The storyline in Andy McNab's "Shadow State" is overly simplistic, bordering on vanilla and boring. Despite McNab's legendary status, this was my introduction to his work, and it was far from flattering.
The Thailand arrest was a weak opening, and the idea of getting a British citizen out of trouble on a trumped-up charge of rugby tackling a dirty cop and then force said man into forced labour requiring skills yiu did not know he possessed seemed utterly implausible.
Gasana's character, intelligence, and background lacked the complexity needed to run schemes akin to those witnessed in Thailand, El Salvador, Mexico, Greece, and Dubai. The oversight of not checking the thumb drive for a billion-dollar crypto key raised questions about the intelligence assumed of the readers.
The subplot involving the journalist turned amateur sleuth in Rwanda was laughable. The notion of a white woman tailing a finance minister in a predominantly black country without raising suspicion, only to approach him the way she did without consequences, seemed highly unrealistic.
The eccentric billionaire subplot involving a square off between Gassana & Liu and the billionaire impulsively spending $30 million on unwanted art added a layer of teenage storyline nonsense.
The abundance of amateur-hour scenarios in this book made me realize that all the years I spent not reading Andy McNab's books, thinking I was missing out, turned out to be a fortunate decision.