These stories were OK. I had kind of a hard time with the characters. Mostly the male ones. Actually, kind of all of them. In the first story, Denim and Diamonds, you love the Hero in the prologue. He is in love with Letty, who leaves to pursue her dreams in LA, and he is waiting for her to come back, and is still loving her 4 years later. When he learns that she has had a kid in LA (through an affair with a married man), and is not moving back, he gives up all hope. When she does come back, 5 years after that, she's been gone 9 years, and Chase has turned hard and cynical, and can barely be civil to her or her daughter. So I understand that, I do. Most of the time you are rooting for them. But for some reason, Letty keeps her medical condition (the true reason for her return) a secret, even from her brother, which just seems dumb, being that they're actually pretty close. The author doesn't really give a good enough reason for her NOT to have told him about her condition. So there's a lot of misunderstandings and assumptions that follow, naturally. When they finally DO get together and get married toward the end, you think, "FINALLY! Now surely they'll communicate!" But, they don't. Again. First, when they have been married and living together for months during the recovery of her surgery and finally gets a clean bill of health from her doctor, she tries to seduce her, and he rejects her! For no good reason, other than he's an idiot! He comes to his senses of course, but not before causing her pain. And Chase is so sure that Letty is going to go back to LA, he doesn't give any faith in her loving him. And when he tells her that of course he expects her to leave, and she tells him straight out she has loved him her whole life (not for the first time, either, mind you), he STILL doesn't believe her and all but shoves her out the door! Or tries, anyways. Letty basically has to hit him over the head with her love and the fact she isn't leaving before he will finally believe it, that I think his resistance was a little too much to be believable.
For the second story, involving Letty's brother, Lonny, and her best friend, Joy, more of the same. Lonny and Joy dated a few years before Letty moved back to town, and it ended badly, and they got more and more antagonistic with each other over time, so that they couldn't be in the same room or space for more than 5 minutes without yelling at each other. You actually like Lonny. Though in the beginning, he goes back and forth between deciding he can't stand Joy to really liking her. It's kind of funny how he is constantly getting tongue tied around her, and keeps sticking his foot in his mouth all the time. But he makes such a drastic 180 that it's almost hard to believe how he goes from being completely awkward, angry, and stubborn for 2 years to being suave, romantic, and completely confident that he and Joy are going to get married in a matter of a couple of weeks. But it was better than the first story at least.
Despite my problems with the characters, the story was really well written in that it moved along quickly, and intriguing enough that I didn't want to put it down without seeing what was going to happen. I hope her characters in other books get better, though.