2/5 Stars
TL;DR - This book has a lot of things going for it, namely the world itself and the magic system, but it’s also long and boring and shoots itself in the foot by including some puzzling, tone-deaf classism and frankly appalling treatment of non-binary people, and then offering no rebuking or commentary on these issues.
Big thank you to Orbit/Orbit Books and NetGalley for providing me with the ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review!
***Trigger warning for the objectification, dehumanization, and straight-up murder of non-binary people.***
‘Gods of the Wyrdwood’ by RJ Barker is the first installment in an epic fantasy trilogy detailing the struggles of the land of Crua. It’s told from two main points of view, that of Cahan Du-Nahere, formerly a powerful magic user who has quit that life and resigned himself instead to the life of a forester and farmer, and Kirven Ban-Ruhn, the high ruler of Crua struggling to maintain her power. War rages, the northern lands are slowly dying to perpetual winter, and the shadow of politics and greed for power reaches across the world, even to the doorstep of a clanless farmer who just wants to tend his flock and live in anonymity.
First and foremost, this book includes a few really problematic elements. To sum up the smaller issues, there’s some really gross sentiments about unhoused people in the world-building, criminals and poor people are made forcibly naked, to like, embarrass them or make sure they know their place or some such nonsense, and the main character, Cahan, looks down on some people at the start of the book who, by his estimate, were poor, inner-city folk who “didn’t know how to live out in the middle of nowhere”. There’s just a lot really icky classism that I feel like was included to emphasize the depravity of the ruling class, but the issues aren’t ever discussed, at least not in any meaningful way, so there’s just a heaping helping of not-cool things happening and no solid commentary or effective denouncement of it.
And then there’s the trion, the third-gender people who exist in this world. I was excited at first - I’m always down for some enby rep - but it quickly faded. These people are, in the words of Venn, who is a trion themself, “simply traded between powerful families”. We find this out, of course, right before Venn tells their mother how thirty trion, themself included, some barely old enough to walk, were sent into what is, in essence, a magical gas chamber meant to awaken their magic, but summarily kills all but Venn - and it’s well known that the process kills most trion AND THEY’RE SENT IN ANYWAY. Just…what the fuck? Why? Why purposefully have non-binary people as a prominent feature in your world just to objectify, dehumanize, and then murder them?
I almost stopped reading at that point, about 11% into the book, but I was so shocked that I was sure I must have misunderstood what I read and kept reading to figure out what the hell was going on. There was no further clarification in the rest of the book, except that, apparently, every magic user goes into the gas chamber to awaken their magic, not just the trion, and a lot of them die, too. Oh yeah, and the fact that all those trions were sent to die because the villains (including Venn's MOTHER) need a trion magic-user for some big magic thing to win the war (and we find out later that HUNDREDS were sent to die before Venn went), which is just another level of gross and infuriating objectification foisted onto the people by the author. I'm genuinely upset with this book and I wish I'd DNF'd it. However, I was given an ARC for an honest review and that’s what I intend to give, even if it makes me uncomfortable to give positive feedback on this book after reading the aforementioned scenes.
The strongest point of this book is easily the world and its flora and fauna. It’s familiar enough to settle into initially, giving me vibes of the British Isles in ancient times, before the Romans showed up and ruined everything, but it’s also distinctly alien in a way that reminds me of the world from ‘The Stormlight Archive’ by Brandon Sanderson. Instead of crustacean-based critters, in this world we have many creatures that are mollusk-based, specifically squids - except these aren’t ocean-dwelling squid-things, these ones fly. Lots of interesting animals, both mundane and magical, including a lot of deep-forest dwellers that are somewhat familiar fae-like things, while others are straight out of Slavic folklore nightmares.
The Wyrdwood is an incredible setting. I’m always down for a story set in an ancient forest, and this one delivers 110% on both the beautiful, lush side of traveling through a deep forest, and the terrifying, soul-stealing, what’s-making-that-sound side. There’s deep magic in the Wyrdwood (and the titular gods), and it came across as a really poignant and timely message about how deeply humanity’s relationship with nature runs, and how vital it is to respect and preserve it.
The magic system is pretty interesting. No spoilers, but I am a sucker for living magic, that is, magic that is itself alive, and this book offers a fresh take on it. I wish the acquisition of magic and the forces behind it were explained a bit more thoroughly, but it is book one of a trilogy so I expect more will be revealed going forward.
Those few praises aired, the rest of the book was mostly a disappointment.
There are a hundred thousand new world-specific terms that are all dumped on you in the first few chapters, and pretty much none of them are explained alongside them. For the first probably 30% of the book, I didn’t know what so many things meant, because they were never given context. There are a lot of animals that are given no description, and I still don’t know what some are supposed to look like. Paradoxically, I felt like there was way too much description of everything, and yet, I still couldn’t visualize what I was being told about. It constantly felt like I was watching the part of Pokemon where they ask “Who’s That Pokemon” and give you just a silhouette of said Pokemon - I could visualize general shapes and vibes, but never in enough detail to know what the hell was going on.
The majority of characters are just…there. They’re not shallow, but they’re not deep, either. All of the protagonists make interesting choices and have their own personalities to an extent, but I never really connected with any of them because the lens of the story is always zoomed out and focused on what’s happening to the characters, not what they’re feeling on a deep enough level to satisfy me. That’s totally a personal preference, but it did really hamper my connection to and enjoyment of the characters.
The villain and antagonists, though, yikes. Boring villain do predictable villain things. Boring villain followers also do boring villain things, give boring villain speeches. Bad people are bad. Their shiny new god is the one true god, the old gods are fake, they kill anyone who doesn’t convert, and really just kill anyone in their way because they’re in power and that’s what people in power do - and the book really harps on those points. Those points being, people in power bad, tyrannical religion bad, prejudice bad. It’s worst in the beginning of the book, just being beaten over the head with them again and again and again, adding nothing to the conversation that’s been had a million times before, no nuance, just tired tropes. It tapers off as the book goes, but man is it heavy-handed at the start.
Speaking of heavy-handed, the beginning of the book is chock full of really clumsy exposition. Everyone seems to retell stories to people that would, ostensibly, already have heard them. I know that high/epic fantasy generally has a lot of world-building and backstory to fit in so things make sense, but I really feel like it could have been done better than it was.
Also, on the subject of the beginning of the book, I don’t know why, but it feels like the first 200 or so pages of the book were a separate-but-related book, not part of this one. It felt like there was an inciting incident and the start of a plot arc, but then it stopped and went back to the beginning, and then we got another inciting incident, and THEN the actual story started.
And by started, I mean meandered along at such a slow pace that it was a true slog to finish this book. I mentioned above that I was reminded of Brandon Sanderson’s ‘The Stormlight Archive’ series by this book, and ‘Gods of the Wyrdwood’ shares that series’ absolute snail’s pacing and general wordy, pointless over-bloating. There’s just too damn much here and the vast majority is uninteresting. Something like 650 pages and I felt like I was trapped in amber for most of it.
There are so many times where the author tells us that something major happens, like a mini-spoiler, and then takes 2+ pages to get to that actual event, and for me, that really kills the flow and tension of the story. I would have preferred not to have the sentence that tells us something happens in a few pages and just have it revealed at the time it happens. A small thing, maybe, but one that I really didn’t enjoy.
To top it all off, I do not jive with the writing style. Things get repeated, sentences go on with little punctuation (or have a period where it should have a comma or semi-colon, one of my biggest pet peeves), and some things are just plain weirdly-worded. There’s also a lot of passive voice and it’s grating. I found myself constantly re-reading sentences and even paragraphs because I genuinely didn’t understand what was being said because of how it was written. This is probably a me thing, but it is a thing, and it really detracted from overall enjoyment for me.
Final Thoughts:
Setting, good, magic system, good. Everything else, ‘meh’ at best.
The whole trion incident was a major issue for me, and because of it, I will not be reading the rest of this series when it comes out, nor will I be reading anything else by this author. I don’t know anything about the author as person, but what he chose to include in this book is doing him no favors. No thank you.