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Disability and Determination
Despite being a cripple with a blighted life, Fitzwilliam Darcy was a fine looking man…
A year ago Mr. Darcy suffered from an illness which robbed him of the use of his legs. However he is determined to never become maudlin and behave as though his life is over and ruined just because part of it has become more difficult. Since he could not expect to recover any further, it was time to resume the ordinary course of his life.
Georgiana at last departed on her long delayed trip to Ramsgate with her companion Mrs. Younge, and Darcy went to visit his friend Bingley in Hertfordshire.
Elizabeth could not look away from Mr. Darcy when he entered the room at the Meryton assembly. A very handsome and determined man. She could not decide what she thought about him. And then she overheard him insulting her.
When Mr. Darcy apologises to Elizabeth, a friendship will flourish between them that will take them through difficulties, heartbreak and eventually to love.
A year ago Mr. Darcy suffered from an illness which robbed him of the use of his legs. However he is determined to never become maudlin and behave as though his life is over and ruined just because part of it has become more difficult. Since he could not expect to recover any further, it was time to resume the ordinary course of his life.
Georgiana at last departed on her long delayed trip to Ramsgate with her companion Mrs. Younge, and Darcy went to visit his friend Bingley in Hertfordshire.
Elizabeth could not look away from Mr. Darcy when he entered the room at the Meryton assembly. A very handsome and determined man. She could not decide what she thought about him. And then she overheard him insulting her.
When Mr. Darcy apologises to Elizabeth, a friendship will flourish between them that will take them through difficulties, heartbreak and eventually to love.
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March 26, 2022
4.5 rounded up to 5 stars
Readers, before you begin this story let me warn you that the two characters who suffer quite serious illnesses which have permanent affects on their bodies do not have any miraculous healings.
I have read just about all of this author's stories and enjoyed them. Plus I admire his commitment to contribute regularly to Doctors without Borders and how he encourages us all to find a charity to support.
The author does detail his research into the illnesses of that era and even more recently so as to give the reader the knowledge that what he is writing about is not just from his imagination. He also describes efforts to rehabilitate sufferers of such and even equipment available for the disabled persons' use at that time.
While Darcy is attracted to Elizabeth he still has the same thoughts and reluctance due to her family, her connections and her lack of a dowry. And when he proposes it is an echo of the one from canon. In this variation Elizabeth accepts him but they have words more than once about his disdain, especially when he expects her to drop all family connections after they are wed...especially the Gardiners. There are many conversations between E. and D. and some teasing from both.
Jane suffers the same disappointment about Bingley and, frankly, he is not a man you can admire or respect in how he makes clear his reversal of intentions towards her. Another man's interest in Jane does not play out in the story and that was a disappointment to me. Mr. Bennet did realize that due to the changes in her life he had to make changes in what he was going to leave to her after he died. Her future seemed to have no hope of marriage at all.
Of course we have Mr. Collins and Lady Catherine. And herein Darcy's family puts pressure on him to marry Anne as, with his disability, no lady of the ton will want to marry him. Wickham taunts Darcy about his disability and we read of Darcy using advice from his father not to blow up in retaliation.
I enjoyed this story and recommend it.
Readers, before you begin this story let me warn you that the two characters who suffer quite serious illnesses which have permanent affects on their bodies do not have any miraculous healings.
I have read just about all of this author's stories and enjoyed them. Plus I admire his commitment to contribute regularly to Doctors without Borders and how he encourages us all to find a charity to support.
The author does detail his research into the illnesses of that era and even more recently so as to give the reader the knowledge that what he is writing about is not just from his imagination. He also describes efforts to rehabilitate sufferers of such and even equipment available for the disabled persons' use at that time.
While Darcy is attracted to Elizabeth he still has the same thoughts and reluctance due to her family, her connections and her lack of a dowry. And when he proposes it is an echo of the one from canon. In this variation Elizabeth accepts him but they have words more than once about his disdain, especially when he expects her to drop all family connections after they are wed...especially the Gardiners. There are many conversations between E. and D. and some teasing from both.
Jane suffers the same disappointment about Bingley and, frankly, he is not a man you can admire or respect in how he makes clear his reversal of intentions towards her. Another man's interest in Jane does not play out in the story and that was a disappointment to me. Mr. Bennet did realize that due to the changes in her life he had to make changes in what he was going to leave to her after he died. Her future seemed to have no hope of marriage at all.
Of course we have Mr. Collins and Lady Catherine. And herein Darcy's family puts pressure on him to marry Anne as, with his disability, no lady of the ton will want to marry him. Wickham taunts Darcy about his disability and we read of Darcy using advice from his father not to blow up in retaliation.
I enjoyed this story and recommend it.
September 17, 2024
Great Story
This original, riveting and poignant novel begins at Bath where Darcy is recovering from an illness that has left him with a polio-like disease in his legs. He cannot walk without the aid of crutches which he has mastered well. Unlike many of his day, and even some friends and family, he does not consider himself a “cripple” as he is able to stay mobile and do the many things others can.
Determined to move on with his life he is looking forward and considering marriage. He joins Bingley at Netherfield, and after a slightly rocky beginning with Elizabeth at the Meryton assembly, he will soon apologize and they begin to form a strong friendship. Jane will eventually take her rainy ride to Netherfield and offer readers yet another gripping and tragic twist to this page turner. A powerful and unexpected encounter between Bingley and Elizabeth resulting from this is intense.
Of course, everyone has faults they must overcome, and one main character disappointingly will not and, even with those faults, I loved this Darcy and Elizabeth. More easily conversant in this book, their conversations and teasing — yes, even Darcy teases — and the more serious and emotional dialogue and moments of the book kept me captivated throughout. Darcy will have to overcome his deep family pride before he can get Elizabeth to the church.
Ignoring some sentence structure I had to re-read, and some incorrect punctuation, I still consider it a very well-written book. I found myself not wanting it to end, and imagining what life might be like for the Darcys after marriage. I also wondered more about Jane and the Colonel’s future. Therefore, this book screams “sequel” at me. One can hope, right?
I think this is one of Mr. Underwood’s best Darcy and Elizabeth stories and I highly recommend it.
January 1, 2023 - Audiobook
A very good narration and performance by Virginia Ferguson. I did have to set the speed a notch higher. Ms. Ferguson really drew out my emotions with her performance of the confrontation scene between Elizabeth and Bingley, and the scene with Jane and Elizabeth when Jane finally lets her emotions fly. Well done!
This original, riveting and poignant novel begins at Bath where Darcy is recovering from an illness that has left him with a polio-like disease in his legs. He cannot walk without the aid of crutches which he has mastered well. Unlike many of his day, and even some friends and family, he does not consider himself a “cripple” as he is able to stay mobile and do the many things others can.
Determined to move on with his life he is looking forward and considering marriage. He joins Bingley at Netherfield, and after a slightly rocky beginning with Elizabeth at the Meryton assembly, he will soon apologize and they begin to form a strong friendship. Jane will eventually take her rainy ride to Netherfield and offer readers yet another gripping and tragic twist to this page turner. A powerful and unexpected encounter between Bingley and Elizabeth resulting from this is intense.
Of course, everyone has faults they must overcome, and one main character disappointingly will not and, even with those faults, I loved this Darcy and Elizabeth. More easily conversant in this book, their conversations and teasing — yes, even Darcy teases — and the more serious and emotional dialogue and moments of the book kept me captivated throughout. Darcy will have to overcome his deep family pride before he can get Elizabeth to the church.
Ignoring some sentence structure I had to re-read, and some incorrect punctuation, I still consider it a very well-written book. I found myself not wanting it to end, and imagining what life might be like for the Darcys after marriage. I also wondered more about Jane and the Colonel’s future. Therefore, this book screams “sequel” at me. One can hope, right?
I think this is one of Mr. Underwood’s best Darcy and Elizabeth stories and I highly recommend it.
January 1, 2023 - Audiobook
A very good narration and performance by Virginia Ferguson. I did have to set the speed a notch higher. Ms. Ferguson really drew out my emotions with her performance of the confrontation scene between Elizabeth and Bingley, and the scene with Jane and Elizabeth when Jane finally lets her emotions fly. Well done!
March 27, 2022
what if sickness and the foul stench of the river styx and it’s boatman travels the roads of Pride and Prejudice
Darcy and Jane suffer from common but deadly diseases in the world before vaccines and antibiotics. As a child I knew the diseases of this book. My older brother had polio just before I was born. The stories I heard around our card tables when we visited relatives were scary and terribly real. No one of my generation or before thought life owed you anything. And I shan’t ever forget the haunted look my grandmother got when someone talked about her days as a mother with sick children.
The story here is well told and interesting. When you loses relatives and you have no control over when the finger of death will touch a beloved sibling or worse, a loving parent you don’t suffer people like Wickham with all the chances he receives in Pride and Prejudice. You take him into the forest and treat him like a rabid dog.
If anything this story was ‘lighter’ than I thought it would be at the beginning. A very original tale of Regency England where propriety was just a gentle way your family could be ruined.
Darcy and Jane suffer from common but deadly diseases in the world before vaccines and antibiotics. As a child I knew the diseases of this book. My older brother had polio just before I was born. The stories I heard around our card tables when we visited relatives were scary and terribly real. No one of my generation or before thought life owed you anything. And I shan’t ever forget the haunted look my grandmother got when someone talked about her days as a mother with sick children.
The story here is well told and interesting. When you loses relatives and you have no control over when the finger of death will touch a beloved sibling or worse, a loving parent you don’t suffer people like Wickham with all the chances he receives in Pride and Prejudice. You take him into the forest and treat him like a rabid dog.
If anything this story was ‘lighter’ than I thought it would be at the beginning. A very original tale of Regency England where propriety was just a gentle way your family could be ruined.
March 30, 2022
“I choose not to place ‘DIS’, in my ability.” –Robert M. Hensel
>>Rating: PG17: due to issues discussed and described. Medical procedures and processes may be disturbing to a sensitive reader. >>Angst Level: medium as the reader deals with emotional situations that are stressful and disturbing. >>Tissue Alert: Yeah, I’d have a tissue handy. It was hard watching our characters struggle with disappointments, medical issues, and the consequences of illness. Be sure to read the author’s notes at the end of the story. The information regarding FDR was interesting. Back in the day, I knew someone who was also at that medical center when he was there for therapy. They said they would never forget his kindness. >>Source: Borrowed from KU [3-28-22] with no expectations of a review. The views and opinions expressed are my own. 24-chapters.
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
“The downside to my celebrity is that I cannot go anywhere in the world without being recognized. It is not enough for me to wear dark sunglasses and a wig. The wheelchair gives me away.” –Stephen Hawking
Wow! This is not your ordinary P&P story. In this alternate universe [AU] Fitzwilliam Darcy became ill with fever and as a result, lost some mobility in his lower extremities. He was grateful that he still had some feeling and could function as a man needed to. However, he was not able to walk and needed the aid of crutches and or a Bath chair which he wouldn’t use unless it was absolutely necessary. This changed our story arc considerably. Due to his illness, Georgiana delayed her trip to Ramsgate and that would happen later in the story. By the time Darcy arrived at Netherfield Park, Bingley was well established within Hertfordshire society. His infatuation with Jane Bennet was only a few steps away from declaring for her. Darcy tried to slow him down but he would not heed the warning.
“When someone tells me ‘no,’ it doesn’t mean I can’t do it, it simply means I can’t do it with them.” –Karen E. Quinones Miller
Our story followed the timeline and Mrs. Bennet sent her daughter out into the rain with dire consequences. While Jane was ill at Netherfield, Darcy became concerned that this was not an ordinary cold and sent for his London Physician. Bingley was beside himself and made declarations to Jane that set up expectations with her. As her illness progressed, situations with the Bingley siblings took a turn I never expected. Everyone would finally see what Bingley was truly made of.
What I didn’t like: Ramsgate of course: What was the deal? Was it even necessary? That whole jaunt completely distracted me from the story. It did NOT add one thing other than to show Georgiana was young and stupid and it was a means of dealing with Wickham. GRRR!
>>Rating: PG17: due to issues discussed and described. Medical procedures and processes may be disturbing to a sensitive reader. >>Angst Level: medium as the reader deals with emotional situations that are stressful and disturbing. >>Tissue Alert: Yeah, I’d have a tissue handy. It was hard watching our characters struggle with disappointments, medical issues, and the consequences of illness. Be sure to read the author’s notes at the end of the story. The information regarding FDR was interesting. Back in the day, I knew someone who was also at that medical center when he was there for therapy. They said they would never forget his kindness. >>Source: Borrowed from KU [3-28-22] with no expectations of a review. The views and opinions expressed are my own. 24-chapters.
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
“The downside to my celebrity is that I cannot go anywhere in the world without being recognized. It is not enough for me to wear dark sunglasses and a wig. The wheelchair gives me away.” –Stephen Hawking
Wow! This is not your ordinary P&P story. In this alternate universe [AU] Fitzwilliam Darcy became ill with fever and as a result, lost some mobility in his lower extremities. He was grateful that he still had some feeling and could function as a man needed to. However, he was not able to walk and needed the aid of crutches and or a Bath chair which he wouldn’t use unless it was absolutely necessary. This changed our story arc considerably. Due to his illness, Georgiana delayed her trip to Ramsgate and that would happen later in the story. By the time Darcy arrived at Netherfield Park, Bingley was well established within Hertfordshire society. His infatuation with Jane Bennet was only a few steps away from declaring for her. Darcy tried to slow him down but he would not heed the warning.
“When someone tells me ‘no,’ it doesn’t mean I can’t do it, it simply means I can’t do it with them.” –Karen E. Quinones Miller
Our story followed the timeline and Mrs. Bennet sent her daughter out into the rain with dire consequences. While Jane was ill at Netherfield, Darcy became concerned that this was not an ordinary cold and sent for his London Physician. Bingley was beside himself and made declarations to Jane that set up expectations with her. As her illness progressed, situations with the Bingley siblings took a turn I never expected. Everyone would finally see what Bingley was truly made of.
What I didn’t like: Ramsgate of course: What was the deal? Was it even necessary? That whole jaunt completely distracted me from the story. It did NOT add one thing other than to show Georgiana was young and stupid and it was a means of dealing with Wickham. GRRR!
March 28, 2022
I loved this!
I have to say I was shocked at how much of an @ss one of the characters became. But, I thought it a true example of how some in life can only be fair weather friends.
I enjoyed the introspection of this Darcy and overall how this story dealt with disability and in how some view those disabled.
Well done!
I have to say I was shocked at how much of an @ss one of the characters became. But, I thought it a true example of how some in life can only be fair weather friends.
I enjoyed the introspection of this Darcy and overall how this story dealt with disability and in how some view those disabled.
Well done!
April 9, 2022
This story was very engaging but difficult to read at times.
Darcy’s mysterious illness leaves him crippled. Though he can walk with crutches. He lives a difficult life but makes the best of the bad luck he's been dealt.
He meets Elizabeth at the Meryton assembly. He is very uncomfortable in the company of so many strangers staring at his legs and crutches, so he replies automatically to Bingley's suggestion he dance with Elizabeth. He quickly realizes she heard his horrible insult and finds a way to get near her to apologize. The dialogue was quite cute and interesting I must say. Darcy is squirming and Lizzy is enjoying it immensely! From there their delightful relationship grows full of teasing, challenges and lots of charming each other.
Jane’s devastating illness and subsequent blindness is the saddest part of this story. Though Darcy’s invaluable help in providing his London doctor probably saved her life.
Bingley turned out to be the worst cad, leaving Jane because “he cannot love a blind woman”!
This after whispering “I love you” to her as she lay dangerously ill.
So not only is she permanently blind but has had her heart broken to pieces! Though it is depressing for Jane and it takes a long time for her to find a way to live her life.
But some happiness awaits her later.
Our dear couple grows deep bonds of friendship or perhaps much more throughout all the problems dealt both their families. And there are quite a lot.
Darcy’s one fault has always been his pride. Looking down on those less fortunate has made him almost hateful when speaking about Elizabeth's family.
Most especially after Elizabeth accepts his proposal. I had to read his words twice as I could not imagine a man saying such things! To say such heinous words-referring to Elizabeth “As a pearl in the muck of her disagreeable family.”
He feels she should be pleased he picked her out of the muck!
I would have kicked him!
Sorry not many women would be pleased with that comparison!
Elizabeth kept her composure to her credit. Until he refuses to have anything to do with her beloved aunt and uncle. Then finally she gets angry! There is a big disagreement which could have ended in a broken engagement!
Thankfully The author gives Darcy an epiphany that saves our couple from a unhappy ending,
Darcy’s mysterious illness leaves him crippled. Though he can walk with crutches. He lives a difficult life but makes the best of the bad luck he's been dealt.
He meets Elizabeth at the Meryton assembly. He is very uncomfortable in the company of so many strangers staring at his legs and crutches, so he replies automatically to Bingley's suggestion he dance with Elizabeth. He quickly realizes she heard his horrible insult and finds a way to get near her to apologize. The dialogue was quite cute and interesting I must say. Darcy is squirming and Lizzy is enjoying it immensely! From there their delightful relationship grows full of teasing, challenges and lots of charming each other.
Jane’s devastating illness and subsequent blindness is the saddest part of this story. Though Darcy’s invaluable help in providing his London doctor probably saved her life.
Bingley turned out to be the worst cad, leaving Jane because “he cannot love a blind woman”!
This after whispering “I love you” to her as she lay dangerously ill.
So not only is she permanently blind but has had her heart broken to pieces! Though it is depressing for Jane and it takes a long time for her to find a way to live her life.
But some happiness awaits her later.
Our dear couple grows deep bonds of friendship or perhaps much more throughout all the problems dealt both their families. And there are quite a lot.
Darcy’s one fault has always been his pride. Looking down on those less fortunate has made him almost hateful when speaking about Elizabeth's family.
Most especially after Elizabeth accepts his proposal. I had to read his words twice as I could not imagine a man saying such things! To say such heinous words-referring to Elizabeth “As a pearl in the muck of her disagreeable family.”
He feels she should be pleased he picked her out of the muck!
I would have kicked him!
Sorry not many women would be pleased with that comparison!
Elizabeth kept her composure to her credit. Until he refuses to have anything to do with her beloved aunt and uncle. Then finally she gets angry! There is a big disagreement which could have ended in a broken engagement!
Thankfully The author gives Darcy an epiphany that saves our couple from a unhappy ending,
June 2, 2022
Unusual premise
A very unusual premise in this variation inspired by author Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by Timothy Underwood. I enjoyed this story and oooh did I want to hit someone.
A very unusual premise in this variation inspired by author Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by Timothy Underwood. I enjoyed this story and oooh did I want to hit someone.
March 25, 2022
Amazing and gripping
This beautiful story tackles angst, tragedy, disappointment and hypocrisy with plenty of romance and thoughtful philosophy. Wonderful writing and beautiful phrasing. Brought me to tears and smiles throughout.
This beautiful story tackles angst, tragedy, disappointment and hypocrisy with plenty of romance and thoughtful philosophy. Wonderful writing and beautiful phrasing. Brought me to tears and smiles throughout.
December 10, 2022
I love most of this author's stories. His Elizabeth is very witty and vivacious and his Darcy is always a proud ass but loveable. It's no different in this book. Even though he is disabled in body, his pride is in tact and prejudices perfectly formed. Elizabeth was delightful and kind and bubbly and so, so sweet. I loved the way Darcy's hypocrisy is exposed to him without anyone else's input. A really good book.
May 20, 2022
An unusual approach
This excellent Pride and Prejudice variation takes a unique turn in that it deals with --you guessed it -- disability and determination. Certain events will take a sharp turn, and you'll say, "Oh, no!" But keep calm. This is a brand new story, so try to keep up.
You'll get your HEA and not have to deal with certain characters. That's good because you'll have plenty of other things to keep you busy.
If you like stories that really stray from the norm, this author delivers.
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This excellent Pride and Prejudice variation takes a unique turn in that it deals with --you guessed it -- disability and determination. Certain events will take a sharp turn, and you'll say, "Oh, no!" But keep calm. This is a brand new story, so try to keep up.
You'll get your HEA and not have to deal with certain characters. That's good because you'll have plenty of other things to keep you busy.
If you like stories that really stray from the norm, this author delivers.
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November 13, 2022
Different circumstances
But the same pride to overcome. An enjoyable journey with some dramatic moments, an unexpected Bingley and a lovely romance.
But the same pride to overcome. An enjoyable journey with some dramatic moments, an unexpected Bingley and a lovely romance.
April 2, 2022
As usual Mr Underwood does not disappoint this is one of the most original variations around.
So well written I read in one sitting.
Loved it.
So well written I read in one sitting.
Loved it.
August 15, 2024
No less a man
Darcy, dissatisfied with the perception and treatment of his disability, flees to Netherfield. He apologizes for his assembly insult prior to Jane's illness at Netherfield and he and Elizabeth establish a friendship. This is a story where Jane suffers more than a trifling cold, and Mrs Bennet's deflection of guilt is a bone of contention for Elizabeth. I enjoyed reading and listening to the audiobook (although there were a couple of repetitions in the audio). I thought the story was engaging, but I should warn fans of Bingley that he is very disappointing in this variation.
Darcy, dissatisfied with the perception and treatment of his disability, flees to Netherfield. He apologizes for his assembly insult prior to Jane's illness at Netherfield and he and Elizabeth establish a friendship. This is a story where Jane suffers more than a trifling cold, and Mrs Bennet's deflection of guilt is a bone of contention for Elizabeth. I enjoyed reading and listening to the audiobook (although there were a couple of repetitions in the audio). I thought the story was engaging, but I should warn fans of Bingley that he is very disappointing in this variation.
July 10, 2023
4.5 stars
March 29, 2022
Another great read
This is another great read by Timothy Underwood. Darcy gets ill and learns to live his life without feeling sorry for himself. That does not mean he is not the prideful man, he just won’t his inability to walk deter him from choosing love. Darcy has to overcome other obstacles including Mr. Wickham.
Well worth the read.
This is another great read by Timothy Underwood. Darcy gets ill and learns to live his life without feeling sorry for himself. That does not mean he is not the prideful man, he just won’t his inability to walk deter him from choosing love. Darcy has to overcome other obstacles including Mr. Wickham.
Well worth the read.
March 28, 2022
Excellent off-canon read with just a smidge of angst.
Loved it.
Loved it.
March 27, 2022
sad plot but not a sad story
I’m not sure if that makes sense but there were tragedies in the book but the tone of the book was generally positive and upbeat. I tend to stay away from really sad Insta stories but this didn’t really have that.
I’m not sure if that makes sense but there were tragedies in the book but the tone of the book was generally positive and upbeat. I tend to stay away from really sad Insta stories but this didn’t really have that.
March 25, 2022
Great plot
Another very out of the box plot by the author. Circumstances are very different for Darcy. Wonderful interactions between ODC.
Another very out of the box plot by the author. Circumstances are very different for Darcy. Wonderful interactions between ODC.
May 8, 2022
Disability and Determination: An Elizabeth and Darcy Story
I took a chance on reading this story, even though I knew Darcy had this incurable illness. I won't say I enjoyed seeing our intrepid hero suffer, however, he was the same, handsome and loveable man, in essentials as ever.
I took a chance on reading this story, even though I knew Darcy had this incurable illness. I won't say I enjoyed seeing our intrepid hero suffer, however, he was the same, handsome and loveable man, in essentials as ever.
April 30, 2022
A beautiful story with real people.
I loved that nothing about this story was forced.
Reading this story made me recall reading a couple of books from this author years ago. I now remember that he focused on dialogue. I can't express how much I enjoy reading the main characters converse with one another. Dialogue is a beautiful thing, and being able to go along for the ride as Darcy and Elizabeth navigate, and build on their relationship is a plus. I liked both Darcy and Elizabeth's character.
The Christmas festivities at Longbourn was nicely done. I was able to picture the cheer and love had by all.
Jane and Bingley storyline was very interesting, although, Jane's individual story was just as engaging on its own.
The colonel was awesome.
My only complaint was it was over too soon. I have questions. Did anything come of Jane and The Colonel? Are Darcy and Bingley still bosom buddies? Are there any roadblocks (Darcy's pride) in Darcy and Elizabeth's marriage because of his injury?
I loved that nothing about this story was forced.
Reading this story made me recall reading a couple of books from this author years ago. I now remember that he focused on dialogue. I can't express how much I enjoy reading the main characters converse with one another. Dialogue is a beautiful thing, and being able to go along for the ride as Darcy and Elizabeth navigate, and build on their relationship is a plus. I liked both Darcy and Elizabeth's character.
The Christmas festivities at Longbourn was nicely done. I was able to picture the cheer and love had by all.
Jane and Bingley storyline was very interesting, although, Jane's individual story was just as engaging on its own.
The colonel was awesome.
My only complaint was it was over too soon. I have questions. Did anything come of Jane and The Colonel? Are Darcy and Bingley still bosom buddies? Are there any roadblocks (Darcy's pride) in Darcy and Elizabeth's marriage because of his injury?
April 8, 2022
Difficult, but wonderful
I really like this author. He writes with such a wry humor, and knows how to put together a compelling and imaginative story. As the book summary indicates, Darcy suffers an illness that robs him of his mobility in his legs. He works hard to learn to survive and thrive as a man who must use crutches to get around. Darcy has just sent Georgiana off to Ramsgate with Mrs Younge at the start of the book, and while she's away he will visit Bingley in Hertfordshire. Thus, we have the Meryton assembly and the infamous insult. However, because of his disability, Elizabeth gives him the benefit of the doubt, while at the same time letting him know directly that he's misbehaving. They start a friendship and both enjoy their honest and forthright discussions.
It's very difficult to romanticize a Darcy who has such a serious injury. Fortunately, the author keeps the gory details to a minimum, and emphasizes all of Darcy's accomplishments in spite of his troubles. However, the most truly difficult part is yet to come when another of our beloved major characters is also dealt a serious blow regarding health and wellness. The story teeters on the edge of becoming maudlin and downright depressing, but manages to remain interesting.
Like another reviewer, I felt that this book should have included an epilogue. There are several loose ends that beg to be addressed. The story feels incomplete, as if the author just lost interest and wanted it to be over. Particularly with this subject matter, we need to know how everyone fared.
The book is well written and well edited. This is not a light and fluffy romance. There is more than a healthy dose of angst and suffering. However, Mr Underwood is a great storyteller. I recommend it highly.
I really like this author. He writes with such a wry humor, and knows how to put together a compelling and imaginative story. As the book summary indicates, Darcy suffers an illness that robs him of his mobility in his legs. He works hard to learn to survive and thrive as a man who must use crutches to get around. Darcy has just sent Georgiana off to Ramsgate with Mrs Younge at the start of the book, and while she's away he will visit Bingley in Hertfordshire. Thus, we have the Meryton assembly and the infamous insult. However, because of his disability, Elizabeth gives him the benefit of the doubt, while at the same time letting him know directly that he's misbehaving. They start a friendship and both enjoy their honest and forthright discussions.
It's very difficult to romanticize a Darcy who has such a serious injury. Fortunately, the author keeps the gory details to a minimum, and emphasizes all of Darcy's accomplishments in spite of his troubles. However, the most truly difficult part is yet to come when another of our beloved major characters is also dealt a serious blow regarding health and wellness. The story teeters on the edge of becoming maudlin and downright depressing, but manages to remain interesting.
Like another reviewer, I felt that this book should have included an epilogue. There are several loose ends that beg to be addressed. The story feels incomplete, as if the author just lost interest and wanted it to be over. Particularly with this subject matter, we need to know how everyone fared.
The book is well written and well edited. This is not a light and fluffy romance. There is more than a healthy dose of angst and suffering. However, Mr Underwood is a great storyteller. I recommend it highly.
May 17, 2022
Well written and original story.
I really enjoyed this P&P variation. The characters and situations feel real. There is laughter and sadness. Anger and love. Lately read several slow/boring/poorly written and edited variations. This is well paced, well written and I couldn't put it down! Highly recommend it!
I really enjoyed this P&P variation. The characters and situations feel real. There is laughter and sadness. Anger and love. Lately read several slow/boring/poorly written and edited variations. This is well paced, well written and I couldn't put it down! Highly recommend it!
July 14, 2024
Previously read and just finished the audiobook. It was very good.
June 10, 2023
To change for the woman you love
This engaging variation presents Fitzwilliam Darcy as having an infirmity which resulted from a serious illness. This infirmity makes him appear a “cripple” to society, less appealing as an eligible bachelor to the London ton. A visit with his friend Bingley to countryside Hertfordshire gave him a much-needed respite from his personal troubles. Little did he know that it is there that he would meet the lady who would turn his world upside-down.
Despite Mr. Darcy’s infirmity, he remains arrogant and prideful of Canon; delivering the insult to the lady who would not tolerate such disrespect towards herself, her family and the community she’s called home. Elizabeth Bennet confronts the gentleman, who later apologizes for his misconduct. In the course of Mr. Darcy’s and the Bingleys’ stay in Netherfield, in the face of Jane Bennet’s serious illness and Mr. Collins’ visit and unwanted attentions, Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth develops a friendship that progresses to admiration and eventually to love. In this particular story, Elizabeth helplessly falls in love with Mr. Darcy early on; as well as Mr. Darcy’s decision to return to Hertfordshire to offer for the only woman who made his heart stir shows his resolve to give in to his heart’s desire.
However, angst comes in the form of Mr. Darcy’s unreasonable demands from Elizabeth regarding family, as well as the possible elopement of his sister Georgiana. On the eve of his scheduled wedding to Elizabeth, while in pursuit of his fallen sister, Mr. Darcy begins to realize his mistakes in highhandedly attempting to control Elizabeth and her treatment of her family who he continues to view as beneath him.
The lovers reunion is endearing and their happily ever after much deserved.
This reader loves how Mr. Darcy shows a more compassionate and caring nature here, and it is no wonder how Elizabeth easily fell for the man she considers arrogant and haughty. Mr. Darcy’s infirmity does not even faze her nor will she allow anyone to disparage Darcy as a cripple in any way. Elizabeth is full of integrity and passion here, and she is unafraid to show and say what she truly thinks and feels. What is surprising in this variation is a spineless and selfish Bingley. Quite a reversal from the Bingley of Canon.
Highly recommended read for those who love Darcy and Elizabeth with stronger characters and personalities.
This engaging variation presents Fitzwilliam Darcy as having an infirmity which resulted from a serious illness. This infirmity makes him appear a “cripple” to society, less appealing as an eligible bachelor to the London ton. A visit with his friend Bingley to countryside Hertfordshire gave him a much-needed respite from his personal troubles. Little did he know that it is there that he would meet the lady who would turn his world upside-down.
Despite Mr. Darcy’s infirmity, he remains arrogant and prideful of Canon; delivering the insult to the lady who would not tolerate such disrespect towards herself, her family and the community she’s called home. Elizabeth Bennet confronts the gentleman, who later apologizes for his misconduct. In the course of Mr. Darcy’s and the Bingleys’ stay in Netherfield, in the face of Jane Bennet’s serious illness and Mr. Collins’ visit and unwanted attentions, Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth develops a friendship that progresses to admiration and eventually to love. In this particular story, Elizabeth helplessly falls in love with Mr. Darcy early on; as well as Mr. Darcy’s decision to return to Hertfordshire to offer for the only woman who made his heart stir shows his resolve to give in to his heart’s desire.
However, angst comes in the form of Mr. Darcy’s unreasonable demands from Elizabeth regarding family, as well as the possible elopement of his sister Georgiana. On the eve of his scheduled wedding to Elizabeth, while in pursuit of his fallen sister, Mr. Darcy begins to realize his mistakes in highhandedly attempting to control Elizabeth and her treatment of her family who he continues to view as beneath him.
The lovers reunion is endearing and their happily ever after much deserved.
This reader loves how Mr. Darcy shows a more compassionate and caring nature here, and it is no wonder how Elizabeth easily fell for the man she considers arrogant and haughty. Mr. Darcy’s infirmity does not even faze her nor will she allow anyone to disparage Darcy as a cripple in any way. Elizabeth is full of integrity and passion here, and she is unafraid to show and say what she truly thinks and feels. What is surprising in this variation is a spineless and selfish Bingley. Quite a reversal from the Bingley of Canon.
Highly recommended read for those who love Darcy and Elizabeth with stronger characters and personalities.
January 4, 2023
I love a well written story, especially a really moving, angsty one! This writer has yet to disappoint me, as he yet again delivers a superbly written book with all the feels. I love his portrayal of the characters under their circumstances, although some are not as we know them from other variations and retellings. I love the effort the author has put into his research for this book, giving us an in-depth look at two illnesses featured in the book.
Fitzwilliam Darcy has suffered a terrible illness, which has robbed him of the use of his legs. He is determined to have a full life in spite of his handicap and works diligently to become as mobile as possible. His handicap does not change his character, in essentials, so he is still a very proud, reserved, and arrogant young man. When Elizabeth meets him for the first time, he insults her within her hearing, thus forming her initial impression of the handsome gentleman from Derbyshire. He does determine he must apologize, and after doing so, the two become friends.
While at Netherfield, Jane Jane becomes ill. As she almost dies, Elizabeth prays for her sister to live. Jane suffers from a disabling disease, changing her life forever. The Bingley character we usually read about is not the same in this book. I could not help but think of how Jane would have reacted if the illness had struck Bingley instead.
This story is incredible, touching, and one I did not want to end. It makes one appreciate their many blessings and have empathy for those living with disabilities. I loved this story and highly recommend it, as well as all of this writer's work.
Fitzwilliam Darcy has suffered a terrible illness, which has robbed him of the use of his legs. He is determined to have a full life in spite of his handicap and works diligently to become as mobile as possible. His handicap does not change his character, in essentials, so he is still a very proud, reserved, and arrogant young man. When Elizabeth meets him for the first time, he insults her within her hearing, thus forming her initial impression of the handsome gentleman from Derbyshire. He does determine he must apologize, and after doing so, the two become friends.
While at Netherfield, Jane Jane becomes ill. As she almost dies, Elizabeth prays for her sister to live. Jane suffers from a disabling disease, changing her life forever. The Bingley character we usually read about is not the same in this book. I could not help but think of how Jane would have reacted if the illness had struck Bingley instead.
This story is incredible, touching, and one I did not want to end. It makes one appreciate their many blessings and have empathy for those living with disabilities. I loved this story and highly recommend it, as well as all of this writer's work.
February 17, 2025
I loved it!
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. A touching story that will bring both laughter and tears. No character deaths but a character (besides Darcy, whose illness is a year past at the start of the novel) will become severely ill and suffer a permanent disability.
Mr. Darcy had a general air of command that made it impossible for Elizabeth to consider him as an unfortunate cripple, no matter how much he met the plain definition of the word. When Fitzwilliam Darcy visited his friend Bingley at Netherfield, he was delighted to meet Elizabeth Bennet. However, he would not marry beneath himself. The lost use of his legs changed nothing in that regard, but Darcy loved to speak with Elizabeth.
Elizabeth enjoyed her verbal sparring with Mr. Darcy. He deserved none of the pity others thought he did. He was too determined and too capable. When tragedy strikes, Elizabeth finds herself depending upon the gentleman who had become her dearest friend. As Elizabeth came to love Mr. Darcy, his pride, arrogance, and disdain for the feelings of others may tear them apart. Can he learn how to treat a woman well worth admiring before it is too late? So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. A touching story that will bring both laughter and tears. No character deaths but a character (besides Darcy, whose illness is a year past at the start of the novel) will become severely ill and suffer a permanent disability.
Mr. Darcy had a general air of command that made it impossible for Elizabeth to consider him as an unfortunate cripple, no matter how much he met the plain definition of the word. When Fitzwilliam Darcy visited his friend Bingley at Netherfield, he was delighted to meet Elizabeth Bennet. However, he would not marry beneath himself. The lost use of his legs changed nothing in that regard, but Darcy loved to speak with Elizabeth.
Elizabeth enjoyed her verbal sparring with Mr. Darcy. He deserved none of the pity others thought he did. He was too determined and too capable. When tragedy strikes, Elizabeth finds herself depending upon the gentleman who had become her dearest friend. As Elizabeth came to love Mr. Darcy, his pride, arrogance, and disdain for the feelings of others may tear them apart. Can he learn how to treat a woman well worth admiring before it is too late? So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
December 21, 2022
** Be aware this review contains minor spoilers **
Disability and Determination offered a rather different look at some of my favorite Pride and Prejudice characters. The biggest differences are with Darcy and Jane.
Poor Jane's fate is unenviable, and Mr. Bingley's behavior is reprehensible, though understandable. It was gratifying to see Jane improve and gain some peace by the end of the story. I just wish we'd gotten an epilogue to tell us if anything came of her acquaintance with Colonel Fitzwilliam.
Darcy, of course, deals with all sorts of issues as a result of his disability. His treatment at the hands of others, while probably better than he would receive in reality, is still despicable as viewed through modern eyes. However, he keeps his spirits up.
His change in attitude is excellently handled. It makes perfect sense, and he has every reason to both realize a change is necessary and to make that change.
Elizabeth is well portrayed also, given believable reactions to the events she deals with, even if they are not socially acceptable.
There is more drama and angst in this story than I generally prefer, but I still powered straight through it and enjoyed it immensely.
Disability and Determination offered a rather different look at some of my favorite Pride and Prejudice characters. The biggest differences are with Darcy and Jane.
Poor Jane's fate is unenviable, and Mr. Bingley's behavior is reprehensible, though understandable. It was gratifying to see Jane improve and gain some peace by the end of the story. I just wish we'd gotten an epilogue to tell us if anything came of her acquaintance with Colonel Fitzwilliam.
Darcy, of course, deals with all sorts of issues as a result of his disability. His treatment at the hands of others, while probably better than he would receive in reality, is still despicable as viewed through modern eyes. However, he keeps his spirits up.
His change in attitude is excellently handled. It makes perfect sense, and he has every reason to both realize a change is necessary and to make that change.
Elizabeth is well portrayed also, given believable reactions to the events she deals with, even if they are not socially acceptable.
There is more drama and angst in this story than I generally prefer, but I still powered straight through it and enjoyed it immensely.
July 8, 2022
Excellent characterisation and plot development
The Darcy and Elizabeth in this variation are real and believable. Many writers in this genre fall into the trap of over-sugaring Darcy and Elizabeth creating characters who are far from the flawed but beloved characters created by Austen.
Darcy in this book has suffered living changing illness which is perfectly described in the book’s title. He remains a man who tends to the proud and arrogant and he remains a man who is passionately committed to those he loves. Elizabeth in this book has known a deep pain on behalf of one she loves. She remains rather too prone to speaking before thinking and still wears her heart on her sleeve.
To quote Ms Austen "In essentials, I believe, he (and she) is very much what he (and she) ever was."
The life experiences of Darcy and Elizabeth in this book bring them together more easily but there are a number of bumps along the road to happiness.
This is an excellent story and I heartily recommend it.
The Darcy and Elizabeth in this variation are real and believable. Many writers in this genre fall into the trap of over-sugaring Darcy and Elizabeth creating characters who are far from the flawed but beloved characters created by Austen.
Darcy in this book has suffered living changing illness which is perfectly described in the book’s title. He remains a man who tends to the proud and arrogant and he remains a man who is passionately committed to those he loves. Elizabeth in this book has known a deep pain on behalf of one she loves. She remains rather too prone to speaking before thinking and still wears her heart on her sleeve.
To quote Ms Austen "In essentials, I believe, he (and she) is very much what he (and she) ever was."
The life experiences of Darcy and Elizabeth in this book bring them together more easily but there are a number of bumps along the road to happiness.
This is an excellent story and I heartily recommend it.
January 6, 2024
He's determined he's not a cripple and will remain his own man. She sees the real man.
Fitzwilliam Darcy travels to Hertfordshire to support his long- time friend and try to achieve some sort of normalcy in his life after his illness. Of course, nothing goes smoothly. Unexpectedly , Miss Bennet becomes ill. Bingley proves himself to be fool, and Miss Elizabeth is seen for the loving person she truly is. Mr. Darcy wishes to marry Miss Elizabeth, but Wickham's treachery causes his prompt removal from the matter to rescue his sister from possible ruin. Worry and resentment contribute to the push and pull on Darcy, but we must remember, he has no " disability " only determination to follow his heart and do what's right. Enjoy!
Fitzwilliam Darcy travels to Hertfordshire to support his long- time friend and try to achieve some sort of normalcy in his life after his illness. Of course, nothing goes smoothly. Unexpectedly , Miss Bennet becomes ill. Bingley proves himself to be fool, and Miss Elizabeth is seen for the loving person she truly is. Mr. Darcy wishes to marry Miss Elizabeth, but Wickham's treachery causes his prompt removal from the matter to rescue his sister from possible ruin. Worry and resentment contribute to the push and pull on Darcy, but we must remember, he has no " disability " only determination to follow his heart and do what's right. Enjoy!
April 19, 2022
Wonderful character development
A unique take on traditional P&P tale. I enjoyed the characterization of a flawed Darcy, both physically and morally. The author carefully took us through his self-aware growth while allowing the reader to see the reactions and development of Jane and Lizzie as they handle challenges. I believe Mr. Underwood could have delved more into Ann De Bourgh. She has hidden depths despite her illness and limited social experience. She is one more character dealing with disability and her growth in maturity and self-awareness is barely hinted at. A very good read!
A unique take on traditional P&P tale. I enjoyed the characterization of a flawed Darcy, both physically and morally. The author carefully took us through his self-aware growth while allowing the reader to see the reactions and development of Jane and Lizzie as they handle challenges. I believe Mr. Underwood could have delved more into Ann De Bourgh. She has hidden depths despite her illness and limited social experience. She is one more character dealing with disability and her growth in maturity and self-awareness is barely hinted at. A very good read!
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