I have read several other books by Mx Yardley, and found most of them enjoyable. There was very little I liked in this book, but I like finishing what I start. I didn't like the main character Sarah. I would have to describe her as spineless. People don't have to have a life plan mapped out by age 25, but this woman seems to be going where the wind blows her like a feather, and she acts like a doormat, accepting just about any thing someone else puts on her. She has some backbone in her thought that she keeps to herself but rarely expresses her true self. I don't like her roommate Martika, I can't begin to enumerate the reasons why. I am neutral about her friend Judith, who has her own set of issues and has settled for less in her life than she should. I did really like the gay friend Taylor. And, needless to say, since he is more or less cast as the villain, her ex Benjamin is indeed as they so unreservedly refer to him in this book, a first class prick.
One of the things that bothered me the most was the constant name dropping of various restaurants and other business in LA county. I've lived in LA my whole life, so none of these names of business are unfamiliar to me, except for some of the clubs, but it seems like Ms Yardely is trying to prove her credentials for writing a book set in LA by mentioning all the trendy places people might go.
Also let me just say, having live in Hollywood, adjacent to WeHo, I found it slightly offensive, the way she described the men and how they dressed. Yes, it is an area with a large concentration of gay people, but it is something of an exaggeration to try to point out that you can tell by the way the men dress, even for a book written in 2014. There is definitely a contingency of dress to impress, but most are just trying to get through their days just like Sarah, and the style of the clothing is not as important as the book implies.