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The Bitter Sea Trilogy #1
Beneath Cruel Fathoms
After a violent storm destroys her ship, Isaura Johansdottir knows better than to hope she’ll be rescued from Eisland’s vast Failock Sea. Adrift and alone, her plans to start over lost, it’s a tragic conclusion after the disastrous end of her marriage—until she’s saved by Leonel, one of the merfolk, a creature long believed extinct. In repayment for her life, Leonel enlists her help to investigate the Failock’s mysterious and deadly plague of squalls. But when Isaura discovers Eisland’s ruthless new Lord commands the storms, her life will be in more danger on land than it ever was at sea.
As guardian of the Fathoms, Leonel must find the cause of unnatural storms ravaging the tidal currents and destroying the sea life. There are rumors of dark magic stirring in the Orom Abyss, the resting place of old, vanquished gods who tried to submerge the land millennia ago. Yet without proof, no one in King Ægir’s court will listen to him. And if it’s discovered he broke the Blue Laws to save a shipwrecked landweller, he might not survive the consequences.
As storms spread, Leonel and Isaura uncover secrets as forbidden as the bond that grows between them. Betrayal lurks in the restless sea, and when ancient powers lay siege to Eisland’s coast, the truth may be drowned along with everything else.
As guardian of the Fathoms, Leonel must find the cause of unnatural storms ravaging the tidal currents and destroying the sea life. There are rumors of dark magic stirring in the Orom Abyss, the resting place of old, vanquished gods who tried to submerge the land millennia ago. Yet without proof, no one in King Ægir’s court will listen to him. And if it’s discovered he broke the Blue Laws to save a shipwrecked landweller, he might not survive the consequences.
As storms spread, Leonel and Isaura uncover secrets as forbidden as the bond that grows between them. Betrayal lurks in the restless sea, and when ancient powers lay siege to Eisland’s coast, the truth may be drowned along with everything else.
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Published May 1, 2019
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20 books116 followersA child of two cultures, this kānaka maoli girl is currently living among the tulips and windmills of the Netherlands. She now fills her days with family and fiction under rainy Dutch skies. With a house full of lovable kids, a three-legged cat, and one handsome Dutchman, she prowls the keyboard late at night while the minions sleep. Coffee? Nah, she prefers tea with a generous spoonful of sarcasm.
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December 8, 2020
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Isaura Johansdottir was traveling back to her father's home after a failed marriage when the unthinkable happened - her ship was struck down by an inexplicable storm.
Human bodies floated among the wreckage in breathless suspension...
Just when all appears to be lost - she is saved by the most unlikely of fellows.
Leonel, youngest child of the goddess of the sea and a merman, has only ever known hate and dislike from his family. Even now, at thirty years old and appointed Guardian of the Fathoms, all he experiences is ostracism and loss.
He chases storm after storm - convinced that they are a clue to something horrible happening in his waters but no matter what he does, no one believes him.
So, he does the unthinkable - he breaks the Blue Laws to save a half-dead human girl. She might hold missing clue to what is happening.
Together this unlikely duo will have to save the world from a far greater threat than either of them ever could have imagined.
"Those are not the gods that who will save us."Ahhh. Guys. Gals. This book was absolutely brilliant.
I have NEVER in my entire life have found a merfolk book that I have liked.
(Seriously. Never. I wanted to - but the books were just annoying full of fishy puns or so unrealistic that I had trouble getting into them.)
THIS BOOK THOUGH - it sucked me in from the very first chapter. I could not put it down. Literally.
The characters were stunning and I absolutely adored them. Isaura's struggle with infertility felt so heartbreakingly real that I just wanted to give her a hug.
Why had she thought he would still love her after learning she was broken?And Leonel's isolation - he needed a hug too!
"Who guards the guardian, Leonel?"And the setting! Oh my gosh. That was BRILLIANTLY done.
The underwater world felt so realistic - I was completely convinced of this underwater society. It was vibrant and beautiful.
The intricate plot was gorgeous and so gripping. I'm still reeling from that ending. I don't know how I will survive until book 2.
Please excuse me, cause if this book is ANY indication - I need to read everything this author has ever written.
"I feel like myself again when I'm with you. When we're together, I don't feel broken."With thanks to the author for a free copy in exchange for an honest review
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May 31, 2019
I received this eARC from the author in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of this book in any way. All quotes are taken from the uncorrected proof and are subject to change.
It was honestly more of a 3.5 but the first half was great, so I'm rounding up.
Obligatory Summary
Isaura is on a boat, going back home to her father's house after a failed marriage, but the sea has been behaving most strangely, and when her ship capsizes in a brutal storm, killing everyone except for her, she thinks she'll die far from anyone who loves her.
Leonel, the last of the mermen, illegitimate son of the sea goddess Ran, is the Guardian of the Fathoms. He's been investigating these storms for a while, trying to figure out what dark magic is causing them, but his royal family and kingly stepfather disregard every report. When he finds Isaura, adrift and alone, he breaks the Blue Laws to save her in hopes that she can help him solve the mystery.
My Thoughts
I had the pleasure to read an ARC of Anela Deen's Failsafe last year and, while I found the plot a bit iffy at best, loved the banter between the two leads and genuinely loved their connection. It seems Deen has since learned how to perfect that dynamic, following the same pattern for love interests in this book, and I absolutely loved it! Her writing itself has significantly improved, and I made about 230 notes in my copy, the vast majority of which were positive. I was seriously expecting this to be a 5 star read, but unfortunately, the one thing Deen didn't improve was her plots. I'll go into this in a sec.
The first half of this was fantastic! Truly spectacular, with some of the most atmospheric writing I've ever read, and the deeply moving themes of the main characters were phenomenally done. Isaura's struggle with self-worth after learning she is infertile and her husband leaving her made me literally sob at one point, and Leonel's entire lack of personal identity at the hand of his abusive family ruined me. Isaura's father Johan and his sister Erla were a riot and I loved everything about them. The worldbuilding was amazing and I've never wanted to explore the ocean as much as in this, and that's saying a lot, because I wanted to be a marine biologist for like 10 years in my childhood.
But it didn't really continue past the 60% mark or so. The arcs stagnated and the plot followed them, but then both went from 30 to 100 real quick. Given how things ended with the main duo, I honestly don't know what kind of convoluted conflicts are going to arise in the sequel and third book to keep the romantic tension high. I dread a love triangle but I'm honestly thinking it might happen -_- Please hear my plea, Anela, and don't do it!
(Update! I've received confirmation from Anela Deen herself: there are no plans for a love triangle!)
The side romance, or the heavily implied one, between two supporting characters, Isaura's adopted brother Jurek and Leonel's only nice sister Ava, really lacked any emotion and didn't really do anything for the plot. It kind of made me dislike the two characters for no good reason.
Certain events happen at the end that may or may not involve water zombies, which I loved in concept, but their execution lacked something. I was also pretty disappointed that there was no call back to Gunnar, the super nice sailor from the very beginning, and it felt like a disservice to his death.
Ultimately, this was amazing, and I'm super glad I read it! I'm hyped for the sequel and I love supporting Anela Deen's work, because I think she's honestly a really great person and a very promising writer. Though this had its misgivings, I'd still recommend it, as well as Failsafe, to anyone who likes fantasy, of any age.
It was honestly more of a 3.5 but the first half was great, so I'm rounding up.
Love and friendship. Shame and heartache. Endings and beginnings.
Obligatory Summary
Isaura is on a boat, going back home to her father's house after a failed marriage, but the sea has been behaving most strangely, and when her ship capsizes in a brutal storm, killing everyone except for her, she thinks she'll die far from anyone who loves her.
Leonel, the last of the mermen, illegitimate son of the sea goddess Ran, is the Guardian of the Fathoms. He's been investigating these storms for a while, trying to figure out what dark magic is causing them, but his royal family and kingly stepfather disregard every report. When he finds Isaura, adrift and alone, he breaks the Blue Laws to save her in hopes that she can help him solve the mystery.
My Thoughts
I had the pleasure to read an ARC of Anela Deen's Failsafe last year and, while I found the plot a bit iffy at best, loved the banter between the two leads and genuinely loved their connection. It seems Deen has since learned how to perfect that dynamic, following the same pattern for love interests in this book, and I absolutely loved it! Her writing itself has significantly improved, and I made about 230 notes in my copy, the vast majority of which were positive. I was seriously expecting this to be a 5 star read, but unfortunately, the one thing Deen didn't improve was her plots. I'll go into this in a sec.
A life, no matter how long it lasted, had value.
The first half of this was fantastic! Truly spectacular, with some of the most atmospheric writing I've ever read, and the deeply moving themes of the main characters were phenomenally done. Isaura's struggle with self-worth after learning she is infertile and her husband leaving her made me literally sob at one point, and Leonel's entire lack of personal identity at the hand of his abusive family ruined me. Isaura's father Johan and his sister Erla were a riot and I loved everything about them. The worldbuilding was amazing and I've never wanted to explore the ocean as much as in this, and that's saying a lot, because I wanted to be a marine biologist for like 10 years in my childhood.
But it didn't really continue past the 60% mark or so. The arcs stagnated and the plot followed them, but then both went from 30 to 100 real quick. Given how things ended with the main duo, I honestly don't know what kind of convoluted conflicts are going to arise in the sequel and third book to keep the romantic tension high. I dread a love triangle but I'm honestly thinking it might happen -_- Please hear my plea, Anela, and don't do it!
(Update! I've received confirmation from Anela Deen herself: there are no plans for a love triangle!)
“Things didn’t turn out how you hoped, but you reached for what you wanted. I’m proud of you for that.” He closed the open shutter, softening the sounds of the outside world. “Now it’s time to reach for something else.”
The side romance, or the heavily implied one, between two supporting characters, Isaura's adopted brother Jurek and Leonel's only nice sister Ava, really lacked any emotion and didn't really do anything for the plot. It kind of made me dislike the two characters for no good reason.
Certain events happen at the end that may or may not involve water zombies, which I loved in concept, but their execution lacked something. I was also pretty disappointed that there was no call back to Gunnar, the super nice sailor from the very beginning, and it felt like a disservice to his death.
Ultimately, this was amazing, and I'm super glad I read it! I'm hyped for the sequel and I love supporting Anela Deen's work, because I think she's honestly a really great person and a very promising writer. Though this had its misgivings, I'd still recommend it, as well as Failsafe, to anyone who likes fantasy, of any age.
“We aren’t defined only by our failures and sorrows. I’m starting to believe we’re an assortment. A few big events, but countless smaller details. Little joys that carry us through the days, even when those days are hard.”
November 3, 2022
To say that I adored this book would be an understatement. The perfect blend of fantasy and romance, Beneath Cruel Fathoms ensnared me from page one and kept me enthralled throughout its entirety. I laughed, I cried, and I cheered as Isaura and Leonel faced their deepest internal struggles while falling deeply in love and fighting to save the people and places most dear to them. While I always look forward to reading at the end of the day, this is the first book in awhile that had me wishing the minutes would go by as quickly as possible so I could spend my evening devouring this story.
This book does a beautiful job balancing its protagonists’ emotional conflicts with the external action. Both Leonel and Isaura keep their past traumas buried within them, and these issues are developed enough for the reader to empathize with the characters without coming off as heavy-handed. As they face these internal conflicts, Isaura and Leonel must also take action to save the world around them, and find themselves falling deeply in love in the process. Their love story is absolutely beautiful, well-paced, and authentic, from the smaller, tender moments to their lengthier, deep conversations. If you’re looking for a fantasy read with an amazing romance, look no further. On top of this, the plot also contains heavy doses of action and intrigue for readers who enjoy intense battles, magic, and political and family dramas.
The worldbuilding is top-notch, from Leonel’s mystical yet dark world beneath the waves to Isaura’s home on the picturesque isle of Eisland. While the world is mostly Norse-inspired, in particular the gods, place names, and culture of the land dwellers, Anela Deen also incorporates mythological beings from Greek and Scottish mythology. These creatures fit perfectly into the underwater world and help expand the setting while providing opportunities for the plot to a take a new direction. Additionally, small details on clothing, food, decor, and more are sprinkled in to paint a clear picture, and from Ægir’s underwater palace to Isaura’s family farm I found myself completely immersed in this world. Lastly, the language barrier between Isaura and Leonel is handled very well and works as a simple but effective worldbuilding tool while also providing some sweet and laugh-out-loud moments.
Overall, this book is incredible and I hope more people will choose to read it soon. I’m so glad I picked it up the month before its sequel’s publication, and I already cannot wait for Jurek and Ava’s story in Between Savage Tides!
Thank you to author Anela Deen via BookSirens for providing me with an e-copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. All opinions expressed are my own.
This book does a beautiful job balancing its protagonists’ emotional conflicts with the external action. Both Leonel and Isaura keep their past traumas buried within them, and these issues are developed enough for the reader to empathize with the characters without coming off as heavy-handed. As they face these internal conflicts, Isaura and Leonel must also take action to save the world around them, and find themselves falling deeply in love in the process. Their love story is absolutely beautiful, well-paced, and authentic, from the smaller, tender moments to their lengthier, deep conversations. If you’re looking for a fantasy read with an amazing romance, look no further. On top of this, the plot also contains heavy doses of action and intrigue for readers who enjoy intense battles, magic, and political and family dramas.
The worldbuilding is top-notch, from Leonel’s mystical yet dark world beneath the waves to Isaura’s home on the picturesque isle of Eisland. While the world is mostly Norse-inspired, in particular the gods, place names, and culture of the land dwellers, Anela Deen also incorporates mythological beings from Greek and Scottish mythology. These creatures fit perfectly into the underwater world and help expand the setting while providing opportunities for the plot to a take a new direction. Additionally, small details on clothing, food, decor, and more are sprinkled in to paint a clear picture, and from Ægir’s underwater palace to Isaura’s family farm I found myself completely immersed in this world. Lastly, the language barrier between Isaura and Leonel is handled very well and works as a simple but effective worldbuilding tool while also providing some sweet and laugh-out-loud moments.
Overall, this book is incredible and I hope more people will choose to read it soon. I’m so glad I picked it up the month before its sequel’s publication, and I already cannot wait for Jurek and Ava’s story in Between Savage Tides!
Thank you to author Anela Deen via BookSirens for providing me with an e-copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. All opinions expressed are my own.
September 29, 2019
Great storytelling...
A storm comes up out of nowhere and sinks Isaura's ship leaving no survivors except for her. She is left for dead in the middle of the ocean. But she's in luck because Leonel, the last of the merfolk and protector of the seas, is investigating where these storms are coming from. He saves her, and together they team up to solve the mystery of the violent storms. Secrets and betrayal lie ahead for the two as their bond grows ever closer. The question is, will they survive long enough?
Okay I will admit, when I read the beginning of this book I found it 100% cliche and was rolling my eyes. "Yes, the ship sinks, the merman saves her... it's all been done before..." But then I started reading more and the more that I read the less cliche the story became. In fact the more I read the more fresh and new material I came across. You find yourself turning pages to find out what happens next. This book is very unpredictable which is very refreshing.
This book has great world-building to where you can actually envision the characters world that they move around in. It also has great character development throughout the book and you really get to have a feel for the characters that the author writes. Especially Isaura (for me). I completely understand her plight in the book and at times I wish I could reach out and hug her and tell her that it's going to be okay. She is also a very strong female lead character which I very much appreciate.
The banter between the two main characters is also very humorous and very relatable. It is not overdone and is very true to life and real sounding.
This book has a lot of action I'm not going to lie but it has a great plot pace and very well executed. This book is obviously well-thought-out and put together very carefully for its readers. I love the great mix of genre elements. I would call this a Game of Thrones meets The Little Merman type of story.
The ending was also a very great element. While wrapping up the story of the first book in a neat little bow the author also sets us up for the second installment quite nicely. I am very much anticipating its release.
I would lastly like to mention that I personally loved all of the Nordic terms and characters of mythology throughout the book. That was very different and surprising for me considering that mermaids in Nordic stories were evil beings. But this book has taken the two elements and weaved them together in a very different light. I liked it a lot. Being of Norse ancestry myself, this really hit home for me.
This was definitely a good book and I very much recommend it to others who enjoy a good fantasy with lots of action and adventure.
A storm comes up out of nowhere and sinks Isaura's ship leaving no survivors except for her. She is left for dead in the middle of the ocean. But she's in luck because Leonel, the last of the merfolk and protector of the seas, is investigating where these storms are coming from. He saves her, and together they team up to solve the mystery of the violent storms. Secrets and betrayal lie ahead for the two as their bond grows ever closer. The question is, will they survive long enough?
Okay I will admit, when I read the beginning of this book I found it 100% cliche and was rolling my eyes. "Yes, the ship sinks, the merman saves her... it's all been done before..." But then I started reading more and the more that I read the less cliche the story became. In fact the more I read the more fresh and new material I came across. You find yourself turning pages to find out what happens next. This book is very unpredictable which is very refreshing.
This book has great world-building to where you can actually envision the characters world that they move around in. It also has great character development throughout the book and you really get to have a feel for the characters that the author writes. Especially Isaura (for me). I completely understand her plight in the book and at times I wish I could reach out and hug her and tell her that it's going to be okay. She is also a very strong female lead character which I very much appreciate.
The banter between the two main characters is also very humorous and very relatable. It is not overdone and is very true to life and real sounding.
This book has a lot of action I'm not going to lie but it has a great plot pace and very well executed. This book is obviously well-thought-out and put together very carefully for its readers. I love the great mix of genre elements. I would call this a Game of Thrones meets The Little Merman type of story.
The ending was also a very great element. While wrapping up the story of the first book in a neat little bow the author also sets us up for the second installment quite nicely. I am very much anticipating its release.
I would lastly like to mention that I personally loved all of the Nordic terms and characters of mythology throughout the book. That was very different and surprising for me considering that mermaids in Nordic stories were evil beings. But this book has taken the two elements and weaved them together in a very different light. I liked it a lot. Being of Norse ancestry myself, this really hit home for me.
This was definitely a good book and I very much recommend it to others who enjoy a good fantasy with lots of action and adventure.
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August 28, 2020(7/19/19)
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September 8, 2019
Trigger warning : Talk of infertility , Drowning, Torture and violence
Funny enough this book was never on my radar if it wasn’t for a co-worker and now it’s one of the best fantasy books I read this year. Lately, I’ve been struggling with YA fantasy with each book more and more so I feel like I’m getting more enjoyment from the adult ones and this one were no different.
The story revolves around Isaura Johansdottir whose ship gets destroyed by a vicious sudden storm and loses all hope of rescue when she gets saved by Leonel, one of the merfolk. And that will change both their lives together.
A woman running back home after the disastrous end of her marriage and a creature long thought extinct will embark on dangerous journey to unravel the secrets behind the unnatural storms that reeks of old black magic. But when the path to the truth gets more and more dark, They both have to decide where they stand and how willing they are to sacrifice everything for the safety of both land and see
“We aren’t defined only by our failures and sorrows. I’m starting to believe we’re an assortment. A few big events, but countless smaller details. Little joys that carry us through the days, even when those days are hard.”
It was so refreshing and just a pure fantastical delight. The story didn’t feel familiar or used. To be honest, I was never that much into fantasy books that heavily involves sea creatures but this book may change that for good. I was fascinated by the world building and the fantastical elements with all the history and myths and how it drove the story and the plot.
I also loved how the plot kept surprising me with every turn and step. I couldn’t predict any of the things it happened and I was surprised by some of the turns and how the characters evolved and grew. The plot itself is executed really well with a very well maintained pace. There are thrills, action, romance, angst, tender moments and twists and it was all done in a way the served the story and the characters with perfection.
I really loved the two main characters; they were complex and layered characters. They have depths and struggles of their own and they change and grow as they learn to understand themselves and each other. The chemistry between them is so good and the romance added so much meaning to their stories. I loved the way they challenge each other yet support each other too. The banter is fun and their intimate moments are beautiful
The ending was just crazy; I loved every moment of it. I think it wrapped up the plot of the first one nicely while opening the doors to the second book and what may happen next. I can’t wait
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So I’m participating in N.E.W.T.s, a monthly-long magical readathon who is Harry-potter Themed. Basically, You have to pick a Wizarding Career to follow and then You have to get all the grades that will allow you to have that career.
So for me, I’ve chosen to become an Auror which means that I have to get :
O in defense against the dark Arts [Done]
A : A book that’s black under the dust jacket :Nocturna by Maya Motayne : 4 Stars
E : First book that you just now remembered from your TBR : Lock Every Door by Riley Sager : 3 Stars
O : Read a book written by an English author or set in England : Tin Man by Sarah Winman : 4 Stars
E in charms [Done]
A : Read a book that you think has a gorgeous cover : Wilder Girls by Rory Power : 2 Stars
E : Read a comic/ graphic novel /manga ( or a book under 150 pages ) : And Every Morning the Way Home Gets Longer and Longer by Fredrik Backman : 4 Stars
E in potions
A : Read your friend's favorite book : We Are Okay by Nina LaCour : 4 stars
E : read a book with a cover in your Hogwarts house color : Beneath Cruel Fathoms by Anela Deen
A in herbology
A : Listen to an audiobook : A Love Letter to Whiskey by Kandi Steiner
A in Transfiguration
A : Read a book with LGBTQ+ representation : Top Secret by Sarina Bowen
May 28, 2020
4.5 HAPPY STARS 🌟 Had this one sitting on my shelf for so long and I’m so glad I finally read it. My only contention: what took me so long?!?!
August 31, 2020
Disclaimer: I received this book from BookSirens in exchange for an honest review.
Shall we dive straight in? (yes, the pun was intended)
There are two main characters. The reader gets to see the perspective of both Isaura and Leonel as they intermediately appear, one chapter after the other.
The book opens with Isaura`s POV as she is crossing the sea. She is a healer (I got some serious vibes of the Outlander season four) that behaves more than well with the crew (there is a serious description on that part, on how nice she is and how everybody likes her to the moon and back).
And then, the storm happens. Their ship submerges. But, Isaura is the only survivor. How? Was she an exceptionally good swimmer? Or had she had the sense to wear something lighter than a full skirt and petticoats on a boat, so she wouldn`t drown in case of falling into the water?
No to all of the above.
She was rescued by the guardian of the sea, the one and only Leonel. He was the last one of his kind. He had a trident. He was the son of the sea goddess that was married to the sea king. He had a conflictual relationship with his stepfather, needlessly to say after you get to hear the way he addressed to Leonel:
“You fuss over waves and wind, son of my wife?” King Ægir had asked, his smile slight, his silver eyes hard beneath his coral crown. “Do you not have enough to do as the guardian of our sea?”
Now, that the main love interested has been identified, let`s see what is the conflict that shall keep us on the edge of our boats--->
Apparently, Leonel got into his head that the storms that kept appearing were not natural. The cause is of mystery, but he feels that something is off. He needs proof to convince the rulers that this is bad and happening.
So, he founds in Isaura a witness. He saves her, gets her to the shore where she is taken into the care of her brother, that held a conveniently high post in that port-town.
After that, he comes back to claim his “debt”. Let`s say that he is not that into subtle because this is the dialogue that goes between those two:
“Is no matter,” he said, terse in a way that suggested the opposite was true. “I am here for the debt.” “What debt?” “I saved your life. Repayment is owed. You will—” “Wait a moment,” she jutted a hand forward. “What do you mean I owe you? I mean, yes, obviously I do owe you my gratitude, but I would’ve died out there.” “Precise.
Somehow, Isaura draws the conclusion that she owns him nothing because her life is priceless (as if). Somehow, the reader is made to buy the part in which she is innocent and he is being a rude “fish” for not being more respectful. But, cmon! He saved her life! The least she could do it was to gather some info for this mystery to be elucidated.
With this point in mind I can enter deeper into the book. The premise, the sketch of the novel is not bad, the cover is really grate, but would I recommend this as the ultimate bombastic siren/mermaid love book?
No. It lacks details that could have made so much more out of it. For example, the two main characters are well contoured, but there is no one else beside them in the book. No other character was high-lightened or given a serious persona, maybe Isaura`s brother got a moment with Leonel`s sister, but that was more of a sloppy execution than a praised manifesto in the craft of writing.
At first sight the characters seem too beguiling. It will be too easy for the lead to prove her superiority by comparison to their background dialogue and unassumed actions. Even the love that was pushed between Isaura and Leonel seemed off:
“I feel…” He wanted to admit that he felt the connection she’d spoken of, but even thinking the words make his skin clammy with fear. “I feel…I should kiss you.” She breathed a laugh. “That’s a good idea.”
There are little tidbits, that should make the characters more, but they end up to be questionable. Why would be of any importance that Isaura had had a fiance previously to meeting Leonel? She could has been as well as, married with other seven people and it wouldn`t have mattered in here.
Isaura’s thumb rubbed at the indent on her finger where her wedding band had rested. She wondered if Jan had retrieved the ring from the floorboards after she’d chucked it at him, if he’d dredged up more emotion than that infuriating calm he had used to tell her it was over.
Over all, please try it if you feel like reading a cute story with a girl that is not a pirate but ends up on ships and a boy that is not the king of the sea, but holds a trident and is its guardian.
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Shall we dive straight in? (yes, the pun was intended)
There are two main characters. The reader gets to see the perspective of both Isaura and Leonel as they intermediately appear, one chapter after the other.
The book opens with Isaura`s POV as she is crossing the sea. She is a healer (I got some serious vibes of the Outlander season four) that behaves more than well with the crew (there is a serious description on that part, on how nice she is and how everybody likes her to the moon and back).
And then, the storm happens. Their ship submerges. But, Isaura is the only survivor. How? Was she an exceptionally good swimmer? Or had she had the sense to wear something lighter than a full skirt and petticoats on a boat, so she wouldn`t drown in case of falling into the water?
No to all of the above.
She was rescued by the guardian of the sea, the one and only Leonel. He was the last one of his kind. He had a trident. He was the son of the sea goddess that was married to the sea king. He had a conflictual relationship with his stepfather, needlessly to say after you get to hear the way he addressed to Leonel:
“You fuss over waves and wind, son of my wife?” King Ægir had asked, his smile slight, his silver eyes hard beneath his coral crown. “Do you not have enough to do as the guardian of our sea?”
Now, that the main love interested has been identified, let`s see what is the conflict that shall keep us on the edge of our boats--->
Apparently, Leonel got into his head that the storms that kept appearing were not natural. The cause is of mystery, but he feels that something is off. He needs proof to convince the rulers that this is bad and happening.
So, he founds in Isaura a witness. He saves her, gets her to the shore where she is taken into the care of her brother, that held a conveniently high post in that port-town.
After that, he comes back to claim his “debt”. Let`s say that he is not that into subtle because this is the dialogue that goes between those two:
“Is no matter,” he said, terse in a way that suggested the opposite was true. “I am here for the debt.” “What debt?” “I saved your life. Repayment is owed. You will—” “Wait a moment,” she jutted a hand forward. “What do you mean I owe you? I mean, yes, obviously I do owe you my gratitude, but I would’ve died out there.” “Precise.
Somehow, Isaura draws the conclusion that she owns him nothing because her life is priceless (as if). Somehow, the reader is made to buy the part in which she is innocent and he is being a rude “fish” for not being more respectful. But, cmon! He saved her life! The least she could do it was to gather some info for this mystery to be elucidated.
With this point in mind I can enter deeper into the book. The premise, the sketch of the novel is not bad, the cover is really grate, but would I recommend this as the ultimate bombastic siren/mermaid love book?
No. It lacks details that could have made so much more out of it. For example, the two main characters are well contoured, but there is no one else beside them in the book. No other character was high-lightened or given a serious persona, maybe Isaura`s brother got a moment with Leonel`s sister, but that was more of a sloppy execution than a praised manifesto in the craft of writing.
At first sight the characters seem too beguiling. It will be too easy for the lead to prove her superiority by comparison to their background dialogue and unassumed actions. Even the love that was pushed between Isaura and Leonel seemed off:
“I feel…” He wanted to admit that he felt the connection she’d spoken of, but even thinking the words make his skin clammy with fear. “I feel…I should kiss you.” She breathed a laugh. “That’s a good idea.”
There are little tidbits, that should make the characters more, but they end up to be questionable. Why would be of any importance that Isaura had had a fiance previously to meeting Leonel? She could has been as well as, married with other seven people and it wouldn`t have mattered in here.
Isaura’s thumb rubbed at the indent on her finger where her wedding band had rested. She wondered if Jan had retrieved the ring from the floorboards after she’d chucked it at him, if he’d dredged up more emotion than that infuriating calm he had used to tell her it was over.
Over all, please try it if you feel like reading a cute story with a girl that is not a pirate but ends up on ships and a boy that is not the king of the sea, but holds a trident and is its guardian.
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June 4, 2020
*This review can also be found on The Reader and The Chef. Huge thanks to the author & MTMC Tours for the review copy. All thoughts are my own.*
Beneath Cruel Fathoms is my new favorite book!!! This amazing story took me by storm (pun fully intended) and I am still floating in the aftermath of its magnificence. I absolutely LOVED IT. From the world building full of norse ocean mythology to the funny, smart and kind characters–everything captivated me!
I will start off by saying that this book has what I love the most: humor. Isaura and Leonel, as well as the rest of the characters, made me laugh throughout and I loved them all the more for it. They are such WARM, genuine characters. It’s been a while since a book has made me love the full cast so much, because despite everything they’ve been through, their hearts are so precious.
Isaura is kind, gentle and an exceptional healer, even if her heart has been broken for the loss of her marriage due to infertility. Leonel, whose sea family has been cruel to him all his life for being the bastard mermaid son of the sea goddess, still works hard to be deserving of his title as the guardian of the Fathoms. Both of these characters navigate loneliness and yet their spirits are not truly broken. In fact, they still do their best to protect and stay loyal to those they love. And when Leonel saves Isaura when an unnatural storm sinks the ship she was traveling with, they form an unlikely alliance, which blooms into a heartwarming friendship. And then inevitably, into love.
But that’s another favorite aspect about this book, all of the main relationships are beautiful in their own ways. Isaura has a wonderful, supportive family which consists of her father, aunt, and adoptive brother who lovingly calls her “Heart Sister”. Funny banter takes place within this loving family unit and I adored it. However, it would still make my heart ache for Leonel whose family was anything but, and he was indeed alone in his vast world.
Ack, this might be getting long but I also must mention how incredible the sea life is in this book. And the way Leonel interacts with it! Through songs and whistles, reading about the different languages of the sea was stunning. I just *loved* it. It even made me tear up when he mournfully sings for lost sea life.
Beneath Cruel Fathoms deserves to reach more readers and it is my duty now to sing its praises. Not only does it weave Norse Mythology, but it touches themes rarely seen in Fantasy such as Infertility
and a main character dealing with Polycystic Ovarian Syndrome, and thankfully, it's a condition that doesn't get magically solved. Anela Deen handles every theme beautifully and now I cannot wait what she does for book 2! ♥
Beneath Cruel Fathoms is my new favorite book!!! This amazing story took me by storm (pun fully intended) and I am still floating in the aftermath of its magnificence. I absolutely LOVED IT. From the world building full of norse ocean mythology to the funny, smart and kind characters–everything captivated me!
I will start off by saying that this book has what I love the most: humor. Isaura and Leonel, as well as the rest of the characters, made me laugh throughout and I loved them all the more for it. They are such WARM, genuine characters. It’s been a while since a book has made me love the full cast so much, because despite everything they’ve been through, their hearts are so precious.
Isaura is kind, gentle and an exceptional healer, even if her heart has been broken for the loss of her marriage due to infertility. Leonel, whose sea family has been cruel to him all his life for being the bastard mermaid son of the sea goddess, still works hard to be deserving of his title as the guardian of the Fathoms. Both of these characters navigate loneliness and yet their spirits are not truly broken. In fact, they still do their best to protect and stay loyal to those they love. And when Leonel saves Isaura when an unnatural storm sinks the ship she was traveling with, they form an unlikely alliance, which blooms into a heartwarming friendship. And then inevitably, into love.
But that’s another favorite aspect about this book, all of the main relationships are beautiful in their own ways. Isaura has a wonderful, supportive family which consists of her father, aunt, and adoptive brother who lovingly calls her “Heart Sister”. Funny banter takes place within this loving family unit and I adored it. However, it would still make my heart ache for Leonel whose family was anything but, and he was indeed alone in his vast world.
Ack, this might be getting long but I also must mention how incredible the sea life is in this book. And the way Leonel interacts with it! Through songs and whistles, reading about the different languages of the sea was stunning. I just *loved* it. It even made me tear up when he mournfully sings for lost sea life.
Beneath Cruel Fathoms deserves to reach more readers and it is my duty now to sing its praises. Not only does it weave Norse Mythology, but it touches themes rarely seen in Fantasy such as Infertility
and a main character dealing with Polycystic Ovarian Syndrome, and thankfully, it's a condition that doesn't get magically solved. Anela Deen handles every theme beautifully and now I cannot wait what she does for book 2! ♥
December 3, 2019
4,5 beautiful stars!
Finishing Beneath Cruel Fathoms had me happy and sad all at once. Happy because it was such a great read and sad because I couldn’t immediately start the second book haha. It’s a book that I thoroughly loved reading and it left me craving more instantly.
There are interesting settings present, on land and beneath the sea surface. I really liked getting to know the world Leonal lived in especially, in the sea. It’s not the typical Atlantis setting, even though the story has some Little Mermaid elements popping up every now and then, but it’s still so enchanting and dark and dangerous from time to time! I haven’t nearly gotten enough of it all and can’t wait to read more about it.
There’s so much awesome elements in this book that I don’t know where to start haha. There’s Norse mythology present, there are Gods present, there are monsters present, sirens and talk of mermen/mermaids. There’s action, adventure and a quest. There are great characters present, amazing character development, and a well developed romance.
The characters are truly interesting in their own way and their character development was just so well done in my opinion. Isaura is a really strong character for example, not only by heart but body as well. I was really surprised to see that she could really kick some ass and liked every bit of development revolving around her so much!
Leonel was maybe even more interesting. He’s a mermen and has lived a brutal and difficult live thus far; not being wanted by anyone really, and being ‘tormented’ by his family (like his half sisters who want to do him harm and a mother who is never in his corner to support him) throughout his life. And despite that, he still has such a good and loyal heart. He fights for the weak. It broke my heart to read about his mental struggles, and it was so beautifully written. His determination to look into the magical storms that are tearing apart his world down below, and fix/fight them, has him crossing paths with Isaura along the way and from then on he’s being set up to make some difficult and life altering choices. His development throughout the book was really really really great and I just love him so dearly. Did I also mention he’s HOT AF? Lol. Sure, he has a tail fin and isn’t human and all that, but still… I’m a mermaid at heart, have always been so my entire life, so I think I’m granted in my feelings towards this character ;)
The forming bond between Isaura and Leonel is beautifully developed and believable. I love how they can be strong characters on themselves but how they can be strong with and for one another as well. It was a joy to follow their unfurling romance/relationship in combination with the banter between the two.
The minor characters were all fun to read about as well and were a great addition to the story. Especially Jurek was one I was really interesting in reading more about (that’s one of the reasons why I can’t wait to read book 2 haha!)
The writing and story-telling was also really great I think. The author’s writing had me hooked right from the very first page and as I said: when I was finished, I immediately wanted more! I was enthralled from beginning till end.
So, there are some cliches present and despite the plot being really fun and well developed, the plot is also a bit predictable at times. But did it trouble me? Not.at.all. The author put in some really fun Little Mermaid elements and gave them a twist, so that it remained being ‘fresh’. I absolutely loved the author's view on this world and the way she gives her own voice to it all.
There really wasn’t a single moment in which I wasn’t enjoying this book. I’m having a hard time to really put into words how much I loved this and why. Basically every element in this book was right for me. From story-telling and plot to the characters and their development as well as the romance.
I received an ARC by the author in exchange for leaving an honest review.
I love it when authors take the time to reach out to readers and I love reading new to me authors. When I got the opportunity to read this book, I just couldn’t pass up on it because the promise of it all was so good. I am beyond excited that I can now say, after reading it, that the book lived up to its expectations and that I found a new author that I cannot wait to read more of. This is a book and author I HIGHLY RECOMMEND to read.
Finishing Beneath Cruel Fathoms had me happy and sad all at once. Happy because it was such a great read and sad because I couldn’t immediately start the second book haha. It’s a book that I thoroughly loved reading and it left me craving more instantly.
“Hunters come. They are- What is your word? They have fin on top.” He made a sharp whistle and jutted his fingers upward and toward his back. “Sharks?” She squeaked. “Is that what you mean?” “Yes, those.” “But you’re stronger than they are, right? You can kill them if they get too close?” “Kill them?” His eyes narrowed. “It is their nature to hunt.” “Is that supposed to matter? They want to eat us.” “They do no wrong. They come because of you. This bleeding.” “Oh well, many apologies. How inconsiderate of me to be injured in a shipwreck.” He made a snort of disdain. “Your kind should not even travel the water. It is not your world and you disturb ours with your crossing.” “And if the great continents weren’t underwater from the Gods’ War millennia ago, we wouldn’t need to, but here we are. Can we resume discussing our shark problem?” “They break no laws. I will not harm them for a dirt walker who should not be here in the first place.” “So, I’m to be fish food? I don’t believe this. You are the worst rescuer in history.” His brow thunderous, he hissed out a breath followed by an orchestra of clicks low in his throat. The sounds held a suspicious lack of courtesy. “That better not be directed at me or I’ll pan-fry your tail fin in butter and garlic.”
There are interesting settings present, on land and beneath the sea surface. I really liked getting to know the world Leonal lived in especially, in the sea. It’s not the typical Atlantis setting, even though the story has some Little Mermaid elements popping up every now and then, but it’s still so enchanting and dark and dangerous from time to time! I haven’t nearly gotten enough of it all and can’t wait to read more about it.
“There may only be the two of us to stop them, but a smart plan can overpower a strong army any day.”
There’s so much awesome elements in this book that I don’t know where to start haha. There’s Norse mythology present, there are Gods present, there are monsters present, sirens and talk of mermen/mermaids. There’s action, adventure and a quest. There are great characters present, amazing character development, and a well developed romance.
The characters are truly interesting in their own way and their character development was just so well done in my opinion. Isaura is a really strong character for example, not only by heart but body as well. I was really surprised to see that she could really kick some ass and liked every bit of development revolving around her so much!
“Who guards the guardian, Leonel? Is there someone who will help you?”
He thought of his cove. The ruined safety. The silence filling his heart. “There is no one.”
Leonel was maybe even more interesting. He’s a mermen and has lived a brutal and difficult live thus far; not being wanted by anyone really, and being ‘tormented’ by his family (like his half sisters who want to do him harm and a mother who is never in his corner to support him) throughout his life. And despite that, he still has such a good and loyal heart. He fights for the weak. It broke my heart to read about his mental struggles, and it was so beautifully written. His determination to look into the magical storms that are tearing apart his world down below, and fix/fight them, has him crossing paths with Isaura along the way and from then on he’s being set up to make some difficult and life altering choices. His development throughout the book was really really really great and I just love him so dearly. Did I also mention he’s HOT AF? Lol. Sure, he has a tail fin and isn’t human and all that, but still… I’m a mermaid at heart, have always been so my entire life, so I think I’m granted in my feelings towards this character ;)
Her steady presence comforted him, her words from the cave alive in his mind. You are not alone. It had filled him with an unfamiliar warmth that left him uncertain. He wanted it to be true, and he didn’t. He was accustomed to being alone. He trusted solitude.
The forming bond between Isaura and Leonel is beautifully developed and believable. I love how they can be strong characters on themselves but how they can be strong with and for one another as well. It was a joy to follow their unfurling romance/relationship in combination with the banter between the two.
’It’s too sweet.” Of course it was. His usual diet wouldn’t include anything made with sugar. No wonder he looked like eating it thrashed his palette. “Yes, very sweet.” With a determined glint in his eyes, he finished chewing the mouthful and swallowed. His pallor took on a greenish cast. She laughed outright. “You hate it.” “No, of course not,” he insisted, eying the pastry like a battlefield he was ready to die on. “It is,” his throat bobbed, “delicious.” When he seemed about to take another bite, she quickly plucked it from his hand. “Stubborn fish. Give it back before you make yourself sick. It’s obvious you don’t like it.”
The minor characters were all fun to read about as well and were a great addition to the story. Especially Jurek was one I was really interesting in reading more about (that’s one of the reasons why I can’t wait to read book 2 haha!)
The writing and story-telling was also really great I think. The author’s writing had me hooked right from the very first page and as I said: when I was finished, I immediately wanted more! I was enthralled from beginning till end.
So, there are some cliches present and despite the plot being really fun and well developed, the plot is also a bit predictable at times. But did it trouble me? Not.at.all. The author put in some really fun Little Mermaid elements and gave them a twist, so that it remained being ‘fresh’. I absolutely loved the author's view on this world and the way she gives her own voice to it all.
There really wasn’t a single moment in which I wasn’t enjoying this book. I’m having a hard time to really put into words how much I loved this and why. Basically every element in this book was right for me. From story-telling and plot to the characters and their development as well as the romance.
I received an ARC by the author in exchange for leaving an honest review.
I love it when authors take the time to reach out to readers and I love reading new to me authors. When I got the opportunity to read this book, I just couldn’t pass up on it because the promise of it all was so good. I am beyond excited that I can now say, after reading it, that the book lived up to its expectations and that I found a new author that I cannot wait to read more of. This is a book and author I HIGHLY RECOMMEND to read.
March 4, 2021
For a while, I've been trying to find a good mermaid book that would grab me from the beginning and not let go till the last page. Unfortunately, ever since I finished To Kill a Kingdom, no other mermaid book has been good enough for me. Some were boring, some were a bit weird, some just couldn't catch my interest at all. Until I've read Beneath Cruel Fathoms (which I enjoyed even more than 'TKAK').
Characters:
This book has dual POV between Isaura and Leonel.
I absolutely adored Leonel. Thanks to being the Sea queen’s bastard son and the only mortal in the sea court, he has been bullied by his half-sisters his entire life. (How I wish someone would fry these female fishes in the next books). He is basically a male version of Jude Duarte from The Cruel Prince. The only difference (apart from being a male and a merfolk of course) is that what he went through was much crueler and bloodier.
While investigating an unusual storm that causes the frequent destruction of human ships, he breaks a law and saves a human woman, who like he thinks could help him find the reason behind the storms.
Izaura is a twenty-five years old healer, returning to her father's home after being left by her husband. She's clever and kind-hearted, it was hard not to like her. She's going through a difficult time in life. TW:
Her relationship with her brother Jurek was one of my favorite things in this book.
Jurek (Izaura's brother) and Ava (Leonel's good sister) didn't have much screen time in this book, but both will be main characters in the second book.
Romance:
No insta-love THANK GOD!! ✓
Slow burn ✓
Friends-to-lovers trope ✓
The romance is not the central story line. This is actually one of my favorite kinds of romance, with the perfect balance between romance and plot.
Pacing:
The pacing was uneven, the first 10% was awesome, but between 10 and 37% the story became rather slow, but then it went faster and faster, I loved the last 25% of the book and the finale was 5 STARS, full of tension, action and spooky stuff.
The writing was atmospheric and beautiful.
Ending: the story is still open-ended.
Beneath Cruel Fathoms, though marked as an adult book (where both main characters are 25+ years old), felt more like NA or a mature version of YA fantasy. There is more than kissing, but the description is very much "innocent".
Characters:
This book has dual POV between Isaura and Leonel.
I absolutely adored Leonel. Thanks to being the Sea queen’s bastard son and the only mortal in the sea court, he has been bullied by his half-sisters his entire life. (How I wish someone would fry these female fishes in the next books). He is basically a male version of Jude Duarte from The Cruel Prince. The only difference (apart from being a male and a merfolk of course) is that what he went through was much crueler and bloodier.
While investigating an unusual storm that causes the frequent destruction of human ships, he breaks a law and saves a human woman, who like he thinks could help him find the reason behind the storms.
Izaura is a twenty-five years old healer, returning to her father's home after being left by her husband. She's clever and kind-hearted, it was hard not to like her. She's going through a difficult time in life. TW:
Her relationship with her brother Jurek was one of my favorite things in this book.
Jurek (Izaura's brother) and Ava (Leonel's good sister) didn't have much screen time in this book, but both will be main characters in the second book.
Romance:
No insta-love THANK GOD!! ✓
Slow burn ✓
Friends-to-lovers trope ✓
The romance is not the central story line. This is actually one of my favorite kinds of romance, with the perfect balance between romance and plot.
Pacing:
The pacing was uneven, the first 10% was awesome, but between 10 and 37% the story became rather slow, but then it went faster and faster, I loved the last 25% of the book and the finale was 5 STARS, full of tension, action and spooky stuff.
The writing was atmospheric and beautiful.
Ending: the story is still open-ended.
Beneath Cruel Fathoms, though marked as an adult book (where both main characters are 25+ years old), felt more like NA or a mature version of YA fantasy. There is more than kissing, but the description is very much "innocent".
June 16, 2019
This was a heart-achingly poignant story, and I mean to write a review that does it justice. For now, I'll just say: alternative world with norse mythology, plus a merman and a healer who are equally broken and incredibly strong? Oh, and they have to save the world together? Adventure, magic, and all the feels. Read it now.
September 6, 2020
Update 6/9/2020: I should be more eloquent with this review, and I should be saying way more than I'm going to, but I fell into the trap of leaving it too long and forgetting what I wanted to say in the first place. I need to stop doing that.
So, in the interest of just getting you to READ THIS BOOK (which you absolutely have to, given that you're reading this review and therefore are already considering giving it a go), I'm going to keep it short and totally feeling-centric.
This book is not without its faults, but I don't care about them. Isaura and Leonel's individual and joint journeys just captured my attention in a way I didn't see coming, and I felt like I needed to read it all in one sitting. It's a beautiful YA-esque book that carries distinctly non-YA themes without ramming them down your throat, and once you get into it, the prose is sweeping and lush and just swoony enough to hook you.
To sum it all up, I cannot for the life of me understand why this book hasn't gotten wider rep, and I absolutely cannot wait for the next installment.
I basically inhaled this book in one go. Full RTC.
ARC provided by BookSirens in exchange for my honest review.
So, in the interest of just getting you to READ THIS BOOK (which you absolutely have to, given that you're reading this review and therefore are already considering giving it a go), I'm going to keep it short and totally feeling-centric.
This book is not without its faults, but I don't care about them. Isaura and Leonel's individual and joint journeys just captured my attention in a way I didn't see coming, and I felt like I needed to read it all in one sitting. It's a beautiful YA-esque book that carries distinctly non-YA themes without ramming them down your throat, and once you get into it, the prose is sweeping and lush and just swoony enough to hook you.
To sum it all up, I cannot for the life of me understand why this book hasn't gotten wider rep, and I absolutely cannot wait for the next installment.
I basically inhaled this book in one go. Full RTC.
ARC provided by BookSirens in exchange for my honest review.
December 12, 2019
3,5 duckling star ⭐️
Want to read
October 5, 2020
December 15, 2019
Beneath Cruel Fathoms was in RockStarlit BookAsylum's group of 30 in SPFBO 5 and made it to be one of our semi-finalists. It definitely one of my top 3 as well after reading up to 25% of each book. I was thinking to coming back to it some day, but I didn't expect it to be so soon. The author was kind enough to gift me a paperback and I just found myself drawn to it as it lay on my desk. And so, I immersed myself in this world and man, it was a ride. I believe that I had to read this book right now as it dragged me out of my slump and also brought back the feeling of joy of reading and I'm grateful for it as I badly needed it.
My thoughts up to the 25% mark:
I've started to read Beneath Cruel Fathoms back in the summer during my vacation, so it was pretty early into the competiton - actually it might have been my second book I sampled - but despite going through 29 other books, it still managed to stay with me in the back of my mind. I didn't have the time to go back to read it fully, but I definitely intend to at one point. The strange thing is, I'm usually not into these kind of books, but Beneath Cruel Fathoms really managed to capture me. The writing was smooth and entertaining, the characters well fleshed out and I liked their interactions. I remember wanting to learn more about Leonel and his life in the sea. As characters go, I could connect with him the most. He earned his role to be the Guardian of the Fathoms, but that didn't mean he did earn the love, let alone respect of his family who constantly look down on him and make sure he doesn't feel welcome in their circles.
I had the feeling that Beneath Cruel Fathoms was a kind of Little Mermaid retelling, where the roles are reversed - Leonel the mermaid who saves the damsel in distress (although don't mistake her for being a weak female character, because she could definitely hold her own) - and as they fight together to figure out what's going on, they more than likely will fall in love. And all of this was set in a Norse mythology inspired world. Definitely an interesting mix. I enjoyed both POVs, getting to know their circumstances, learning about their personalities - I admit the first 25% weren't actually action packed, but I honestly didn't mind. I suspect it will pick up as Isaura and Leonel start to work together in earnest, but I already was being able to lose myself in the story as it was. Deen has a way of writing that just makes you turn the pages without realising.
And some more thoughts after reading it completely:
I pretty much stand by everything I said so far. There is action toward the second part of the book and Leonal stayed my favourite character. I just could connect with him on a deeper level - being a cast out, not trusting anyone especially when faced with nothing but kindness. His and Isaura's feelings are growing for each other and - thank the author - it's absolutely not an insta one. It builds up slowly and there is plenty of enough things going on to keep me absolutely interested and invested. Oh man, I was invested. I had FEELINGS toward the end because let's face it, Deen is a monster (okay, no, I'm kidding, but I'm still sour about certain things *shakes fist*) playing with emotions like a master musician plays their instrument.
"She bit her lip as though she hadn't meant to admit this. Broken. She'd said it of herself before, after her ship sank. Now as then, he wanted to ask but it was clear by the way she held her breath, she prayed he wouldn't. She had no need to fear. He understood her wish to be heard even without being fully understood. To be seen without being looked at."
There were some nice twists in the plot, and though the story arc was concluded nicely, it still left some things open for the next book in the series. Which I can't wait to read, by the way.
Even though books with romance is not something I would pick up usually, I'm glad Beneath Cruel Fathoms found its way to me. The romance was well written and there were enough other things to keep the story going. It also dealt with serious topics such as woman's place in society and how Isaura deals with the fact that she can't live up to the expectations and how that affects her relationships. On the other side is Leonel who is being shunned by his own family and tries to live up to their expectations but keeps failing.
If you are looking for an emotionally thrilling read with romance, mythical sea creatures and a vivid dark fantasy setting, then Beneath Cruel Fathoms is your book.
My thoughts up to the 25% mark:
I've started to read Beneath Cruel Fathoms back in the summer during my vacation, so it was pretty early into the competiton - actually it might have been my second book I sampled - but despite going through 29 other books, it still managed to stay with me in the back of my mind. I didn't have the time to go back to read it fully, but I definitely intend to at one point. The strange thing is, I'm usually not into these kind of books, but Beneath Cruel Fathoms really managed to capture me. The writing was smooth and entertaining, the characters well fleshed out and I liked their interactions. I remember wanting to learn more about Leonel and his life in the sea. As characters go, I could connect with him the most. He earned his role to be the Guardian of the Fathoms, but that didn't mean he did earn the love, let alone respect of his family who constantly look down on him and make sure he doesn't feel welcome in their circles.
I had the feeling that Beneath Cruel Fathoms was a kind of Little Mermaid retelling, where the roles are reversed - Leonel the mermaid who saves the damsel in distress (although don't mistake her for being a weak female character, because she could definitely hold her own) - and as they fight together to figure out what's going on, they more than likely will fall in love. And all of this was set in a Norse mythology inspired world. Definitely an interesting mix. I enjoyed both POVs, getting to know their circumstances, learning about their personalities - I admit the first 25% weren't actually action packed, but I honestly didn't mind. I suspect it will pick up as Isaura and Leonel start to work together in earnest, but I already was being able to lose myself in the story as it was. Deen has a way of writing that just makes you turn the pages without realising.
And some more thoughts after reading it completely:
I pretty much stand by everything I said so far. There is action toward the second part of the book and Leonal stayed my favourite character. I just could connect with him on a deeper level - being a cast out, not trusting anyone especially when faced with nothing but kindness. His and Isaura's feelings are growing for each other and - thank the author - it's absolutely not an insta one. It builds up slowly and there is plenty of enough things going on to keep me absolutely interested and invested. Oh man, I was invested. I had FEELINGS toward the end because let's face it, Deen is a monster (okay, no, I'm kidding, but I'm still sour about certain things *shakes fist*) playing with emotions like a master musician plays their instrument.
"She bit her lip as though she hadn't meant to admit this. Broken. She'd said it of herself before, after her ship sank. Now as then, he wanted to ask but it was clear by the way she held her breath, she prayed he wouldn't. She had no need to fear. He understood her wish to be heard even without being fully understood. To be seen without being looked at."
There were some nice twists in the plot, and though the story arc was concluded nicely, it still left some things open for the next book in the series. Which I can't wait to read, by the way.
Even though books with romance is not something I would pick up usually, I'm glad Beneath Cruel Fathoms found its way to me. The romance was well written and there were enough other things to keep the story going. It also dealt with serious topics such as woman's place in society and how Isaura deals with the fact that she can't live up to the expectations and how that affects her relationships. On the other side is Leonel who is being shunned by his own family and tries to live up to their expectations but keeps failing.
If you are looking for an emotionally thrilling read with romance, mythical sea creatures and a vivid dark fantasy setting, then Beneath Cruel Fathoms is your book.
June 29, 2019
Sometimes you come across books that you really enjoy, other times you come across books that leave you unsatisfied. And SOMETIMES, just SOMETIMES you happen to cross paths with a book that just blows all your expectations out of the water and makes you remember why you love reading so much in the first place.
Beneath Cruel Fathoms was that sort of a book for me.
If you know me, you know that I absolutely live for fantasy novels. Out of all the genres I love, fantasy is my absolute favorite. So not only was this book a perfect, feel good book for me to read, it also was so unique and poignant that it felt completely refreshing and was just an overall joy to delve into.
A freak storm at sea leaves healer Isaura Johansdottir shipwrecked and adrift. Luckily for her, Leonel, a merman and guardian of the ocean rescues her. But it is not done out of kindness. He has been growing suspicious of these unnatural storms that have been recently plaguing the sea and all its creatures. Because she is the only survivor of this most recent devastation, Leonel needs Isaura to help him get to the bottom of the mystery. As they work together and begin to learn to trust one another, they come to understand that ancient powers are afoot, and conspiracy lurks both on land and sea.
While the story itself was pretty amazing, what I loved most about this book was the characters and the relationship between the two protagonists, Isaura and Leonel. First of all, in relation to books that feature merpeople, I think this is the first book I have ever read where the main mer character was male. Almost always it is a woman who is the merperson and it was just really awesome to see these roles reversed. Usually I tend to lean towards liking one protagonist over the other but in the case for this book I just couldn’t decide between Isaura and Leonel. I honestly loved them both so much.
“They think they can best you like this, using your own people against you. They think you’re alone.” Isaura all but forgot the cold, her body alight with fury. She met his searching gaze.
“They’re wrong.”
Isaura is just so strong hearted and kind. She loves deeply and fiercely and is super protective of her family and those in her care. She risks much for Leonel, even before they grow close. Her generosity of spirit really made her someone to admire.
“Who guards the guardian, Leonel? Is there someone who will help you?”
He thought of his cove. The ruined safety. The silence filling his heart. “There is no one.”
My heart broke for Leonel so much in this story. His family is terribly abusive, but instead of that making him hard and cruel, he is kind and caring. Watching his vulnerability gradually turn into trust for Isaura was really fantastic to watch.
I would also just like to mention that this story deals with infertility, which is not something you come across every day, especially within this genre. It’s done in an empathetic and intelligent way, and adds an even deeper layer to the characterization and story.
Overall, this is a perfect fantasy story. It has pretty much everything you could ask for; mystery, adventure, romance, and really intriguing characterization. I would happily recommend it to anyone who loves fantasy and is looking for a refreshing book with a great story and even greater characters.
I received a copy of this book in exchange for my honest review. :)
Beneath Cruel Fathoms was that sort of a book for me.
If you know me, you know that I absolutely live for fantasy novels. Out of all the genres I love, fantasy is my absolute favorite. So not only was this book a perfect, feel good book for me to read, it also was so unique and poignant that it felt completely refreshing and was just an overall joy to delve into.
A freak storm at sea leaves healer Isaura Johansdottir shipwrecked and adrift. Luckily for her, Leonel, a merman and guardian of the ocean rescues her. But it is not done out of kindness. He has been growing suspicious of these unnatural storms that have been recently plaguing the sea and all its creatures. Because she is the only survivor of this most recent devastation, Leonel needs Isaura to help him get to the bottom of the mystery. As they work together and begin to learn to trust one another, they come to understand that ancient powers are afoot, and conspiracy lurks both on land and sea.
While the story itself was pretty amazing, what I loved most about this book was the characters and the relationship between the two protagonists, Isaura and Leonel. First of all, in relation to books that feature merpeople, I think this is the first book I have ever read where the main mer character was male. Almost always it is a woman who is the merperson and it was just really awesome to see these roles reversed. Usually I tend to lean towards liking one protagonist over the other but in the case for this book I just couldn’t decide between Isaura and Leonel. I honestly loved them both so much.
“They think they can best you like this, using your own people against you. They think you’re alone.” Isaura all but forgot the cold, her body alight with fury. She met his searching gaze.
“They’re wrong.”
Isaura is just so strong hearted and kind. She loves deeply and fiercely and is super protective of her family and those in her care. She risks much for Leonel, even before they grow close. Her generosity of spirit really made her someone to admire.
“Who guards the guardian, Leonel? Is there someone who will help you?”
He thought of his cove. The ruined safety. The silence filling his heart. “There is no one.”
My heart broke for Leonel so much in this story. His family is terribly abusive, but instead of that making him hard and cruel, he is kind and caring. Watching his vulnerability gradually turn into trust for Isaura was really fantastic to watch.
I would also just like to mention that this story deals with infertility, which is not something you come across every day, especially within this genre. It’s done in an empathetic and intelligent way, and adds an even deeper layer to the characterization and story.
Overall, this is a perfect fantasy story. It has pretty much everything you could ask for; mystery, adventure, romance, and really intriguing characterization. I would happily recommend it to anyone who loves fantasy and is looking for a refreshing book with a great story and even greater characters.
I received a copy of this book in exchange for my honest review. :)
December 9, 2020
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Mermaids and humans. Two different worlds that don't expect to collide, intertwine with force and, in the most unexpected ways, love. Beneath Cruel Fathoms is the story of Isaura and Leonel and the forbidden love that sparks between them.
Being a fan of mermaids, it is difficult to discover good mermaid novels that capture my attention. But, when I found Beneath Cruel Fathoms and read the synopsis, I was immediately hooked.
Leonel, the guardian of the Fathoms has felt alone for so long and one day, he breaks the rules and saves Isaura from drowning due to a shipwreck. The way they came together was so slow and gentle and even though Leonel...
January 3, 2021
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'You are not abnormal. You are not broken. You are perfect, and complete, and whole exactly as you are.'
👆 this quote was actually from the Author's note but it just really resonated with me.
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I absolutely loved this book and couldn't put it down.
The story begins with Isaura, a 25 year old, recently divorced and newly qualified Healer who is (reluctantly) rescued from a shipwreck by merman, Leonel. As guardian of the Fathoms (the sea), Leonel rescues her in exchange for her help in tracking down the human responsible for the unnatural magical storms ravaging the seas.
I love a dual POV and I'm now obsessed with both Isaura and Leonel, as well as Jurek and Ava tbh.
It's refreshing to read a book with a male mer creature as part of the romantic pairing as well.
The Scandinavian & Norse Mythology world building was wonderful and very thoroughly fleshed out. I also have a special love for Iceland so I really enjoyed the setting of the fictional 'Eisland'.
The writing was exceptional and the focus on mental health issues, trauma, neglect and infertility were handled with such finesse and care.
I also appreciated the unique and loving family dynamic that Isaura had back home in Eisland.
The only thing lacking from this book is that because it's set in Scandinavia style country, there are no POC Characters. There was also no LGBTQIA rep.
The book has a (kind of?) happy ending but also leaves it wide open for a sequel and I cannot wait!
CW: infertility, blood, violence, divorce, death
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'You are not abnormal. You are not broken. You are perfect, and complete, and whole exactly as you are.'
👆 this quote was actually from the Author's note but it just really resonated with me.
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I absolutely loved this book and couldn't put it down.
The story begins with Isaura, a 25 year old, recently divorced and newly qualified Healer who is (reluctantly) rescued from a shipwreck by merman, Leonel. As guardian of the Fathoms (the sea), Leonel rescues her in exchange for her help in tracking down the human responsible for the unnatural magical storms ravaging the seas.
I love a dual POV and I'm now obsessed with both Isaura and Leonel, as well as Jurek and Ava tbh.
It's refreshing to read a book with a male mer creature as part of the romantic pairing as well.
The Scandinavian & Norse Mythology world building was wonderful and very thoroughly fleshed out. I also have a special love for Iceland so I really enjoyed the setting of the fictional 'Eisland'.
The writing was exceptional and the focus on mental health issues, trauma, neglect and infertility were handled with such finesse and care.
I also appreciated the unique and loving family dynamic that Isaura had back home in Eisland.
The only thing lacking from this book is that because it's set in Scandinavia style country, there are no POC Characters. There was also no LGBTQIA rep.
The book has a (kind of?) happy ending but also leaves it wide open for a sequel and I cannot wait!
CW: infertility, blood, violence, divorce, death
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November 25, 2019DNF
Isaura, newly apprenticed healer and divorcee, is sailing home when a freak storm brews, tossing the ship she is aboard and she finds herself in the sea.
Leonel, mortal merman, rescues Isaura. By doing so, he is going against the Blue Laws that prohibits that sort of thing, in hopes that she can answer some questions about the unnatural storms that have been on the rise.
***
This really did seem my speed – it has that romance feel, the leads seem ok; I was not too attached to either but that could have changed. I like the brother. I love sibling relations that are fun like this felt like it could be. And the mystery of trying to find who is messing with the storms was intriguing enough.
This was weirdly YA/NA feeling up to this point but with older people. That may change because I was only at the one-third mark. I think it was some of the conversation that felt young. I am not sure why they gave me that impression.
A few other things I found that niggled – mostly to do with Isaura’s thoughts about being broken and the way it was presented which felt a teeny bit heavy-handed. But then again, reflective thoughts about that sort of thing aren’t my favourite way to learn why a character psyche is damaged.
This is another where the writing, editing, and everything is presented very nicely but the story and/or characters just didn’t grab on to me right off. Couple that with more of the reflective thoughts about why the characters are so damaged, instead of showing us by their actions, than I’d prefer and I decided to move on from this one.
spfbo score 4.5/10
Isaura, newly apprenticed healer and divorcee, is sailing home when a freak storm brews, tossing the ship she is aboard and she finds herself in the sea.
Leonel, mortal merman, rescues Isaura. By doing so, he is going against the Blue Laws that prohibits that sort of thing, in hopes that she can answer some questions about the unnatural storms that have been on the rise.
***
This really did seem my speed – it has that romance feel, the leads seem ok; I was not too attached to either but that could have changed. I like the brother. I love sibling relations that are fun like this felt like it could be. And the mystery of trying to find who is messing with the storms was intriguing enough.
This was weirdly YA/NA feeling up to this point but with older people. That may change because I was only at the one-third mark. I think it was some of the conversation that felt young. I am not sure why they gave me that impression.
A few other things I found that niggled – mostly to do with Isaura’s thoughts about being broken and the way it was presented which felt a teeny bit heavy-handed. But then again, reflective thoughts about that sort of thing aren’t my favourite way to learn why a character psyche is damaged.
This is another where the writing, editing, and everything is presented very nicely but the story and/or characters just didn’t grab on to me right off. Couple that with more of the reflective thoughts about why the characters are so damaged, instead of showing us by their actions, than I’d prefer and I decided to move on from this one.
spfbo score 4.5/10
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August 15, 2019I enjoyed the Norse-myth-inspired fantasy world of this story, as well as the extremely sensitive characterisation of the two main characters, both of whom have been hurt by people close to them and are struggling to find identity - Isaura as an infertile woman, Leonel as a bastard mortal in a family of gods. The book is often beautifully written, and has thought-provoking things to say about mortality, time, empathy and grief - definitely one of those books that leave you thinking long after you put it down.
That said, I did think this story focused so narrowly on the two characters at its heart that the rest of the characters and the world fell out of focus. I suppose that this risks happening in any story that skews hard into the romance genre as this does, but the characters and events happening in the periphery of this romance felt particularly fuzzy to me.
That said, I did think this story focused so narrowly on the two characters at its heart that the rest of the characters and the world fell out of focus. I suppose that this risks happening in any story that skews hard into the romance genre as this does, but the characters and events happening in the periphery of this romance felt particularly fuzzy to me.
May 29, 2020
Beneath Cruel Fathoms is the first book in the adult fantasy Bitter Sea Trilogy by author Anela Deen. Anela Deen is a new author to me, but she has very powerful, descriptive writing that I really enjoyed. It is no secret that I love fantasy books, but I don't read too many adult fantasy. I really enjoyed Beneath Cruel Fathoms, so I would like to change that. Let me know your favorite adult fantasy recommendations in the comments below and I will check them out! Beneath Cruel Fathoms is a fantasy set in the sea featuring merfolks, gods and plenty of magic. I enjoyed this book, and am certainly interested in continuing on in the series.
In Beneath Cruel Fathoms, our story starts out with our main heroine Isaura as a feirce storm hits and destroys the boat she is on. It was an intense start, but it did feel a bit slow to me. The start of the book was much more focused on descriptive, flowery prose that did a great job of setting up the world, but I didn't feel like there was too much in the way of actual plot advancement. I was a little nervous that I wouldn't be able to get into the story, but boy oh boy was I wrong. After the bit of a slow start, this story really took off. It is a book that builds and builds. It gets better as the story goes on. And once I was half way through the book, I was really appreciative of the descriptive world set up because I felt like I really knew the motivations of the gods and the setup of the underwater sea court, and it was a really cool world! I can't wait to discover more in the next two books. There is a big cast of characters in Betneath Cruel Fathoms. It is easy for me to get tunnel vision and only see Isaura and Leonel, but that would be doing this story a disservice. All of the secondary characters really helped bring this story to life because they helped paint the picture of what wonderful people Isaura and Leonel are.
The romance in this story was wonderful. It was soft and felt really natural, and I loved Isaura and Leonel. Leonel is one of the last of the merfolk, which you would think would make him revered and special, but no. He is basically an outcast in the underwater court. I felt for him most of all. I think I made a deeper connection with Leonel than I did even with Isaura, which was surprising to me. The gods in this story are no joking matter. They are based on Norse mytholgy, and they can be very cruel. I liked this darker depiction of the gods- it added to the dark atmosphere of the story, and Anela Deen does a fantastic job writing a rich atmosphere that jumps off the page. The story becomes very complicated and involved and by the end of the story I was dying to get my hands on book two! If you are a fan of norse mythology, Beneath Cruel Fathoms is a book that you need to read. It is totally unlike any other merfolk story that I have ever read.
In Beneath Cruel Fathoms, our story starts out with our main heroine Isaura as a feirce storm hits and destroys the boat she is on. It was an intense start, but it did feel a bit slow to me. The start of the book was much more focused on descriptive, flowery prose that did a great job of setting up the world, but I didn't feel like there was too much in the way of actual plot advancement. I was a little nervous that I wouldn't be able to get into the story, but boy oh boy was I wrong. After the bit of a slow start, this story really took off. It is a book that builds and builds. It gets better as the story goes on. And once I was half way through the book, I was really appreciative of the descriptive world set up because I felt like I really knew the motivations of the gods and the setup of the underwater sea court, and it was a really cool world! I can't wait to discover more in the next two books. There is a big cast of characters in Betneath Cruel Fathoms. It is easy for me to get tunnel vision and only see Isaura and Leonel, but that would be doing this story a disservice. All of the secondary characters really helped bring this story to life because they helped paint the picture of what wonderful people Isaura and Leonel are.
The romance in this story was wonderful. It was soft and felt really natural, and I loved Isaura and Leonel. Leonel is one of the last of the merfolk, which you would think would make him revered and special, but no. He is basically an outcast in the underwater court. I felt for him most of all. I think I made a deeper connection with Leonel than I did even with Isaura, which was surprising to me. The gods in this story are no joking matter. They are based on Norse mytholgy, and they can be very cruel. I liked this darker depiction of the gods- it added to the dark atmosphere of the story, and Anela Deen does a fantastic job writing a rich atmosphere that jumps off the page. The story becomes very complicated and involved and by the end of the story I was dying to get my hands on book two! If you are a fan of norse mythology, Beneath Cruel Fathoms is a book that you need to read. It is totally unlike any other merfolk story that I have ever read.
March 17, 2020
I thought
Beneath Cruel Fathoms
would be a 4 star read and perhaps the merfolk book I'd been looking for.
I really enjoyed most of it. A nice set-up, good characters, good world-building, a mystery, a relationship that developed nicely.
But both characters' self doubt became a bit annoying after a while and then the relationship was so melodramatic towards the end.
I also couldn't really identify with Isaura's problem, so it was difficult to understand her point of view. I don't really want children, so her constantly referring to herself as 'broken' because she couldn't have children seemed irrational to me, but it appears that the author went through this herself, so it's just my perspective and I'm sure many won't share it.
I can't say that I'm too eager to read the next book(s). The main plot line that would keep me going is . Is it enough? Maybe :)
I really enjoyed most of it. A nice set-up, good characters, good world-building, a mystery, a relationship that developed nicely.
But both characters' self doubt became a bit annoying after a while and then the relationship was so melodramatic towards the end.
I also couldn't really identify with Isaura's problem, so it was difficult to understand her point of view. I don't really want children, so her constantly referring to herself as 'broken' because she couldn't have children seemed irrational to me, but it appears that the author went through this herself, so it's just my perspective and I'm sure many won't share it.
I can't say that I'm too eager to read the next book(s). The main plot line that would keep me going is . Is it enough? Maybe :)
March 31, 2020
A really fun and enjoyable read. A couple of spelling errors which was a bit distracting (only because I'm a bit of a grammar-nazi) but that didn't stop me from finishing the story, which would have normally been the case.
November 7, 2021
I’M NOT OKAY I’M STILL CRYING. I came looking for an underrated merfolk book and I FOUND GOLD! 😭 It has everything that I loved in fantasy books:
— main characters with a dark past
— a story set in the sea 🌊
— a cute and beautiful merman who finds the human world awkward! 🧜🏼♂️😂
— plot twists that left me breathless
— deep familial love
— and a sweet gentle forbidden romance that gave me diabetes 💗
"𝙄 𝙛𝙚𝙚𝙡 𝙡𝙞𝙠𝙚 𝙢𝙮𝙨𝙚𝙡𝙛 𝙖𝙜𝙖𝙞𝙣 𝙬𝙝𝙚𝙣 𝙄'𝙢 𝙬𝙞𝙩𝙝 𝙮𝙤𝙪. 𝙒𝙝𝙚𝙣 𝙬𝙚'𝙧𝙚 𝙩𝙤𝙜𝙚𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙧, 𝙄 𝙙𝙤𝙣'𝙩 𝙛𝙚𝙚𝙡 𝙗𝙧𝙤𝙠𝙚𝙣.”
I have to say that “Beneath Cruel Fathoms” 🔱 by Adela is the best merfolk book I’ve read so far! It was vivid and beautifully written, it felt like I was in the water. I love the references about Norse mythology, and how it perfectly balances mystery and drama! The characters were well written too. They are flawed and broken which I find it relatable and easy for me to deeply connect to them.
One of the best things about this book is how it showed that valuing oneself is important, that flaws, past, and circumstances won't define who we are. Each of us deserved to be loved and treasured.
So when Leonel and Isaura who both were dealing with loneliness, shame and a loss of confidence, finally found comfort and love from each other. I couldn’t help but shed a couple (several) tears!! They deserve the happiness after all the struggles they went through. I really want to give them a hug and protect them from everyone who tries to hurt them. The main characters also kept on having heartfelt convos, and my heart couldn't handle it.🥺💗✨
The romance in this book was really moving and #relationshipgoals 😩 Leonel and Isaura’s relationship truly showed that “Love is a commitment and choice, not a feeling”. It should be a choice to make it work no matter what. If someone wants to be in your life, they will be. They will make it happen.
Overall, this is such an astounding Adult Fantasy book! It's definitely worth re-reading. I'm sad it's underrated bc it deserves more attention as it also tackles themes such as PCOS (struggles of a woman being pregnant) which are rarely seen and focused on in Fantasy genre. 🥺I NEED THE SEQUEL ASAP!!!
— main characters with a dark past
— a story set in the sea 🌊
— a cute and beautiful merman who finds the human world awkward! 🧜🏼♂️😂
— plot twists that left me breathless
— deep familial love
— and a sweet gentle forbidden romance that gave me diabetes 💗
"𝙄 𝙛𝙚𝙚𝙡 𝙡𝙞𝙠𝙚 𝙢𝙮𝙨𝙚𝙡𝙛 𝙖𝙜𝙖𝙞𝙣 𝙬𝙝𝙚𝙣 𝙄'𝙢 𝙬𝙞𝙩𝙝 𝙮𝙤𝙪. 𝙒𝙝𝙚𝙣 𝙬𝙚'𝙧𝙚 𝙩𝙤𝙜𝙚𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙧, 𝙄 𝙙𝙤𝙣'𝙩 𝙛𝙚𝙚𝙡 𝙗𝙧𝙤𝙠𝙚𝙣.”
I have to say that “Beneath Cruel Fathoms” 🔱 by Adela is the best merfolk book I’ve read so far! It was vivid and beautifully written, it felt like I was in the water. I love the references about Norse mythology, and how it perfectly balances mystery and drama! The characters were well written too. They are flawed and broken which I find it relatable and easy for me to deeply connect to them.
One of the best things about this book is how it showed that valuing oneself is important, that flaws, past, and circumstances won't define who we are. Each of us deserved to be loved and treasured.
So when Leonel and Isaura who both were dealing with loneliness, shame and a loss of confidence, finally found comfort and love from each other. I couldn’t help but shed a couple (several) tears!! They deserve the happiness after all the struggles they went through. I really want to give them a hug and protect them from everyone who tries to hurt them. The main characters also kept on having heartfelt convos, and my heart couldn't handle it.🥺💗✨
The romance in this book was really moving and #relationshipgoals 😩 Leonel and Isaura’s relationship truly showed that “Love is a commitment and choice, not a feeling”. It should be a choice to make it work no matter what. If someone wants to be in your life, they will be. They will make it happen.
Overall, this is such an astounding Adult Fantasy book! It's definitely worth re-reading. I'm sad it's underrated bc it deserves more attention as it also tackles themes such as PCOS (struggles of a woman being pregnant) which are rarely seen and focused on in Fantasy genre. 🥺I NEED THE SEQUEL ASAP!!!
July 2, 2019
My Rating: 4.5 Stars!
Humans long thought the merpeople had vanished, but when a freak storm sends Isaura into the raging sea, and the ship she was on into a million pieces, one merman will risk exposure to save her life, knowing he is breaking all of the laws of his underwater kingdom.
Together they will unravel the ugly truth behind the mysterious storms that have caused death and destruction on the Failock Sea. Little did they realize the treachery they would uncover. Nor could they know how right they would be together after all of the pain of their pasts.
There is someone for everyone, everyone deserves to feel good about themselves and being “different” doesn’t make someone “less.” A lovely tale of two souls finally finding exactly where their heart belongs, Anela Deen’s BENEATH CRUEL FATHOMS is a well-told fantasy that will leave readers smiling! Ms. Deen has created a fantasy world that comes to life and scenes that welcome readers into each one. If you like a sweet romance between two beings who look beyond their differences and give each other the support they need, this is it!
I received a complimentary copy from Anela Deen!
Trilogy: The Bitter Sea - Book 1
Publisher: Fine Fables Press (May 17, 2019)
Publication Date: May 17, 2019
Genre: Romantic Fantasy
Print Length: 365 pages
Available from: Amazon
For Reviews, Giveaways, Fabulous Book News, follow: http://tometender.blogspot.com
Humans long thought the merpeople had vanished, but when a freak storm sends Isaura into the raging sea, and the ship she was on into a million pieces, one merman will risk exposure to save her life, knowing he is breaking all of the laws of his underwater kingdom.
Together they will unravel the ugly truth behind the mysterious storms that have caused death and destruction on the Failock Sea. Little did they realize the treachery they would uncover. Nor could they know how right they would be together after all of the pain of their pasts.
There is someone for everyone, everyone deserves to feel good about themselves and being “different” doesn’t make someone “less.” A lovely tale of two souls finally finding exactly where their heart belongs, Anela Deen’s BENEATH CRUEL FATHOMS is a well-told fantasy that will leave readers smiling! Ms. Deen has created a fantasy world that comes to life and scenes that welcome readers into each one. If you like a sweet romance between two beings who look beyond their differences and give each other the support they need, this is it!
I received a complimentary copy from Anela Deen!
Trilogy: The Bitter Sea - Book 1
Publisher: Fine Fables Press (May 17, 2019)
Publication Date: May 17, 2019
Genre: Romantic Fantasy
Print Length: 365 pages
Available from: Amazon
For Reviews, Giveaways, Fabulous Book News, follow: http://tometender.blogspot.com
July 13, 2020
Doesn't friendship feed the soul? We all need people in our lives we can count on, including those we only know for a season. Even if someone isn't in your life forever, the time you knew them can change everything.
Beneath Cruel Fathoms is an uplifting tale of courage and self-reflection, set in a world dominated by the crushing pressure of expectation and dangers lurking in the depths. Anela Deen's Fantasy Romance combines the the fantastical elements of mythology with highly relatable, all-too-real elements of the burdens of life, where one's roots are completely irrelevant. An account of a forbidden, delicate love, and a deep tenacity to right wrongs, readers are swept along the tides of a story that touches upon several devastating sentiments, but allows them to breach the surface with moments of respite filled with charming banter and silent introspection. I've been looking forward to reading this book for quite some time, and I'm so glad I've finally gotten the chance.
Deen weaves a compelling mystery where two seemingly independent plot lines converge, creating a high-stakes race for answers as an ancient danger threatens all. Her ability to portray a story with darker aesthetics in a surprisingly light manner is superb, balancing the severity of the approaching menace with moments of refreshing, airy humor. Witty retorts aplenty, the book remains serious when necessary, making this a truly emotional journey to embark on. Told with a simple, yet flowing prose, the narrative paves the way for readers to become deeply invested in the characters as peril closes in on all sides. Filled with twists and turns and unexpected revelations, this is definitely a story that keeps you on the edge of your seat waiting for the answers to reveal themselves.
The exceptional characterization is where this book truly shines. Readers witness the story unfurl through the eyes of Isaura, a human healer, and Leonel, guardian of the sea, by way of alternating chapters. Isaura, suffering the fresh wounds of the past, finds herself on a hunt for resolution, and in turn discovers truths that lie within. Leonel, a mortal child of a goddess torn between the worlds of the finite and the infinite, battles between what he has been taught and what he inherently recognizes. Each face heartbreaking realities in utter solitude. Both find solace in the most unexpected of places. In addition, an excellent supporting cast of characters aid our two leads along their paths in their own contrasting ways, each serving a distinct purpose and perfectly fleshing out this story.
You are not alone.
This is a tale of connection at first sight, followed by a blooming, organic love profound enough to shift the balance. From their initial encounter there's a tender yearning between Isaura and Leonel, one that neither is prepared to contend with. As creatures of two worlds, their passion is one that shouldn't transpire, but their aching hearts pine for a healing salve, and their personal beliefs of being undeserving of happiness are slowly chipped away by patience and trust. The realities they face are shattering, but together, hand-in-hand, they face the uncertainties of the world and triumph.
The atmospheric, Norse-inspired alternate world readers are transported to is vividly illustrated, immersing us in the magic of myth. Indifferent deities, merfolk, draugr, sirens, and old gods populate the sea, while humans remain steadfast on the shores. A clashing of cultures born of old grudges and new grievances is apparent as strife batters the realms, where the fate of all becomes tangled in the silken webs of the immortals. Each setting, from Isaura's quaint family farm to the majestic halls of Aegirheim, holds truths and trinkets to uncover. However, for fear of ruining the experience, I'll leave the nooks and crannies for you to discover on your own.
Beneath Cruel Fathoms is a story of a consuming love crafted to withstand the onslaught of the unknown and overcome the hardships blockading the path to genuine happiness. While the story closes up nicely, a few untied threads and unanswered questions remain for the future of this world, and I'm very much looking forward to continuing my journey in the rest of The Bitter Sea Trilogy. If you're looking for an inspirational tale of unwavering resolve with characters that discover their truest strength along the way, then this may be the one for you. I thoroughly recommend.
Note: A huge thank you to the author for a complementary copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
May 26, 2020
New to me author Anela Deen has totally captivated my attention with this beautiful story. I love Norse mythology and couldn't pass the opportunity to read this book.
The book starts off a bit slow, but the worldbuilding is quite fascinating and I loved all the details about the Norse Gods and the protagonist's backstories. Once the pace picks up it was hard to put the book down, I found myself glued to the pages.
“We aren’t defined only by our failures and sorrows. I’m starting to believe we’re an assortment. A few big events, but countless smaller details."
Isaura and Leonel come from different worlds. He belongs to the sea, the love child of the goddess Ran and a merman, while Isaura is a land dweller, a strong-headed, brave and kind-hearted woman, a healer. But even so, they are similar in many ways. Leonel has always had a chip on his shoulder, being the last of his kind, never knowing much about his people and always wanting to prove himself in the eyes of his mother and king Aegir, but being mistreated by his immortal half-sisters. He feels weak and his insecurities make it hard for him to put his trust in anyone. Both him and Isaura are jaded people, they're souls longing for acceptance and love and the need to put the wellbeing of others before themselves. The dire circumstances in which they meet force them to work together to unravel a plot that threatens to destroy both the land and the sea and the more time they spend together the more they seem to be drawn to each other. The connection they share is unlike anything they've experienced before, and both of them know that when the quest is over it will be very hard to say goodbye.
“A gift, even a temporary one, is treasured all the more because it cannot be kept.”
The worldbuilding was well balanced, giving enough details to paint a clear picture of the human world and the world under the sea, but not to many as to become overwhelming. I loved how Lonel interacted with the creatures of the Fathoms. The sensory language he used to communicate and even with Isaura, the way he whistled her name, added authenticity to the story. The plot was well developed, surrounded by mystery and angsty moments, with a villain that was always one step ahead and the threat of destruction constantly in play. The protagonists were amazing, their growth throughout the book was beautifully presented and the romantic aspect of their relationship melted my heart. I rooted so hard for them to get a shot at happiness and to experience unconditional love.
“I feel like myself again when I’m with you. When we’re together, I don’t feel broken.”
It's fair to say I enjoyed this book very much and I can't wait for the next book in the series. I highly recommend it.
*Thanks to the author for a free copy in exchange for an honest review.
The book starts off a bit slow, but the worldbuilding is quite fascinating and I loved all the details about the Norse Gods and the protagonist's backstories. Once the pace picks up it was hard to put the book down, I found myself glued to the pages.
“We aren’t defined only by our failures and sorrows. I’m starting to believe we’re an assortment. A few big events, but countless smaller details."
Isaura and Leonel come from different worlds. He belongs to the sea, the love child of the goddess Ran and a merman, while Isaura is a land dweller, a strong-headed, brave and kind-hearted woman, a healer. But even so, they are similar in many ways. Leonel has always had a chip on his shoulder, being the last of his kind, never knowing much about his people and always wanting to prove himself in the eyes of his mother and king Aegir, but being mistreated by his immortal half-sisters. He feels weak and his insecurities make it hard for him to put his trust in anyone. Both him and Isaura are jaded people, they're souls longing for acceptance and love and the need to put the wellbeing of others before themselves. The dire circumstances in which they meet force them to work together to unravel a plot that threatens to destroy both the land and the sea and the more time they spend together the more they seem to be drawn to each other. The connection they share is unlike anything they've experienced before, and both of them know that when the quest is over it will be very hard to say goodbye.
“A gift, even a temporary one, is treasured all the more because it cannot be kept.”
The worldbuilding was well balanced, giving enough details to paint a clear picture of the human world and the world under the sea, but not to many as to become overwhelming. I loved how Lonel interacted with the creatures of the Fathoms. The sensory language he used to communicate and even with Isaura, the way he whistled her name, added authenticity to the story. The plot was well developed, surrounded by mystery and angsty moments, with a villain that was always one step ahead and the threat of destruction constantly in play. The protagonists were amazing, their growth throughout the book was beautifully presented and the romantic aspect of their relationship melted my heart. I rooted so hard for them to get a shot at happiness and to experience unconditional love.
“I feel like myself again when I’m with you. When we’re together, I don’t feel broken.”
It's fair to say I enjoyed this book very much and I can't wait for the next book in the series. I highly recommend it.
*Thanks to the author for a free copy in exchange for an honest review.
May 23, 2019
Isaura is travelling home after her marriage fell apart. While crossing the sea back to Eisland, the ship is torn apart and she is the only survivor. As she is on the brink of death, Leonel discovers her while investigating the recent storms and shipwrecks. He is convinced they are unnatural and sinister and is determined to find out who is behind them.
Leonel is the guardian of the fathoms, mortal and half merman, the last of his kind. The laws of the fathoms say he is forbidden to save Isaura but she is his only chance to find out more about the storms.
I found the book a little bit too romancey for me but that's just my own taste and I think it was quite well done, not too soppy. I really want to know more about the merfolk and what happened to them. Hopefully in book 2!
Leonel is the guardian of the fathoms, mortal and half merman, the last of his kind. The laws of the fathoms say he is forbidden to save Isaura but she is his only chance to find out more about the storms.
I found the book a little bit too romancey for me but that's just my own taste and I think it was quite well done, not too soppy. I really want to know more about the merfolk and what happened to them. Hopefully in book 2!
May 20, 2019
First in a Norse-like epic fantasy series, BENEATH CRUEL FATHOMS features as protagonist Isaura, a Healer, who has set sail for a distant land after the sudden unexpected dissolution of her marriage. Unfortunately, this is a time of multiple dangerous tempests on the sea, as never before known, and the ship capsizes, all crew lost. Rescued by the last of the merfolk, Isaura joins with Leonel to uncover the truth behind these terribly dangerous storms. Part fairy tale, part fantasy, all delight.
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