Took me almost two years, but I made it through this behemoth. My reading of this volume was of course full of stops and starts and long breaks and periods of more progress and periods of less. I thought this would be my last book of 2022, especially since I just needed one more to meet my reading goal, but I got lazy and basically stopped reading anything for the last couple of weeks. Back at work today for the first workday of the year, I did a couple of lunchtime laps on a trail in a snowy park and finished the last ten or so pages of poems.
What I liked:
I dog-eared many, many pages to highlight a line, or a poem, or a thought that I found striking (much to my daughter's dismay--she feels this is a form of book abuse or something). I found some of the imagery to be wonderful and there were many sentiments that resonated with me. There were some times where his long lists felt strong, pointed, and rhetorically effective. I even liked some aspects of having such a comprehensive and in-depth view of one poet's writings, where repeated themes and ideas started to sound familiar, and like they all fit together.
What I didn't appreciate:
This thing is massive and much of it felt like a chore to read. With there being multiple versions of the same poem, (including, apparently, inclusion of multiple versions of poems that were chopped from the "deathbed" version) and then with the same thoughts, ideas, or themes being revisited time and again in similar but slightly different ways, it just started feeling really, REALLY redundant.
The differences between the first and deathbed versions were pretty confusing to me as someone approaching this casually (if that's even the right word...) rather than in a scholarly setting. In other words, I don't know that I really appreciated having both versions in a single volume. I wonder if I would have enjoyed it more having them packaged as two books. And then all of the "extra" stuff--the poems published outside of LoG, the Old Age Echoes, the "Other Poems" section... so much of it seemed like it was unnecessary.
Stylistically, I've determined that I'm not a huge fan of Whitman's. The writing in the book feels wildly inconsistent from one section to the next, but overall, it feels like a lot of aimless rambling without a whole lot of attention to style. Could very well be that I'm missing some of the finer points, but that's the general impression. As I mentioned earlier, I did mark many pages and passages that stood out, but these felt like small nuggets gleaned from a larger field of difficult or uninspiring parts.
In other words, I don't really recommend this as a "read-through" experience. If you're curious about Whitman's poems, pick it up, read through the first edition, check in on other sections that seem interesting, but don't make the mistake that I did of trying to read it as a book. It just doesn't feel like the work is meant to be consumed that way, even over a period of almost two years.