This was just really bad. The dialogue is so unnatural. The “suspense” isn’t that interesting. There was a lot of unnecessary information - including lengthy outfit descriptions, what and when they ate, and several paragraphs that were essentially just, “At 8:30, she curled up with a novel. At 10:00, she blew out the candle and climbed into bed. She went to so-and-so’s office, but learned nothing and walked down Main St., took a left onto 7th. Ave, walked a few blocks, and then turned right to enter the hotel.”
Some of the dialogue was literally like:
“Thank you, kind sir.”
“You’re welcome, ma’am. You’re beautiful and smart.”
“Thanks for the compliment. You’re handsome and smart.”
“Thanks.”
“I’m going to leave now. Sleep well.”
“You, too.”
“Goodbye, kind sir.”
“Goodbye.”
Steam level was very low. I didn’t really care for or like any of the characters. And we find out Ben was guilty (not a big surprise) but then there’s only a few pages where he’s actually there, and then he gets killed. Like, what was the point? I also found the scene where Maggie finds the cabin very hard to believe - a psychopathic gunslinger who has killed men for looking at him wrong just lets her babble on forever? Okay then.
This was the first Janelle Taylor book I’ve read. Overall, not impressed.