I love these books I read all 37 in like 2 1/2 weeks because I loved them so much. I got super sad when I saw this book because I thought you ended the series but then I realized it was just new. Please keep writing i love your books so much!
Ummmmmm. What do I even say? First of all, I wanna point out that the whole book was fighting. I'm not saying it's a bad thing, just a first for the series. (I think). Well, ok, who was wondering what happened to the normal villagers during the fight? Any one? They were underground, right? But like every single piece of dirt or grass was destroyed. So what happened to dem. Ok onto the book. [SPOILER ALERT]
1. Will Steve actually die now? How could he survive that explosion from the juggernaut? If so who is going to take his place? 2. Who else wants to know what the boss monster is behind the fog giving orders to the juggernauts. 3. Let's just give STN a clap and a half for this series. He has come so far and so have we as a community (minus the haters).
----------Ideas---------- 1. The monster behind the fog is the real Dr. Zion, just be used his genetic science to make him bigger, better, faster, stronger (initiate the beats) 2. Mods 3. Command blocks 4. Joe comes back from the dead in Creative mode cause its time he came back into the series and it's time for Creative mode. 5. Cole makes tnt guns. -------------------------
To be honest, I made this comment more on the emotional side because I feel all the comments out there are all funny and bright, which is a good thing most of the time, but I think an emotional one just would feel good to read. Well, it's been real, see you at the next book. 🐼MysticPanda🐼
Hi I think your book was awesome big time!!! Awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hiiiiii this book was awesome once again and I have 3 ideas for the next book Ideas 1.Steve survived but hurt 2.they use the laser cannon 3.my leg heals Summery Sorry no spoilers Fav review list 1.TheDragoniteX 2.DawsonAwesome 3.no one for now Well that's basically all bye
Review: Ok.. But needs work. This book felt really rushed. Never rush a book, dont listen to those "needs to come out faster" fans/haters. Take your time. Cuz the more time you take, the more you'll think about the book. Also, it'll have more detail. Books are better when there not rushed. =/
Complaints: 1: reels rushed. 2: to many characters!! Theres so many random characters your adding. Like Betty/Bethy (forgot name, too many characters to keep track). Theres so many random people all over the place it's hard to keep track on whos who and whats happening. Just focus on the main/important characters please. 3: too much happening. So much is going on in one moment. Maybe make it less chaotic?
Tips: 1: make less chaotic- like i said. 2: less random characters- like i said. 3: Talk like, normal, these days. Example: when someone in 'the now' would say: "what's up" but instead your people talk like: "what is up". Maybe fix that? Most readers like to feel like the stories happening in the present. It's just weird. 4: Slow down the tech! So.. Lasers? Really? I mean.. TV hasn't been invented yet. But lasers have? 5: I agree with some people. This book is becoming non-minecraft. Lasers but no pistons? Come on.. I like, how pizza exists. Thats ok, a small thing from real life. But your adding WAY too much human stuff. And human beings, in real life, havent even figured out how to alter DNA!! How can these people? Keep it minecraft. 6: too many details one minute.. Not enough the next. Like, one minute when he hit the juggernaut's hand. There was too much detail that made my head spin. Instead you coulda put "i leaped into the air, twirling upside down. As the juggernauts hand hit, i slammed my diamond destroyer into it. The impact knocked the monster over". I dont know.. The way you put it, it was really complicated. 7: check grammar. Yes, my grammar isnt that good, but i have a acception being a 6-11 year old. Not saying my age for safety reasons. Anyway. You do have some spelling mistakes. Maybe proof read more?? 8: More realistic pictures. In minecraft, theres no black void behind you.. Unless you do the see settings thingy in the flat land map. I take the black void thing back. Lol.
Well, thats all for this review! From your loyal girl-fan, dogwolflover826! 😎🐺🐩🐶🐕
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This is one of my favorite book series O already red this series twice and I always an exited for any new books if you like Minecraft i suggest you read this series.
I would've rated this 5 🌠s but it doesn't deserve 5 bcuz u put a stupid CLIFFHANGER!!! I HATE CLIFFHANGERS!!! NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO!!! WHY!?!?!?