Toil and Trouble, Book One is a fast paced and fun read. I don't normally like present tense, but V. J. Chambers handles it perfectly. The narration is engaging and the main character is intriguing without being unbelievable. Olivia acts like a young woman trying to learn her place in the world. She is not instantly kick-butt (like so many Urban Fantasy heroines) but she is believably tough and handles herself well. She also has an everyday life, outside the paranormal, which is something else many Urban Fantasy stories overlook. I was fully immersed in Olivia's story and her life, eager to find out what happened next.
As much as I loved this (and I did love it), it wasn't perfect. There were a few common sense mistakes. For instance, a major (and well-known) crime family sets up a fake business to handle an underhanded dealing. They name it after their own last name. What? Have these people never heard of fronts? What better way to draw the police's (and the main character's) attention than name it after an infamous crime family. It would have been easy enough to have Olivia discover the connection through research. Or, as we read on, she would have discovered the truth later on anyway and did not need the obvious "check here for bad guys" clue.
Another thing that turned me off was its apparent religious bias. In Toil and Trouble, there are a few forms of magic, one of which is accessed through chants to Christian saints. In this world, the only known practitioners of this form of magic are Catholics (there is a special term for these people, but they are all Catholics), while other Christians turn their back on magic. Later, they find another religious practitioner, but this one uses their magic for evil. Not surprisingly, this practitioner prays to a pagan deity, Diana. A little research could have revealed to Chambers that Diana is the goddess of the hunt, moon and childbirth. At no point was she ever associated with evil or death. Chambers instead seems to fall back on to the old stereotype of anything pagan is automatically evil, an odd mentality for a book that deals with magic. In all, it seems to me that Catholics are portrayed as enlightened, other Christians are misguided, and pagans are evil.
I truly enjoyed this book, even with its drawbacks. I found myself eagerly turning the (electronic) page. I look forward to reading the sequel.