Fuck the Foreplay

by J.M. Snyder

Tory's a freshman in college who can't stand being away from his boyfriend Jon for long. When his roommate decides to head home for the weekend, Tory invites Jon to stay at the dorm. The moment Jon arrives, Tory can't wait to get their romantic get-together underway.

Genres: M M Romance, Contemporary, Erotica, Romance, Gay, Short Stories, LGBT

16 pages, Kindle Edition

First published August 13, 2009

About the author

An author of gay erotic/romantic fiction, J.M. Snyder began in self-publishing and worked with Amber Allure, Aspen Mountain, eXcessica, and Torquere Presses.

Snyder's highly erotic short gay fiction has been published online at Amazon Shorts, Eros Monthly, Ruthie's Club, and Tit-Elation, as well as in anthologies by Alyson Books, Aspen Mountain, Cleis Press, eXcessica Publishing, Lethe Press, and Ravenous Romance.

In 2010, Snyder founded JMS Books LLC, a royalty-paying queer small press that publishes in both electronic and print format. For more information on newest releases and submission guidelines, please visit JMS Books LLC online.

Reviews

[Dina · Rating 3 out of 5]

Despite the title, this was actually a very cute and sweet story. I guess the old saying is true: never judge a book by its cover - or its title, LOL.

[Feliz · Rating 1 out of 5]

This story about a student and his boyfriend doesn't have depth, or plot. It's just, well, one sex scene and a little bit extra. I know it's a short story, and it fits the "one shot" description. Not my thing, although others may think differently.

[Christopher · Rating 3 out of 5]

Super short freebie story. It wasn't bad. It's about Tory and his boyfriend Jon. They live apart while Tory is at college and Jon is coming to visit for the weekend. We get a little background on their relationship but not much. The set up toward the sex scene was kind of awkward honestly. Which is great because sex is awkward sometimes. Honestly concerned about how stable their relationship was, though. Tory focuses on Jon a bit much. No real life plan going. I'd be annoyed like his roommate was honestly.

[Lily · Rating 3 out of 5]

This is a short, 16 pages only, free story offered by J.M. Snyder. College freshman Tory hasn't seen his boyfriend Jon for a month and is eagerly looking forward to his weekend visit. His roommate is going away for a few days which will give the young lovers time to be alone.

When Jon arrives things quickly heat up and Tory and Jon decide they just can't take the time for foreplay and have a quick and sexy encounter with some peach scented massage oil. I really liked this little peak into Tory and Jon's reunion and would enjoy reading more about them. Luckily Ms. Snyder says on her site that due to the interest in the guys there may be more about them in the future. Quick, fun, hot and free makes for a winning combination. Check out J.M. Snyder's site for more goodies here.

[Risadris♥ · Rating 1 out of 5]

Leído 2010

[Consumidor de Historias · Rating 4 out of 5]

Lo único que no me ha gustado es que Tory fuese a la universidad por su novio. Eso es algo que le debería concernir solo a él y no hacerlo por nadie.

Por lo demás, bien.

[Sharon · Rating 3 out of 5]

Very short story with not much of a plot. A young college boy has his boyfriend coming up for the weekend, what to do with the roommate lol!

[Robin Bernholdt · Rating 3 out of 5]

Pretty cute

[Flavia · Rating 1 out of 5]

Tem nem muito o que falar, é ruim. Não fala nada com nada, não sei absolutamente nada sobre os personagens ou o relacionamento deles e o sexo é meia boa também.

[Dan · Rating 3 out of 5]

It’s a long weekend due to Fall Break, and Tory (19) can’t focus on his biology assignment.

Tory’s roommate, Sean, goes home for the weekend.

Jon and Tory have been together for three years; Tory was sixteen and in his high school marching band. Jon was a senior on the football team.

Tory hasn’t seen Jon in almost a month, so he’s going through withdrawals.

This author has always been better at building relationships and writing existing couples. Writing action? Not. So. Much. And it’s glaringly obvious here.

Bareback is the clearly the correct choice; why they’ve been using condoms for three years is a gaping prolapse of a plot hole.

The emotions and relationship work: well done. Sex: basic M&M’s bs.


That’s what he planned to do with his life—get married and love Jon until the day he died.

[Tam · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was a freebie I found when buying JCP's At the Stroke of Midnight. Free, how could I say no? Tory is in his first semester at college and hating it because he's missing Jon, his boyfriend. Jon and he were family friends for years and finally started dating when Tory was 16 and Jon 18. Tory's roommate is going away for the long weekend and Jon is coming to town and Tory is DESPERATE for some smexin'. When Jon gets there, they kick the roommate out and have a quickie, hence the title. It's just a little steamy story about two guys in love and peach lube. The author mentions doing a story explaining how they got together but I'm not sure how long ago that was or if it's ever been done.

[Jimmy · Rating 3 out of 5]

A Short Story: Boyfriends since high school, this is their first reunion after a month. Eager to reunite, Tory kicks his room-mate out of the dorm for a quickie with Jon. Seth, eager to finish packing so he can take off, is knocking and grumbling on the door. With the grace of a libido raging over the top and a case of no thumbs, fucking the foreplay until later leaves the small room stinking of peaches.
I’m looking forward to the future full length novel J.M. Snyder intends to write about Tory and Jon becoming boyfriends in high school, before Tory went to college and Jon’s high school graduation.

[Serena Yates · Rating 3 out of 5]

A short, hot story about two guys who are planning to spend a long weekend together.

Tory is at college and can't wait to see his boyfriend Jon again. Tey are deeply in love and when Jon finally arrives on Friday afternoon they can't wait to make love.

These are great characters with what looks like an interesting story already behin them. I hope there will be more books about them.

[BookAddict ✒ La Crimson Femme · Rating 2 out of 5]

This short story was okay for me. It was a fast read about a boy off to college to get his Mrs. The title was cuter than the actual story. Regardless of Tory's gender, I wouldn't have liked him. Had he been my roommate, I probably would have kicked his ass. He was annoying and I don't understand why he's in college either. He doesn't want to be there and it's a waste of money.

[Unapologetic_Bookaholic · Rating 3 out of 5]

Tory and Jon are a cute couple. In this short-short you barely get a lick of what they are like but I'd definitely buy their full length story. I know the kind of author J M Snyder is and the characters she develops are great.

[Jason Bradley · Rating 4 out of 5]

I enjoyed this lighthearted story of two young lovers who are excited to get the chance to see each other for a long weekend. I hope JM Snyder writes this couple's story as it mentioned at the end. I would be interested to read it.

[Ami · Rating 3 out of 5]

What a cute short story from one of my favorite authors, J.M. Snyder. Tory couldn't wait to get his hand on his lover, Jon, after being a month separated. So yeah, f*ck the foreplay! :D. It is said there might be longer story about the two, and I can't wait. I love J.M. Snyder's young people.

[✟Roxanne✟(Death by Book Avalanche) ☠ · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was a really cute (ultra) short erotic story with some likeable characters but minus a plot. This would make a great full length novel which I would be very interested in reading. It's not as filthy as the title may suggest...more of a cute and fluffy romance.

[The Celtic Rebel (Richard) · Rating 2 out of 5]

I always enjoy the short stories or anything I read from J.M. Snyder. I had this one for awhile and was excited about finding it this week but was very disappointed. The characters lacked any depth and the story was just way too quick -- even for a short story.

[J.M. · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is my book so I won't review it.

[Mel · Rating 3 out of 5]

A cute little (ultra)short about Tory, who's at college, being reunited with his boyfriend Jon, who is over for a visit.

[Kaseka · Rating 3 out of 5]

PWP short story. An amusing glimpse into campus dating, sexiling one's roommates, and the awkward sweetness of reunion!sex with a time limit.

[Lee · Rating 3 out of 5]

Yep, it's short. I guess that's because all of the foreplay was deleted from the story. Less pages you know.

[Jay · Rating 4 out of 5]

For a 16 pages ebook it was adorable and hot. Single scene, right to the hot, would be a great scene in a complete novel.

[Ashley♥Alexis · Rating 4 out of 5]

loved it!! Such a cute story

[Sassafrass · Rating 4 out of 5]

very cute, very short, and very hot. I would love to see this as a novella or short novel. there was so much more I wanted to see of this couple.

[Gbook · Rating 4 out of 5]

Fun. I want to read more about these characters. I fell for Jon. His personality fits with Tory.

Definitely needs a sequel!! ;)

[Alisa · Rating 3 out of 5]

Hahahahahhhahahahahahaahaaa.... this was funny as hell.. IDK why... but it was...

[Kirsty~Vhixen · Rating 3 out of 5]

short and sweet. those two kids were so cute! i wish it had of been longer though.

[L-D · Rating 3 out of 5]

Very short. No plot.