It's an iconic yarn with some sparkling dialogue, but a lot of its magic came from its onscreen execution — the editing, the effects and costumes, the music, and the actors' pacing of and adjustments to the words. It's worth remembering that classic "Star Wars" was a group effort. "A New Hope" featured uncredited edits by Gloria Katz, Willard Huyck, Brian De Palma, and Jay Cocks. Lawrence Kasdan and Leigh Brackett co-wrote "The Empire Strikes Back," and Kasdan and Lucas co-wrote "Return of the Jedi." In this script for the first film, it's primarily Lucas's authorial voice, and it's surprisingly uneven at points. The stage directions are discursive, lengthy, and, in the final 40 pages, maddening, as Lucas repeats the same sentences about 3 X-wings or 3 TIE fighters "zooming" over the Death Star. Zooming. Over and over. Without specifying their direction, or how the new shot is different from the last one. If you're reading this aloud with friends (as I did), and you're the narrator (as I was), then you may find that you start skipping the word "zoom" when it appears! Some of the language describing female characters is very ... 1970s; let's put it that way. This script is an interesting example of how a film in its final form can become more than it was on the page.