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The Order have watched over the continent of Epheria for thousands of years. But there are those who believe The Order has had its day. That it is corrupt, indulgent, and deceitful – that it is ready to fall.

The City of Ilnaen is on fire.
Dragons fill the skies.
Traitors fill the streets.

The Fall is a prequel novella that takes place four hundred years before the events in Of Blood and Fire – book one in The Bound and The Broken series.

95 pages, ebook

First published November 1, 2020

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Ryan Cahill is the award-winning author of the bestselling epic fantasy series, The Bound and The Broken.

Born and raised in Ireland, Ryan now resides amongst the rolling hills and hobbit holes of Middle-Earth, New Zealand. He does not own enough swords, would sell his left kidney for a dragon egg, and despises mushrooms in all their eldritch forms.

There are three things Ryan has always told himself about writing. Write the books you want to read. Write the books that your younger self would be proud of you for reading. Make sure they have dragons.

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771 reviews62.1k followers
October 21, 2021
Wow. I can’t believe this great novella is available for FREE on the author’s website.

If you’re diligent in searching for fantasy books on Amazon, it’s quite likely that you’ve seen the name Ryan Cahill popping up lately. His debut, Of Blood and Fire, has been trending on Amazon for months. As usual, though, when I start a series, I will more often than not read in publication order. And that’s why I started with The Fall first. What I didn’t expect, however, was how packed and compelling this novella would be.

“The duty of the strong is to protect the weak.”


The entire story of The Fall takes place in the year 2682 after Doom; 400 years before the events in Of Blood and Fire begins. It takes place in the City of Ilnaen, and this single destructive event is told through the perspective of four main characters. The Fall isn’t a big book; it’s only 95 pages long, and it’s incredibly action-packed. The danger of writing an action-packed novella, usually, is there aren’t enough characterizations to make readers care for their struggle. But Cahill was able to efficiently establish why the four POV characters are involved in this event. Alvira, Kallinvar, Coren, and Eltoar; four of them has different reason and motivation to participate in this war, and I was able to feel invested in this relatively short stories about justice, loyalty, and freedom.

“Pain is the path to strength.”


I don’t want to ramble on too long for this review; the book is short enough already. But I need to praise just one more thing. Cahill was able to successfully infuse enough world-building elements to make this fantasy work intriguing, especially as an appetizer for his main series. There’s Soulblade, elemental/blood magic, and also a lot of dragons and Dragonbound. Cahill’s prose is accessible, and his actions felt vivid in my mind.

Picture: Kallinvar by Aron Cahill



Yes, the physical edition of The Fall has two interior artworks. The Fall is a great novella. Not only it managed to tell a pulse-pounding story in such a short length, but it also successfully Sparked (see what I did there?) my interest to read the main series. Definitely sooner than later. Once again, you can get this novella for free from the author’s website. Do it!

“All great things require sacrifice.”


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194 reviews10.1k followers
March 9, 2023
I think the best way to describe this novella is taking your first step into a larger world. Almost immediately you’re thrown into a conflict without knowing who these characters are, where they are, why they’re fighting, and who is on what side. This is to be expected when you start here, as many read the first full book in the series before The Fall. But the author himself told me it was perfectly fine to start here and I’m glad I did.

Many have said if you’re good with in media res, The Fall is a great place to start because it gives you a quick glimpse of what this series is like without undergoing the slow burn of Cahill’s world-building first. And let me tell you…it is epic AF.

The magic system is one that I immediately latched onto with not just mages or wizards having access to it. But different power levels for different characters. I love that there are 5 “threads” of the magic system and no one seems reduced to just fire magic or ice magic, etc. But the coolest thing is summoning a Soulblade. It made me think of how Sanderson does his shard blades in Stormlight Archive yet somehow cooler.

But this story was non-stop action from 4 different POVs as we slowly see how they all tie together during this massive conflict. The action is relentless, the dialogue snappy, the pacing breakneck, and the characters layered. And this in just 86 pages. Oh, and did I mention it was this kickass before freaking dragons show up and start fighting one another?!

In the end, this quick taste has me anxious to pick up the series proper later this year when my scheduled read alongs are complete and I have some more TBR freedom. I can safely say that Cahill is onto something here and I can certainly see why he is the talk of the self-pub ball. Keep an eye on this author as I think he’s going to become one of my faves.
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353 reviews8,855 followers
June 21, 2023
A fun read, and one of the better novellas I've ever read. Action packed from start to finish.
February 25, 2022
4 stars for a book that demonstrates “pain is the path to strength.”. A dark fairy tale set in Epheria, where the city of Ilnaen is on fire, dragons fill the skies and traitors fill the streets and the reader can be assured of an action packed novella that will keep you absorbed.

“It is done, The Council are dead” Eltoar said. “As is the Archon”, and with pain and vengeance at the core, Eltoar forgot that honour was the only currency, and that night where many fell, he would look back on the terrible things he did that night “…things that would seep into his heart”. But what set him out on this course was vengeance.

“Vengeance. It was as good a reason as any. Vengeance could stir a rebellion, push people to do things beyond what they ever thought they could. But could it support an empire?”

As the battle raged Eltoar knew that their actions would have far reaching consequences because of the people he betrayed and the pact and vows that once protected all were left shattered and all sense of harmony was replaced with loss, pride, and sadness. The order had fallen but what they felt most that night was fear!!! Fear “that they had made the greatest mistakes of their lives”.

Action packed and set 400 years before the events of the first book in the series ‘Blood and Fire, ‘The Fall’, is a great teaser, gap filler and provides the followers of this series with a rare opportunity to get more insight into how the world looked and the order of power before the series began.

The world building is excellent, the writing style perfect for fantasy and with an array of characters and beasts that is certain to thrill in the full series. I loved the way the author themed the chapters around: The Archon, The Knights, Dragonbound, and finally The Traitor, the last two being my favourites. However, overall, I was missing the context of this story and in hindsight, I should have read the first book in the series and then 0.5.

Nevertheless a great little book that is action packed from the first page. 3.5 rounded up.
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261 reviews6,254 followers
June 5, 2021
“Vengeance. It was as good a reason as any. Vengeance could stir a rebellion, push people to do things beyond what they ever thought they could. But could it support an empire?”

The Fall is a novella set 400 years before the events in Of Blood and Fire, which is the first book in The Bound and Broken series. I enjoyed Of Blood and Fire, so I was excited to get my hands on this novella! So what did I think about it?

Firstly, let’s talk about Cahill’s writing. While I was impressed by Cahill’s prose in Of Blood and Fire, Ryan Cahill’s writing is even better in The Fall! In The Fall, Cahill masterfully crafts epic fantasy scenes with mass destruction, fantastic characters and DRAGONS! The ability to set the stage and establish this world in less than 100 pages is truly incredible. Reading this novella feels like being dropped into a fantasy world, and then it is up to the reader to try and figure out what is going on. The reader is thrown into a complex and chaotic scene, where the empire’s future is being fundamentally threatened. Cahill effectively leads the reader through this complex conflict by slowly unveiling each character’s motivation and actions. The Fall is chaotic, heartbreaking and action-packed, and I enjoyed every page of it.

Cahill also expands on this universe and its history in The Fall. Reading this novella has convinced me that Cahill could write an endless amount of stories set in Epheria. This world is rich with history, fantasy races and complex magic systems.

Lastly, Cahill briefly introduces the reader to some truly badass characters. Although the reader barely gains any knowledge about them, Cahill is able to convince the reader why these characters are important. Cahill decides to analyse the central conflict through four different POVs. This way of telling this story is incredibly effective, which gives the reader an understanding of the stakes at play. I would love to learn more about each of these characters since I can imagine that each and everyone has an interesting past.

It is always difficult to rate a novella due to its short length, but Cahill has truly written something impressive in this story. Cahill’s writing ability, world-building and characterisation is phenomenal, and I can’t wait to read Of Darkness and Light.

4.5 / 5 stars
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200 reviews291 followers
November 12, 2023
“With his loss, came her fury.”
Ryan Cahill you have my attention. WOW. Amazing sword fighting on the first page, women in power, elves, tons of light and dark magic, dragons & bonded dragon riders, and a huge epic battle that spans this entire prequel novella?!?!? Where has this book been all my life?

The visceral pain, horror, honor, hope, and protection felt from these characters in such a few pages is incredible. One of the best books I’ve ever read and it’s less than 100 pages. Do yourself a favor and add this to your TBR!!! Can’t wait to continue this series.

Update: This is the book that started my obsession with this series. And it’s incredible via audiobook as well! Although this is a hot topic amidst the fandom… I’m a firm supporter of the Svidarya reading order (Aka The Fall, then Of Blood and Fire, Of Darkness and Light, and The Exile.) If you adore Epic Fantasy at it’s finest, dragons, and some bloody chaos, I’d highly recommend getting a digital copy of this book for FREE from Ryan’s website.
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497 reviews3,552 followers
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May 27, 2022
This is a prequel novella by Ryan Cahill, and after reading Of Blood and Fire, I had high hopes. I was not disappointed! The Fall is a great novella that is ram-packed with action whilst embellishing on the world Ryan Cahill is created, answering some questions, but also putting forward a number of others.

Considering the small period of time that we spend with the characters, Ryan Cahill did a great job crafting them and also allowing me as the reader to grow attached and immersed in what was going on.

It is essentially a chaotic battle that we are thrust into in media res, and throughout this novella we find out what is going on, get a glimpse at the politics and betrayals and also the grand consequences for the world.

You can read The Fall before any of Ryan Cahill's works, or after Of Blood and Fire. It depends on personal choice. This takes place 400 years before the main story of the Bound and the Broken, so is used to increase an understanding of the world, and does not necessarily have to read to understand the plot and story of the main series.

Full Review to Come
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336 reviews3,001 followers
December 18, 2024
Page 27 and I was crying!
How does he do it! Ryan can make me care for characters so quickly
This book was so action packed and was perfect after I finished Of Blood & Fire I got to experience first hand The Fall of the order that was mentioned so much and wow brutal.

It was also nice seeing familiar names like Aeson and Kallinvar, excited to see what parts they play in the future books

I am officially hooked on this series
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335 reviews10.4k followers
December 23, 2024
RATING BREAKDOWN
Characters: 4⭐️
Setting: 5⭐️
Plot: 4⭐️
Themes: 4⭐️
Emotional Impact: 4⭐️
Personal Enjoyment: 4⭐️
Total Rounded Average: 4.25⭐️

This is a fantastic novella! I can't believe it has 3 POVs that all had me gripped and emotionally invested. The Fall also does some heavy lifting when it comes to emotional impact and character development for the main series. You get background for Eltoar, Aeson and Kavillar. Not only that, it has some epic combat scenes, and lays groundwork for the Knights of Acheron, the Order, and the dragonlore for the main series. I felt so much more grounded in the world as I was reading the main series from the context this little sucker gave me. It packs a punch. I'm telling you.

I can recommend this for its own entertainment, as it's excellent, but it also really enhances the core series for me. I HIGHLY recommend reading it after Of Blood and Fire, before going into Of Darkness and Light.
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209 reviews186 followers
May 23, 2023
Ryan Cahill’s appetizer novella for his The Bound and the Broken series was BAD. Bad to the bone, that is! 😀 You can expect epic sword fights, innovative uses of magic, and exciting characterizations in this swift 90 page-ish novella.

There is definitely a unique approach to world building. It uses familiar fantasy tropes but quickly ingratiates you into the world and makes you care about what happens in the quick 4-pov arc.

I was blown away by the sheer amount of content that was packed into the story. You are treated to a lively siege, a battle of dragons, a magic encounter, and other thrilling sword bits. ⚔️

I would recommend this to anyone who loves fantasy and wants to jump right into the action. A big thanks to my Goodreads buddies for the recommendation.

Category: Epic Fantasy / Adventure
Rating: 5/5

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Author 9 books557 followers
July 3, 2022
I read Of Blood and Fire last year and really enjoyed the classic Tolkien feel of the world, intermixed with a more modern tone and feel. Later, I heard about The Fall.

The format for this book was really cool. It was a single action-packed event told through the eyes of four different characters in (mostly) chronological order. It's filled to the brim with magic, world-building, combat, and sorrow at every turn. What's most impressive is how thoroughly I enjoyed these heroic characters in such a short period of time.

I'm certain that if I read Of Blood and Fire again right now, I'd enjoy it even more than I did the first time. Now, I get to look forward to reading book 2, Of Darkness and Light, which I hear is absolutely incredible.
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236 reviews58 followers
May 30, 2025
The Fall


The Fall is a novel that takes place 400 years before Of Blood and Fire, the first book in the series The Bound and The Broken by author Ryan Cahill. I decided to start with the novel because the author himself advises readers to start with it to already have a context for the first book. In this novel, we follow some characters who are part of an order that is about to fall. Basically, this is the premise of the story. We follow 4 different characters and what each one is doing when chaos begins in the city. I confess that I was surprised that in a novel, the author knew how to develop characters and their motivations well. He also knew how to present the magic system, which I found very interesting and even reminded me of the animation Avatar: The Last Airbender. For those who want to start this series, I highly recommend starting with this novel so that you are already familiar with what will happen in book 1 of the series. For those who like a quick but very well-made story, go without fear with this novel. I am sure you will like it. This is an excellent start to this epic fantasy series.
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788 reviews25 followers
October 18, 2025
“I do not know what we will face on the other side. I do not know if we will survive. But a darkness has fallen… I can feel it. We must go. We must hold back the shadow.”


Brimming with action on every page. Really awesome to have the background Lore on the blood moon which helps me appreciate the world building of the series more. Loving Cahill’s novellas.

“Pain is the path to strength.”
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1,316 reviews1,625 followers
February 7, 2023
The Fall ★★★★
Of Blood and Fire ★★★★

The Fall takes place 400 years before the events of "Of blood and Fire" and it is so darn action packed. I think this is the fastest novella I have ever read and there is just so much happening in less than a 100 pages.

The novella follows the chaos of an important war in the past and it is chaotic(in a very good way). There are dragons and magic and multiple characters and we get to experience the war from different point of views and actually care about them in very little time which almost never happens in novellas and the main reason they're hard for me to enjoy.

The world-building was magical, the prose was great and there is not much that I can criticize other than the fact that I wanted more. I can't wait to read more in this series!
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342 reviews721 followers
July 25, 2023
2.5 rounded up to three. Reading this a second time just didn’t click with me. 4 POV in 88 pages seems a tall order to pull off. I was never able connect with the characters so while the action was really cool the emotional beats of the story never really hit me.
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51 reviews
July 18, 2022
Wow, that was surprisingly generic, with nothing to fall back on but mindless action. I was very excited when it was revealed that this novella has elemental magic, but unfortunately, that's the last time I had any positive feelings regarding this short story. Being split into multiple POVs results in no noticeable character getting their fair due in terms of development, explaining their motivations, or just simple character interactions or monologues to make the reader aware of anything unique about them.

Only in the final chapter does one character finally get some type of development, and all it is is them realising that maybe the extreme measures they and their team undertook throughout the story don't justify the goal they aspire to. What goal was that again? Overthrowing the establishment to have no more leaders to rule with an iron fist? Do the bad decisions the (now) previous leaders make get explained to get the reader to perceive their justifications? Nah, only a completely unknown foot soldier in the final chapter of the novel gives the motivation for the entire event taking place over this whole short story.

Moving on to the plot, in terms of plot... there is no plot. This is just a collection of POVs, all showing the small part that each character plays in this grand battle. All that one gets is who the character is and which side they're on. The character then travels through the battlefield to an arena where a huge fight takes place. All the fights are ultimately either just throwing an element directly at the enemy and then throwing another element at the environment to aid them in their fight or just decent swordplay. Maybe a dragon will come swooping in to shake things up, but just flee or throw an element directly at it and carry on with the fight. The elemental magic system is very lame. It's just selecting an element out of one's weapons wheel by visualising it, then pointing it in a direction to either push it or pull it either at someone or at something. Barely any nuance is thrown into the mix beyond using it to communicate in loud environments and combining it to create ice or melt the floor.

Also, the author really should find new words to describe things beyond the word "thunder" because  a dragon's roar, bits of dust plummeting downward from the roof, and the anguish in a dragon’s mind, all just so happen to be like thunderous roars. In a novella and so close to each other within two chapters, this is a bit distracting and lazy.

A breakneck fast pace with lots of action and a barrage of destruction and chaos in the background means little if the fightscenes aren't enjoyable and the characters, while distinguishable, are paper-thin with nothing intriguing to make one want to find out more about them or to see how their journey continues.

1,7 stars. I will not be reading the series because this is reportedly the action-packed and high-stakes entry, with the next one being a slow burn to just build back up to such a subpar and shockingly uncreative magic system in a world with dragons who are more like emotional support animals rather than game-changing players in fight scenes. I definitely am not missing much that could appeal to me.
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86 reviews6 followers
June 8, 2023
A really great start to the series. Start here with the novella. Good old classic epic fantasy.
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562 reviews68 followers
April 23, 2025
Best novella I’ve ever read. It was nice finally understanding what was going on in the prequel of book 1. I think you could easily ready this first and it not sacrifice your enjoyment of it at all.

It was also nice seeing Cahill really show the interesting magic of his world. There was a cool spell that I thought was really unique.

It’s about 100 pages of a battle scene with every 20-30 pages being a new pov showing the different perspectives of what’s going on. It’s not enough pages to truly enjoy these characters but I think Cahill did good enough for what it is, especially since some of these characters will make an appearance later on.

Highly recommend this series and I’ve heard it only gets better from here

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1,676 reviews202 followers
August 22, 2022
I liked this novella even more than the first book!
Mainly because I knew the world already, so we got right to try action, as well as the cast being a bit wider spread. I liked seeing more important female characters as well as seeing a three dimensional bad guy, instead of just "good versus evil".

This tells the backstory of how we even got to the whole situation the characters and world are stuck in "Of Blood and Fire" and was a quick, dark, fast paced, and engaging read!
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222 reviews63 followers
November 1, 2021
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4/5 ⭐️

“All great things require sacrifice.”


The Fall is a modern take of a classic fantasy story of dragons, elves, magic, and a crumbling city that is FREE and packs a punch!

The Fall is the companion novella for Ryan Cahill's self published The Bound and the Broken series. This book is recommended to me by my friend Petrik Reads when I was looking for something short to read. Before hand I've never read any book by Ryan Cahill but I've seen his books floating around the SFF book blogger community. Petrik did a great job at selling this book to me, he said "dragons, a siege, elves, free book" and I was sold. Based on the rating it is clear that I enjoyed everything about it! This novella is available for FREE on the authors website, all you need to do is sign up for their mailing list and you can download the book right away.

“Pain is the path to strength.”


The story is set 400 years before the events in Of Blood and Fire, which is the first book in The Bound and Broken series in the middle of a siege as we follow four different perspectives. In the City of Ilnaen everything is in chaos, blood and gore litter the streets as battle ensues at every corner. I will not talk about the characters because that will pretty much spoil the story. The only thing I will mention regarding characters is Ryan Cahill's amazing characterization and ability to pack in a lot of noteworthy moments between characters that stunned me could be contained in this 95 page novella. The book starts off running and it keeps on running as the plot picks up as we follow different characters at different parts of the city from different backgrounds and stations. My favorite has got to be the second character POV that we follow. All I have to say he is the most glorious character that left a huge impression on me.

The Fall is a classic fantasy story that is written in a more modern approach that I find fascinating and addictive. Though I have to admit after 30 pages I had to put it down because I got distracted by a different book I finished the last 65 pages in one sitting. Being set in a city there isn't a need to do much world building but again Ryan Cahill still managed to condense the world and magic into this book which is impressive. Cahill's prose is accessible, detailed, and magnetic. The battle scenes in this story is vivid, alluring, and explosive that I could not get enough of it. The emotional moments are also delivered with depth and carried a lot of weight that left me devastated.

“Vengeance. It was as good a reason as any. Vengeance could stir a rebellion, push people to do things beyond what they ever thought they could. But could it support an empire?”


Final thoughts, The Fall is the perfect novella with thoughtful and detailed world building compelling characters and all round well balance fantasy story that is short enough to peak your interest into Ryan Cahill's epic fantasy series. I loved everything about this short novella and will very likely pick up Cahill's full length novels to go back into the world of The Bound and the Broken. I highly recommend for readers who are fans of the classic fantasy stories with dragons, elves, demons, etc but want a more modern voice to pick this book up. For a D&D fan like me this book is perfect to fill my need of an epic with the classic fantasy tropes that I've long searched. Let's just say I'm a new fan of Ryan Cahill and I'm looking forward to his other works.
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793 reviews18 followers
August 27, 2024
Really enjoyed this novella and foray into the world of The Bound and the Broken. Lots of action right from the get-go, sword fights, magic, dragons… yeah, it’s a good action book that still gives some light world building, character development, and magic system. Does all this really well for such a short book. I will absolutely be continuing this series… just have a few others I want to get through first.

4.5 stars
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224 reviews10 followers
August 3, 2024
There's apparently a never ending discussion within TBATB fandom of whether people should start with Of Blood and Fire or The Fall. OBAF is allegedly a slow setup for the rest of the series, The Fall is action packed prequel providing more information about the past events. Even author doesn't have a definitive answer and so I decided to go with the short action packed entry.

As you can see by my rating it was either a bad idea or I would outright dnf OBAD. I understand that it's a novella and so the characters can't have much depth... scratch that. These are four interconnected short stories with four POVs. It is not a novella. Cahill did a decent job of explaining how the world works without infodumps but I can't say I was thrilled with it. I didn't know what mattered here or why with exception of the villain. Also it felt so video game-y.

Knights have magical armor that turns them into Space Marines with Jedi swords. Dragon riders are glued to dragons when they fly by magic so they can't fall off. Magic itself is so cheap to use and you can use all elements at will apparently. Orc like monster literally hit its fists into ground and sent a wave of earth mixed with fire (I think?) at its enemy. Like some skill ability from Dragon Age.

Speaking of Dragon Age, it's probably what it reminded me the most. But Inquisition, not Origins. The knights can also create worm holes to teleport which are black in the middle with green light oozing from the edges... like those tears in the veil from Inquisition. I hate when other forms of entertainment gamify their world to make them feel like video games. It's why I barely watch any isekai and why I stay away from licensed books.

I guess I was suppose to feel for the main villain at the end where it's shown that he has regrets and fears of just what the hell did he unleash at the world? If I could read with my eyes rolled up I would've read the hatchery scene like that and that last chapter is ultimately why the rating is one star lower. I do admit that other scenes were epic but that's not enough. Not sure if I will continue.
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83 reviews40 followers
June 13, 2024
This review was originally posted on SFF Insiders

The Fall is an emotional, Sentinel-armor-enhanced kick to the gut while ranking as one of my all-time favorite novellas. I’ve heard The Fall touted as the example of how to effectively write a fantasy novella and, after reading it, I have to agree.

It’s important to note here, especially if you haven’t read my review for Of Blood and Fire, that I decided to follow the Fellensir reading order, which means I read Of Blood and Fire before reading The Fall. As I expressed in the other review (check it out for more details), I sincerely believe that this is the optimal way of starting The Bound and the Broken series. Having the groundwork laid for me by Of Blood and Fire allowed this extremely fast paced and ambitious novella to land on an already established framework and understanding of Epheria. The impact of seeing some of these characters, who played huge parts in Of Blood and Fire or who were mentioned in passing, allowed their story in The Fall to take on greater depths, and ultimately extract significantly more emotional pain as I watched The Fall unfold.

“Pain is the path to strength.”

Where Of Blood and Fire started the reader in a small village with a slow and steady build up of action and lore, The Fall grabs you by the shoulders from the first page, chucks you onto the back of a dragon, and expects that you’re not going to fall off during the ride. The action is non-stop. The Fall is set 400 years before the events in Of Blood and Fire. We follow four main perspectives as we learn about this devastating, bloody night in the city of Ilnaen: Alvira the Archon, Kallinvar from the Knights of Achyron, Coren of the Draleid, and the traitor Eltoar. We get to meet a young Aeson and learn briefly of Farda’s traitorous backstory. These four perspectives are woven together masterfully. There are touch points snuck into each story so you can place it on the timeline of the battle, but there never feels like there is unnecessary redundancy.

The Fall is such a strong novella for a number of reasons. First, and probably most impressive to me, is that Cahill was able to introduce us to four almost completely new characters (I know there were some brief introductions to some of them in Of Blood and Fire, but they were minor) and make us care about these people in the space of a few pages. There are instant emotional connections between the readers and these characters, to such a degree that I felt my heart being ripped out multiple times in the course of a 77-page book! I was on an emotional rollercoaster throughout the entire novella, shocked and heartbroken as I witnessed Alvira and Eltoar’s interaction, cheering a wild battlecry as the Knights charged into Ilnaen, crushed at the death and destruction and ripping apart of dragon bonds, and then ultimately horrified as we meet Fane Mortem in the last pages. These pages are bursting at the seams with blockbuster worthy scenes that I cannot get over. All the scenes with Aeson. Kallinvar’s fight with the Bloodmarked. Coren witnessing the pain of the newly christened Rakina. Eltoar’s brief realization of the sacrifice he has made while standing in the Hatchery. The terrible might of Fane. The amount of lore that Cahill is able to build in such a brief novella is impressive and bodes well for the remainder of this series.

“You must always rise, so that others rise with you.”

The Fall is black velvet, highlighting the diamond that Cahill is crafting in The Bound and the Broken. Cahill’s deep, meticulous history of Epheria and the potential for how sweeping and epic this series can be is encapsulated in this short novella. To anyone who is deciding how to start The Bound and the Broken (because starting it should be a given at this point), start with Of Blood and Fire, learn about Epheria, and then get blown away by The Fall. Please, for the love of Achyron, do not just read the novels and skip these novellas. The Fall is a masterclass in elevating a series into a completely different tier of fantasy story.
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July 7, 2024
“The gods have not abandoned us, just as we will not abandon the people we swore to protect. If we die tonight, we die with our swords in our hands, staring into the eyes of the one who sends us into the void.”


In this short novella, we follow the events of the Fall of the Order. In one night, there is a betrayal and all is lost. We do this through the perspectives of four:

the Archon
Will you go with me, follow me into the flames of our home?

a Knight of Achyron
The duty of the strong is to protect the weak.

a Draleid
Draleid n’aldryr, Rakina nai dauva. Dragonbound by fire, Broken by death.

and the Traitor
All great things require sacrifice.


This was so heartbreaking to read.
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November 11, 2021
I'm normally not a fan of short stories or novellas, but this short story is amazing. After reading only a couple of pages it sucked me into its world and left me breathless. It's amazing that the author managed to create such a vivid and exciting world with such interesting characters in such a short time. I can't wait to read a full novel. Highly recommend!
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