I appreciate a good police procedural, but this one was all over the map. On the one hand, there is a criminal mystery here to solve. It takes a while to emerge so I was not really clear for some time what the objective was, but once I got there, fine, let’s see who did what and why. At the same time, it is the story of a history professor thrust into the role of Acting Sheriff. He feels ill-suited to the position, but is in fact quite competent and a reasonable choice for the job. With apparent false modesty, he claims he was put in the role because he would not ruffle feathers and was simply a placeholder until the actual Sheriff recovered from a coma.
On a positive note, I particularly enjoyed the realistic setting. The author clearly knows the Phoenix, Arizona environment well. That rang true for me. The street names, weather, and mountain and desert scenery all felt palpable and believable.
But I have a few significant issues with this book. First, a lot of the dialog felt superficial and contrived. It just didn’t captivate me with the danger and tension the reader was expected to feel. Second, I had some trouble keeping the multiple stories straight. That confusion lasted too long. Was this a story about theft, drug dealing, police corruption and payoffs, or maybe even sex trafficking? These are all good subjects for a police novel, but here they were jumbled together and I wasn’t sure what issue the characters were really wrestling with. Lastly, I simply did not like the main character, David Mapstone. I realize he is a recurring figure in Talton’s books. Somehow, I kept thinking Mapstone was a stand-in for the author himself, i.e., who he wished to be. Mapstone has a stunningly beautiful, smart, and tough girlfriend who adores him, of course. He claims to be a gentle, unassuming soul, yet he repeatedly shows how tough and brave he is, a man of action, taking risks. A lot of false modesty, in my opinion.
I did finish the book because I was just interested enough to see what happened to the original Sheriff. And that question was resolved in the last few pages rather quickly and a little too neatly. All in all, there is a reasonable story here, with a great realistic Phoenix setting, but the story was confusing, with a rather unlikable protagonist and shallow dialog.