Unforgivable, Part One

by James Fuller

Rising from the ashes of his home in Ever-Dale, Jamus Willms carves a brutal path of vengeance through the lands powerful nobility. His quest for justice seems to defy even death, as hatred fuels his journey - to the ruthless Lord that took everything from him as a simple reminder of the status quo. With the fires of that fateful night still burning in his mind, each step that takes him closer to reclaiming his daughter from the clutches of a psychopath blurs the line between man and monster - Jamus struggles to keep the flames that had disfigured his flesh from twisting his very soul forever.

A moving and satisfying tale of revenge from James Fuller.

Genres: Horror, Fantasy, Fiction

82 pages, Kindle Edition

First published April 19, 2012

About the author

James Fuller has enjoyed the fine art of writing for many years now, he's currently in the process of bringing out his new up and coming fantasy novel: Fall Of The King, the first book in which he hopes to be a series of nine books. James has also written movie scripts, short stories, and has had numerous pieces of poetry published. Through the years he has acquired quite a large fan base for his ...fiction not only through his blog and other various social networking websites such as Facebook but with other writers and artists of all sorts. James' other personal projects also include a comic series for mature readers; a tale of love, loss and vengeance which ignites in amazing emotion as James hopes to bring his character and story to life (collaborating with an artist.)

James has an absolute passion for bringing characters and situations to life with his detailed writing skills that really brings his books to life and makes his characters and their journeys so favourable. As an author he also goes above and beyond when it comes to writing battle scenes, the intricate design and explanations of fighting, not only in swordplay but also in tactics is one of James incredible expertise in which he delights in.

When James isn't on his computer writing his 2nd book of his fantasy series (Salvas) or writing short stories he enjoys recreational activities such a camping, fishing, hiking, and archery. Along with being an adventurous outdoors man James also spends many of his hours in a day as a devoted husband and father.

Reviews

[Rachel · Rating 2 out of 5]

Revenge served hot. The concept of pushing through inconceivable odds to avenge wrongful deaths drives this story. The flashback sequences really help to fill out the book. That really seems to be all there is to this though. Flashback/horror/flashback/bloody vengeance/flashback... I would have liked to know more about some of the other characters introduced.

[Kimberly Morehouse · Rating 5 out of 5]

I have been on a binge read of James Fuller books, so this was on my list but wasn't sure what I was getting into ahead of time. HOLY cow, what a sorted, sad, brutal and gripping tale. It's sat way in the past, when times seemed much more simple on the surface, but really were hard times. It's the story of Jamus, a hard working family man who loved his wife and two children very much. They didn't have much, but they had each other and that was enough. Then PURE evil strikes, and takes EVERYTHING away from Jamus in one night. It was savage, bloody and so brutal is was hard to grasp. You hated those who had a hand in their demise and find yourself fully supporting the revenge that Jamus is set on inflicting on ALL involved. He should be dead too, but something inside him keeps him going. The thought that his daughter is still out there, in the hand of a disgusting man who wants to do horrible things to her. You find yourself hoping that every kill Jamus commits that it will be the one that takes him to her so he can save her. His hate and pure rage keeps him going, until he can reunite with this daughter and take down everyone in his path. This was a quick read and so well written, it was like a movie playing out in my mind. I found myself listening to it from beginning to end with no pause, I had to know is Jamus got his revenge. I listened to the audio and the narrator on this has a deep, dark, gritty voice that fit perfect with the tone of the book. Heading off the book 2 now, excited to see where we are taken next! Be warned this can be trigger for rape and violence.

[L J Field · Rating 2 out of 5]

This is a hugely entertaining story, but the storyteller wasn’t quite up to writing it. Their were also many problems with punctuation, tense and even a word used improperly. This book could have been much better if it had had the assistance of a good editor and proofreader. Too bad, as this was an engaging story of revenge at any cost.

[Judy Ferrell · Rating 5 out of 5]

A bad man wants his life.

Jamus survives the ashes and goes on a vengeance spree. This is very much a different kind of book for James Fuller. I found it to be a spell binding read. Once started I had to finish. There was no stopping till I reached the last page.

[M.E. Aster · Rating 5 out of 5]

Audiobook review:

Unforgivable is a gritty tale of a man’s quest to right the wrongs that have befallen him through violence and death.

Although not for the faint of heart, I loved this story and I couldn’t stop reading (or listening in my case since I had it on Audible) once I started. The pacing of the story was amazing! There was never a dull moment. I was instantly invested in Jamus and his journey to receive justice.

The narrator for the Audible version also did a fantastic job. His voice fit the story perfectly, drawing me even deeper into this tale until I felt entirely emerged in it.

If you’re a fan of darker stories, this is one you have to read! I will definitely be starting part two ASAP!

*I was given a free copy of this audiobook by the author and this is my honest, voluntary review.*

[Tabatha Shipley · Rating 3 out of 5]

What I Did Like:
+The flashback scene delivered early in the book was a good tool. It helped to back up the main character’s motivation early on by making his pain real.
+For the most part Jamus is a decent guy. It’s clear he remembers what he’s been through and his motives stay clear. I’m ignoring THAT ONE ACT that goes against his nature though.
+The end works to set up for what I assume will be the content of the second book quite nicely. It also serves as a way to show me the sequel may actually be better, as I like this main character more.

Who Should Read This One:
-Readers who are not easily offended by gore and death who appreciate a good revenge story.

My Rating: 3 Stars

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[Elyse Cunningham · Rating 5 out of 5]

Unforgivable is a fast-paced tale about a man named Jamus and his quest for revenge. After his family murdered and his daughter taken. This tale where you’re rooting for this man throughout and want to him complete his goals as the story progresses you can see him struggling between his conscience and rage. The story set in a bygone era and done well. Dark, gritty, emotional, and something I wasn’t expecting. This was one of the rare books, where I started reading, and couldn’t put down until it was finished.

[Avid · Rating 5 out of 5]

If you enjoy fast-paced, dark and gritty reads, this is the book for you. It is well-written and kept my interest from the beginning to the end and I will be reading the rest of the series as well. James Fuller takes you to a place where a simple farmer, loving husband and father suffers a tragedy beyond endurance and changes from a mild mannered man into a seeker of justice and vengeance for those he lost and for the daughter who was taken from him. I would highly recommend it.

[Lacey · Rating 5 out of 5]

I didn't read this per say but omg if you ever get the chance to, either read it or better yet listen to the audiobook. Hands down amazing! Between James' writing and the narrator Bradley's voice, you are instantly transferred into the book and ready to fight along side the main character.

Great revenge book that will get you rooting for justice every turn of the page.

[L.A. Goodman · Rating 5 out of 5]

I truly did not know what to expect going into this book. The story pulled me in right away and I felt every bit of Jamus's need for revenge. The tale was gripping, and at times, horrifying. I cheered with each of Jamus's triumphs and mourned every failure. It feels like the next will be about Sophia and I'm here for it. Can't wait to dive into book 2!

[Kathy · Rating 5 out of 5]

Utterly riveting story, full of edge-of-seat and gut-wrenching twists and turns. The narration enhances the text beautifully. First in what I am sure will be an amazing series!

[Kimberly #Audiofile · Rating 3 out of 5]

Short and full of action.
Story full of pain, action and drama.
I’m 100% going to continue with the series. I really enjoyed the narrator. Good voice for the story. Multiple perspectives made the story better and easy to follow.
Bring on Sofia’s story.

Great start to a series.

Gifted audio for honest review ⭐️⭐️⭐️

[Helen Reynolds · Rating 5 out of 5]

Unforgivable is a well-written book with dark themes and gruesome details. The world-building is excellent, and you are right there in every scene as Jamus enacts his vengeance against those who murdered his wife and son and kidnapped his daughter. I listened to the audiobook while reading the book, a quirk of mine. The narrator captured Jamus's character, but I found the speech speed in places a little slow. A recommended read and listen.

[Lori Myers · Rating 4 out of 5]

I have to start out saying that I was not sure if I would like this book or not...of course, I can say that with most new authors- I am quite comfortable with my circle of writers and am never sure if I should leave my comfort zone and try a new one. I am so glad I took a chance on this one.
The opening paragraph just transported me to Jamus' realm. There are descriptions, and then there are descriptions James Fuller style. I have been reading Science Fiction and Fantasy for a good 35 years, and very rarely has an author captivated me from basically the first paragraph "The moon was full and hung proud in the peak of the heavens, offering its mystical glow to the dark world below. The stars littered the obscurity above in random fashion-as if someone had poked countless holes through a sheet of black linen. It was a tranquil night by even the hardest of men's standards. But it was lost on one...." at that point, you could not have gotten me off my recliner to do anything, although I had to fix supper for the family, but I did it with my kindle in hand.
What can I say about the characters? Jamus- husband, father, seeker of justice for the atrocities committed against his family...amazingly well written, very deep emotions. Mr. Fuller made Jamus leap off the page and appear before my very eyes, I could see the pacing, I could hear the raspy ruined voice. His sense of justice is sooo right. Sofia- beloved daughter. Stolen away from home. We can feel her bewilderment at what has happened, her anguish. Lord Carter...What a despicable excuse for a man...the man oozes slime with his every look. I have never been so happy to hate a character as I was him.
Unforgivable was absolute excitement to read, and I loved every minute of it...I was on the edge of my seat at several points, sure that Jamus was about to meet his maker. The story unfolded at just the right pace for me. I have to admit to being a tad taken aback at the ending, but that is what made it such an excellent book...that unexpected ending! Well done Mr. Fuller, Bravo!

[Vicki Rose · Rating 5 out of 5]

Once again, I swayed out of my normal paranormal genre to take a dive into the world of author James Fuller and what a surprise I received! Non-stop action, horror, drama & heart-breaking emotional scenes that left me cheering & crying at the same time!
We meet Jamus, a man out for well-deserved revenge, after the brutal murders of his wife & son and the kidnapping of his daughter, Sofia.. He will not rest until the monsters who committed this atrocity are brought to his very own personal kind of justice..
The emotions written into this story are just purely amazing! My heart literally ached when the horrible people were torturing Jamus's family... I cried with pain to see what Jamus had to watch & go through... I laughed with him when he had successes & his revenge campaign started to work!
This truly is one amazing novella & for lovers of horror/thriller/fantasy type books, you do NOT want to miss this book!! I'm looking forward to Part 2 and can't wait to get lost in the next amazing book by this author! ~Reviewer: Vicki Rose
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Platinum Reviews gives James & "Unforgivable"

4.5 PLATINUM RINGS!

[Jennifer · Rating 4 out of 5]

This book is definitely an “adult” novel. It is very well written and makes you gasp in disbelief multiple times. It has a great plot line and action that never falters. This is a man you root for, with every death you want to give him a high five and tell him good job. You can see the struggle between his conscience and his rage and it gives him a humanity that you did not expect. Set in an era long ago, you can feel the presence of the time around you. James did a wonderful job illustrating the setting through his words and the cover designer did a spectacular job capturing the face of Jamus. This book is a very gritty story, and something to not be overlooked. People with light stomachs might not like it but if you like a story full of blood, fighting, and lots of awesome killings I definitely suggest it! Aside from not realizing how graphic it was I really enjoyed it. I already started the second one and I cannot wait to finish it!

[Jeannie Christo · Rating 4 out of 5]

As a parent, most of us know the lengths we would go to to protect our children. Jamus experiences the same emotional rollercoaster when he entire life is torn apart by an evil and twisted Lord. All Jamus wanted to do was protect his family, mainly his young daughter. His act of protection backfired and now he is on a path of vengence.
Fuel by hatred, anger, revenge and the need to save his daughter, Jamus heads down a dark path while trying to hold on to his humanity.
***While this book is not from my usual genre I found it full of suspense and it kept me drawn in. James Fuller did a great job of character development. He makes the reader feel for Jamus and hate Lord Carter. Warning...this book does contain suggestively dark material that involves young children. Keep in mind it is only suggestive. The book is very detailed even if a bit gory. Fuller also ended to book leaving the reader wanting more. I will definitely read the next book Unforgivable Part Two.

[Cindy Smith · Rating 5 out of 5]

James has written a tale of revenge that is both shocking and understandable. Jamus just wanted a peaceful life with his family. When Lord Carter decided he wanted Jamus' daughter, Jamus respectfully declined saying his daughter was too young.

Well, Carter is not one to take no for an answer. His henchman go and do unspeakable things to Jamus and his family and steal the daughter.

Jamus survives and seeks revenge and the chance to rescue his daughter.

Lord Carter shows how much he will do to get what he wants. He will do ANYTHING.

The characters are so well-developed. You feel for Jamus and hate Carter. It is easy to find yourself routing for Jamus in his terrifying actions. No sympathy is ever going to be aroused for Carter.

This is a dark tale about an evil that is all to prevalent. It is something every parent worries and wonders about. Very graphic and very well written!

Another masterpiece from James! Bring on book two!!!

[Ren · Rating 4 out of 5]

What a great story! As you can tell from the blurb, Jamus sets outs to avenge the deaths of his family and save his daughter from the perverted Lord Carter. I will warn you that it is a bit gruesome. I'm all for guts and gore but this book still got to me. A few words of advice on reading this book: 1) don't read this book in public, ie. the train. People tend to look at you funny when you're wincing while reading. 2) this book has one scene that is hard to swallow and just happens to be towards the beginning. I'll admit, I was close to bawling my eyes out on the train. Can you say embarrassing? Yeah... Anywho... Unforgiveable is a heart wrenching, action packed journey of what a father is willing to do for the safety of his daughter. If you are looking for a happy ending, you wont find it here. I definitely recommend this book.

[Jae · Rating 2 out of 5]

I was drawn by the concept of the story, hoping it would be a satisfying read. I was wrong. The writing was clunky, as well as the dialogue, making the characters seem unrealistic. There was no depth to the characters, and the writing was full of telling and not much showing. Some of the fight scenes didn't make sense and just confused me. I just didn't come to care about the characters at all because there was very little to them apart from a name. **spoiler alert here ** The ending was unsatisfying because the main character didn't even save his daughter, a random servant did. Because of that, it made all the striving beforehand pointless. It might have been better by the daughter saving herself, but alas.

If you're looking for a story about a hero father saving his kidnapped daughter, go watch Taken.

[Darlene · Rating 5 out of 5]

Received this book from the author as an ARC in exchange for an honest opinion. This is mine.
When first started reading this book I really didn't think it was my cup of tea. However he more I really and got to know all the characters , it had me siting on the edge of my seat!!!!!
The story opens where the kings men are coming to collect a young girl from the house as payment. The father defies the guards. In the process the mother, and little brother are killed, the guards also believe that they have killed her father.
See, this is where the story really starts to get good. And if I told you more, than you would not want to buy James Fuller's book. And it is a definate hot read !!!! It's mind blowing!!! Looking forward to book 2 ..

[Frances Baker · Rating 5 out of 5]

Dark, fast paced, and explicit imagery are just a few of the discriptives I use for this tale of vengence. The first chapter was like a punch to the gut. I feel so much pain for the main character Jamus and his family and revel with him as he completes each step in his journey to avenge them. I look forward to starting the second instalment of this graphic and gritty story.

Side Note:
From chapter one I was cussing and threatening to stab, dismember and burn the antagonists of this story! A book of vengeance is nothing without its bad guys and these were some serious Bastards!!!! You did a fantastic job James Fuller.

[Jessica · Rating 4 out of 5]

Unforgivable was a read that from the very beginning demanded my attention. I find it interesting how easily I sided with a cold blooded, brutal, killer and I didn't flinch when `justice' was served. The author did a superb job in describing his fight scenes. I felt that there could have been more story worked in. More of a journey and perhaps more time to get to know the family. It takes great bravery to go to the dark places this author went, it's a risk I am glad he took. I see this book becoming a movie,or perhaps a great graphic novel.

[Wanda Hartzenberg · Rating 4 out of 5]

I am still in two as to my rating for this book.

It takes a lot for me to actually "get" a fictional characters motivation while I got it in this book from the get go.
I was rooting for every kill, for every life taken and I must say although that speaks volumes for the authors ability to build character into his pages I was not so impressed with my response.

I am however not going to hold the authors ability against him and keep my reaction out of it.

An adult read with explicit scenes. Expertly written. Read the book.

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[Kami · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is an amazingly written story. The prose is so good. Jamus tried to protect his twelve-year-old daughter and in retaliation horrible acts are done to him an his family. This is his story of revenge. This story is violent and crazy and I loved it so much. 4 stars

[Judith Bowers · Rating 5 out of 5]

Unforgivable

Bloody good book. I can imagine the rage and anger in this heartbreaking story. Threadbare no words to express this.