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166 pages, Paperback
First published October 1, 1995
Rejane looked back at him with her unchanging, almost black eyes, in which no expression was legible, although she was watching him with a new interest. Strange how he suddenly seemed to have come alive, thrown off some repressive burden. This sudden emergence of intensity and imagination, in conjunction with his solid, manly good looks, was surprising and totally unforeseen. His face, animated now, had that touch of seriousness that had so captivated the army wives- she too found it attractive.
People looked into his compartment and then hurried on, frightened off by some emanation of loneliness enclosing him like a capsule—the loneliness of one who has gone beyond time and reality—which made them nervous, without knowing why, so that they kept away.It's here in the final chapter where I felt that Kavan excelled the most and came closest to some of her best work. Yet it ultimately wasn't near enough to place this one among my favorites of hers.
The train started. Sitting quite still and passive, unthinking, Oswald let it carry him back to the small town where he had left the car, got out here, and went into the streets.
It was lunch-time, there were few people about. Those he saw were like dream people, utterly disconnected from him. Yet it was he who felt shadowy beside them — they were solid with life. He vaguely wondered if they could see him, feeling like he passed like a shadow, outside their world, and alone. Where was he? What had happened to him? He'd never been like this before. But he was getting used to it and didn't mind. He thought no more about his feelings, or about anything. His consciousness seemed to have left him and gone on somewhere else.
Surely he deserved something, after the years of exile? Something of the dream that had touched him when the soldiers sang in the brief moment before the night, and the smoke rose in straight lines, diaphanous, pungent, into the cloudless sky?The characters are respectable pieces of writing as well. Kavan explicitly lays out the characterization of Oswald the old-fashioned, chivalrous army officer without an ounce of introspection, and Rejane, a rich and beautiful woman who sees herself as a royal enchantress, but it’s effective despite this—you can tell instead of show, so long as you tell interestingly—and excusable in such a short work (it’s not even a hundred pages long, even if all the editions here list 166). That being said, the characterizations aren’t entirely consistent, for instance Kavan describes Oswald as warm-hearted at one point when the preceding pages beg to differ. They’re mostly nits, though, and ones I bet Kavan would have done away with if she had desired to polish this work.
"In the morning, instead of coming fully awake as usual, in bugle, he woke reluctantly, climbing laboriously and against his will out of the dark gulf where he had lain without moving the whole night long. If only he need not wake but could remain there, ignorant and innocent, as he'd been in his sleep! But it was no use wishing, already he was back again in his life. Before he'd even opened his eyes, he felt the events of yesterday lying in wait for him. He remembered, and pressed his eyelids together to shut out the light, unwilling to face the shame of existing." (85)
Suddenly a soldier's automatic awareness of weather conditions made him look out the window. A peculiar blanching and blurring process was obscuring the light outside. The sun was paling, a curious dimming was everywhere apparent, a pallor was diffusing itself into the air, smudging the shapes and stealing the colours of the garden flowers. Eclipsed to a pale lamp, the sun suddenly went out altogether; the cliff withdrew from sight. Only a few of the flowers in the foreground still floated, dim and derealized, colourless ghosts of themselves,in the thick white mists billowing up from the invisible water, which could be heard softly sucking and smacking the rocks below. (p.20)
So she was disconcerted to see, straight above them, the hoary grey head of rock, thrust into and filling the sky. Taking her by surprise, the bare upheaval of naked granite, grim and overwhelming in its immensity and nearness, had a strong effect on her imagination. She'd never been close to one of the tors; and, to her surprised eyes, there was something extraordinary about the huge knot of pale, up-ended stones, towering aggressively just overhead, like a fortress, excluding the sun. (p.31)
Suddenly, as she looked, the valley sank out of sight, all its toylike brightness put out as the sun disappeared and the lumpish tors heaved themselves up all around it in startling significance, huge and uncanny, the gloomy dark masses of moorland standing out menacingly. (p.47)