The Starlight Club tells the story of a group of middle level Mafia bosses and henchmen, in and around the club of the book’s title, in Queens, New York, during 1961/62. Although the central characters and story are fictional, the story is set in the context of an actual war between the large Mafia families of the era, and these events sometimes impinge on the story, and some real life characters occasionally stroll across the stage. In general the author has researched the historical context quite well. This all gives the story a very realistic flavor and is quite fascinating , and makes the reader want to look deeper into the context. At the same time, however, it puts a lie to the author’s disclaimer (inside cover) that “All characters appearing in this work are fictitious. Any resemblance to real persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental.” The Gallo brothers, Joseph Profaci and Carlo Gambino – these are real life characters, and the story benefits greatly from their presence. Among the fictional characters, the main protagonists are: Big Red, the proprietor of the club; Trenchie, a hitman just out of prison; and Jimmy the Hat, who, in the course of the story becomes a Hollywood star.
The 1961/62 story is framed within a brief Prologue and Epilogue, in which a minor player, Bobby Valentine, now an old man, relates events to his daughter during the present day. Bobby is only a very minor character in the main story. This is a good idea, but would have worked better if there were a few more reminders throughout the story of Bobby’s occasional participation in these events. As it is, Bobby does not appear to have been a witness to most of the events he is (apparently) relating, and this may bother the reader.
This is not Shakespeare, but the almost “blokey” way in which the story is told works quite well, given the genre. Having said that, the attempts at describing romance are a little awkward. The story works best when the author is describing the more violent scenes: fights, executions. These work very well. The main characters, murderers, thugs, henchmen, are actually quite endearing. I was drawn into their particular world, with its distinctive code and values. I liked them. I cared about what would happen to them. I wanted to read on.
Note that the errors in the book, mentioned in previous reviews, have now been largely corrected.
In summary: the basic story and characters drew me in. The writing is not always polished and stylish, but I could mostly overlook this. I give this book four stars out of five.