The plot is thus: Elena Weaver, a student of English at Cambridge, gets her face smashed in while out for her morning run. Scotland Yard is called in because of blah blah plot contrivance blah. Anyway, Elena was deaf, and this is a MAJOR DEAL TO LIKE, EVERYONE SHE KNEW. Her parents wouldn’t let her learn how to sign until she was in her teens because they wanted her to live a “normal” life, her friend from the campus Deaf Student Group gave her shit because she didn’t embrace Deaf culture as whole-heartedly as he thought she should have, everyone always referred to her as “that little deaf girl,” etc. Basically, the poor kid couldn’t get a moment’s peace about it. Also, apparently the British have never met Political Correctness and would not give it tea and sandwiches if they had.
As to why someone would want to kill Elena–well. Her stepmom hated her for being the center of her father’s life, her friend from the student group had plenty of reasons to be displeased with her, none of which I shall reveal here because they’re spoilery, she was pregnant, she was having an affair with a married guy, she’d accused a Swede of sexual harassment…you get the point. She might as well have had a giant “KILL ME ALREADY” sign taped to her back.
Now, I think this book failed on two levels: first, and most importantly to the craftspeople among you, it fails because George fucking cheats. You get the murderer’s POV quite early on, without knowing that they’re the murderer, and when the big reveal comes and you go back and reread that initial section? Yeah, it doesn’t make any goddamn sense. Those are not the thoughts of someone who has just bludgeoned a young woman to death; they’re not even the carefully edited thoughts of a person who has just committed murder. I’m all for unreliable narrators, but that bald-faced lying shit only works in the first person–George was writing in third-person limited. She was essentially tapping into this character’s stream of consciousness, and the level of denial that would have had to be present for that person to think that way was just NOT characteristic of their later thoughts and actions. Sloppy, George. EXTREMELY SLOPPY.
So it fails plot-wise, and it’s also horribly ableist, not to mention homophobic. Basically, Elena’s parents spent her entire life thinking that she was somehow lesser for having been born deaf–I’m not complaining about that, because unfortunately that does happen. I am complaining about the fact that at one point her dad goes off on a rant about why couldn’t she just be NORMAL, and George essentially says that there’s no crime in feeling that way, that the only crime is in running from it.
NOW HOLD UP.
No, it isn’t a crime to feel that way, because all of society is TELLING you to feel that way, and people are only human. But “the only crime” being “running away from it”? Bullshit. BULLSHIT. The crime is holding onto those feelings and making your daughter pay for them by not letting her learn sign language until outside authorities force you to. The crime is in making her suffer so that you can feel “normal.” Because when it comes right down to it, you don’t care about her and whether she’s fitting in–you care about the fact that by not fitting in, she’s making you stick out.
*deep breath* Okay, MOVING ON.
George also tried to tackle the desire of people in marginalized groups to belong completely to larger society, and of course she screwed the pooch on that one, too. Her portrayal of marginalized people who have rejected mainstream culture in favor of their own is stereotyped in the extreme; she has some sympathy for the Deaf Student club member who was friends with Elena, but when she briefly touches on lesbianism in a side-plot? Oh, holy heaven. The “good” lesbian is the girl who feels bad about hurting her parents by coming out, and who fantasizes about having a heterosexual relationship; the “bad” lesbian manipulates her girlfriend into coming out by using sex, refuses to let her girlfriend give information to the police because she (illogically) thinks it will endanger them, and then runs for the hills when another student is murdered. Oh, and she’s the one constantly harping on gay identity and how in a few years, we won’t even need men for sperm anymore.
…yeah.
Recommended for: OH HOLY CHRIST SAVE YOURSELVES BEFORE IT’S TOO LATE. RUN. RUN WHILE YOU STILL CAN.