Sun Serpent

Sun Serpent Saga #1

by Geneva Monroe

A cursed kingdom.
A Fire Singer seeking vengeance.
And a prince who is not what he seems…

Under the silks of her circus troupe’s tent, Elyria Solaris dances with fire. She disguises her gift as showmanship, but longs for answers about why she has a power no one else possesses.

Somewhere in the city of never-ending night, Prince Cal is looking for the girl who burns the brightest. Only she can stop the horror inflicted on his kingdom by a sadistic lord who controls the minds of his victims.

When Cal spies Elyria, he knows without a doubt that she is the most beautifully dangerous thing he has ever seen. More importantly, she’s the Fire Draken he’s been waiting his whole life to find.

Moments after Cal serendipitously enters Elyria’s life, a loved one’s gruesome death sets her on the path of vengeance. Cal will do anything to protect his people, including lying to Elyria about who he really is and promising her the answers that she seeks.

But if Elyria trusts the undeniable spark between them, could it turn out to be the one fire she is unable to tame?

Genres: Fantasy, Romantasy, Dragons, Fantasy Romance, Romance, Magic, New Adult

464 pages, Kindle Edition

Published March 10, 2023

About the author

Most days, you can find Geneva wandering the streets of her small colonial town or snuggling up beside a fire with her husband, son, and two cats. No matter the location, she probably has a book in one hand and a macchiato in the other.

Reviews

[Maddie Fisher · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is everything you want from a fantasy romance! Hidden identities, insane powers, a quest-like journey, forced proximity, monstrous creatures, and increasingly high stakes!

The setting and characters were so solid. I felt invested and enjoyed the circus troupe setting so much. I liked that the FMC was capable and confident. I loved the shameless flirtation of the MMC. I thought the plot was solid, but I struggled a bit with pacing. This is usually the case when the reader knows more than the main character, and for most of the book, we’re waiting for her to find out what we know. I have high hopes that book two won’t have this problem, since we’re now all on the same page! I love a good twist, and this book couldn’t really shock us, because we knew so much from Callen’s perspective.

The quality of writing here was great! I was completely sucked into the story without being pulled out for awkward, cringey, or technically poor prose.

Great first installment for a series! World-building, magic system, and character romance is all established, and I love it. So excited for Star Spear!

[Courtney · Rating 2 out of 5]

Eh. This was mostly fine, but I quickly became annoyed with how this story was progressing. First, the blurb is misleading. I expected to hear a lot more about the kingdom and the villain and our prince and fire singer's quests for revenge, but we don't. What we learn in the first couple chapters is all we learn throughout the whole book. We still have no idea who the villain really is, what his goals and motivations are, or even his relationship with the prince. This story is really just our main trio traveling to a nearby city. There is no true depth to the story. And there is no progression in their relationships. It's lust and childish flirting from their very first interaction. There were no deep and meaningful moments that developed their relationships. We're meant to believe they're in love by the end, but they've only known each other a few weeks and they flirted like immature teenagers the whole time. The reveal at the end was the most disappointing part. What El knew didn't even make sense. While it fixed a couple plot holes, it created a lot more and doesn't explain the way she acted throughout most of the book. The world building was also terrible. I still don't understand who or what the draken are or why they're persecuted. The few explanations we get throughout the book are pretty flimsy. I don't care enough about these characters or this world to read the next book. But this isn't a one star rating because I didn't truly hate it and it has potential.

[Sam | Haus of Fables · Rating 5 out of 5]

THIS WAS INCREDIBLE!
What a fantastic debut novel ~ this single-handedly got me out of my reading slump.
It gave me the feeling of never wanting the book to end, wanting to consume it in every waking moment & not being able to stop thinking about the characters & plot when I wasn’t reading it.

From the description I knew it was probably going to be a book I would enjoy, but it was an absolute breath of fresh air!
From the descriptions of the unique towns & lush landscape, the world felt vivid & believable.
There was action & adventure (great fight scenes)
Found family & laughter,
Loss, heartache & vengeance,
Delicious slow burn romance that leaves you wanting more,
Secrets & betrayal
This has Dragons, towns in eternal night, & a darkness creeping over the land.
A story that has me hooked!

The FMC is strong & capable from the very beginning. She has a fiery personality that is quick to protect what is hers, hell bent on revenge, but is also able to show her vulnerable side.
The MMC is infuriating in all the best ways. Sarcastic & arrogant but also funny. He notices what the FMC needs, a reassuring hand by her side or a sinful distraction & he is there to provide.
I loved the dual pov & I would call the dynamic - FMC grumpy / MMC sunshine

The only reasons this wasn’t a 5 star read for me was 2 things.
1. I noticed I was missing internal dialogue from the FMC. Which made me question why she was doing certain things. This was revealed at the end of the book, & I can now understand why it was written this way. But I think it takes an experienced writer to be able to write hidden aspects of the story from the reader—that the main POV character knows about—without making the reader feel like they are missing out on key information & questioning why the character is making the decisions they are.
2. Magic - I didn’t get enough information on how the magic system worked. Or when the FMC was learning knew things it was skipped over & she could just do it. I wish that had been fleshed out a bit more.

Overall 4.75 ⭐️ 1 🌶️ & I can’t wait to pick up book 2!

[Kristen Christen · Rating 4 out of 5]

I really enjoyed reading this book. Going on an adventure with new found friends and making more along the way was just fun! The romantic and steamy scenes were well done and left me wanting more in book 2. I think it ended perfectly leaving me anxious to jump into book two!

[Delightfully · Rating 4 out of 5]

4.5 ⭐ A breathtakingly beautiful, expertly crafted world. I am floored. FLOORED. That this is a debut novel. Book 2 in the series, Star Spear releases August 11, 2023. Geneva Monroe paints masterpieces with words. She is easily one of the most descriptive writers I've ever read, invoking not only images, but true emotion in her writing. I'll never look at a willow the same way again. This was a BookTok recommendation promising a strong FMC, and it did not disappoint.

"What?" she said with a smile and a little shrug. "Some men need to be reminded that all women aren't prey."

The side quest of your dreams...
While the majority of the action is backloaded into the end of the book, there is a good cadence of micro-conflicts throughout the rest of the story that keep you engaged.

A colorful cast of characters...
Elyria is a funny, strong, take-no-shit, badass. She owns her sexuality and isn't afraid to speak her mind. Callen is charming, loyal, and kind, but he's hiding a big secret from Ellie...and she can sense it. I'm not a fan of the insta-love trope, which Cal definitely falls into. But the author does an amazing job of building their relationship, and creating intimacy in other ways so it doesn't feel like it's being forced down your throat. And their banter? 🤌💋

“You’re a pig,” I said to him. He smiled and gave a mock bow. “But I’m your pig.” “Does that mean I can shove an apple in your mouth? Maybe then you’ll actually shut up.”

Even more than the MCs, the side characters are INCREDIBLE. From the ostentatious and flamboyant costume designer, Jess. To the boisterous and self-assured troupe leader, Duke. And, even the camp's grandfatherly, long-suffering cook, Gregory. Each one feels fully and completely formed, with their own unique personalities. Through their clothing choices, vernacular, and interactions with other characters, the author meticulously crafts characters who you immediately feel connected to. LGBTQ+ inclusivity is incorporated organically and authentically.

"...family aren’t the people you choose but the people who choose you.

This is a Xoc stan account...
Xaddy. Sorry. But I mean...a big boy, warrior-type with a man bun who likes gardening and cotton candy? Please. I'm weak. Not only does he give Cal endless shit (all of which is deserved) and develops such a great dynamic with Ellie, but he is the source of a lot of world building and information download to us [the reader] through his explanations and conversations. He is hands-down my favorite character. And, I lowkey ship him and Rei, because I think she'd hand him his ass and he'd say, "Thank you." But even if they don't get together, I could see them being such close friends.

"You plant-loving fuckhead! How is this not cheating?"

4.5 ⭐: This was SO close to being 5-stars. Ultimately, I was hoping for a little more movement on the central plot throughout (though I very much enjoyed the ride). And, I like my MMCs with a little more backbone.

1.5 🌶️: The majority of this book doesn't get much raunchier than a Magic Mike Vegas show - some nudity, flirting, and grinding. But honestly, I didn't miss the spice. It fit the narrative and didn't overtake the plot.

• Found Family
• Ancient Magic Systems
• Shapeshifters / Dragons
• Single Bed Trope
• Insta-Love (then slow-burn)
• Hilarious Best Friend
• V!olence
• Elemental Magic
• LGBTQ+ Representation

[Lindsey_reads_books · Rating 5 out of 5]

I loved this book! 5 stars from me. I was completely invested just from chapter one. Right after I finished it and I immediately added book 2 to my Kindle Unlimited.

I love the writing and story.
The banter and flirting were perfect
The slow burn 'chef's kiss' 🔥❤️
The world was fun and magical
Elyria kicked ass!
Xoc is the best side character, loved him!

[Erica · Rating 4 out of 5]

I received this ARC in exchange for my honest review.... and it did not disappoint.

I was slightly worried about the beginning, but true to fantasy, there is a lot of world and character building. But I promise you're going to want to hold on to your pants because it's about to be a wild ride.

For fans of From Blood and Ash and The 10th Kingdom, this one will have you feeling allllll the emotions from the bad ass, fire throwing FMC to the angsty love interest. The draken are sure to set your pants on fire.

On a more serious note, there is just so much to this book that I can't unpack in a review because it's just that good, and I can't wait for book 2.

[Collette · Rating 4 out of 5]

I really enjoyed this! Interesting world & magic system. Very slow burn. Things didn't really start to pick up alot until towards the end, but was steady pacing. But I did like how she didn't rush Elyria & Cal's relationship. It happened quickly but showed it over time. I loved the banter! I look forward to reading The next one.

[Christy]

It really was interesting and had a lot of good moments. Just wasn't really for me.

[Stephanie · Rating 4 out of 5]

Definitely 4.5! Fantasy is my favorite and this definitely did not disappoint. It has all my favorite tropes and Elyria is the STRONG and AWESOME FMC. Could not turn the pages fast enough.. until the cliffhanger!! Ready for book two!

[Ashley · Rating 2 out of 5]

The good:
Very cool world 🌎
Fun magic structure ✨
Political intrigue 🐉
Lots of comedic relief 🎭

Tropes-
Found family
Forced proximity
Slow burn
Prince in disguise

The bad:
FMCs only personality trait seems to be "punches everyone who speaks to her." She's just a mean girl with a huge over inflated ego.
I LOVE a badass FMC who can hold her own.. but this girl seems to just be mean to everyone except two people. She can throw knives and that's pretty much her only skill.

This was labeled "slow burn" but honestly, it's no burn. He feels a pull to her, but she spends most of the book kicking and punching him whenever he's near enough.

Not a whole lot really happens.. I feel like this 400+ page book could have been condensed into 100 pages and then the rest of the book could be filled in with adventure, slow burn, and plot.

[Laverne · Rating 1 out of 5]

DNF.

Callen is supposed to be several hundred years old but he comes off as a teenager. The novel is advertised as a slow burn but he becomes obsessed with Elyria immediately?? Elyria is "badass" because she can fight men and ... that's it. She's bland and cringey. Not to mention the writing is awkward and disjointed.

[lorenscliterature · Rating 5 out of 5]

The descriptive writing in this book is breathtaking. Imagine being submerged in scenery similar to Game of Thrones with a touch of magic. The people of this world have special talents, there are the attuned and non-attuned, like elementals then there is the dragon marked. I got From Blood And Ash vibes with the dangerous trek across the lands the MFC Elle needs answers and is set on the path of revenge for the murder of her father. The MMC Cal and his best friend Xoc accompany Elle on this journey but Cal has secrets that he's keeping and lying about who he is. This book has it all from adventure to the banter that will hit you right in the giggle dick. The tension is fire a slow burn that leaves you needing the next book asap.

[M M · Rating 5 out of 5]

*full disclosure: I received an ARC of this book.

I love it when there’s a solid FMC. Elyeria is witty, intelligent, and funny. I love the banter between her and Xoc the most, although it’s great with Cal (the MMC) as well.

Throughout the book, you really get to know Elyeria and watch her come to terms with certain things about her past.

I can’t wait to learn more about Cal (hopefully in the second book!) and continue on the journey set before us in this one.

The quote that made me seriously laugh out loud? “It felt like fate looking back at me. My stomach groaned loudly. Strangely, fate felt an awful lot like hunger.”

[Stine Helen · Rating 4 out of 5]

I haven’t giggled that much because of a few characters in a long while. The dynamic between the three main characters is so amazing. So excited for the next book. Also excited to see more of the last addition to the group ⭐️

[Molly Reads · Rating 5 out of 5]

I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.

4.5/5 ⭐️

The Sun Serpent is the first book in the sun serpent saga and the debut novel of Geneva Monroe. This book was phenomenal from start to finish. The pacing of the book was really good and it kept me entertained but what really won me over where the descriptions! They were so good, I didn’t have any major difficulty picturing the scenes and places this book provides us. Also the characters were simply amazing! I loved Elyria, the female main character, she was so strong, witty, funny, fiery, she never backed down from a fight and she knew how to save herself from most situations which was amazing. I love a main character that can stand up for herself and others. I loved her banter and conversations with Xoc since he is my favorite character of this book. I liked Cal but Xoc simply stole my heart from the start. The story was also supper interesting and I loved the world building and the lore of this book. Geneva Monroe truly wrote an amazing book and I absolutely recommend this book. I cannot wait to continue this series and see the characters again.

[Allison · Rating 5 out of 5]

I loved this book! Zoc was so interesting, and Elyria is amazing!Cal was funny, hot, a bit secretive and so loyal. The worms were nasty, and I freaked out a bit towards the end worrying about Elyria. I can’t wait for the next one!

[Lacey Mudd · Rating 1 out of 5]

DNF this one technically. Every single one of my book pet peeves is in this book, haha.

[Mumen Reader · Rating 2 out of 5]

First off, the worldbuilding is very rich, the world feels lived in and while not being the most unique design, that's not exactly a flaw.

“I could show you the grottos along the coast and how the black cliffs glitter pink at sunrise.”

“The Guardians Bridge at sunset, when the sunlight reflects off of the polished marble to make the statues look like they are walking on fire.”

His face softened, and I saw the first glimmer of something genuine in his eyes. It drew me in, snaring me completely as he continued.

"the river that flows through the palace. It crashes from the downspouts, filling the surrounding air with rainbows. The best view is from the ocean, as you approach from the south, where waterfalls frame the crystal windows of the main ballroom. There is singularly no place more beautiful."

Worldbuilding done through character interaction will always get praise. Cal is being truthful and open to her, his feelings come through and draw Ellie in. I know, shocker, when you're open with others they tend to connect with you more.


Much in the same way, Gregory's story of how he found Ellie is told not out of nowhere, but in a moment when he knows Duke's gonna die, so

“And sweet girl, from that moment, you had his heart forever. He loved you from the start, you know.”

"He named you that night. Elyria Solaris, you are his sun.”

he wants her to know the truth. It also makes sense why Duke never told her, since it's quite the tragic story and hiding it with some fantastical stories feeds better a child's imagination, while keeping her sheltered from the dangerous truth.

Even the bedtime story right before Duke dies is told to re-evoke the feeling they had growing up, while being a good way of telling her how her name came to be AND informs us on the lore of this world.

"Once a generation, the fates grace the world with a baby who carries the magic and bears the mark of the Ancient Gold Dragon.”

I like the details of the world making it come to life, like the procedures to register Duke's death, or the colored fruits they play fight with, or the bioluminescent plancton, or the way the Steps are carved with different kinds of stairs. They all come together to show the author cares about the world and shows it to us in the best way: having characters interact with it (Ellie can't seem to stop touching stuff, Cal wanting to explore the cave, Xoc creating plants...). Thought i'm not entirely clear on what exactly is the reason for Laluna's eternal night, or why did they need to go towards the Steps, when they're not in the way between Laluna and Suman. Also some of the relevant details are dropped in just at the time they are needed, like the rings from Duke and his wife, Ellie's like "oh by the way I always played with these rings" and takes them off of his corpse moments before burning him. It's pretty clear she will marry with these on, so maybe we could spare one more page to set them up as a very important thing before they became relevant? I mean, we use three on the costumier that never comes up again so...


The plot starts strong balancing the more goal driven Cal chapters with Ellie's POV, who take much more time interacting with other non relevant characters and exploring the world (both of which make sense since she's not yet on a quest). Duke's death is handled in a very thorough way, investing a proper amount of time showing the different stages of grief and always keeping a reminder of it in the back of Ellie's head even after a while, this shows us he's not just backstory, but a relevant part of the story, one which informs her decisions and affects her moods, often forcing Cal to interveene and thus stimulating their bond.

That said, and while i did enjoy they playful banter and flirting in the wild, i have to say we kinda lose the plot after we start travelling. Yes I get it, the world is wonderful and i never really got the feeling the story was dragging it's feet, since author wisely keeps the hiking trip in a funny/flirty tone at almost all times, however by the time we hit the finale it kinda seemed like we lost a lot of time, i could be fine with it if there were another hundred of pages dedicated to progressing the plot, but right now the climax seemed to be just as random as the previous encounters with the worms or the bandits, speaking of which, that bit contained the most jarring part of pacing of the book. Why did we stop mid fight with the bandits to talk about the first time Elle killed a man (with so many details it reads like a third person narration rather than a recollection from the POV character) while Cal is still fighting? Why did we need that? Wasn't she worried about him? Didn't she hear him screaming?

Regarding the romance part of the plot, while i generally don't like the fated mates (which they essentially are), I expecially don’t like it when there's no "in story" need for it, they don't need to speak into each other's mind, they don't need to share their powers or to sense each other, it's just there for the physical attraction and thus kinda spoils the charm of both sides, since you're always left wondering how much each of them is charming in their own right and how much is it because of the magic pull, of which, i remind everyone, Ellie is still not aware of , yes she knows about him being the other fire draken, no she doesn't know their connection is magical (thought it's hinted she may actually be the Diamond Draken instead). The main problem this bond creates is highlighted in the night at Joseph's where she clearly knows Cal is keeping something from her and is angry at him, then as soon as they touch she's out of control, same thing happens at the end when he comes clean about being the fire Draken: how can we feel the weight of the drama if they both can fix the other's angry mood by just touching them?

It took nearly a year for the caning to be replaced and the colored glass to be recast. For weeks I’d ran to the gallery to see if it had been fixed, and each time I left feeling empty
But one day, the last piece was placed, and the image was made whole. That was what Elyria wrapped in my arms felt like.

I like that we take our time with this. Giving us a tiny bit of backstory that helps us connect with the characters, thought it tires illustrating feelings more complicated thab "we fit together", it unfortunately still comes down to it. Still, I like that we take the time to tell each other about what house we would like to live in and similar small character building details.



As far as characters go, we kinda lose Ellie about halfway through the story: she is a much different character the first two or three times Cal meets her, then after the bath in the river she kind of loses her edge and mostly turns into the standard plain romantasy FMC who thinks velvet worms are cute and makes baby noises at them, likes cottage life, is good with kids, needs emotional support to do the administrative procedure for Duke's inheritance and is scared of a rollercoaster ride, then feels betrayed when the prince who was clearly hinding things hides things, only to run back into his arms at the first chance (by the way, having a "I knew all along" reveal when half of the book is in her first person POV feels like cheating, if we see her thoughts we should have known).

Let me prove what i'm saying: when Duke gets cursed, she's very much in control of the situation, despite her father being at death's door she makes arrangements for her friend to get a healer and for Duke's body to be moved, she doesn't allow herself to crumble with anyone around

“Everyone out!” I yelled. Della rose her chin in defiance. “Out!” I repeated. This time, my voice growled with command.

A tear crept down my cheek, and I wiped it away with the back of my other hand. This wasn’t the time to break. It was the time to fight.

And only lets herself cry when she's alone and it's very clear he won't make it.

Hearing Cal address the group was my undoing. He was muffled by the door, but with that last comment about strength in the morning, the tether on my composure finally slipped.

It's not that she doesn't have feelings, it's that she controls them most of the time, much in the same way she's attracted to Cal but still manages to "play" with him, at least at the beginning.

On the contrary, when she's registering Duke's death she's a complete mess

Before long, Albert would run out of money to support the troupe, and he needed every coin. But in this moment it felt like standing before that pyre all over again. For all my bravado, I could not make myself ascend the stairs. The pain was fresh and raw. It was too much to bear, and I could feel myself cracking beneath the weight of it.

I stopped at the heavy doors, bracing both hands on them. My heart was thumping, and it was hard to catch my breath. I couldn’t tell if it was my nerves, my climb up the steps, or Cal’s proximity, but I needed a second to compose myself before pulling them open. I leaned forward, resting my head against my hands.

and relies way more on Cal, despite this being a less stressful situation, which is not exactly edificating for their relationship (aren't you meant to strenghten each other? She seems weaker by herself and only strong when she's with Cal now).

Her "temptress" act also slips away more and more as the story goes on, to the point I don’t think she even enjoyed doing it at all, since she just stops it.

Lastly, regarding the crew, this was a bit jarring

“I don’t think the troupe has anything for me here without him. I love them, especially Gregory and the twins, but I can’t stay here. They don’t need me, not really. It was always Duke who needed me, not them.

??? But..you said yourself the Troupe was your responsibility, remember?

Truth was, this troupe had been my responsibility for years now. He knew that. We all did. I had accepted this fate long ago. What I wanted didn’t matter. The troupe came first, because it had to.

Chapter 8

“I’m not going to stay here pretending nothing happened while some unknown evil picks off the troupe one by one. I will die before I see another person I love cursed.”

This is a much better reason to leave



Cal is better for sure, he seems to strenghten his character as the story goes on, finding more and more of a foothold with Ellie, courtesy of her doing a bunch of stupid shit and the bond acting like a drug. I don’t know what people mean when they say he's manipulative and calculating, he's not, he's just not that at all. He simply doesn't tell Ellie a bunch of stuff because he doesn't want to lose her. The rest of the time he's a puppet acting for his testosterone addicted brain who forces him to relentlessly go after Ellie and challenge Xoc at every turn. On a smaller scale, we get some details about him that are a bit contraddicting, like how he's really into exploring the caves...but is scared of bugs, like dude, what do you think is in the caves? Lots of bugs, which you can't even see and they could be on the ceeling crawling down to your head. This is the mirror of Ellie being scared of the rollercoaster despite being an acrobat. Also

“Just me and my haunting memories to keep me company.”

You are one edgy kid


Xoc I'm mostly fine with, the idea of the gentle giant is a tried and tested one, his love for plants, bugs cotton candy and his blush at anything sexy Ellie does, contrasted with his deadpan humor and willingness to rise to any challenge Cal throws at him are nice touches that make up for a well rounded character. Though he seems more of a prop to break the tension between Cal and Ellie than an actual character, he does his job pretty well managing to maintain the lighter tone for the hiking trip. That said him seemingly being "manlier" than Cal kind of flies out the window after they get to Joseph's and he goes from passing out compeltely drunk, to hangover, to drug induced up excitement, all used for comedic relief at his expense, then floats to the background during the climax and mostly stays silent.

The supporting cast has a thing for each of them that makes them unique and almost none is a boring caricature, for example, Duke being a womanizer feeds into his particular bond with Ellie as this complicated mix of father/daughter but still "friends who can hang out" thing. If they were a straight up blood family it would be weird to see him flirting with different women all the time, expecially in Ellie's face. However them being clear on their relationship (she calls him "Duke", not "father") unlocks his flirty side as well as "forcing" Ellie to stand on her own two feet from a very young age, meaning she develops her own strong personality.

Another example is Macie, who is not only just "happy-go-lucky sunshine girl" but also likes attention and is very flirt oriented in her own right, she is very close to the mix of Cora and Sophie i advocated for in the Blood and Salt serie.

Best of the bunch is probably Gregory

"I don’t think someone becomes the person they are meant to be until the moment independence is thrust upon them.”

Chad old man, he should be the leader of the troupe, I don’t know why he isn't. He's the first to rise, takes care of everyone and he's the father figure of Duke, who was the previous leader.

The Villain is, as far as this book goes, a caricature. I don’t know if this is the actual character he's gonna be or if this is all just for show, i can only speak on what was shown here.


As far as Themes go, there isn't much to say yet. The plot not really getting much done doesn't offer much in terms of choices so the arcs are kind of stopped at a midpoint. No, i will not excuse it because this is the first book, you can have multiple arcs in a serie, you can have your characters failing their trials as the end of a book, clearly highlighting where they went wrong, you can have them succeed and still be wrong (let's say they did a bad thing to win, which will come to bite their asses later).

We could , for example, have this be the book where Ellie learns to trust others, going past her mask of flirty temptress which was there just to hide her mistrust of strangers. Instead it just...slips away, despite her already not trusting Cal completely since she knows he's hiding his identity and motives. Kind of, we had the starting and end point of the arc and we missed the journey in between. There's few things holding this back from a three star rating and i feel this is the main one.

[KMart Vet · Rating 4 out of 5]

Sun Serpent is a delightful romance fantasy that immerses readers in a world filled with magic, dragons, and a growing threat. The story follows Elyria, a fire dancer with hidden power, and Prince Cal, who is searching for the fire draken who can save his people from a sadistic enemy who can mind-control others.

The world-building in this book is wonderful, and captures the imagination with its intricate details and descriptions. The author takes time to establish the setting and introduces the exciting magical abilities of the draken, creating a rich backdrop for the story. The magic system is a highlight of the book, and the author's vivid descriptions bring it to life. The wildlife, cities, and world-building are expertly crafted.

The heart of the book lies in the developing relationship between Elyria and Cal. Their connection is palpable with yearning, and the slow-burn romance kept me engaged and rooting for them both. Cal is perfection and I love his supportive nature. The friendship between the characters, particularly with the steadfast Xoc, adds depth and humor. The inclusion of the circus troupe and the theme of found family adds an extra layer of charm to the narrative, creating a sense of warmth and camaraderie. The exploration of grief is poignant and adds emotional weight to the story.

However, it should be noted that Sun Serpent feels like a setup for the next book in the series, with less action and a stronger focus on the characters' growing relationship. While the major story action is concentrated in the beginning and end, the middle section of the book provides engaging battles and conflicts as the characters embark on their journey. The romance aspect is well-executed, readers seeking more intense plot developments may find themselves wanting.

Overall, Sun Serpent is an enchanting read with compelling characters, a captivating romance, and a well-imagined magical world. It sets the stage for an exciting series, leaving me eagerly anticipating the next installment.

[BookishRaquel · Rating 4 out of 5]

Star Rating: 3.5/5 ⭐
Heat Rating: 2/5 🌶️
Audiobook: 4/5 🎧

What to Expect:
- Romantasy
- Fated Mates
- He Falls First
- Only One Bed
- Slow Burn Romance
- Strong, Badass FMC
- Dual POV

Prince Cal's life changes when he is suddenly attacked at night, making him flee from an unknown enemy who has taken over his homeland. To get his kingdom back, Cal embarks on a journey with his friend Xoc to seek help from an elusive Fire Draken. Enter Elyria Solaris. She is a performer who secretly uses fire magic in her shows, hiding her real powers. She doesn't know where her magic comes from or why she's the only one who has it. Her life changes when she meets Cal and his friend Xoc, leading her to uncover shocking truths about her past. Prince Cal knows Elyria as the Fire Draken he seeks. He is desperate for her help to protect his kingdom, even if that means deceiving her in the process.

This book has some good fantasy elements—great world-building and character development, dragons, shifters, and an intricate magic system. The slow-burn romance between Callen and Elyria, peppered with witty banter and flirtation, was also a highlight. Xoc is a fun side character who makes the story more enjoyable. Although this was a slower read for me, and I didn't like not knowing what was really going on until the last 20% of the story, there was enough emotional depth, humor, and suspense to keep me reading. The story ends with a cliffhanger, so I am interested in knowing where Cal, Elyria, and Xoc's journey leads.

Narration:
Stella Hunter and John Hartley perform this audiobook in duet-style narration. Stella is one of my favorites and did a wonderful job giving a voice to the confident and strong Elyria. John is a new narrator to me. I loved his portrayal of Cal and his struggle to balance his feelings for Elyria and his desire to save his people. Stella and John's performances made this an enjoyable, immersive listening experience.

Thanks to Geneva Monroe, Audibly Addicted, and Must Love Audio for the ALC. Opinions expressed are my own.

[Lisa Lambert · Rating 5 out of 5]

I received this book as an ARC. I was honestly not quite sure what I was getting into and that was the best way to go in. I knew just little bits of what to expect and I loved the journey through this book!
The beginning seemed a bit slow at first because I had no idea what was building. I was confused on who was who and how and why they were coming together. The book ended up being a super easy and enjoyable read. Once things started coming together and moving, about 20% in, the story was amazing and I could not put it down.
I read all the rest since yesterday.
I laughed out loud at the banter between the characters. I love the bad ass FMC and the loving kind hearted MMC. The side characters… Xoc, omg I LOVE him! I am sure I will feel the same way about Rei after her introduction near the end of this book. I judge a book by my connection to the characters, did it make me smile, was I sad to see it end, how eager am I for book 2….
This book was everything I wanted and needed out of a story! So excited for this author to release her debut novel on 3/10 and I can’t wait for book 2 - 8/2023!!! Fantastic job Geneva Monroe!

[Katnip · Rating 5 out of 5]

Geneva Monroe’s debut book, and it’s amazing! I am a sucker for witty banter and not only was there banter with Elyria (FMC) and Cal (MMC) but there was banter with Xoc (Cal’s bff and commander) and Cal. All I’m going to say is…the bicycle race! Hysterical!

The character development and relationship building is superb. I fell in love with these characters immediately. And not just the main characters, but the side characters.

I would call this the perfect book one in a series, the attention getter book. It draws you in. I want to know what happens with the characters. And not just Elyria, Cal, and Xoc, but the whole troupe and Rai. I feel like we haven’t seen the last of the troupe yet 🤞🏻. Also, while we don’t see the big picture yet, Gen hints enough to keep it interesting. Giving us some “history” and back stories that will pull things together as the story goes on. And I’m here for it!!!

[Elizabeth · Rating 5 out of 5]

⭐️ ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ 5/5
Debut novel for Geneva Monroe and wow it is outstanding! I may just be a fan for life. It was so fun to read and the action grabs you from the first page.
I couldn’t put it down.

The magical world she creates hits all the senses and it happens effortlessly. What I wouldn’t give to see the troupe perform or to take nap on a bed of luminescent moss in a glade lit only by the moon.

Elyria is a badass FMC and there is no shortage of witty banter between her and Cal (MMC). But what really got me was Xoc, Cal’s BFF.
Spoilers ahead-

Xoc’s magical attunements (abilities) mean he can sprout wings to fly and talk to plants and animals. What? Yes. Come on that is so freakin cool!!! I am feral for more Xoc.

[Ashley Currier · Rating 5 out of 5]

This book was absolutely amazing! The plot really grabbed me and drove me to finish the book, leaving me wanting more at the end. I was laughing out loud at some parts and at the point of tears during others. I love when I can get the range of emotion during a book.

The slow burn of enemies to lovers in this book is *chefs kiss*. I love that he falls first and HARD, while she is intent on playing everything off. The waterfall scene was 😏 and I hope we get more!!

I cannot wait to see how this continues in her next book, I have many theories and need to know what happens!

[Chelisse Redman · Rating 5 out of 5]

First, this book is beyond fantastic! I have devoured it twice since getting my advanced copy. Monroe really captures the essence of each characters voice in their POV chapter and really makes it feel like you're embodying them.
Second, holy Venterra! This epic world building is so intense and detailed I feel like I'm walking and experiencing it in real life. No detail is too small. From food to wares, clothing, environment, and *gasp* bugs! I feel deeply immersed in the plot and story as I'm carried along on the journey with Cal and Ellie. I desperately wish I could book a vacation to Laluna!
I can not express how delicious this book was and wanting for more it left me when I finished it!
Their story has just begun, and I can't wait to see what this team does next!

[Megan (meglivestoread) · Rating 4 out of 5]

I was sent and earc of this book and it truly did not disappoint! It is filled with unique world building, magic, like-able characters and takes you for a wild ride!

I throughly enjoyed this story and it totally give From Blood And Ash vibes with more of the politics of a high fantasy!

Elyria our FMC is such a great strong character with a witty fiery personality and I love her and the great banter that we get between her and Cal our MMC and Xoc, which is Cal bestie!

I can’t wait to see where Geneva takes us in the book 2!

[Cee_reads · Rating 5 out of 5]

So I just finished reading this book and one I have got to say what a ride. I loved the writing style in this book, the vibes I got from different story’s such as from Blood and ash, a game of thrones and more. In no way was it similar, but it brought me back to when I first read the those books and it had me so immersed and engaged that I couldn’t put it down. I lover when there is a FMC that is strong and takes the story by storm and that is exactly what we get with Elyeria. Cal I hope to learn more as the story goes on, but this book was a great start hat I hope is going to be a great series!

[Sarah Jernigan · Rating 5 out of 5]

I really enjoyed this journey! This book is not only stunning but has some of my favorite things all wrapped up together, from dragons to a strong FMC. Geneva kept me guessing the whole time. I am excited to see what book two holds for us ☺️

[amanda.reads.romance · Rating 4 out of 5]

Did I just fall for a fictional guy in a fantasy romance who DIDN'T command shadows? Who am I? What just happened?