"You're bullying me for not understanding things before," my brain was abuzz. I myself couldn't even hear what I was saying, "I understand now." "What do you understand?!" Xing Lie asked. I understood that I was 'Other', eternally different from Xing Lie. This person wouldn't belong to me, because he liked girls. I gritted my teeth, closing my eyes and biting down as I lunged forward. I like you. Do you understand now?
This wasn’t bad, but I didn’t love it. I found the middle rather repetitive, although the last quarter of the story improved things enough that I finished the story. The characters were okay, but it would have better if . Overall, I thought that this was cute but that it didn't have enough (sustained) drama to keep me interested. 3 stars.