***Mild Spoilers in the Story-by-Story Ratings Below***
Spoiler Free Review:
TLDR: Once you hit page 83, you can close the book.
Man....this review hurts to leave. Let me start by saying that Chrysalis is a fantastic collection of stories to read if your goal is to burn through a book and get out of a reading slum. ~190 pages of stories and I burned through it in 3-hours. I'll also say that some of these shorts were just immaculate, like truly perfect, meaningful, touching, chilling, and terrifying to their core and I loved them. I'll go more in depth below but, some of these shorts were just 5/5 stars, freaking phenomenal. I'm just so confused how someone who can write such beautiful works can also put out some of the other shorts that were in this collection. Like for every 5 star short, there was a legitimate 0 star short to balance things out and I am just at a loss here. I think one of the biggest things too was just how disjointed these stories felt from one another. They all touch a lot of feminist concepts which links them all together in a nice enough way but, so many of the stories (especially in the earlier half of the book) have such strong supernatural/horror themes that genuinely had me feeling creeped out in my home, and then 2/3 of the way through it felt like Varghese either forgot about all the amazing tension she built in her earlier shorts or just stopped caring??? Honestly, not all of the later shorts were even poorly written, some of them were great but, just so out of place in this collection. You start off in this mind-bending, anxiety-inducing, thriller vibe and then by the end it felt like I was reading a COHO novel and a thrown together Wattpad fanfic.
Short-by-Short Review:
**Gonna try to keep spoilers to a minimum
1. Bhupati - 3.5/5 Stars
A solid short, albeit a little predictable and transparent, and a good kick off into the collection. Generally felt pretty good about this one. Right from the get go the underlying messages about devotion and alluding to themes of infidelity are pretty clear which was nice, and the supernatural element kept me hooked. Think a little more mystery could have been fun but, otherwise solid.
2. The Vetala's Song - 3.5/5 Stars
Honestly a SUPER interesting concept, incredibly tragic and heartbreaking. I think I would've rated it higher but there's this what I'm going to refer to as: "snake prophecy" dialogue that just like....doesn't really hold any relevance.....at all......It was like a pretty pivotal moment for the short and then just doesn't really get dealt with at all. I think the logistics of this story were just unclear. Needed to understand what the consequences were of some of these actions.
3. Dreams of a Drowning Girl - 4/5 Stars
Alright f**k yea, now we're getting somewhere! Really enjoyed this one, perfect level of mystery and aloofness to the story telling. Clearly something going on that we're not in the loop on and it makes you work to figure it out. Think I got a little bit lost with legit just the last section to this one and maybe that's just me but, this did not wrap up nicely whatsoever for me.
4. In the Bone Fields - 5/5 Stars
Freaking CLASSIC unsettling short material here and I loved every god damn second. Lots of content here talking about the influence of family and the struggle to outrun your early life/the people and places that defined your childhood, and also questioning whether or not that urge to run is really healthy in the first place....but in like a creepy, sadistic, terrifying way. Loved it. Great plot twists.
5. Remembrance - 5/5 Stars
After In the Bone Fields, this short made me think this collection was going to be the best thing I've ever read. First off, this short talks directly to the reader (it reads like a letter) which was probably the creepiest thing about it but, the story itself was also just brilliant. Revenge, empowerment, solidarity, it was all just freaking brilliant.
6. Milk - 4/5 Stars
I'm gonna make this one short. Massive bad vibes from this one but god the symbolism was so genius that I needed to give it a higher rating. However, I would pay you to let me never read this again.
7. Cherry Blossom Fever - 4.5/5 Stars
Very cool story....wondering where the supernatural elements went to but, such a solid story with a twist in that it starts shifting perspectives that I was like "yea okay, no this is fine - perhaps even a nice little break".
8. One, Two, Buckle My Shoe - 4.5/5 Stars
The supernatural elements are back and BOY are they back for real. Genuinely terrifying whenever you can incorporate a children's song, almost a guaranteed heart attack for me. Fantastic short - dare I say perhaps it would have benefitted from a little bit more writing....its like 3 pages long and they are 3 terrifying pages but, maybe a little bit more? Milk (don't want to think about Milk again sorry) it a little! But, also the shortness really emphasized the suddenness and shock of the real-world events which this parallels so I could see the benefit of keeping it so concise. Effective nevertheless.
9. Stories in the Language of the Fist - 2/5 Stars
Alright, we've lost the supernatural elements again and this just felt like a scene out of (insert the name of any TV drama you can think of here).....I get what experience Varghese is trying to convey here but, its just too much and all way too on the nose. Where did the nuanced writing go from earlier??? Subtly???
10. Night Zoo - 2.5/5 Stars
Mild return of supernatural elements! I hate that my rating for this one is so low because honestly it had fantastic potential but, just not fleshed out. Again, it's like 3 pages and I know there is something good here but, I just needed it to be less rushed. A lot of good structure here to talk about gentrification etc., just needed more.
11. Arvind - 2/5 Stars
A beautifully tragic story that really could have resonated but, just so out of place with the rest of the collection. Bye-bye supernatural elements again.
12. Chitra - 0/5 Stars
COME ON....be so fr right now.....you did not just make a fanfic of Cinderella and toss it in here.....tell me you didn't do it.....come on.....
13. Cure for Fear of Screaming - 3/5 Stars
Alright yea this was pretty good. Not so supernatural or anything but, definitely had a horror/thriller vibe to it that I was here for. Deeply unsettling. Good job.
14. Midnight at the Oasis = 2/5 Stars
Okay, not my kind of story tbh but, I do appreciate this short giving a voice to a severely underrepresented group of individuals and I think that's great. I think this could've been adapted into a significantly longer story to make up for some of the clunkiness and also to separate it from this collection because it truly felt so out of place.
15. Chrysalis = 2/5 Stars
Meh....not much else to add in here, I was just very underwhelmed. Again, tragic and something that I think needs to be vocalized but, just severely out of place here and not a strong piece of writing imo.