Circumstances lead me to the completion of a statistics module last year. While the ‘damn lies’ rule still holds true, it has permeated my thinking, particularly with regards to external and internal validity. I now have a theory of how to judge the success of any given story by these metrics. Bear with me, my story gets better*. (*Lie.)
The internal validity – in statistics, if the research measures what it set out to measure – of a story is whether it achieved what the writer wanted it to achieve. Although this is obviously a rather opaque metric for the reader (death of the author!) it is, I feel, still reasonably obvious from the style, concept, and execution of the story. If all else fails, you can tell from its comparators. The external validity in statistics refers to how useful the research is on a wider stage. In stories, it’s whether the book is a marketable product. Will a reasonable number of book-purchasers deem it within their wheelhouse?
The reason a lot of books gets damned is because of their poor or minimally extensive external validity. Proust is not a writer who appeals to a mass audience. I suspect he would have found the prospect of such appeal wildly distasteful. While I sometimes like to think of myself as ‘better than’ the average mass audience member, I’m not, really. I like stories to have forward momentum and characters to have a plot happen to them. 'Swann's Way' is, er, not that.
‘A Dance to the Music of Time’ has been called the English answer to ‘In Search of Lost Time’. Having read the first two volumes of the former, I can see why they’re compared. Both focus in minute detail on single episodes that can last chapters and chapters (if not whole books). Discursive detail about minor characters who are often never seen again is a big feature. They are both subtly funny in places, although it’s definitely not a key element. Where they diverge is in environmental description. While Powell will ramble on for three paragraphs about why the cook doesn’t like the butler, Proust … well, he does this:
"I felt that these celestial hues indicated the presence of exquisite creatures who had been pleased to assume vegetable form and who, through the disguise of their firm, comestible flesh, allowed me to discern in this radiance of earliest dawn, these hinted rainbows, these blue evening shades, that precious quality which I should recognise again when, all night long after a dinner at which I had partaken of them, they played (lyrical and coarse in their jesting like one of Shakepeare's fairies) at transforming my chamber pot into a vase of aromatic perfume."
Aspargus. He's talking about asparagus.
I mean it is definitely the most poetic thing anyone has ever written about ... asparagus. For a reason. Because no storyteller - except for Marcel Proust, Esq., and I guess maybe the witch in Rapunzel? - gives one tiny fuck about asparagus. While Powell’s narrator, Nicholas, has an omniscient insight into other characters’ psyches and what their clothes and habits and tics say about them, it’s tolerable because it’s what every writer does, followed through to its logical end. But I could GIVE a shit about every flower Marcel has ever seen in his life. Unlike the minutiae of Powell’s detail, it doesn’t add anything to the narrative – but it certainly subtracted from my concentration.
That being said, the internal validity of this story is high. Proust clearly wanted to write about the hothouse intensity of childhood, where everything is a Big Fucking Deal. I sympathised intensely with bb!Marcel wanting his mum to kiss him goodnight. It’s clear that this narrator is a highly anxious person, but unlike historical readers and Proust himself, I don’t regard this with derision or scorn. What I do deride and scorn is Proust suggesting that he’s in some way special or unique for being this neurotic. Sorry, but no. We are all just monkeys with anxiety.
The story starts with the longest ‘X wakes up’ montage in the history of all time. ‘Combray’ basically describes Marcel Jnr taking a long walk, interrupted by descriptions and time hops that show every single neighbour and relative in the electoral district. His aunt Leonie sounds like a holy terror. She also is emblematic of the lack of choices women had at this time. I, too, might take to my bed in her shoes.
‘Swann in Love’, then, is a highly effective account of a man in love with someone who doesn’t love him back. Granted, he is also SUPER ANNOYING. He’s a ‘man of the world’ who has had numerous mistresses and invented ghosting (he dropped a family without warning when he lost interest in banging their cook). Despite this, he is shocked – SHOCKED, I TELL YOU – to discover that his mistress … is a mistress. Like, she’s a professional mistress. She is, in modern parlance, an escort. She’s also been involved in other types of sex work. Because, guess what, mistresses come from somewhere. They don’t show up at a party having just arrived on the planet in a clamshell. Now, the one thing Swann isn’t described as doing is seeking out virgins or inexperienced women to ‘ruin’ (low bar, jesus). So presumably he knew from day one that, you know, others had been there before him with Odette. Yet he’s still shocked, appalled, betrayed, etc.
I’ll give Proust credit for this: while Swann’s reasons for feeling this way are dumb in the extreme, he describes that feeling of betrayal so well I almost forgive him. Who hasn’t been privy to making basic mistakes about another person that bite you in the ass later in the relationship? Who hasn’t built up a partner in their head and felt their feet of clay whack you on their way out the door?
Swann imagining that Odette asked him for something terrible in order that he can write her an indignant reply is such a mood. So is when he's trying to rationally think about her looks and thinking he's getting over her, only to fall for her again hours later.
The only thing I didn’t understand was that, in the final pages of ‘Swann in Love’, Swann finally seems to be getting over Odette. Yet we already know from ‘Combray’ that he marries her. I am confused.
"[...] that a clever man should only be unhappy about a person who is worth his while; which is rather like being astonished that anyone should condescend to die of cholera at the bidding of so insignificant a creature as the comma bacillus."
False dichotomy! I am fully Team Mme des Laumes here. That's the whole point of GROWTH, my friend.
"Depth of character, or a melancholy expression, would freeze his sense, which were, however, instantly aroused at the sight of healthy, abundant, rosy flesh."
Oh, man. Swann. My dude. #yesallmen
"'Really, do you think it's possible for a woman to be touched by a man's loving her, and never be unfaithful to him?' asked Swann anxiously.” Asks Swann. Of a sex worker. Yup, she’s not just gonna tell you what you want to hear. Her livelihood doesn’t depend on your good humour. Nope.
"[...] if we find ourselves hoping that the actions of a person who has hitherto caused us pain may prove not to have been sincere, they shed in their wake a light which our hopes are powerless to extinguish and to which we must address ourselves, rather than to our hopes, if we are to know what will be that person's actions on the morrow."
Yeah, Proust is so good on the misery of feeling like the pathetic one in the love affair. (P.S. Swann is definitely the pathetic one in this love affair.)
Proust also has some intelligent insights to share:
“Habit! That skillful but slow-moving arranger who begins by letting our minds suffer for weeks on end in temporary quarters, but whom our minds are none the less only too happy to discover at last, for without it, reduced to their own devices, they would be powerless to make any room seem habitable.”
"[...] but they loved me enough to be unwilling to spare me that suffering, which they hoped to teach me to overcome, so as to reduce my nervous sensibility and to strengthen my will. Whereas my father, whose affection for me was of another kind, would not, I suspect, have had the same courage, for as soon as he had grasped the fact that I was unhappy he had said to my mother: 'Go and comfort him.'"
That’s a great character sketch.
"Since then, whenever in the course of my life I have come across, in convents for instance, truly saintly embodiments of practical charity, they have generally had the cheerful, practical, brusque, and unemotioned air of a busy surgeon, the sort of face in which one can discern no commiseration, no tenderness at the sight of suffering humanity, no fear of hurting it, the impassive, unsympathetic, sublime face of true goodness."
They’re unsympathetic because they know you will and can survive.
"Even those women who claim to judge a man by his looks alone, see in those looks the emanation of a special way of life. That is why they fall in love with soldiers or with firemen [...]"
…fair.
"[...] I had finished writing it, I was so filled with happiness, I felt that it had so entirely relieved my mind of its obsession [...] as though I myself were a hen and had just laid an egg [...]"
Accurate description of the writing process!
"[...] one of the advantages which men who have live and moved in society enjoy over those, however intelligent, who have not, namely that they no longer see it transfigured by the longing or repulsion which it inspires, but regard it of no importance."
Legit.
"When, in one of these, they were able to distinguish a human form, they always found it coarsened and vulgarised (that is to say lacking in the elegance of the school of painting through whose spectacles they were in the habit of seeing even the real, living people who passed them in the street) and devoid of truth, as though M. Biche had not known how the human shoulder was constructed, or that a woman's hair was not ordinarily purple."
Fully on Team Cottard here. The M. Biches of the world DON'T fucking know how a human shoulder is constructed, and that is why they are Bad Artists. It’s as true now as it was then, when the critique was fresh and more people were on Cottard’s side than Proust’s. Where can I buy these spectacles?
"As life goes on, we acquire such adroitness in the cultivation of our pleasures, that we content ourselves with the pleasure we derive from thinking of a woman [...] without troubling ourselves to ascertain whether the image corresponds to the reality [...] like Japanese gardeners who, to obtain one perfect blossom, will sacrifice several others."
Some examples of his lols:
“[…] their sense of hearing – having finally come to realise its temporary futility when the tone of the conversation at the dinner table became frivolous or merely mundane without the two old ladies’ being able to guide it back to topics dear to themselves – would put its receptive organs into abeyance to the point of becoming actually atrophied.”
" 'That must be delightful,' sighed my grandfather, in whose mind nature had unfortunately forgotten to include any capacity whatsoever for becoming passionately interested in the Swedish co-operative movement or in the methods employed by Maubant to get up his parts, just as it had forgotten to endow my grandmother's two sisters with a grain of that precious salt which one has oneself to 'add to the taste' in order to extract any savour from a narrative of the private life of Mole or of the Comte de Paris."
"[...] I would willingly reintroduce the use of the opium pipe or the Malay kris, but I know nothing about that of those infinitely more pernicious and moreover flatly bourgeois implements, the umbrella and the watch."
"He even went to the length of offering Swann a card of invitation to the Dental Exhibition.
'This will let you in, and anyone you take with you,' he explained, 'but dogs are not admitted. I'm just warning you, you understand, because some friends of mine went there once without knowing, and bitterly regretted it."
"But the harshness of his steely glare was compensated by the softness of his cotton gloves, so that, as he approached Swann, he seemed to be exhibiting at once an utter contempt for his person and the most tender regard for his hat."
SOME of his descriptions are also A+ … I just wish he’d reined in the impulse, like, 76% of the time.
"[...] Saint Hilaire's steeple, so slender and so pink that it seemed to be no more than scratched on the sky by the fingernail of a painter anxious to give to such a landscape, to so pure a piece of nature, this little sign of art, this single indication of human existence."
"[...] with its wild race of fishermen for whom no more than for their whales had there been any Middle Ages [...]"
Maybe if he had, we’d have been spared the indignity of this:
"[...] perhaps if her eyes had not been quite so black [...] I should not have been, as I was, so especially enamoured of their imagined blue."
Although really, it tells you everything you need to know about this dude.
In conclusion: I am glad I can now say I’ve read Proust. I even enjoyed some of it! The balance of enjoyment to eye-rolling description-skimming was, however, not in favour of reading any more any time soon. (Unlike Powell. Does this mean I'm now a Brexiteer?)