Hmmmmmm. I kinda want to rate this 2 and a half but that seems low. But three also seems too high. Haha
I enjoyed this book for the most part. I’m very picky about reading books with dragons in them anyway, just because I feel like most authors don’t do them right. For example, Fourth Wing comes to mind. I DNF’d that book for multiple reasons, but I can’t say I liked how the dragons could speak to their chosen ones like normal people and behave as such. It didn’t make them seem fierce. But we aren’t here to talk about Fourth Wing. However, I’d say if you loved that book, then don’t read this one. Because you will likely find that they are quite similar. And chances are you’d hate this one for being like forth wing but “not as good”
Anyway, mostly my reviews consist of tiny nitpicks, and really I only have two in regards to Wild Bond.
First, the romance. It wasn’t really … believable. I feel like Rake (Rakim) just suddenly decided one day that he was head over heels for Rin and would do anything for her. And while later he admits what made him fall for her, you never got to see those things really play out? The qualities he listed were great, and you can definitely see them in Rin, but as a spymaster, he just witnesses these things in the background. You don’t get to see it, you get to hear about it. It was definitely a case of “need to show not tell.” Which is hard to do in writing, believe me. I understand. However, it lacks the charm and quality of the romance when it’s essentially not there. It’s not insta love but it’s not slow burn. It just exists one day. They didn’t interact enough beforehand. Yes, he trained her, but for the most part, any training sessions were described in a montage type sequence with lots of monologue and no dialogue. I hate books that have droning monologue. And this one has plenty for the first 20%
Also I’m going to add in here that Rin doesn’t really have notable friends. She makes some I guess, but you see them a handful of times and have minuscule interactions that it doesn’t even feel like she’s participating in the same training and exercises as other people. They just exist to give The Tower some charm. Really she only spends time with Rake and his friends. There was a severe lack of females in this book as well. Good ones, anyway. Either they were cold and heartless or they were a 10 year old girl who Rin already knew for a while before her imprisonment.
Which leads to my second nitpick: the lack of world building. Now, I’m not one who even really likes world building. I often find it boring and tedious to read about, especially when going over the history of things. But I’m not even talking about the history here (but there was a war a long time ago that many died in and I don’t even remember what for or if it was even explained well enough what the war was for, I might have just forgot). But Rin and Rake and everyone has no backstory. You get the typical dead parents, orphaned, steals off the streets to survive, but you don’t get the REAL in depth stuff. Like the whole idea of Rin stealing the sword and being imprisoned for it wasn’t explained well enough to make you even feel bad that she was caught and spent two years in an underground cell. It was to “protect a friend” which is later explained away as “doing it for them so they don’t get caught” but she gets caught anyway. The story behind stealing the sword was lackluster and the whole imprisonment thing felt like it was just a plot to get Rin out into that square that day she bonded with her dragon.
And speaking of, it’s never explained why the mature dragon chose a very matured woman to bond with. (In the book it’s explained that most bonding takes place during puberty, even for the dragons.) I guess Rin is just special and there’s nothing more to it?
I don’t know if there’s a sequel planned and if maybe these things get answered in a later book. Id be interested in reading it if there is, but currently there’s no evidence of one existing unless the author posts about it on her socials.
Overall, the book is well written (and more mature than fourth wing in my opinion) but there’s a lot of elements that weren’t put into it and make the overall story seem lackluster. It’s like no one had a motive for really doing anything other than they wanted to. The villains reveal and then downfall wasn’t that great either. There was no sense of urgency in this book to uncover the mastermind behind the sick people and dragons. And even when it was revealed what they were doing, it’s like an entire new element to it was added in to make it seem more dramatic when you never got to see it play out earlier in the book anyway to cause any uproar. Only when the climax of the fight occurred did we see it, and even then it was like … huh ?
Anyway, I think this is the authors debut novel, so it’s not too bad for a first book. There’s always room for improvement and the only way to do that is to keep writing!