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Bakkian Chronicles #1
The Prophecy
Griffins, dragons, and BNPs (bugs of nightmarish proportions). Never in their wildest dreams could a husband and wife have guessed that a mysterious portal in their new mansion would send them both to a magical kingdom. Trying to find a way to return home, they learn that thanks to a local prophecy they have now been named protectors of the crown prince. Some days it didn't pay to get out of bed.
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Jeffrey M. Poole
44 books229 followersJeffrey M. Poole is a professional writer living in picturesque southwestern Oregon with his wife Giliane, and their dog, Kinsey the corgi. He is the best-selling author of cozy mystery series Corgi Case Files and of fantasy series Bakkian Chronicles, Tales of Lentari, and the Dragons of Andela. He is presently plotting out his seventeenth mystery novel and writing his fifteenth fantasy novel.
Jeffrey’s interests include astronomy, archaeology, archery, scuba diving, collecting movies, and tinkering with any electronic gadget he can get his hands on.
Proud member of:
SFWA - Science Fiction & Fantasy Writers Association
MWA - Mystery Writers of America
In September, 2020, the Corgi Case Files mystery series was picked up by Columbine Publishing Group and published under its mystery imprint, Secret Staircase Books. Beginning in 2023, all three fantasy series will also be published under the Secret Staircase Books imprint.
Fans can follow Jeffrey online at www.AuthorJMPoole.com or on Facebook at: Facebook.com/BakkianChronicles.
Jeffrey’s interests include astronomy, archaeology, archery, scuba diving, collecting movies, and tinkering with any electronic gadget he can get his hands on.
Proud member of:
SFWA - Science Fiction & Fantasy Writers Association
MWA - Mystery Writers of America
In September, 2020, the Corgi Case Files mystery series was picked up by Columbine Publishing Group and published under its mystery imprint, Secret Staircase Books. Beginning in 2023, all three fantasy series will also be published under the Secret Staircase Books imprint.
Fans can follow Jeffrey online at www.AuthorJMPoole.com or on Facebook at: Facebook.com/BakkianChronicles.
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August 1, 2012
The concept of this novel was very good, but the execution was weak.
Setting
This book is set in two locations: Idaho and the kingdom of Lentari. Guess which one is the fictitious location? Both are minimally described, except for a few oddly specific things such as one species of fish, one species of flower, one type (flip) of cell phone, one brand of car. The weather? Ignored. The overall flora and fauna? Ignored. Whether it was generally crowded with nature in the forest or devoid of all nature? Ignored. I'm sure you can see where I'm going with this.
Despite this, I actually quite enjoyed my literary trip to Lentari because it gave me just little enough information that my imagination kicked in. Yet, at the same time, it greatly disappointed me. If this were something that were written by a friend who asked me to read it and give notes, some of my notes would be that the setting requires more description.
Plot
While this is a fantasy novel, which means that by default the plot would be highly unrealistic, this plot is highly unrealistic for a fantasy novel. These standard, run of the mill Americans get magically transported into the kingdom of Lentari. That much you know from the book's description.
However, upon arrival, they are treated with instant respect and status, even though there are schemers afoot to kidnap the prince. They are given highest security clearance, no questions asked, to have a private audience with the king and queen of the land, when they don't even know the correct greeting ritual.
The only way that could be possible is if the entire population of Lentari is made up of bumbling idiots. On this point, a much more realistic scenario would be what happens in A Connecticut Yankee in King Arthur's Court where the out of time/place-er is treated instantly with suspicion and suspected of being a demon. That is how humans would naturally react, especially in a time of heightened security such as the one we are supposed to believe is in place when our protagonists arrive.
To that end, at no point were our protagonists in any real danger. Everything was too kind and gentle, even when it was trying not to be. They were protected by the most highly trained warriors and the highest power in the land. The only time there was any real danger was when there was a battle, except even then there wasn't any real danger because Sarah could have deployed her power to save her husband at any time, and danger would be gone.
The Dialogue
While I like the dialogue between Sarah and pretty much anyone-but-Steve, and I like the dialogue between Steve and pretty much anyone-but-Sarah, and I like the other characters' dialogue with each other, I had a rather violent retching reaction to the dialogue between Steve and Sarah. Perhaps there are marriages where people talk to each other in such patronizing, condescending ways (mainly Steve to Sarah) and the women fawn all over the men for such acts, but never any that I've seen or been party to.
The dialogue between them went something like this:
Sarah, "I'm able to help and do to solve this challenge."
Steve, "No, I sense that you might be knocked off the pedestal I have placed you on and receive some damage! I absolutely refuse to allow you to use your own talents, brains, or human agency to do the thing you want to do. Stand BACK! Babe."
Sarah, "Oh Steve. You are so wonderful to me. Always. And manly. I love you. Babe."
Gag me with a SPOON!
More realistically, Sara would have told Steve that he has no right to tell her what risks she can and cannot take and that the best way he can show his love is by allowing her to give a gift of love and take on some of the risks. And even then, he'd likely sleep on the couch. It is one thing for a man to rescue a woman who is both in danger and incapable of self-rescue. It is entirely another thing for a man to forbid a woman to take on a challenge that she is perfectly capable of handling. And no one would have done it while sounding like a surfer dude.
And on that note, it is interesting that for some of the later challenges in the book that actually did pose a significant risk to Sarah, Steve in no way opened his trap to forbid her from taking them on. Inconsistent, much?
And finally, what kind of response is that which Sarah is giving? Seriously? Sounds like the wishful thinking of someone who is too young to have experienced and only imagining what it is like to be in a long term relationship.
The Characters
I liked all of the main characters and saw real growth and change with them.
Final Thoughts
I will not be reading the next book in the series, because I don't think I can handle the Steve/Sarah dialogue without doing physical damage to the book. There but for that ...
For a much better treatment of a similar idea (IT guy goes to strange world and discovers that he has magical powers, has to fulfill a destiny, is trapped in inter-kingdom drama, and just wants to go home), check out The Wiz Biz. If I hadn't read that one, first, I might have liked this one, more.
Setting
This book is set in two locations: Idaho and the kingdom of Lentari. Guess which one is the fictitious location? Both are minimally described, except for a few oddly specific things such as one species of fish, one species of flower, one type (flip) of cell phone, one brand of car. The weather? Ignored. The overall flora and fauna? Ignored. Whether it was generally crowded with nature in the forest or devoid of all nature? Ignored. I'm sure you can see where I'm going with this.
Despite this, I actually quite enjoyed my literary trip to Lentari because it gave me just little enough information that my imagination kicked in. Yet, at the same time, it greatly disappointed me. If this were something that were written by a friend who asked me to read it and give notes, some of my notes would be that the setting requires more description.
Plot
While this is a fantasy novel, which means that by default the plot would be highly unrealistic, this plot is highly unrealistic for a fantasy novel. These standard, run of the mill Americans get magically transported into the kingdom of Lentari. That much you know from the book's description.
However, upon arrival, they are treated with instant respect and status, even though there are schemers afoot to kidnap the prince. They are given highest security clearance, no questions asked, to have a private audience with the king and queen of the land, when they don't even know the correct greeting ritual.
The only way that could be possible is if the entire population of Lentari is made up of bumbling idiots. On this point, a much more realistic scenario would be what happens in A Connecticut Yankee in King Arthur's Court where the out of time/place-er is treated instantly with suspicion and suspected of being a demon. That is how humans would naturally react, especially in a time of heightened security such as the one we are supposed to believe is in place when our protagonists arrive.
To that end, at no point were our protagonists in any real danger. Everything was too kind and gentle, even when it was trying not to be. They were protected by the most highly trained warriors and the highest power in the land. The only time there was any real danger was when there was a battle, except even then there wasn't any real danger because Sarah could have deployed her power to save her husband at any time, and danger would be gone.
The Dialogue
While I like the dialogue between Sarah and pretty much anyone-but-Steve, and I like the dialogue between Steve and pretty much anyone-but-Sarah, and I like the other characters' dialogue with each other, I had a rather violent retching reaction to the dialogue between Steve and Sarah. Perhaps there are marriages where people talk to each other in such patronizing, condescending ways (mainly Steve to Sarah) and the women fawn all over the men for such acts, but never any that I've seen or been party to.
The dialogue between them went something like this:
Sarah, "I'm able to help and do to solve this challenge."
Steve, "No, I sense that you might be knocked off the pedestal I have placed you on and receive some damage! I absolutely refuse to allow you to use your own talents, brains, or human agency to do the thing you want to do. Stand BACK! Babe."
Sarah, "Oh Steve. You are so wonderful to me. Always. And manly. I love you. Babe."
Gag me with a SPOON!
More realistically, Sara would have told Steve that he has no right to tell her what risks she can and cannot take and that the best way he can show his love is by allowing her to give a gift of love and take on some of the risks. And even then, he'd likely sleep on the couch. It is one thing for a man to rescue a woman who is both in danger and incapable of self-rescue. It is entirely another thing for a man to forbid a woman to take on a challenge that she is perfectly capable of handling. And no one would have done it while sounding like a surfer dude.
And on that note, it is interesting that for some of the later challenges in the book that actually did pose a significant risk to Sarah, Steve in no way opened his trap to forbid her from taking them on. Inconsistent, much?
And finally, what kind of response is that which Sarah is giving? Seriously? Sounds like the wishful thinking of someone who is too young to have experienced and only imagining what it is like to be in a long term relationship.
The Characters
I liked all of the main characters and saw real growth and change with them.
Final Thoughts
I will not be reading the next book in the series, because I don't think I can handle the Steve/Sarah dialogue without doing physical damage to the book. There but for that ...
For a much better treatment of a similar idea (IT guy goes to strange world and discovers that he has magical powers, has to fulfill a destiny, is trapped in inter-kingdom drama, and just wants to go home), check out The Wiz Biz. If I hadn't read that one, first, I might have liked this one, more.
August 24, 2012
I have never rolled my eyes so much while reading a book. I have rolled my eyes almost every swipe of a page. It is a good storyline which is why I continue reading, guy's grandparents died that he doesn't really know and they bequeath him their home and the world that's connected to it. The issue with this book is that everything is just so perfect for the main characters. They just so happen to have the most powerful magic, they just so happen can figure out to use it within days almost at mastery level when it takes people much longer, they just so happen to have everyone like them instantly (though they are foreigners, dress funny, and talk funny), they just so happen to always get out of the situation with no real danger. And the word "cool" is completely overused, 47 times! Even the king and queen's son uses it when he has been using a farcical medieval language all along (as has everyone else in this new world. The characters can't decide if they want to speak medieval or modern. I'm really trying to finish this book but I feel nothing for the characters. They are boring, wooden, and to be adults in their mid to late 20s, they sure do act like teenagers. This book reads more for children/young adults than it does for the actual age group of the characters.
I won't be reading the rest of the series. Did not make a connection with the characters.
I won't be reading the rest of the series. Did not make a connection with the characters.
January 16, 2012
I really only had one problem with this book. I hate the third person omniscient voice. It hampers individual character development, stunts meaningful dialogue, and generally feels like a crutch. The worst part is, it's a crutch that this book didn't need! It would be like giving a sprinter a crutch just before a race. Clumsy, occasionally painful, and a little sad as you wonder what the race would have been like without it.
That said, this book was a good read. This is not a gritty, "real" fantasy world. You won't feel dirty after reading it, you can be pretty confident that the good guys are going to win the day, and you can count on cheesy one-liners when the going gets rough. In short, it's everything that a nice escapist fantasy should be. The ideas are clever, the world is interesting, and you can tell that the author has a genuinely good heart. Especially since my mind jumped to incredibly evil applications of some of these powers... I'll just leave it at that.
Definitely a series to watch if you like your fantasy lighthearted, your action explosive, and your reading fun.
That said, this book was a good read. This is not a gritty, "real" fantasy world. You won't feel dirty after reading it, you can be pretty confident that the good guys are going to win the day, and you can count on cheesy one-liners when the going gets rough. In short, it's everything that a nice escapist fantasy should be. The ideas are clever, the world is interesting, and you can tell that the author has a genuinely good heart. Especially since my mind jumped to incredibly evil applications of some of these powers... I'll just leave it at that.
Definitely a series to watch if you like your fantasy lighthearted, your action explosive, and your reading fun.
August 12, 2011
Bakkian Chronicles presents one of the most detailed and well thought out worlds I've encountered in an independent novel. The exploration of the world and how it functions is what really drew me into the story.
I do think Jeffrey could improve in a few ways as an author, including being aware of dialogue redundancy and perhaps having another set of eyes to skim over his content for continuity issues. Those sorts of things I recognize I'm acutely aware of, and so are easily forgiven in exchange for the depth of the world presented. At times, I felt as if information was being presented a little too much in the Deus Ex Machina method of "Here is a character that is conveniently going to extrapolate and answer your every question." A little more "doing" and a little less "telling" would be, I think, the best place for this author to learn and grow from.
While there are undoubtedly many improvements to certain aspects of storytelling Jeffrey Poole can pursue, his strength and trust in the little universe he's crafted is really the selling point here. If you like exploring new cultures and new takes on old fantasy themes, this is definitely worth a read!
I do think Jeffrey could improve in a few ways as an author, including being aware of dialogue redundancy and perhaps having another set of eyes to skim over his content for continuity issues. Those sorts of things I recognize I'm acutely aware of, and so are easily forgiven in exchange for the depth of the world presented. At times, I felt as if information was being presented a little too much in the Deus Ex Machina method of "Here is a character that is conveniently going to extrapolate and answer your every question." A little more "doing" and a little less "telling" would be, I think, the best place for this author to learn and grow from.
While there are undoubtedly many improvements to certain aspects of storytelling Jeffrey Poole can pursue, his strength and trust in the little universe he's crafted is really the selling point here. If you like exploring new cultures and new takes on old fantasy themes, this is definitely worth a read!
March 3, 2012
Okay, a strange thing happened to me while I was reading this book. I thought it was supposed to be... heavier. Darker. And it wasn't, and it threw me. In retrospect and in rereading the description, I have no conceivable idea why I thought it would be. My only excuse is that I just finished reading an anthology of dark, gritty fantasy and was still stuck in the wrong world.
Anyway, about halfway through, I was unable to tell if I liked this story or not but then it started reminding me of a Xanth novel. I smacked myself upside the head and realized this was a... lighter fantasy than I had expected it to be. (I've been a Xanth lover since I was eleven, so this is a good comparison.)
Once I got that through my head, this book got a lot more fun. The fact that Steve and Sarah read more like teenagers to me than their purported ages wasn't a problem any more. The casualness of the writing became quirky, like characters that actually say "omigod!" in dialog, or "cool!" being in the exposition. I'm usually a dictator about Point of View and not a fan of Omiscent unless it's Austen or Dickens, but it kind of worked for me here.
My only two... complaints about this book were that I would have liked a slightly heavier (more realistic) treatment of serious matters, like when Steve fends off some bad guys and drives them to their deaths. That didn't seem to affect him at all. Even though they were bad guys, and he didn't technically kill them, the way it rolled off him to no effect did bother me. Similar "deeper events" were treated as lightly and I did struggle with that.
Secondly, my inner consistency meter didn't understand sending Steve and Sarah off for the key instead of staying with Mikal. Being who they were, it didn't make a lot of sense to me. I would have liked to have had more of a reason for them to make the journey themselves before they left, rather than seeing it later on when they got there. (If there was a reason and I missed it, then my bad but I don't recall one.) There were other little similar things, but in the breezy spirit of the story, I got over it easy.
Otherwise... the fire stuff was cool, I liked Rhenyon (I think I spelled that right), and the key 'surprise' at the end was funny. It was a fun, breezy kind of fantastical read. I give 4 Fireballs and will, once I catch up with the rest of my reading list, get to Bakkian II and future Bakkian tales!
Anyway, about halfway through, I was unable to tell if I liked this story or not but then it started reminding me of a Xanth novel. I smacked myself upside the head and realized this was a... lighter fantasy than I had expected it to be. (I've been a Xanth lover since I was eleven, so this is a good comparison.)
Once I got that through my head, this book got a lot more fun. The fact that Steve and Sarah read more like teenagers to me than their purported ages wasn't a problem any more. The casualness of the writing became quirky, like characters that actually say "omigod!" in dialog, or "cool!" being in the exposition. I'm usually a dictator about Point of View and not a fan of Omiscent unless it's Austen or Dickens, but it kind of worked for me here.
My only two... complaints about this book were that I would have liked a slightly heavier (more realistic) treatment of serious matters, like when Steve fends off some bad guys and drives them to their deaths. That didn't seem to affect him at all. Even though they were bad guys, and he didn't technically kill them, the way it rolled off him to no effect did bother me. Similar "deeper events" were treated as lightly and I did struggle with that.
Secondly, my inner consistency meter didn't understand sending Steve and Sarah off for the key instead of staying with Mikal. Being who they were, it didn't make a lot of sense to me. I would have liked to have had more of a reason for them to make the journey themselves before they left, rather than seeing it later on when they got there. (If there was a reason and I missed it, then my bad but I don't recall one.) There were other little similar things, but in the breezy spirit of the story, I got over it easy.
Otherwise... the fire stuff was cool, I liked Rhenyon (I think I spelled that right), and the key 'surprise' at the end was funny. It was a fun, breezy kind of fantastical read. I give 4 Fireballs and will, once I catch up with the rest of my reading list, get to Bakkian II and future Bakkian tales!
February 16, 2013
The book gets off to a rocky start. The language is awkward, the description (and the situations themselves) cursory. There are frequent and unposted changes of point of view. Much of the plotting is perfunctory, and in fact, the book often reads more like a description of someone's role playing game than as a true story - there are lots of puzzles to solve, and very little actual risk.
That said, the story is engaging and interesting - enough that I wish the supporting writing had been stronger. I'd be interested to find out what happens, which is at least one sign of a good story.
I'm not sure, though, that I'd be willing to read another. For one thing, the characterization has pretty strong overtones of machismo, homophobia, and outright sexism. For example, the male protagonist suddenly realizes he's holding a man's hand, and hastily lets go. His wife, in the unfortunate Heinlein/Jordan tradition, is smarter and more capable than he is, but needs protection from the harsh realities of the world. In the 1950s and 60s, this was the norm. It's not now, and it's a bit hard to take. In addition, there are fairly frequent consistency errors, errors of language (compliment/complement), and copy-editing that's not the best.
Immediately after I finished reading, I was interested to see what was next. On brief reflection, I'm not as enthused, for the reasons above.
Overall, a decent, fast-moving, and fun exploration of fantasy wish-fulfillment, but substantially held back by poor editing and outdated attitudes.
That said, the story is engaging and interesting - enough that I wish the supporting writing had been stronger. I'd be interested to find out what happens, which is at least one sign of a good story.
I'm not sure, though, that I'd be willing to read another. For one thing, the characterization has pretty strong overtones of machismo, homophobia, and outright sexism. For example, the male protagonist suddenly realizes he's holding a man's hand, and hastily lets go. His wife, in the unfortunate Heinlein/Jordan tradition, is smarter and more capable than he is, but needs protection from the harsh realities of the world. In the 1950s and 60s, this was the norm. It's not now, and it's a bit hard to take. In addition, there are fairly frequent consistency errors, errors of language (compliment/complement), and copy-editing that's not the best.
Immediately after I finished reading, I was interested to see what was next. On brief reflection, I'm not as enthused, for the reasons above.
Overall, a decent, fast-moving, and fun exploration of fantasy wish-fulfillment, but substantially held back by poor editing and outdated attitudes.
February 11, 2013
When I got this book, many many months ago it was free on amazon and thought I would try it after I finished the Hunger Games, and it was not what I was expecting. I had read the reviews of others and thought that it would be a little elementary plot because that's how most fantasy novels are now a, written for a much younger crowd, however this book was very very and I do mean VERY well written. I love the fact that its not one hero but a loveable married couple. Another thing I loved was that he kept up with all the fantastical elements of the story but I would have like if they had experimented with their abilities more. Also Jeffery Poole did a wonderful job not adding too many fantastical elements to the plot that its too hard to keep up. All in all I love yes I do mean LOVED the entire series, its a must read it you like Fantasy. I really hope he continues to write because he truly has a fan in me.
November 30, 2015
I really liked this book. I loved that it was a husband and wife as the main characters and that not only were they not 16, but they didn't know everything, and couldn't handle everything from the start. They had to learn and figure it out for themselves. They weren't in perfect shape, either. They felt like real people. Honestly, it felt the whole time that it could have been my husband and I on that journey. I don't know if we'd have done so well. I could see myself complaining a lot more than Sarah was! It read like a stand alone book, but are two more in the series. The world was great, dragons, griffins, and dwarves with unique plants, and magic!
The story wasn't exactly new and ingenious, and it felt a lot like Wizard of oz. Get stuck somewhere you can't get home from, find someone powerful that can send you back. On the way you meet some friends, fight some battles, go on a side quest to help someone to get something for the powerful people who can send you home, only to find out more about yourself along the way than you thought possible.
It wasn't a heavy book, it felt fun and exciting the whole way through but without too much angst and drama (probably because the characters were in their twenties and past the angst and drama stage of YA books I've read lately). It was refreshing.
The story wasn't exactly new and ingenious, and it felt a lot like Wizard of oz. Get stuck somewhere you can't get home from, find someone powerful that can send you back. On the way you meet some friends, fight some battles, go on a side quest to help someone to get something for the powerful people who can send you home, only to find out more about yourself along the way than you thought possible.
It wasn't a heavy book, it felt fun and exciting the whole way through but without too much angst and drama (probably because the characters were in their twenties and past the angst and drama stage of YA books I've read lately). It was refreshing.
January 26, 2012
This book is incredible! Try to imagine The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe on acid! I simply had the hardest time putting this book down. If you liked The Chronicles of Narnia, you don't want to pass up this super goodread! Knowing that an IT support technician inherits a mansion, in it finds a portal to another world, enters the alternate world, has the adventure of a lifetime (not to mention, obtains and perfects a magic talent), and meets not 1 but 2 dragons, only gives you a drop of the entertainment deluge that is Bakkian Chronicles, Book I - The Prophecy. And you sure can't beat the price! Don't forget to check out Bakkian Chronicles, Book II - Insurrection, you won't regret it!
Mr. Poole, I cannot thank you enough for giving away this piece of yourself for free in the Kindle bookstore, otherwise I might not have stumbled upon this fabulous gem. I sincerely hope you keep cooking up amazing stories like this for many, many years to come, because I am very hungry for your next literary entré in a soon-to-be-smorgasbord of delicious novel-meals.
Mr. Poole, I cannot thank you enough for giving away this piece of yourself for free in the Kindle bookstore, otherwise I might not have stumbled upon this fabulous gem. I sincerely hope you keep cooking up amazing stories like this for many, many years to come, because I am very hungry for your next literary entré in a soon-to-be-smorgasbord of delicious novel-meals.
October 24, 2011
Action, humor, excitment, magic, dragaons, griffins, giant bugs, villians, magical portal to a distant land,.....what more could you want from a fantasy book? To all those who think indie authors write crap.....maybe you should take another look. I loved this book and the sequel, Bakkian Chronicles, Book II - Insurrection, looks to be just as good.
May 29, 2012
Had no clue what to expect. But it wasnt this!!! AMAZING STORY!!!! I want to read the next one!!!! I have to find out what happens!!!! What had me stuck on this book was Steve and Sarah remind me of the way my husband and I are. I loved it!!!!! Very easy to read, loads of suspense, humor, love, action!!! Awesome descriptions!!! MUST READ PEOPLE~!~!~!!!!! Looking forward to book 2!!!!
August 17, 2012
This is a fun book to read and it kept me reading even when my eyes were begging for sleep! I found that though there are some proof-reading mistakes it still was not hard to understand and continue reading.
Mr. Poole has a fast paced fun style of writing and I look forward to reading lots more of his work!
Mr. Poole has a fast paced fun style of writing and I look forward to reading lots more of his work!
June 2, 2012
Great enthralling read. Jeffrey Poole has successfully created a unique new world to discover! I throughly enjoyed reading this book and I am eager to read the next. Don't be fooled by the quiet beginnings of this book, it is packed full of adventure.
January 25, 2012
free on kindle....what an absolute find. read both books in 3 days and cant wait for the next installment.
January 14, 2023
WoW
What great book. The story is so gripping right from the start. Anyone who enjoys fantasy books I'm sure will enjoy this one. Can't wait for the next one
What great book. The story is so gripping right from the start. Anyone who enjoys fantasy books I'm sure will enjoy this one. Can't wait for the next one
November 16, 2017
This is Book 1 of the Bakkian Chronicles, which is, naturally, a trilogy. The premise is a simple one: Steve Miller learns that he has inherited a mansion from his little-known grandparents. When he and his wife Sarah go to investigate, they find themselves stepping through a portal into a strange new world, one where griffins, dragons and magic exist.
Now, I like the idea of a portal. It's a simple and effective trick to set straightforward modern-day people in a fantasy world. The reader finds it easy to identify with Steve and Sarah, with no need to understand complicated backstories for them, the fantasy world can be explained step-by-step by the clueless newbies asking questions or simply walking into trouble, and there's an immediate set of problems to be solved - survival, first and foremost, and ultimately a return to the home world. Plus, portals are compelling by their very nature. Who could not read Narnia, and then look at their own wardrobe and think... if only?
The trouble with portals, however, is that they've been done to death, and it's increasingly hard to put an original spin on it. The hapless arrivals blunder around getting into and out of trouble, and eventually get drawn into whatever big event is going on in the fantasy world. What's new to say? The twist here is that the protagonists are a happily married couple, and hurray for that, something which is all too rare in fantasy. Problem is, Steve and Sarah are just too nice. They rarely so much as disagree, and when they do, it's over in a flash and they're high-fiving or hugging. There's altogether too much enthusiasm for their newfound world, in fact. They are lovely people, in the real world sense, and I would be delighted to have them as neighbours or workmates or friends, but for my taste fictional characters need a bit more bite to make them interesting.
Another problem I had is with grandma and grandpa. You would think, wouldn't you, that if you planned to leave your house to your unknown grandson, knowing that sooner or later he would blunder unwittingly through the magic portal and all too probably be eaten by a griffon, that a hint or two on health and safety issues, and how to get back might be in order? Unless the family feud is so serious that the griffon-eating is actually the intention... BAD grandma and grandpa.
Up to the halfway point, I struggled to find the spark in this book. But with the appearance of Kahvel the dragon, things begin to pick up and the book finds its proper tone - lighthearted and humorous, with Steve's infectious enthusiasm finally winning me over. The macho contest between dragon and man was a highlight, and the expedition with the dragon and five soldiers turned into a very entertaining romp. The battle with the guur was very satisfactory (I hate bugs too). Although I have to say, the idea of a dragon of Kahvel's size sneaking up on anyone without being noticed stretches credibility somewhat.
This book will never win any prizes for originality or depth, and it has no literary pretensions. The writing style is basic, characterisation is flat and the point of view head-hops with dizzying speed. It fails to provide any unexpected plot twists, and there's not as much humour as I might have expected, in the early parts at least. And having criticised it to death, I have to say that, actually, I rather enjoyed it. If there were few stand-out pluses, there was nothing that really grated, either. It's incredibly readable, with a certain charm and plenty of lively action in the second half, and that was more than enough to keep me turning the pages. For those who enjoy a straightforward traditional easy to read fantasy, this would certainly fit the bill. It doesn't quite make it to four stars, but it's a good three stars.
Now, I like the idea of a portal. It's a simple and effective trick to set straightforward modern-day people in a fantasy world. The reader finds it easy to identify with Steve and Sarah, with no need to understand complicated backstories for them, the fantasy world can be explained step-by-step by the clueless newbies asking questions or simply walking into trouble, and there's an immediate set of problems to be solved - survival, first and foremost, and ultimately a return to the home world. Plus, portals are compelling by their very nature. Who could not read Narnia, and then look at their own wardrobe and think... if only?
The trouble with portals, however, is that they've been done to death, and it's increasingly hard to put an original spin on it. The hapless arrivals blunder around getting into and out of trouble, and eventually get drawn into whatever big event is going on in the fantasy world. What's new to say? The twist here is that the protagonists are a happily married couple, and hurray for that, something which is all too rare in fantasy. Problem is, Steve and Sarah are just too nice. They rarely so much as disagree, and when they do, it's over in a flash and they're high-fiving or hugging. There's altogether too much enthusiasm for their newfound world, in fact. They are lovely people, in the real world sense, and I would be delighted to have them as neighbours or workmates or friends, but for my taste fictional characters need a bit more bite to make them interesting.
Another problem I had is with grandma and grandpa. You would think, wouldn't you, that if you planned to leave your house to your unknown grandson, knowing that sooner or later he would blunder unwittingly through the magic portal and all too probably be eaten by a griffon, that a hint or two on health and safety issues, and how to get back might be in order? Unless the family feud is so serious that the griffon-eating is actually the intention... BAD grandma and grandpa.
Up to the halfway point, I struggled to find the spark in this book. But with the appearance of Kahvel the dragon, things begin to pick up and the book finds its proper tone - lighthearted and humorous, with Steve's infectious enthusiasm finally winning me over. The macho contest between dragon and man was a highlight, and the expedition with the dragon and five soldiers turned into a very entertaining romp. The battle with the guur was very satisfactory (I hate bugs too). Although I have to say, the idea of a dragon of Kahvel's size sneaking up on anyone without being noticed stretches credibility somewhat.
This book will never win any prizes for originality or depth, and it has no literary pretensions. The writing style is basic, characterisation is flat and the point of view head-hops with dizzying speed. It fails to provide any unexpected plot twists, and there's not as much humour as I might have expected, in the early parts at least. And having criticised it to death, I have to say that, actually, I rather enjoyed it. If there were few stand-out pluses, there was nothing that really grated, either. It's incredibly readable, with a certain charm and plenty of lively action in the second half, and that was more than enough to keep me turning the pages. For those who enjoy a straightforward traditional easy to read fantasy, this would certainly fit the bill. It doesn't quite make it to four stars, but it's a good three stars.
April 7, 2011
The Prophecy - Book 1 of the Bakkian Chronicles, tells the story of Steve and Sarah, husband and wife from Idaho, whose lives are turned upside down when they are transported through a magical gate to the world of Lentari. On this magical world, they find themselves empowered with the ability to use jhorun (magic), and after finding themselves before the King and Queen, discover they are prophecised protectors of Prince Mikal, sole heir to the throne. Not too much is spoken about the 'threat' to the Prince, which I would have liked to have been fleshed out a bit, but it does give indication of future conflict.
The outworlders soon have the idea of returning with the Prince to Idaho, out of harms way, but in order to do so they need to have a magical key created by a dwarven Smith. Thus begins their journey through dragon / griffin / bug infested lands to find the dwarven home. I won't give too much away, but the story is excellent as it follows the evolution of the couple's self-taught magical tutelage on their way to secure their magical Key. The author weaves together realism, humour and a healthy dose of adventure in what is a very entertaining read. The book can definitely be classified as a YA read, though anybody between the ages of 12 - 120 would find it enjoyable.
The only criticisms / observations / cons I found with this book are very minor. Another edit could tighten up the flow of the novel. Over-use of the word 'that' is evident throughout (although perhaps it was because I had just finished a very long editing of my own two novels, thus in my own editing mode). A couple of re-mixed paragraphs focusing on the mis-use or repetition of some words would iron out the kinks.
Another thing (more of a personal issue this one) was the cloying use of the word 'babe' between the couple. It seemed every second sentence contained the endearment (or something similar). Although the banter / relationship between the husband and wife was for the most part enjoyable, this just seemed to detract from the overall 'soul' of the book (for me). If I could give half-stars, I would have given this one 4.5, but I feel that with the tightening I mentioned above, it would raise this to a 5-star gem!
I look forward to reading the next in this series.
~Robert Day
www.robertdaybooks.com
The outworlders soon have the idea of returning with the Prince to Idaho, out of harms way, but in order to do so they need to have a magical key created by a dwarven Smith. Thus begins their journey through dragon / griffin / bug infested lands to find the dwarven home. I won't give too much away, but the story is excellent as it follows the evolution of the couple's self-taught magical tutelage on their way to secure their magical Key. The author weaves together realism, humour and a healthy dose of adventure in what is a very entertaining read. The book can definitely be classified as a YA read, though anybody between the ages of 12 - 120 would find it enjoyable.
The only criticisms / observations / cons I found with this book are very minor. Another edit could tighten up the flow of the novel. Over-use of the word 'that' is evident throughout (although perhaps it was because I had just finished a very long editing of my own two novels, thus in my own editing mode). A couple of re-mixed paragraphs focusing on the mis-use or repetition of some words would iron out the kinks.
Another thing (more of a personal issue this one) was the cloying use of the word 'babe' between the couple. It seemed every second sentence contained the endearment (or something similar). Although the banter / relationship between the husband and wife was for the most part enjoyable, this just seemed to detract from the overall 'soul' of the book (for me). If I could give half-stars, I would have given this one 4.5, but I feel that with the tightening I mentioned above, it would raise this to a 5-star gem!
I look forward to reading the next in this series.
~Robert Day
www.robertdaybooks.com
August 21, 2011
A light-hearted fantasy read w/ good action & dialogue: 4.5 stars
Bakkian Chronicles (Vol I) is the charming tale of a couple named Steve and Sarah who discover a gateway from our world to the world of Lentari. Lentari is a magical world where most people have a magical talent. This system of magic and the light-hearted tone of the story both remind me of the early installments of Piers Anthony's Xanth (minus the puns).
The characters of Steve and Sarah, who are thoroughly rooted in our modern world and its pop culture, are thrust into this new environment, and react with bravery and good humor to almost everything that they encounter (good and bad). They come off as people that you might know in your everyday life, except for the fact that they have no real flaws. But though they seem somewhat idealized, they are very likable, and their personas fit well into the overall fun tone of the story.
The beginning of the book is very enjoyable. Following Steve and Sarah as they adapt and react to their new surroundings makes for some entertaining reading. The banter between the characters is well done and often funny.
The story slows down a notch at the end of the first act, when a lot of (likely necessary) world building is communicated to the reader. The pace rapidly picks up again, however, and though the final act doesn't answer many questions about the over-arching backstory, it is an incredibly satisfying adventure unto itself that requires little justification beyond its intrinsic coolness--and it also nicely advances the development of Steve and Sarah's magical powers.
The novel comes to a satisfying conclusion despite the fact that the status of main conflict that drives the backstory is still somewhat unclear. Circumstances at the end of the novel also open up some intruiging new directions that subsequent novels in this series could move in. It will be very interesting to see how this story unfolds.
In summary, if you are looking for an entertaining, light-hearted fantasy read with good action and well written dialogue, then look no further than Bakkian Chronicles (Vol I). I enjoyed it a lot!
Bakkian Chronicles (Vol I) is the charming tale of a couple named Steve and Sarah who discover a gateway from our world to the world of Lentari. Lentari is a magical world where most people have a magical talent. This system of magic and the light-hearted tone of the story both remind me of the early installments of Piers Anthony's Xanth (minus the puns).
The characters of Steve and Sarah, who are thoroughly rooted in our modern world and its pop culture, are thrust into this new environment, and react with bravery and good humor to almost everything that they encounter (good and bad). They come off as people that you might know in your everyday life, except for the fact that they have no real flaws. But though they seem somewhat idealized, they are very likable, and their personas fit well into the overall fun tone of the story.
The beginning of the book is very enjoyable. Following Steve and Sarah as they adapt and react to their new surroundings makes for some entertaining reading. The banter between the characters is well done and often funny.
The story slows down a notch at the end of the first act, when a lot of (likely necessary) world building is communicated to the reader. The pace rapidly picks up again, however, and though the final act doesn't answer many questions about the over-arching backstory, it is an incredibly satisfying adventure unto itself that requires little justification beyond its intrinsic coolness--and it also nicely advances the development of Steve and Sarah's magical powers.
The novel comes to a satisfying conclusion despite the fact that the status of main conflict that drives the backstory is still somewhat unclear. Circumstances at the end of the novel also open up some intruiging new directions that subsequent novels in this series could move in. It will be very interesting to see how this story unfolds.
In summary, if you are looking for an entertaining, light-hearted fantasy read with good action and well written dialogue, then look no further than Bakkian Chronicles (Vol I). I enjoyed it a lot!
December 28, 2012
This book reads like the trailer for a blockbuster movie. The entire book seemed to be zoomed out at 30000 feet without much detail about anything. There is an interesting story here, a great premise, but it is poorly executed.
I like the idea of the characters coming into their own and experimenting, but the dialogue and descriptions are so lacking, I don't feel like the characters exist in a real world. They are paper dolls on a flat world.
I think that enabling people with the ability to put their works out there is a good thing. Smashwords (where I got this) along with Amazon allows people to publish their own works. But sometimes a great idea needs some refinement and focus that a professional team brings to a writer. I did purchase the 2nd book in this series and will likely read it at some point, but my current backlog contains a lot of other books I wish to spend my time enjoying first.
I like the idea of the characters coming into their own and experimenting, but the dialogue and descriptions are so lacking, I don't feel like the characters exist in a real world. They are paper dolls on a flat world.
I think that enabling people with the ability to put their works out there is a good thing. Smashwords (where I got this) along with Amazon allows people to publish their own works. But sometimes a great idea needs some refinement and focus that a professional team brings to a writer. I did purchase the 2nd book in this series and will likely read it at some point, but my current backlog contains a lot of other books I wish to spend my time enjoying first.
March 15, 2011
The Bakkian Chronicles follow Steve and his wife Sarah as they find out that Steve's grandparents died and they inherit everything. They take a trip to their new house and find some strange things. There is a journal filled withed references to people and places they have never heard of, a safe filled strange items and an even stranger key. That key opens a portal to Lentari that they enter without understanding what they are really doing.
Their journey begins as a simple quest to find out how to get home. They learn that everyone in Lentari has a magical power called jhorun. They are then kidnapped to be sold as slaves and must discover their own hidden powers to escape. Next stop is the palace where they meet the kind and queen and find out that they are prophesied protectors of the prince. That is the point where their adventure truly begins...
This is an extremely well written story with great dialogue that had me engaged with the character and even laughing a few times. The pace of the story moves very well with lots of action, but does not sacrifice character development. I recommend this book to anyone who is looking for a good fantasy read at a totally reasonable price. I am looking forward to the second in the series a great deal.
Their journey begins as a simple quest to find out how to get home. They learn that everyone in Lentari has a magical power called jhorun. They are then kidnapped to be sold as slaves and must discover their own hidden powers to escape. Next stop is the palace where they meet the kind and queen and find out that they are prophesied protectors of the prince. That is the point where their adventure truly begins...
This is an extremely well written story with great dialogue that had me engaged with the character and even laughing a few times. The pace of the story moves very well with lots of action, but does not sacrifice character development. I recommend this book to anyone who is looking for a good fantasy read at a totally reasonable price. I am looking forward to the second in the series a great deal.
October 12, 2012
I was looking for Pern books by McCaffrey originally, which I adored. HOWEVER, I COULD NOT AFFORD THE KINDLE PRICE FOR THEM. I found "The Prophecy" and ordered it on Kindle, and found it to be riveting. The only problem was I finished it swiftly, and missed the adventure when it was over. I immediately ordered Bakkian Chronicles Book #2, and was again pulled through the portal to Lentari, and absolutely enjoyed the adventure. There were a few typos, but very few for a written work this size. Since you had editing and beta testers and proof reading, I actually came to the conclusion that it probably arose from the kindle edition vs. the published work. I looked on Kindle for Book III as soon as I finished Book II, but could not find it in my Kindle store. I hope to find it soon, as Kindle works very effectively traveling the country with my husband in his big rig. We have a shelf of books, but have already read them and kindle is space efficient. I look forward to reading your next work. You have gained a fan and avid reader of your books. May you continue with great success...Thanks: Eliyahna
September 12, 2011
I loved this book! This book goes to show that you never know what you'll inherite. It may be more than you think. The book stars Sarah and Steve. A married couple who just got a large inheritance from Steve's grandparents. They are just a normal married couple who find themselves soon in another world altogether. The world of Lentari. A place very different from Earth in many ways.
The auther, Jeffrey Poole did an incredible job created this world. Also I loved the relation between Sarah and Steve. They are such a cute, modern couple so out of their league. I definetly plan to bu the sequel later!
This was a free Firstreads giveaway hosted by goodreads. And such a great win it was!!!
The auther, Jeffrey Poole did an incredible job created this world. Also I loved the relation between Sarah and Steve. They are such a cute, modern couple so out of their league. I definetly plan to bu the sequel later!
This was a free Firstreads giveaway hosted by goodreads. And such a great win it was!!!
April 11, 2013
Outright FANTASTIC!! Your trilogy contained most everything. Portals, Magic, Wizards & Sorceresses, Dragons & Griffins, Trolls, Therons, Malwerns. Good vs. evil. All the characters were lovable & believable. You gave your readers delight & joy, sorrow & mischief, wonder & awe. The details you provided was just enough without meandering into the mundane. I was actually transported to Lentari with the characters of your book. (Although I didn't receive any personal jhorun during my trip, I still enjoyed the journey) For that reason alone the Bakkian Chronicles are a Huge SUCCESS in my eyes. Thank YOU for your creative mind and providing an excellent read. I am anxious to read more about the land of Lentari!!
October 6, 2011
After inheriting a wonderful, strange house, Steve and Sarah Miller find a portal that leads them to a most peculiar land -- a land of griffins, dragons, dwarves, and some really nasty, giant bugs. They soon learn that their arrival has been prophesied and they are tasked with a mighty mission. To fulfill their mission, though, they must attain a key to take them back through the portal and home to their own world.
Jeffrey Poole has written a witty, fun fantasy. The dialogue is free and easy with a natural flow. His lead characters are charming, taking the reader along with them on a journey that is exciting, exhilarating, and completely enchanting. Can't wait for Book II!
Jeffrey Poole has written a witty, fun fantasy. The dialogue is free and easy with a natural flow. His lead characters are charming, taking the reader along with them on a journey that is exciting, exhilarating, and completely enchanting. Can't wait for Book II!
October 16, 2012
I enjoyed reading The Prophecy and will indeed be moving on to the next book in this series. Steve and Sarah Miller are two seemingly very ordinary people living their lives to the best of their ability until Steve's absent grandparents pass away and leave their house and estate to Steve. When the couple drive out to take a look at their new accommodations, they discover a doorway to another place/realm and so begins their adventure. This book was a nicely paced easy read with some very interesting characters. Recommended for YA and up.
January 17, 2012
I found this series on my nook and was very pleasantly surprised. It is fantasy and its style reminds me of the Xanth novels by Piers Anthony without the puns. The only caveat for those it bothers is that almost all and the only type of swearing is oh my G** and the like. If you can ignore that Poole creates another world in which dragons and griffins and other fairy tale charecters abound, where the married couples have good relationships, and the action moves along.
November 23, 2012
Stumbled across this book while searching free books on Barnes & Noble.
First off - I love that this is a science fantasy book that has adult main characters but has the heart and soul of what I love in YA science fantasy.
As a 30 something adult is was wonderful to have main characters that I could relate to.
On top of that Poole has created an amazing world and tied it to ours in an incredible way.
I want to keep visiting.
First off - I love that this is a science fantasy book that has adult main characters but has the heart and soul of what I love in YA science fantasy.
As a 30 something adult is was wonderful to have main characters that I could relate to.
On top of that Poole has created an amazing world and tied it to ours in an incredible way.
I want to keep visiting.
January 25, 2013
The author created a very interesting world and filled it with some nice mystical creatures and people with magical abilities. There were a few POV switchbacks that kinda threw me for a minute or two, but nothing I couldn't handle. Overall, this was an enjoyable story for the Young Adult - Teen lovers of Fantasy.
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April 6, 2013Hi I have read all 3 books and found them amazing ,I felt part of the characters and could see in minds eye as if I was actually there I was sad when I came to the end and was hoping for more even if there were a sort of spin off from sahra and steve or the lentari world, I highly recommend this trilogy to all
Thanks
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July 24, 2013
Griffins and Dragons and magic, Oh My! Princes and Dwarves and gigantic flesh eating bugs, Oh No! Thrown into an inherited quest, newlyweds Sarah and Steve make amazing discoveries and take on awesome responsibilities in their attempt to return to their normal lives. But what is normal, really? Do you have the magic in you, too?
I loved this story on many levels.
I loved this story on many levels.
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