CAT IN AN ALIEN X-RAY
By Carole Nelson Douglas
Midnight Louie is Back! In this, his 25th adventure in the current series (there was a prequel series 4 books in length), many of your favorites are front and center: Midnight Louie (of course), Temple, Matt and Max, Lt. Molina, Aunt Kit, the Fontana crew, Midnight Louise, Karma and Ma Barker’s feral cat clowder.
In this adventure, Temple is approached to do PR work for an new Vegas hotel and club that is as fancy an illusion as anything the Mystifying Max could think up : a building that is not visible, a UFO that is not so unidentified, and a developer who is more ringmaster than businessman. When two very visible and very dead bodies show up on the property, PR for the new business goes south in a hurry.
Add to this the recent surfacing of the thought-to-be-dead Kathleen O’Connor and her manipulations, and Temple, Matt and Max have to put their heads together to figure out how to delve deeper into the mystery related to the Synth while managing to stay alive. Of course, Midnight Louie and his accomplices are there to whisker out the truth and to lend a paw when the going gets rough.
I’ll admit that I’m firmly in the Team Kinsella camp. Not saying that I don’t like the character Matt Devine – I do. I just don’t like his relationship with Temple. Every novel since Max’s abrupt disappearance and near-death experience, I keep hoping for Matt’s exit and Max’s re-entry in Temple’s life. Will it happen or not? Only Carole Nelson Douglas knows for sure. All I know is that if it doesn’t, it will put a very big damper on my feelings for the romantic part of the series, although my delight in all things Midnight Louie will survive.
As for my usual likes/dislikes: grammar, punctuation, word usage, spelling – proof reading and editing in general – these passed muster. I saw only two errors (and that broke my heart as I don’t remember finding errors in former books).
The first is a who’s on first problem. On page 29 of the novel (yeah, right off the bat) Karen Barr, Temple’s mother, is speaking. The POV in this section is first-person Temple, but, when Temple tells her mother she is engaged, this is Karen’s response:
“So it’s not that magician?” I suggested cautiously.
I re-read the pages before and after several times and the “I” should have been a “She.” Maybe it could have just been left out. I don’t think there were other dialogue modifiers for her in the multi-page conversation.
The only other mistake I saw, and again re-read several times to be sure I wasn’t missing something, occurs near the end of the novel, on page 290. Here, it’s a simple omitted word.
“The Black Spot was note delivered to pirates, warning they were marked for death,
not geographical markings.” Matt said.
I’m assuming it should have read …Spot was a note delivered to pirates,…
Otherwise, the plotting was okay, although there seemed to be more of a disconnect between the secondary story of Temple’s sort of PR job and the action that endangers the main characters than I have seen in other entries in the series. With the exception of Kathleen O’Connor’s possible connection to one of the bodies found at the invisible/alien visitation hotel/casino site, there didn’t seem to be much of a thread tying that storyline to the goings on which involved Matt, Max and Temple, and by association, Midnight Louie.
However, the most interesting part of the novel, to me, was the regaining of bits and pieces of Max Kinsella’s memory. Certainly, his memories of Temple are more than he is willing to admit. Also of interest is his suspicion of the current woman in his life, Revienne Schneider. With only two more novels prior to the predicted series end, these two things may play a big part in tying up all the extremely raveled threads of the continuing storyline.
So, not my favorite book in the series, but it does move the overall picture along (even if it doesn’t always seem to be moving in the direction I’d like to see it go). At this point in the series, that is a huge point in its favor. So, I’m giving it 4 stars. ½ star off for what seemed a plotting problem to me, and ½ a star off because I’m ready to see Max more as he used to be. I also missed some of the regulars in this episode. No Raffi, no Mariah, no Circle Ritz colorful landlady, too little Fontana action. Lord help me, too little C.R. Molina.
Easy, fun, light summer reading.
Looking forward to the Y (assuming it might be Yellow?) episode and seeing how things begin to resolve themselves.