Natatoria are very picky about whom is allowed to live outwith the bounds of the kingdom and both Fin and his twin sister are quite lucky indeed to experience the world of humankind. Their sojourn on land is interrupted when the family is summoned home because of a crisis in the realm. There, Prince Azor – who has fancied Tatchi for quite some time – decides to claim her as his mate through the simple act of a kiss; something that binds all Natatorian couples in perpetual bliss. Tatiana loathes Azor and all hell breaks loose when her father - at the head of a small rebel army - attempts a rescue at her promising ceremony. Sadly, Azor kisses her first. Fin and his parents flee Natatoria while Tatchi – now bonded to Azor – stays behind. There’s also another kiss involved here. On one of his surreptitious visits to Tahoe, Fin rescued a drowning Ash and the kiss of life now has more than one meaning.
In its sequel, Evergreen , Fin and his parents are wanted by the Natatorian authorities and take it on the lam for a safe house in Florida leaving Ash behind, lonely and longing for her wandering merman. At the Florida safe house, Fin encounters the princess Galadriel - the underlying cause of the whole crisis in Everblue - who bears an uncanny resemblance to Ash and becomes the third central character of this installment. Ash discovers that she is actually a Natatorian herself; Galadriel’s long lost sister who was switched at birth with Azor in order to give their father a male heir. Along the way, Ash is reunited with her tail and accompanies Fin and Galadriel home to Natatoria in order to spring Tatchi and straighten out the mess that the kingdom has become.
There are several differences between Everlost and its predecessors. The first two stories centered on three main characters: one male and two females. Everlost focuses on Tatchi and the two men in her not-so-happy life: Jacob – who made a (very) brief appearance in Everblue – and Prince Azor. The first two stories were told in alternating first person narratives by Ash and Fin. In Everlost , Brenda, volte-face, spins her story with a third-person narrative. Although the first two stories had an ample share of action in addition to romance, Everlost is most definitely a romantic thriller.
Back in Natatoria, all is not well between the newly bonded Tatchi and Azor and in the ensuing two weeks after their disastrous promising ceremony, things will go from bad to worse.
Azor shoved Tatiana into the entry of the compound and slid the heavy stone door shut. She whirled around, stunned he’d left her side, and tugged at the iron handle in a panic, unable to lug the monstrous thing open.
Tatiana is in thrall of the bond and when she is with Azor, her mind turns to mush while free will and self-determination are swept away on an almost obsessive current of infatuation with him. Prince Azor has other ideas and doles out his affection sparingly; just enough to keep this fish on the line but not enough to fulfill Tachie’s needs and expectations. Her only real companionship comes from her handmaiden – royalty hath its privileges -- and her body-guard, Jacob.
Prince Azor can only be described as “a real piece of work” and the main villain of this drama. While other bad guys may be known for their duplicity, Azor is an overachiever when it comes to quadruplicity. He is a grasping, conniving individual who always manages to get what he wants no matter who has to suffer – including the kingdom of Natatoria. His multi-faceted schemes are aided and abetted by his small but quickly growing squad of goons known as the Dradux. His goal is to have control of the kingdom, a trophy mate and a male heir -- all by his 18th birthday – and he very nearly succeeds.
Jacob is the direct antithesis of Azor. He is a warrior assigned to protect as well as keep an eye on Titania. He is also a member of the rebels seeking to show Azor and his father, King Phaleon, the door and rescue Princess Tatiana from the living hell of her Promising. Physically, he looks as if he could grace the cover of almost any “bodice-ripper”. Through all of this, Jacob develops feeling for Tatchi. For her part, Tatiana finds him somewhat attractive and starts to develop feelings of her own until Azor throws her a bone of attention and, to her besotted eyes, becomes “da man” . . . at least for the next fifteen minutes until Azor can find the excuse and opportunity to stall her and get back to the business at hand.
At this point, it is worth considering a similarity between Ash and Azor. His true parents are the mom and dad that Ash has always known growing up in Tahoe and her real parents, the king and queen of Natatoria, are the only ones that Azor has ever known. Though she has grown up as a human, there is a thing or two about Ash that harkens back to her Natatorian birthright. She loves to swim and always has loved to swim. As captain of her high school swim team, she is one of the fastest and most able girls in the water and her academic career at FAU will be underwritten by an athletic scholarship in swimming. Though she now knows about the underwater world of Fin and his sister, joining them below the surface is still just an option until she is forcibly converted to a mermaid by Fin’s uncle and cousin. Ash seems to almost instinctively know how she should move and act in her new environment. One could say that she had been yearning for the world taken from her at birth.
Azor seems in some way to instinctively long for what he was at his beginning. Because he is unable to have that, he compensates by grabbing more and more of what he can have and is ultimately never satisfied. This ongoing want of power and privilege feeds upon itself and will not end with his becoming king. His dislike of humans is common knowledge and though he ascribes many a negative trait to them, he exhibits almost every one of these traits himself. It could well be that, in some subconscious way, Azor knows that he doesn’t really belong in Natatoria and he consciously reacts by hating what he really is. Unfortunately, the kingdom suffers for it and a prevailing suspicion and distrust of beta mers – former humans who have chosen to join their promised mates in Natatoria – is exacerbated as part of his reign of terror. In fine, both Ash and Azor are affected by what they once were as much as what they are now.
Everlost is Breda Pandos’ opportunity to examine the aquatic world she has created for her characters. Its citizens are almost unilaterally forbidden from exploring and understanding life on land. Although many Natatorians consider their realm a utopian one, they exhibit the same faults and prejudices that beset their cousins supra mare. The palace is dependent upon luxury goods from the world above and this desire for better things extends to as well to John Q. Mer and his fellow hoi palloi.
A telling moment comes when Ash – now a newly minted mermaid - enters a Natatorian home and is gob-smacked by the similarities to human homes on land.
Being fish, the whole concept of air-filled homes stumped her. Why did they act so human?
Though the Mer of Natatoria consider themselves to be first and foremost fish, they are decidedly human fish and suffer from the same types of failings that humans do. The rights of women have yet to make their way to Natatoria and mermaids are relegated attracting a mate and producing merlings. This kind of life does not appeal to an independent minded Tatchi and has thus been one of the factors behind her desire to join the human world . . . completely.
Everlost is a bumper serving of thrills, chills, action and excitement. There are narrow escapes and daring rescues such as the scene where Tatchi arrives to save the life of Jacob whom she is now decidedly interested in after successfully breaking the bond that tied her to Azor.
“You know, the girl can be the hero sometimes.”
Even though Jacob is the rescuee rather than the rescurer, he finds all of this to be quite the turn on. If anything, Tatchi is a stellar example of an empowered mermaid. She loves Jacob as much as he has come to love her and this time, she – not Azor – is in control of her life.
Both Tatchi and Fin have found their life mates is this saga thus easing the ache and loneliness that has fueled their desire to permanently leave the mer world behind. This does not necessarily mean that they will turn their backs on the surface world and live happily ever after with their promised mates in Natatoria. At the end of the day, it seems that Ash, Fin and Tatchi want to be a part of both worlds and it is left to the reader to imagine how that will ultimately unfold.
Brenda Pandos seems to have a knack for writing a about true love – this is a YA romance after all. She is more than adept at telling her target audience about those tender, loving and passionate moments about which almost every Young Adult female wants to hear.
Her soul exploded into a song filled with all the goodness that was him. And everything about him felt right. To hold him close, to be with him, to treasure him for all eternity, she could think of nothing else, completely engulfed in his love.
She speaks of the love and attraction between her characters in such a warm and compelling way that even this reviewer is prompted to remember just how much he loves his wife of thirty-eight years and thus recommends her books as required reading for any Young Adult male enrolled in Girls 101.
Ms Pandos also deserves a gold star for one small thing. Back at the beginning of the series, Tatchi is conspiring with Ash to follow her to Florida Atlantic University – Go Owls!! – on scholarship. This reviewer has read more than one YA novel where the heroine decides that, since she’s a mermaid now, she doesn’t need to finish high school and/or go to college. At the end of it all, Ash and Tatchi are still looking forward to attending FAU together. That one wee bit of positive reinforcement for the target audience draws top marks from this reviewer every time.
Throughout this story and the ones preceding it, Brenda Pandos has carefully crafted her characters and imbued them with a warmth and humanity –or is it mermanity? – that renders them as real and tangible individuals. The reader naturally both feels and fears for Tatiana and spends the better part of the story wondering when the cavalry will finally arrive. For those who have read Everblue and Evergreen, Brenda has scattered a number of clues throughout the story as to what is happening with her family and Ash on the surface.
At the same time, Ms Pandos does not skimp on the villains in her stories. The baddies are appropriately bad and have an air of rotting marine life about them. All are definitely “hiss-worthy” and the only things that Brenda does not do is have them speaking in rhymed couplets and exiting stage-left.
For the observant, Brenda Pandos has woven several lessons into her tale of tails and one is well worth mentioning here. Since time immemorial, young adults – of both genders – have often practiced the art of stringing a person along and preying on their emotions for whatever end they may have in mind. In Everlost , Tatchi is strung along by Prince Azor and the mental anguish and emotional suffering she must endure is plainly obvious to the reader. This reviewer hopes that at least some of Brenda’s Young Adult fans will get the hint and pass it along to their peers.
Brenda Pandos has spun a thrilling and timeless tale that is arguably her best work to date and one of which she may be justly proud. Read it for the drama. Read it for the action. Read it for the romance but by all means, read it.
When an author comes to the end of a series, he or she packs away their characters and moves on to other projects. Things are somewhat different for those who have followed that series from its inception. Over the past years, Ash, Fin and Tatchi have become familiar friends as readers have followed each twist and turn and pondered where Brenda Pandos would take the story in the next installment. Here, the reader is wont to say: “Please don’t go . . . not just yet”.
Ms Pandos should seriously consider penning a “Where Are They Now?” kind of short story as readers will be dying to know things like:
How does Ash finally square things with her parents?
Will Fin be able to sing himself out of this sticky situation?
How will Ash explain to her mother that she’d rather sleep in the lake than her own room?
Will Fin’s design for Velcro enhanced board shorts take the Natatorian runways by storm?
How about Ash and Tatchi a few years hence when they’ve got several merlings under foot and/or fin?
Will Fin ever get his beloved red Jeep back?
Will Uncle Alaster finally be brought to justice?
What happened to Ferdinand?
So many questions that fans of the Mer Tales series will want answers for. Brenda’s final installment in her Mer Tales series is undoubtedly a success in that it leaves the reader wishing for more.
There are more reviews of Mer-fiction at The Parsons' Rant
January 28, 2017
When I first started reading this, I was really disappointed. I didn't want to read from Tatiana's POV at all! But once the story began, I was simply captivated. I really enjoyed finding out what was happening while Fin and Ash were off doing their thing. And the ending...what a perfectly romantic end to her story. I'm incredibly intrigued to find out what's going to happen to wrap up the final installment!
August 17, 2019
I enjoyed this story and I thought it was interesting to read about Tatiana and what happens with the Mer and everything and I liked her character but it wasn’t my favourite. One of the relationship was really twisted and sick and even if it was supposed to be that way it made me uncomfortable.
Anyway the story was still nice and a fast read and I’ll read the last one really soon
Anyway the story was still nice and a fast read and I’ll read the last one really soon
October 11, 2020
There was a lot of teen-age angst in this. The principal villain didn't even turn 18 until close to the end.
The plot was very convoluted. Especially with the secondary characters, it was hard to keep track of who were the good guys and who were the bad guys.
The book desperately needed a good editor.
The plot was very convoluted. Especially with the secondary characters, it was hard to keep track of who were the good guys and who were the bad guys.
The book desperately needed a good editor.
February 20, 2018
4.5 stars
September 19, 2019
I really enjoyed this audiobook just like the other two. It’s so good and amazing.
July 21, 2022
it made the other two look good it was so bad
I would give it 0 but you can't so 1
I would give it 0 but you can't so 1
June 14, 2025
I love this book it's amazing
July 29, 2025
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
March 24, 2017
From land to under water
More drama for the under water world with Azor trying to take everything over, but Tachi . Azor may have stolen her promise but Jacob has her heart.
More drama for the under water world with Azor trying to take everything over, but Tachi . Azor may have stolen her promise but Jacob has her heart.
November 13, 2022
Everlost (Mer Tales Book 3) Wow! This series is totally....
WOW!!! I love the romance and the drama! What an incredible story, I can’t wait to see what happens in the next book. Ms. Pandos is truly a descriptive author and allows you to feel like your actually there. Definitely recommend this book 📖 series 📚 Go mermaids!
WOW!!! I love the romance and the drama! What an incredible story, I can’t wait to see what happens in the next book. Ms. Pandos is truly a descriptive author and allows you to feel like your actually there. Definitely recommend this book 📖 series 📚 Go mermaids!
August 25, 2013
I have to say that I haven't the slightest clue what all the fuss and bad reviews are about. I have one reason that comes to mind but it still shouldn't have killed the story for people. Ok, so what, Fin and Ash weren't in the story until the ending. This can't be why this book got all the bad reviews but I think it is. I think it's sad as well.
The book was great and the storyline was perfect. I'm sure after all the bad reviews she may wish she had included Finn and Ash in the story more than she did. I know the first book was really all about the two but in the second book things changed. I could see it was changing and taking a different direction. Was I the only one that saw this? The second book focused more on the real princess along with her sister Ash that was royalty and a princess also. The book focused more on Finn Ash's sister until closer to the ending.
Everyone knew that Tatiana had to be freed and I guess most people just figured it would be Finn and Ash, wrong. This is why y'all are so upset and gave such awful reviews.
Brenda, I'm sorry that people judged your book. I think it was completely wrong. For those thinking this wasn't or didn't appear to be a YA book your most definitely wrong. This is still a YA book. I would love to hear those who disagree about this book not being a YA books definition on exactly what they believe a YA book is. I would say the majority of them would be entirely wrong. I loved the book. YES, I LOVE THE BOOK. FOR THOSE WHO DIDN'T MAYBE A REREAD IS IN YOUR FUTURE. I'm sorry but for some reason this has completely and honestly made me mad.
Yes, I have given bad reviews before but I am surprised at how many there are. It's overwhelming. I know to be an author that spent so much time writing a book that you considered this book to be your best book to date would have to be sad and find the reviews heartbreaking.
I loved how you made the last book about Tatiana and Azor because it was time for it. Even though their names weren't mentioned a lot in the othr books we didn't know what she had to endure until this book. Truthfully she put up with a lot of things. Tatiana not only endured Azores bullying and lies, among a great deal of other things but she had to deal with things from almost everyone. I enjoyed learning the things that was in the book. If the story consisted of Finn and others just coming to rescue Tatiana then it would have been short and not a good book at all.
I always remark on a book and never go into details much. I'm always afraid I will give the story away.
To anyone that hasn't read this series you really should. If you do and you begin to read the third and final book overlook the reviews. Just know this though, if you're expecting Finn and Ash in the book then you will be upset. They are in the book but it's at the ending of the story. I think Everlost was way better than the first two. As I mentioned previously, the story was great. I can tell the author put a great deal of thought into the story. Brenda Pandos is extremely talented regardless of what others have said about this book. Keep your head held high and remember the majority of reviewers aren't authors and they couldn't have written a paragraph that's better. I'm really serious.
This book was great. I highly recommend this book. Don't read or even look at the terrible reviews. If you read this book for more Finn and Ash then you will be disappointed also. Finn and Ash aren't in the story until you get close to the ending.
The book was great and the storyline was perfect. I'm sure after all the bad reviews she may wish she had included Finn and Ash in the story more than she did. I know the first book was really all about the two but in the second book things changed. I could see it was changing and taking a different direction. Was I the only one that saw this? The second book focused more on the real princess along with her sister Ash that was royalty and a princess also. The book focused more on Finn Ash's sister until closer to the ending.
Everyone knew that Tatiana had to be freed and I guess most people just figured it would be Finn and Ash, wrong. This is why y'all are so upset and gave such awful reviews.
Brenda, I'm sorry that people judged your book. I think it was completely wrong. For those thinking this wasn't or didn't appear to be a YA book your most definitely wrong. This is still a YA book. I would love to hear those who disagree about this book not being a YA books definition on exactly what they believe a YA book is. I would say the majority of them would be entirely wrong. I loved the book. YES, I LOVE THE BOOK. FOR THOSE WHO DIDN'T MAYBE A REREAD IS IN YOUR FUTURE. I'm sorry but for some reason this has completely and honestly made me mad.
Yes, I have given bad reviews before but I am surprised at how many there are. It's overwhelming. I know to be an author that spent so much time writing a book that you considered this book to be your best book to date would have to be sad and find the reviews heartbreaking.
I loved how you made the last book about Tatiana and Azor because it was time for it. Even though their names weren't mentioned a lot in the othr books we didn't know what she had to endure until this book. Truthfully she put up with a lot of things. Tatiana not only endured Azores bullying and lies, among a great deal of other things but she had to deal with things from almost everyone. I enjoyed learning the things that was in the book. If the story consisted of Finn and others just coming to rescue Tatiana then it would have been short and not a good book at all.
I always remark on a book and never go into details much. I'm always afraid I will give the story away.
To anyone that hasn't read this series you really should. If you do and you begin to read the third and final book overlook the reviews. Just know this though, if you're expecting Finn and Ash in the book then you will be upset. They are in the book but it's at the ending of the story. I think Everlost was way better than the first two. As I mentioned previously, the story was great. I can tell the author put a great deal of thought into the story. Brenda Pandos is extremely talented regardless of what others have said about this book. Keep your head held high and remember the majority of reviewers aren't authors and they couldn't have written a paragraph that's better. I'm really serious.
This book was great. I highly recommend this book. Don't read or even look at the terrible reviews. If you read this book for more Finn and Ash then you will be disappointed also. Finn and Ash aren't in the story until you get close to the ending.
June 18, 2025
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Tatiana’s unexpected love for Natatoria’s prince ignites rebellion and treason, throwing the underwater kingdom into chaos. As political tensions rise and betrayal strikes close to home, Tatiana faces impossible choices that could cost everything. This thrilling conclusion brings intense conflict, poignant character growth, and a fierce fight for truth and survival.
Tatiana’s unexpected love for Natatoria’s prince ignites rebellion and treason, throwing the underwater kingdom into chaos. As political tensions rise and betrayal strikes close to home, Tatiana faces impossible choices that could cost everything. This thrilling conclusion brings intense conflict, poignant character growth, and a fierce fight for truth and survival.
February 5, 2014
Out of all three Mer tales books Everlost was the one I had been most looking forward to reading and in turn turned out to be my favourite of all three. There was just so much happening in this one that I found I was unable to put my kindle down because I had to know what would happen next.
Brenda Pandos is a very clever lady having written the first two of the series in first person and changing the writing style of book three to third person. This is clever because it shows of her writing skill and shows she can write just as well in third person as she can in first person.
I was a bit sad at first upon discovering the book was in third person having gotten use to what each character was thinking in the first two, but you know what? It worked and I’m glad she did it. Despite that Everlost was written differently we still got an insight into Tatiana’s head, her thoughts and feelings were as clear as glass. Azor’s on the other hand weren’t as clear but it was obvious what he was doing and to be quite honest he was an arse and I didn’t really want to know what he was thinking. He wasn’t as important as Jacob, whose thoughts and feelings we got to read about just like Tatiana’s
Tatiana was a really interesting character to read about, I knew her story was going to be good from the moment that thing happened at the end of book one. It didn’t disappoint and it was worth the wait to read. At times while I read I thought to myself “For Godsake woman snap out of it!” but then I think she knew or at least a small part of her knew but that part had been buried down deep within her because the promising feeling was just too great to overcome.
Azor was just a complete arse and every time it felt like it couldn’t get any worse it did. At one point i wondered whether there was going to be a fourth one because I had read up to almost the end of the book and nothing had still happened to that arse. The end is good though it worked out well and everything ties up within this book.
I was a bit annoyed that Tatiana’s story started from the events which happened in the past because having just read Evergreen I wanted to know what happened to the other characters. This book goes back to the events which happened at the end of the first book but told from Tatiana’s side of things so it is necessary for the book to go back to the past before it can delve into the present.
I regret reading the book too fast, it was over before it begun because I wouldn’t put off reading it I had to know what happened. It just goes to show how good this book was maybe not five start good but it was really entertaining. Come on it has merpeople all with different coloured fins, how cool is that! And everywhere is under water apart from a couple of places so they just swim around. I so want to do that. That would be so cool!
This is definitely something I would read again and has made me really want to what the little Mermaid and seek out other stories involving merpeople. Great book, now what do I do?
Brenda Pandos is a very clever lady having written the first two of the series in first person and changing the writing style of book three to third person. This is clever because it shows of her writing skill and shows she can write just as well in third person as she can in first person.
I was a bit sad at first upon discovering the book was in third person having gotten use to what each character was thinking in the first two, but you know what? It worked and I’m glad she did it. Despite that Everlost was written differently we still got an insight into Tatiana’s head, her thoughts and feelings were as clear as glass. Azor’s on the other hand weren’t as clear but it was obvious what he was doing and to be quite honest he was an arse and I didn’t really want to know what he was thinking. He wasn’t as important as Jacob, whose thoughts and feelings we got to read about just like Tatiana’s
Tatiana was a really interesting character to read about, I knew her story was going to be good from the moment that thing happened at the end of book one. It didn’t disappoint and it was worth the wait to read. At times while I read I thought to myself “For Godsake woman snap out of it!” but then I think she knew or at least a small part of her knew but that part had been buried down deep within her because the promising feeling was just too great to overcome.
Azor was just a complete arse and every time it felt like it couldn’t get any worse it did. At one point i wondered whether there was going to be a fourth one because I had read up to almost the end of the book and nothing had still happened to that arse. The end is good though it worked out well and everything ties up within this book.
I was a bit annoyed that Tatiana’s story started from the events which happened in the past because having just read Evergreen I wanted to know what happened to the other characters. This book goes back to the events which happened at the end of the first book but told from Tatiana’s side of things so it is necessary for the book to go back to the past before it can delve into the present.
I regret reading the book too fast, it was over before it begun because I wouldn’t put off reading it I had to know what happened. It just goes to show how good this book was maybe not five start good but it was really entertaining. Come on it has merpeople all with different coloured fins, how cool is that! And everywhere is under water apart from a couple of places so they just swim around. I so want to do that. That would be so cool!
This is definitely something I would read again and has made me really want to what the little Mermaid and seek out other stories involving merpeople. Great book, now what do I do?
August 25, 2013
*Originally Reviewed at Witchmag's Boekenplank*
As usual I did not read the back of the book before I started reading (too glad I finally got my hands on it ^^). This resulted in a little lost me. Whut? Why has the point of view changed to Tatiana? What am I reading? It feels more like we continue after book 1, while I’m sure there was a book 2… Oh please don’t let this be a book full of swooning about Azor *barf*! This and other not so reassuring thoughts went through my head. Fortunately, everything fell into place and I got introduced to an amazing new character: Jacob. From that moment on I was reassured, everything would be fine and I knew that, once again, I had a great book in my hands.
My predictions came true. In this final installment you’re once again swept up in a whirlpool of events. There are some pretty fantastic twists and turns, which will throw you totally of course. Thus making it an even greater read, with more excitement and fun. I also liked that in this story the focus lies on Tatiana and Jacob, since Ash and Fin already had their “happy ending.”
Tatiana is a lovely character. She’s energetic, not shy at all AND capable of fabricating very funny descriptions, like “Ms. Sea Urchin and her tatas.” Therefore it was even harder for me to see what the promise did to her. It changed her into a dependent, possessive bimbo. No longer capable of thinking for herself and the only thing she wanted to do was to be near her “darling” Azor. Don’t be afraid, though, you won’t have to read a whole book filled with the most nauseating “lovesick” couple. Nope, you also have the opportunity to read the story through the eyes of Jacob. Tatiana’s personal guard and rebel. Who’s always there to help her out and has the nicest blue-green eyes she’s ever seen…
There’s also more information about the wondrous world of the merpeople. Did you know, for example, that the gestation period is way shorter than human’s (Only a couple of weeks! I mean which woman wouldn’t want that?)? Or that mermaids have super powerful voices which even merman can’t withstand? Oh, don’t forget about the mating ritual, that was fascinating too! Besides the rather dangerous Promise, it really is a world I’d love to visit myself one day ^^
Conclusion
4 HEARTS. A beautiful ending for a great series. It’s a book that will carry you, once again, away to an amazing world beneath the surface, full of mermaids and mermen. With fantastic twists and two “new” characters to get to know. Who have a whole adventure ahead of them. As reader you can’t do anything but root for them and hope that for them, too, a happy ending is possible. I can wholeheartedly recommend this book and series to everyone who likes mermaids (and romance ^^).
As usual I did not read the back of the book before I started reading (too glad I finally got my hands on it ^^). This resulted in a little lost me. Whut? Why has the point of view changed to Tatiana? What am I reading? It feels more like we continue after book 1, while I’m sure there was a book 2… Oh please don’t let this be a book full of swooning about Azor *barf*! This and other not so reassuring thoughts went through my head. Fortunately, everything fell into place and I got introduced to an amazing new character: Jacob. From that moment on I was reassured, everything would be fine and I knew that, once again, I had a great book in my hands.
My predictions came true. In this final installment you’re once again swept up in a whirlpool of events. There are some pretty fantastic twists and turns, which will throw you totally of course. Thus making it an even greater read, with more excitement and fun. I also liked that in this story the focus lies on Tatiana and Jacob, since Ash and Fin already had their “happy ending.”
Tatiana is a lovely character. She’s energetic, not shy at all AND capable of fabricating very funny descriptions, like “Ms. Sea Urchin and her tatas.” Therefore it was even harder for me to see what the promise did to her. It changed her into a dependent, possessive bimbo. No longer capable of thinking for herself and the only thing she wanted to do was to be near her “darling” Azor. Don’t be afraid, though, you won’t have to read a whole book filled with the most nauseating “lovesick” couple. Nope, you also have the opportunity to read the story through the eyes of Jacob. Tatiana’s personal guard and rebel. Who’s always there to help her out and has the nicest blue-green eyes she’s ever seen…
There’s also more information about the wondrous world of the merpeople. Did you know, for example, that the gestation period is way shorter than human’s (Only a couple of weeks! I mean which woman wouldn’t want that?)? Or that mermaids have super powerful voices which even merman can’t withstand? Oh, don’t forget about the mating ritual, that was fascinating too! Besides the rather dangerous Promise, it really is a world I’d love to visit myself one day ^^
Conclusion
4 HEARTS. A beautiful ending for a great series. It’s a book that will carry you, once again, away to an amazing world beneath the surface, full of mermaids and mermen. With fantastic twists and two “new” characters to get to know. Who have a whole adventure ahead of them. As reader you can’t do anything but root for them and hope that for them, too, a happy ending is possible. I can wholeheartedly recommend this book and series to everyone who likes mermaids (and romance ^^).
June 17, 2013
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**Beware of possible spoilers**
Tatiana's world changed with a single kiss. Torn between her hatred for Azor and her unwanted love for him, she must fight through the bond's effects and decide what she really wants. But lies and deception run rampant in the kingdom, and if she doesn't find out who she can truly trust, and fast, she might not live to see things change. Everlost takes place at the same time as Evergreen, only from within Natatoria.
This book was really hard for me. The characters were the same as ever, although the entirety of the book until the very very end followed Tatiana and her bodyguard Jacob's point of views. The two of them, joined with Azor and a few supporting characters are the bulk what what you are exposed to until they very end.
The story and writing were amazing. There were a few plot holes, which have lingered throughout this series and never been fully addressed or fixed, but otherwise it was perfect. The writing is compelling and fast paced and leaves you wanting more with every turn of the page.
What didn't work for me, really was the point of views. In my review of book #2, Evergreen, I had said that not having an eye into the kingdom made the book unsettling for me. After reading Everlost, I can understand why the book didn't flop between the land and sea. It would've made the story too incredibly long and wouldn't have been possible to split between two novels because of the fact that the conflict would have taken far too long to build. Everlost was no different. Not having any knowledge of land, although you already know what happens there, was unsettling. This started out as Ash and Fin's story and then Everlost steals it and makes it Tatiana's story. I feel like the end of the novel didn't have enough resolution and stole the story away too extremely. There should have been a better balance.
Aside from those issues though, this was still a wonderful read. It attaches itself to you right away and you cling to the words, desperate to make it to the next page and see how things go. While I enjoyed every moment, I was left disappointed in the end. I'm not sure if this is the end of the series, but if it is, I am left saddened and unfulfilled.
**Beware of possible spoilers**
Tatiana's world changed with a single kiss. Torn between her hatred for Azor and her unwanted love for him, she must fight through the bond's effects and decide what she really wants. But lies and deception run rampant in the kingdom, and if she doesn't find out who she can truly trust, and fast, she might not live to see things change. Everlost takes place at the same time as Evergreen, only from within Natatoria.
This book was really hard for me. The characters were the same as ever, although the entirety of the book until the very very end followed Tatiana and her bodyguard Jacob's point of views. The two of them, joined with Azor and a few supporting characters are the bulk what what you are exposed to until they very end.
The story and writing were amazing. There were a few plot holes, which have lingered throughout this series and never been fully addressed or fixed, but otherwise it was perfect. The writing is compelling and fast paced and leaves you wanting more with every turn of the page.
What didn't work for me, really was the point of views. In my review of book #2, Evergreen, I had said that not having an eye into the kingdom made the book unsettling for me. After reading Everlost, I can understand why the book didn't flop between the land and sea. It would've made the story too incredibly long and wouldn't have been possible to split between two novels because of the fact that the conflict would have taken far too long to build. Everlost was no different. Not having any knowledge of land, although you already know what happens there, was unsettling. This started out as Ash and Fin's story and then Everlost steals it and makes it Tatiana's story. I feel like the end of the novel didn't have enough resolution and stole the story away too extremely. There should have been a better balance.
Aside from those issues though, this was still a wonderful read. It attaches itself to you right away and you cling to the words, desperate to make it to the next page and see how things go. While I enjoyed every moment, I was left disappointed in the end. I'm not sure if this is the end of the series, but if it is, I am left saddened and unfulfilled.
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