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The Orphanage of Miracles #2
The Orchard Of Hope
A quest to save hope. A kingdom under a spell. A wizard in training. The sequel to The Orphanage of Miracles is filled with engaging characters, magic, adventure, and unusual circumstance. It's a story that will both entertain and inspire the reader. Kelsey, a strong-willed and high spirited young girl, embarks upon another adventurous quest - this time to save hope, which is being stolen from the orchard. While the kingdom is still under the spell of the evil sorcerer who distorts reality in order to gain control, the king begins training someone who he believes can ultimately defeat the a young boy named Nicholas, who's being mentored by an elderly and eccentric wizard who's either a genius or crazy. It's up to Nicholas to interpret the training he receives and figure out how to work with his friends to save the world.
- GenresFantasyYoung Adult
284 pages, Paperback
First published June 23, 2014
About the author
Amy Neftzger
14 books179 followersAmy Neftzger (born June 23) is an American researcher and author who has published fiction books, non-fiction books, business articles, and peer review research. Her works have reached an international audience.
Amy was born in Illinois and graduated from Elk Grove High School in Elk Grove Village, Illinois. She received her bachelors degree from the University of North Florida in Jacksonville, Florida and her Masters in Industrial/ Organizational Psychology from Middle Tennessee State University in Murfreesboro, Tennessee. She graduated from both Universities with honors.
She has written numerous business and journal articles, but her fiction works have been the most commercially successful. In 2003 she published Conversations with the Moon, which was also translated into Korean and published in South Korea. In 2005 she collaborated with her husband, guitarist Tyra Neftzger on a children's book called "All that the Dog Ever Wanted." The book was designed to introduce children to jazz music at an early age and included a CD sampler of jazz tunes. In 2007 she worked as an editor on a business fable called "The Damned Company."
Amy was born in Illinois and graduated from Elk Grove High School in Elk Grove Village, Illinois. She received her bachelors degree from the University of North Florida in Jacksonville, Florida and her Masters in Industrial/ Organizational Psychology from Middle Tennessee State University in Murfreesboro, Tennessee. She graduated from both Universities with honors.
She has written numerous business and journal articles, but her fiction works have been the most commercially successful. In 2003 she published Conversations with the Moon, which was also translated into Korean and published in South Korea. In 2005 she collaborated with her husband, guitarist Tyra Neftzger on a children's book called "All that the Dog Ever Wanted." The book was designed to introduce children to jazz music at an early age and included a CD sampler of jazz tunes. In 2007 she worked as an editor on a business fable called "The Damned Company."
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February 14, 2014
I received an ARC from the author in exchange for a fair and honest review. This book is the sequel to The Orphanage of Miracles. These books should be read in order.
This book absolutely captivated my imagination and I loved it as much as I did the first book in the series. It is fantastically imaginative and equally appealing for both boys and girls in the targeted age group of 8 to 13. There is a lot of action as well as clear and important lessons to be learned.
It was so good to see most of the characters from the first book again as well as some interesting new ones. The roles of Kelsey and Nicholas are still very central to the storyline as they are being trained for service to the kingdom. The supporting characters are equally important and add interesting dimension to the “mission.”
Although there are two storylines in this book, they are more closely tied together throughout this book than they were in the first. They interconnect frequently throughout and feel more integrated. It was very easy to follow how they related.
This is a great series for kids and allows them to use their imagination. Once again, Cory Basil nailed it with the cover art and illustrations. I hope these two continue to team up in the future. Ms. Neftzger’s talent is glaringly obvious and I hope there will be more books featuring Kelsey and Nicholas in the future.
This book absolutely captivated my imagination and I loved it as much as I did the first book in the series. It is fantastically imaginative and equally appealing for both boys and girls in the targeted age group of 8 to 13. There is a lot of action as well as clear and important lessons to be learned.
It was so good to see most of the characters from the first book again as well as some interesting new ones. The roles of Kelsey and Nicholas are still very central to the storyline as they are being trained for service to the kingdom. The supporting characters are equally important and add interesting dimension to the “mission.”
Although there are two storylines in this book, they are more closely tied together throughout this book than they were in the first. They interconnect frequently throughout and feel more integrated. It was very easy to follow how they related.
This is a great series for kids and allows them to use their imagination. Once again, Cory Basil nailed it with the cover art and illustrations. I hope these two continue to team up in the future. Ms. Neftzger’s talent is glaringly obvious and I hope there will be more books featuring Kelsey and Nicholas in the future.
May 18, 2014
The quest to save the world from the confusion of lies created by the sorcerer continues in [The Orchard of Hope] by [Amy Neftzger]. The tale of Kelsey, Nicholas and Maggie continues as they work together using their unique talents to save hope from being devoured. They learn of new strengths and the power of friendship as they learn how to use their unique skills throughout the quest. With the help of Roland, Megan, Newton and Moss they make another journey through the kingdom finding challenges and surprises along the way.
[Amy Neftzger] has created a world of exploration in which the characters experience the same pitfalls that all young people experience, just with a magical twist. The idea that hope belongs to everyone is an excellent follow up to nurturing miracles in the first book of the series, [The Orphanage of Miracles]. To really get a sense of the journey and characters the books should be read in order. [The Orchard of Hope] comes out in June 2014 so what are you waiting for? These books should be on everyone’s reading list.
[Amy Neftzger] has created a world of exploration in which the characters experience the same pitfalls that all young people experience, just with a magical twist. The idea that hope belongs to everyone is an excellent follow up to nurturing miracles in the first book of the series, [The Orphanage of Miracles]. To really get a sense of the journey and characters the books should be read in order. [The Orchard of Hope] comes out in June 2014 so what are you waiting for? These books should be on everyone’s reading list.
April 24, 2014
I've read this book (I received an ARC copy through this site) with my niece and nephew, and they absolutely adored it. As did I!
It follows the characters of Kelsey and Nicholas, as in the first book, and leads on brilliantly well. The supporting characters and well introduced, and offer another dimension to the book; they're not just used to fill in the spaces, as many authors do when they've run out of story lines for the central characters.
This is a brilliant story for kids; boys and girls, and the cover had me swept in the moment I unboxed it. Amy Neftzger has done an incredible job with this book, and it's absolutely worth a read.
((A more detailed review will be published on my blog - http://laurenbookreviews.blogspot.co.uk/ ))
It follows the characters of Kelsey and Nicholas, as in the first book, and leads on brilliantly well. The supporting characters and well introduced, and offer another dimension to the book; they're not just used to fill in the spaces, as many authors do when they've run out of story lines for the central characters.
This is a brilliant story for kids; boys and girls, and the cover had me swept in the moment I unboxed it. Amy Neftzger has done an incredible job with this book, and it's absolutely worth a read.
((A more detailed review will be published on my blog - http://laurenbookreviews.blogspot.co.uk/ ))
March 7, 2017
Kelsey is a girl who likes to kill things, Roland is the grim reaper and Maggie is a girl who likes to talk. They are on the mission to stop the wolves from eating the hope orchard. Will they succeed on their mission?
This is a sequel to the first book written which I have not read. The characters in this book are well described and interesting to watch on their mission. It is a well written book.
Disclaimer: I received an arc of this book free from the author/publisher from Netgalley. I was not obliged to write a favorable review, or even any review at all. The opinions expressed are strictly my own.
This is a sequel to the first book written which I have not read. The characters in this book are well described and interesting to watch on their mission. It is a well written book.
Disclaimer: I received an arc of this book free from the author/publisher from Netgalley. I was not obliged to write a favorable review, or even any review at all. The opinions expressed are strictly my own.
February 17, 2014
This book engaged my interest just enough to keep me reading it. It is the second in the series (trilogy?) and it shows - the plot is weak and the characterisation felt flat. This is a shame, because the premise was interesting and one character - Roland - did stand head and shoulders above the others. It was not just because he was a bipedal fox, in a flamboyant hat and sunglasses (although that certainly helped) it was because of who he was.
Unfortunately, protagonist Kelsey seemed the weakest of the lot. For all her talk about how much she liked killing things, one would have thought she was a ruthless, bloodthirsty warrior - but IIRC she did not kill anything throughout the book (although tbh, I wasn't really paying much attention, so correct me if I'm wrong). It is not the sort of characteristic I admire in a protagonist and did not endear her to me in any way, shape or form. I felt that the manner in which she constantly discussed how much she loved to be killing things was something that would have been better shown.
Which brings me to a further point. Tell. Everything was told to the reader - often in long and rather dull detail - the first chapter is almost entirely devoted to the king instructing Kelsey about her quest, and how eager she is to go on the quest and about how she will enjoy killing things on her quest and basically as a reader I was along the lines of "just go already". There is no rich detail, no compelling language, just words on a page.
It does have some redeeming features though - there are some particularly unusual little quirks to the plot. Roland, for a start, and Roland's groupies. A gargoyle with a cookie fetish. The most powerful wizard in the kingdom, who wears socks on his ears. Also, I enjoyed some of the philosophy and puns - the seeds of doubt, the fact that hope can grow like fruit. It is these little pearls that kept me reading and it would have been highly entertaining, had the delivery been more evocative, more enlivening.
The setting was a little strange. One got the feeling it was medieaval-fantasy, but at one point guns were mentioned (although never used). Perhaps it would have been clearer to me had I read the first book.
As was mentioned earlier, it suffered from second-book-itis - a plot that doesn't really lead to a satisfactory climax and concludes with the story incomplete, in the hope of luring the reader into purchasing the next instalment. Unfortunately, unless the prose becomes rather more expressive I will not be looking it up.
Ebook provided via NetGalley and the publisher, in exchange for an honest review. Thanks!
Unfortunately, protagonist Kelsey seemed the weakest of the lot. For all her talk about how much she liked killing things, one would have thought she was a ruthless, bloodthirsty warrior - but IIRC she did not kill anything throughout the book (although tbh, I wasn't really paying much attention, so correct me if I'm wrong). It is not the sort of characteristic I admire in a protagonist and did not endear her to me in any way, shape or form. I felt that the manner in which she constantly discussed how much she loved to be killing things was something that would have been better shown.
Which brings me to a further point. Tell. Everything was told to the reader - often in long and rather dull detail - the first chapter is almost entirely devoted to the king instructing Kelsey about her quest, and how eager she is to go on the quest and about how she will enjoy killing things on her quest and basically as a reader I was along the lines of "just go already". There is no rich detail, no compelling language, just words on a page.
It does have some redeeming features though - there are some particularly unusual little quirks to the plot. Roland, for a start, and Roland's groupies. A gargoyle with a cookie fetish. The most powerful wizard in the kingdom, who wears socks on his ears. Also, I enjoyed some of the philosophy and puns - the seeds of doubt, the fact that hope can grow like fruit. It is these little pearls that kept me reading and it would have been highly entertaining, had the delivery been more evocative, more enlivening.
The setting was a little strange. One got the feeling it was medieaval-fantasy, but at one point guns were mentioned (although never used). Perhaps it would have been clearer to me had I read the first book.
As was mentioned earlier, it suffered from second-book-itis - a plot that doesn't really lead to a satisfactory climax and concludes with the story incomplete, in the hope of luring the reader into purchasing the next instalment. Unfortunately, unless the prose becomes rather more expressive I will not be looking it up.
Ebook provided via NetGalley and the publisher, in exchange for an honest review. Thanks!
March 13, 2014
"Hope is never gone. But it can be eaten alive, and that's exactly what was happening in the orchard."
Isn't this an awesome start to a book? When I read these two sentences, I immediately raised my hopes for this book. After all, why was hope being eaten in an orchard? And it's alive? So is it human, vegetable or mineral? So many questions.
The Orchard of Hope follows Kelsey, a girl who likes killing things and is apparently good at that; Roland, the grim reaper who takes on a different form to different people and Maggie, a 'girly girl' who likes to talk as they go on a quest to stop hope from being eaten by wolves. At the same time, their friend Nicholas is being trained by an eccentric sorcerer Moss, a snow leopard called Megan and a gargoyle who likes cookies.
What I liked about this book was the set-up of the story. It was interesting, and I could see that this book was part of a series (I really should hunt down the first book). Personally, I thought the solution to the "wolves stealing hope" part was rather anti-climatic and a bit rushed, but I did enjoy the descriptions of the various places and the characters.
One thing I noticed that I shouldn't have noticed was the message of the book. Very early into the book, it flat out tells you that one of the messages is learning to get along with people who are different from you. Ok, maybe it wasn't so blunt, but all that talk about important lessons to be learnt, how the Kelsey seemed to only get along with people like her, this felt way too obvious. Personally, I would have cut out all the scenes that make it obvious that the quest is also going to involve some personal growth since it's really a "telling" rather than "showing". This was strongest in the first few chapters, although it receded somewhat when the quest started.
To sum, this is a book with interesting characters and an interesting setting. I think the future conflicts with the main villain (the evil sorcerer) will be interesting to read. However, it suffers from the "telling not showing" syndrome, which was rather annoying at times.
Disclaimer: I got a free copy of this book from NetGalley in exchange for a free and honest review.
This review was first posted at Inside the mind of a Bibliophile
Isn't this an awesome start to a book? When I read these two sentences, I immediately raised my hopes for this book. After all, why was hope being eaten in an orchard? And it's alive? So is it human, vegetable or mineral? So many questions.
The Orchard of Hope follows Kelsey, a girl who likes killing things and is apparently good at that; Roland, the grim reaper who takes on a different form to different people and Maggie, a 'girly girl' who likes to talk as they go on a quest to stop hope from being eaten by wolves. At the same time, their friend Nicholas is being trained by an eccentric sorcerer Moss, a snow leopard called Megan and a gargoyle who likes cookies.
What I liked about this book was the set-up of the story. It was interesting, and I could see that this book was part of a series (I really should hunt down the first book). Personally, I thought the solution to the "wolves stealing hope" part was rather anti-climatic and a bit rushed, but I did enjoy the descriptions of the various places and the characters.
One thing I noticed that I shouldn't have noticed was the message of the book. Very early into the book, it flat out tells you that one of the messages is learning to get along with people who are different from you. Ok, maybe it wasn't so blunt, but all that talk about important lessons to be learnt, how the Kelsey seemed to only get along with people like her, this felt way too obvious. Personally, I would have cut out all the scenes that make it obvious that the quest is also going to involve some personal growth since it's really a "telling" rather than "showing". This was strongest in the first few chapters, although it receded somewhat when the quest started.
To sum, this is a book with interesting characters and an interesting setting. I think the future conflicts with the main villain (the evil sorcerer) will be interesting to read. However, it suffers from the "telling not showing" syndrome, which was rather annoying at times.
Disclaimer: I got a free copy of this book from NetGalley in exchange for a free and honest review.
This review was first posted at Inside the mind of a Bibliophile
August 11, 2014
Return to Amy Neftzger’s magical world for younger readers with The Orchard of Hope, book two in her amazing series where children are the heroes, who are learning about life as they are sent on special missions. This time the quest is to save HOPE from being eaten alive after being carefully cultivated in the Orchard of Hope. Kelsey, with the heart of a warrior is sent out to stop the wolf packs from eating hope, but her nature is to be impatient and there are lessons to be learned from the others on her journey. Meanwhile, Nicholas is learning more magic, in his effort to help Kelsey. In a fast paced adventure, these characters learn how to appreciate others and their abilities and differences, learn to look within to find more of their own abilities and to work together as a team for the best results.
Once again, Amy Neftzger has written a delightful children’s tale where the heroes may not be perfect, but the lessons they learn are ones that can be used in everyday life. From the magic of gargoyles to the power of sorcery and faith in others, each lesson is subtle yet meaningful as each colorful character adds to the charm and fantasy that fuels the reader’s mind! Ms. Neftzger has made her world like a trip on magic carpet into exciting adventure and unusual beings, as well as young heroes who are lifelike and realistic, yet learn to be open to change and acceptance. Wonderful reading!
I received a review copy from Fog Ink in exchange for my honest review.
Series: The Orphanage of Miracles - Book 2
Publication Date: June 26, 2014
Publisher: Fog Ink
ISBN13: 9781940894034
Genre: Middlegrade/YA fantasy adventure
Print Length: 182 pages
Available from: Amazon | Barnes & Noble
Once again, Amy Neftzger has written a delightful children’s tale where the heroes may not be perfect, but the lessons they learn are ones that can be used in everyday life. From the magic of gargoyles to the power of sorcery and faith in others, each lesson is subtle yet meaningful as each colorful character adds to the charm and fantasy that fuels the reader’s mind! Ms. Neftzger has made her world like a trip on magic carpet into exciting adventure and unusual beings, as well as young heroes who are lifelike and realistic, yet learn to be open to change and acceptance. Wonderful reading!
I received a review copy from Fog Ink in exchange for my honest review.
Series: The Orphanage of Miracles - Book 2
Publication Date: June 26, 2014
Publisher: Fog Ink
ISBN13: 9781940894034
Genre: Middlegrade/YA fantasy adventure
Print Length: 182 pages
Available from: Amazon | Barnes & Noble
February 16, 2014
Actual Rating - 2.5
*I received a copy from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review*
“Hope is never gone. But it can be eaten alive, and that’s exactly what was happening in the orchard.”
Kelsey, a girl "with only one emotion – killing" (that's how she's described as, but either she's not very violent or else there was nothing to kill), Maggie, a "girly girl" whom the king thinks Kelsey needs, and Death whose name is Roland, is sent to rescue hope that’s being stolen by wolves. The kingdom is under the threat of “the sorcerer”, and everyone feels the wolves are his minions. And so they set off for the orchard.
This book reads exactly like a fairy tale. There’s the typical third person narrative, a “the king”, and lots of seriously clever, beautiful imagery. The chapters alternate between the trio on the mission to rescue hope, and Nicholas staying behind in the castle to learn sorcery from a sorcerer (who is a fine example of “genius being circular”), a “400 pound snow leopard with attitude”, and the castle’s “only and finest gargoyle”. Moss, Megan and Newton.
Moss and Newton sound like an old married couple. I picture Moss as Merlin in the King Arthur cartoon. Their abusive and adorable banter was the only entertaining part of the story. The other characters all felt flat, whether or not it was intentional (what with only 290 pages), I can’t say. The story moved along quickly; it didn’t drag along too much, but I couldn’t get into it.
There are a lot of sentences that need to be highlighted. Little pieces of wisdom. Some of Moss’ lessons especially the one on time was thought provoking. And like I said, lots of imagery. For example Roland appears to different people differently. Something about how each of us perceives death. And there’s something to be said about “Death being sent to restore hope”.
Overall, I felt like I was reading the first draft of a story yet to be fully developed into something much better. An almost fairy tale.
Hang on, this is children's fiction, right? (definitely reads like one anyway and is what i'm considering it as)
*I received a copy from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review*
“Hope is never gone. But it can be eaten alive, and that’s exactly what was happening in the orchard.”
Kelsey, a girl "with only one emotion – killing" (that's how she's described as, but either she's not very violent or else there was nothing to kill), Maggie, a "girly girl" whom the king thinks Kelsey needs, and Death whose name is Roland, is sent to rescue hope that’s being stolen by wolves. The kingdom is under the threat of “the sorcerer”, and everyone feels the wolves are his minions. And so they set off for the orchard.
This book reads exactly like a fairy tale. There’s the typical third person narrative, a “the king”, and lots of seriously clever, beautiful imagery. The chapters alternate between the trio on the mission to rescue hope, and Nicholas staying behind in the castle to learn sorcery from a sorcerer (who is a fine example of “genius being circular”), a “400 pound snow leopard with attitude”, and the castle’s “only and finest gargoyle”. Moss, Megan and Newton.
Moss and Newton sound like an old married couple. I picture Moss as Merlin in the King Arthur cartoon. Their abusive and adorable banter was the only entertaining part of the story. The other characters all felt flat, whether or not it was intentional (what with only 290 pages), I can’t say. The story moved along quickly; it didn’t drag along too much, but I couldn’t get into it.
There are a lot of sentences that need to be highlighted. Little pieces of wisdom. Some of Moss’ lessons especially the one on time was thought provoking. And like I said, lots of imagery. For example Roland appears to different people differently. Something about how each of us perceives death. And there’s something to be said about “Death being sent to restore hope”.
Overall, I felt like I was reading the first draft of a story yet to be fully developed into something much better. An almost fairy tale.
Hang on, this is children's fiction, right? (definitely reads like one anyway and is what i'm considering it as)
February 26, 2014
When I finished reading The Orphanage of Miracles I could not shut up about it, it was whimsy and enchanting from the beginning to the end, so when I started tweeting about it, I was thrilled to get a message from FogInk telling me they would send me the next book in the series...
I put off reading this one until closer to the release date because I had the feeling I was going to feel the same way...and luckily I was correct. Netfzger has a way with forming an enthralling world for the reader to walk through with the characters and there are so many things to love.
In The Orchard of Hope, we follow two story lines much like in the first book. Kelsey is on another adventure while Nicolas is in the castle training to be a sorcerer, what makes this book just as good as the first is the development and growth of the characters in between the two books and shared with the reader in the beginning of this one. Kelsey is just as stubborn but learning to be mindful of others; Nicolas is learning that there is more around than what meets the eye; and Maggie another character from the last book, has been cast as a girly-girl in they eyes of Kelsey at least, but becomes a wonderful asset to the adventure regardless of lacking the experience with them.
Again we learn lessons throughout the book of acceptance, asking for help when you need it, honesty, being present, using knowledge or power for good versus evil, all those fun things and more.
I love that these books take the idea of invisible things and make them objects that need creating or saving...that element alone is the main reason I enjoy these books. There is depth that as a reader of any age you can really delve into.
There are also very funny bits, like a talking gargoyle who loves to eat - he was my favorite this time around.
Overall, I think this great cast of characters and the wonderful adventure scenes which alternate with the woes of learning, make this story fun for all ages and if it leads to chats about how one might create miracles or save hope I think that is great too... Beautifully written and a book that I will definitely be sharing with people.
I put off reading this one until closer to the release date because I had the feeling I was going to feel the same way...and luckily I was correct. Netfzger has a way with forming an enthralling world for the reader to walk through with the characters and there are so many things to love.
In The Orchard of Hope, we follow two story lines much like in the first book. Kelsey is on another adventure while Nicolas is in the castle training to be a sorcerer, what makes this book just as good as the first is the development and growth of the characters in between the two books and shared with the reader in the beginning of this one. Kelsey is just as stubborn but learning to be mindful of others; Nicolas is learning that there is more around than what meets the eye; and Maggie another character from the last book, has been cast as a girly-girl in they eyes of Kelsey at least, but becomes a wonderful asset to the adventure regardless of lacking the experience with them.
Again we learn lessons throughout the book of acceptance, asking for help when you need it, honesty, being present, using knowledge or power for good versus evil, all those fun things and more.
I love that these books take the idea of invisible things and make them objects that need creating or saving...that element alone is the main reason I enjoy these books. There is depth that as a reader of any age you can really delve into.
There are also very funny bits, like a talking gargoyle who loves to eat - he was my favorite this time around.
Overall, I think this great cast of characters and the wonderful adventure scenes which alternate with the woes of learning, make this story fun for all ages and if it leads to chats about how one might create miracles or save hope I think that is great too... Beautifully written and a book that I will definitely be sharing with people.
May 8, 2014
Disclaimer: I received a free copy of this book from LibraryThing in exchange for an honest review.
The Orchard of Hope by Amy Neftzger is an elementary to middle school level fantasy book, the second in the series, and due to be published June 2014. As someone who did not read the first book, I expect there were some gaps in my knowledge that the book didn’t fill in, although it did a very good job of supplying information, albeit not to the extent that someone already familiar with the universe might have had. The background information it provided was sufficient, however, to understand the series’ mechanics and characters.
When I had read the summary, I thought the book might be pitched at a higher reading level. Although I enjoyed the book at its current level, the frequent blank pages and short chapters took up more space than I liked. I would have preferred a longer book, with more exposition and plot development.
The book had an overall feel of something like A Wrinkle in Time, with episodic chapters and strange parallels. On occasion, the book ventured into being too preachy, with its emphasis on what children should learn upon reading it. Thankfully, this was a problem that occurred only at the beginning of the book.
I liked the character development exhibited by Kelsey, especially as she proved somewhat unlikable for a while. Maggie was a more sympathetic character, although we as the readers realize that Kelsey filters things a great deal. The book could have easily been stretched out, with a longer and more complicated plot. Possibly, this would have improved the book.
As it was, however, it was an enjoyable read. I am intrigued by the way magic is set up in this universe, because it varies from other fantasy books I’ve read. I look forward to reading the third book, although I realize it might be a long wait because I just finished the second as an uncorrected proof.
The Orchard of Hope by Amy Neftzger is an elementary to middle school level fantasy book, the second in the series, and due to be published June 2014. As someone who did not read the first book, I expect there were some gaps in my knowledge that the book didn’t fill in, although it did a very good job of supplying information, albeit not to the extent that someone already familiar with the universe might have had. The background information it provided was sufficient, however, to understand the series’ mechanics and characters.
When I had read the summary, I thought the book might be pitched at a higher reading level. Although I enjoyed the book at its current level, the frequent blank pages and short chapters took up more space than I liked. I would have preferred a longer book, with more exposition and plot development.
The book had an overall feel of something like A Wrinkle in Time, with episodic chapters and strange parallels. On occasion, the book ventured into being too preachy, with its emphasis on what children should learn upon reading it. Thankfully, this was a problem that occurred only at the beginning of the book.
I liked the character development exhibited by Kelsey, especially as she proved somewhat unlikable for a while. Maggie was a more sympathetic character, although we as the readers realize that Kelsey filters things a great deal. The book could have easily been stretched out, with a longer and more complicated plot. Possibly, this would have improved the book.
As it was, however, it was an enjoyable read. I am intrigued by the way magic is set up in this universe, because it varies from other fantasy books I’ve read. I look forward to reading the third book, although I realize it might be a long wait because I just finished the second as an uncorrected proof.
May 23, 2014
THE ORCHARD OF HOPE is the second in a series written for grade school children. It involves an honorable king, sorcerers, talking animals and of course the heroes are children sent on a quest to save the kingdoms hope.
The main characters in the story are Kelsey, a talking fox, Maggie, Megan, Nicholas and of course we can't forget the king, sorcerers and a gargoyle who is constantly eating everything in sight. When the story opens we find Nicolas and Kelsey in class, when they get a visit from the King who tells them of a gang of wolves who've been stealing the kingdom's hope. He tells Kelsey that she is to go on a quest to save the Orchard of Hope and she is to be accompanied by her friend Roland, the talking fox and Maggie. She is excited and eager to be off as she has become bored of late. It is not long until they find adventures and learn new skills they never thought they could possess within themselves.
The story teaches children about having hope and appreciating the differences in others around them. It is easily followed and understood even though it is the second in the series. It ends just as a child would become bored and of course another adventure awaits Kelsey as the kingdom is never truly out of danger. However, Christians may not approve the story for their children as it does not only practice, but encourage children to learn magic, sorcery, scrying etc. as a part of their everyday lives.
The main characters in the story are Kelsey, a talking fox, Maggie, Megan, Nicholas and of course we can't forget the king, sorcerers and a gargoyle who is constantly eating everything in sight. When the story opens we find Nicolas and Kelsey in class, when they get a visit from the King who tells them of a gang of wolves who've been stealing the kingdom's hope. He tells Kelsey that she is to go on a quest to save the Orchard of Hope and she is to be accompanied by her friend Roland, the talking fox and Maggie. She is excited and eager to be off as she has become bored of late. It is not long until they find adventures and learn new skills they never thought they could possess within themselves.
The story teaches children about having hope and appreciating the differences in others around them. It is easily followed and understood even though it is the second in the series. It ends just as a child would become bored and of course another adventure awaits Kelsey as the kingdom is never truly out of danger. However, Christians may not approve the story for their children as it does not only practice, but encourage children to learn magic, sorcery, scrying etc. as a part of their everyday lives.
May 24, 2014
Unfortunately I wasn't aware that this was the second book in the series until the book had already captivated me. However the book was still easy to follow along with, I just wished I'd have read it because some of the characters I felt I should know better but they spent most of the time outside of the main plot of novel, while they were the main point in the first.
The Orchard of Hope takes place in a kingdom that had had a large and evil spell cast upon it, so that everything is distorted and des not appear as it really is. Then theirs an orchard not far from the castle where the king of the land lives, that is being ransacked by wolves for the hope that grows there, like fruit. Kelsey and her companions must venture to this orchard to save hope. While back at the castle a new apprentice is being trained so that he might one day defeat the evil sorcerer.
Sometimes tis novel was dragging it's feet but I understand that some things had to be laid out so that we understood everything that was going on. I just wish the novel had gone at a faster pace in some areas, or skipped entire scenes all together.
This novel is extremely captivating, the author makes a world all her own, and makes it well. In most novels the author falls just a b it short but this author covered all her bases and covered them well. I'll be on the lookout for the next installment and the first book of this series.
The Orchard of Hope takes place in a kingdom that had had a large and evil spell cast upon it, so that everything is distorted and des not appear as it really is. Then theirs an orchard not far from the castle where the king of the land lives, that is being ransacked by wolves for the hope that grows there, like fruit. Kelsey and her companions must venture to this orchard to save hope. While back at the castle a new apprentice is being trained so that he might one day defeat the evil sorcerer.
Sometimes tis novel was dragging it's feet but I understand that some things had to be laid out so that we understood everything that was going on. I just wish the novel had gone at a faster pace in some areas, or skipped entire scenes all together.
This novel is extremely captivating, the author makes a world all her own, and makes it well. In most novels the author falls just a b it short but this author covered all her bases and covered them well. I'll be on the lookout for the next installment and the first book of this series.
August 31, 2014
I received The Orchard of Hope from Goodreads First Reads and happily read it. I have no knowledge of the first book in the series, so I write this review from the viewpoint of someone new to the books and the writer.
Amy Netzger tells the tale of Kelsey, a young but fierce warrior, and her friends, who go on a quest to rescue the Orchard of Hope from a pack of fierce wolves. There is magic and lessons learned, as well as an evil sorcerer who has all of the land in his thrall and whose very presence promises new volumes in the series.
The story itself is interesting, but takes a bit too long to get started, but even this is not the problem. The flaw that keeps The Orchard of Hope from being a great adventure is the author's need to explain instead of allowing the reader the enjoyment of context clues.
For example, in the first chapter, as the reader is meeting the characters (or becoming reacquainted) Neftzger writes, "'What talents do I have?' Nicholas asked, somewhat confused. While he had done reasonably well in school, no one had mentioned any talents to him. He was unaware of anything extraordinary about himself." Any of those sentences could have stood by itself. It is frustrating to have everything explained, rather than just diving into the story.
However, the plot is charming, and the writing has potential--if Neftzger can learn to trust her readers. Young people are more intuitive than we sometimes give them credit for being.
Amy Netzger tells the tale of Kelsey, a young but fierce warrior, and her friends, who go on a quest to rescue the Orchard of Hope from a pack of fierce wolves. There is magic and lessons learned, as well as an evil sorcerer who has all of the land in his thrall and whose very presence promises new volumes in the series.
The story itself is interesting, but takes a bit too long to get started, but even this is not the problem. The flaw that keeps The Orchard of Hope from being a great adventure is the author's need to explain instead of allowing the reader the enjoyment of context clues.
For example, in the first chapter, as the reader is meeting the characters (or becoming reacquainted) Neftzger writes, "'What talents do I have?' Nicholas asked, somewhat confused. While he had done reasonably well in school, no one had mentioned any talents to him. He was unaware of anything extraordinary about himself." Any of those sentences could have stood by itself. It is frustrating to have everything explained, rather than just diving into the story.
However, the plot is charming, and the writing has potential--if Neftzger can learn to trust her readers. Young people are more intuitive than we sometimes give them credit for being.
March 5, 2014
I received a free early copy of this title in exchange for an honest review.
Stand-out features of this title are the spunky female protagonist, who puts me in mind of Katniss Everdeen and Yelena from Snyder's 'Poison Study'. The sheer imagination of the author is also brilliant; the idea of hope being eaten and that Death is invisible to those who, like Maggie, live in the moment are two great examples.
What I couldn't get down with is the quality of the writing. Firstly, the constant need to rephrase the same idea several times in quick succession. You know, saying the same thing in different ways? Making the same point, but using different words. This drags. I got the idea the first time and am not sure why I have to read it twice over again. Similarly frustrating is the frequent repetition of the same word in succeeding sentences. I feel that the text would benefit from a razor-sharp edit so that the language does justice to the original ideas contained within.
Stand-out features of this title are the spunky female protagonist, who puts me in mind of Katniss Everdeen and Yelena from Snyder's 'Poison Study'. The sheer imagination of the author is also brilliant; the idea of hope being eaten and that Death is invisible to those who, like Maggie, live in the moment are two great examples.
What I couldn't get down with is the quality of the writing. Firstly, the constant need to rephrase the same idea several times in quick succession. You know, saying the same thing in different ways? Making the same point, but using different words. This drags. I got the idea the first time and am not sure why I have to read it twice over again. Similarly frustrating is the frequent repetition of the same word in succeeding sentences. I feel that the text would benefit from a razor-sharp edit so that the language does justice to the original ideas contained within.
March 6, 2014
I just finished this book with my 2 children and it's one of the most imaginative books I've read in awhile. It reminded me of a Roald Dahl book but with a lot of action and suspense. I kept wondering what the sorcerer was trying to do and why the wolves were gobbling up the hope, until these questions were answered at the end (although the first question is only partially answered, as we learn that the sorcerer is up to some bigger mischief and makes me think that there will be a sequel. The writing is strong and there are value lessons I can use in homeschooling my children (such as "when is it worth it to fight?).
Great book to read with homeschoolers or any parent who wants to open up discussions on larger issues of life. My daughter and I talked constantly about whether or not it was really possible to steal hope from someone else and what we could do to give others hope. My son liked the suspense and action scenes (the battle was his favorite). A very uplifting book!
Great book to read with homeschoolers or any parent who wants to open up discussions on larger issues of life. My daughter and I talked constantly about whether or not it was really possible to steal hope from someone else and what we could do to give others hope. My son liked the suspense and action scenes (the battle was his favorite). A very uplifting book!
May 24, 2014
A quest to save the kingdom isn't as easy as Kelsey had imagined. She is accompanied by Death (a sarcastic red fox) and Maggie (a stuck up orphan). Together they must use their skills to stop the evil wolves from eating all the hope in the orchard. Back at the castle their fellow friend, Nicholas, must learn to become a sorcerer so he can help his buddies from a distance.
While amusing, this book is most certainly intended for younger audiences only. There isn't much character development and the story solely centers on the quest and the weird quirks of the characters (a perpetually hungry gargoyle, a weird wizard who doesn't dress properly, etc.). Also, it's worth noting that this is second in a series, although it serves alright as a stand alone. I didn't feel like I missed out on anything.
Overall, all it was meh. 4th through 7th graders may enjoy.
I received this book free through Librarything Giveaways in return for my honest, unbiased opinion.
While amusing, this book is most certainly intended for younger audiences only. There isn't much character development and the story solely centers on the quest and the weird quirks of the characters (a perpetually hungry gargoyle, a weird wizard who doesn't dress properly, etc.). Also, it's worth noting that this is second in a series, although it serves alright as a stand alone. I didn't feel like I missed out on anything.
Overall, all it was meh. 4th through 7th graders may enjoy.
I received this book free through Librarything Giveaways in return for my honest, unbiased opinion.
March 20, 2014
As a soldier in training for the king's army, Kelsey learns early in the book that she needs teamwork in order to survive. What some readers may miss - because it's shown, rather than told - is that Kelsey eventually learns that sometimes we need to work with those we perceive as our enemies in order to accomplish a larger goal. I think the author's message is that this may be our only hope for saving the world (our world, as we'll as the world in the book). Along the same lines - and possibly foreshadowing the message of the book - is the story of Nicholas, a wizard in training who's learning that things aren't always as they seem. The characters are highly imaginative and the plot is well written. Don't miss this one!
Note: I received a free advance copy of this book because I work in the mailroom.
Note: I received a free advance copy of this book because I work in the mailroom.
October 17, 2014
In this second book in the series, Kelsey is off on an adventure to save hope. The king has sent her with two travelling companions; Roland, who is death and appears as a fox to Kelsey, and Maggie, a girl with no apparent talent who is unable to see or hear Roland. As they travel to the orchard of hope to try to save it from being eaten by the wolves, Nicholas is being trained in sorcery by a scatterbrained magician named Moss and Newton, a gargoyle who Moss has brought to life. Both parties are occasionally assisted by Megan, the wise healer who is also a leopard. Rather a mix of parable and fantasy, this is an excellent story although it does end with a rather steep cliffhanger. I received this book free to review from Netgalley and I highly recommend it.
May 12, 2014
Disclaimer: I received this book through LibraryThing's Early Reviewers program in exchange for an honest review.
Perhaps I ought to start checking my Early Reviewer requests more carefully. Let me just say first that Orchard of Hope (as far as I read) is by no means a bad book. However, the 8-13 age range claimed by the ARC info page is a little ridiculous. The dialogue in the opening bits is often unrealistic and stilted in a manner suggestive of picture books for preschoolers, and it feels a little patronizing. Eventually, I gave up, since the dialogue kept ruining my immersion.
That said, I have several small children in my life, and I think I'll see what they think.
Perhaps I ought to start checking my Early Reviewer requests more carefully. Let me just say first that Orchard of Hope (as far as I read) is by no means a bad book. However, the 8-13 age range claimed by the ARC info page is a little ridiculous. The dialogue in the opening bits is often unrealistic and stilted in a manner suggestive of picture books for preschoolers, and it feels a little patronizing. Eventually, I gave up, since the dialogue kept ruining my immersion.
That said, I have several small children in my life, and I think I'll see what they think.
January 11, 2014
This is the sequel to The Orphanage of Miracles which I read and loved in January. This continues the stories of Kelsey and Nicholas as they undertake separate tasks for the king. I love how the characters grow as they learn about their strengths and the strengths of others. Although this is another middle grade novel, it contains much wisdom within the fantasy. I'm unsure if this is going to be a trilogy or a longer series but I know I don't want to miss out on any of the books.
March 6, 2014
This is a nicely written allegory that kept moving and also kept me turning pages. The characters are quirky but lovable (most of them - not all of the characters in the book are good guys, but this is what keeps the story interesting). I particularly liked the relationship between the gargoyle and sorcerer. Apparently this is the second book with these characters so I'm going to buy the first book and read it ASAP.
July 2, 2014
This was the second book of the series and I really enjoyed it!! Previous characters returned to continue their stories (moving in wonderfully interesting directions) and there were new characters introduced. Loved the gargoyle Newton! Quite the personality and good sense of humor! This was a wonderful read and that pulls the reader in quickly and leaves the reader waiting for the next installment of the adventure!
July 8, 2014
I received this book from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
Reminiscent of The Phantom Tollbooth, this is a great yarn that teaches life lessons while introducing an interesting list of characters. With plot twists and character turns, heroic rescues, lessons learned, wisdom gained and creative ideas, this book reads well and disappears quickly! I'm interested to read more so I hope book two is in the works!
I give this book a B+.
Reminiscent of The Phantom Tollbooth, this is a great yarn that teaches life lessons while introducing an interesting list of characters. With plot twists and character turns, heroic rescues, lessons learned, wisdom gained and creative ideas, this book reads well and disappears quickly! I'm interested to read more so I hope book two is in the works!
I give this book a B+.
February 19, 2014
I thought the book was good. It was slow going to start with throughout the book but overall I thought it was a good book.
March 22, 2014
I got this book from a give away. Loved this book. Read the book in one night. Now I will have to read the one before it. Great book passing it on to my Nieces as I am sure they will love this book.
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