Uh... Just gimme a minute to collect my thoughts, because what the heck did I just read?
I'm so confused & not in a good way. I debated long & hard how to rate this book. On one hand, it kept my interest...like a train wreck or a car accident will keep a person's interest. Honestly that's about the only nice thing I have to say about it. I think there might've been an idea for a decent plot & interesting characters in there somewhere, but there was nothing, & I do mean NOTHING to prop it up.
I still have no idea what the purpose of the first couple chapters is. The book starts with the main character, Max, meeting her best friend at a club. While there she has some amazing make out session with a stranger...then fast forward 1 year & she wishes she knew who that mysterious man was...except he seems to be someone she knows fairly well & she just doesn't realize he was the guy at the bar? What? No, really, what?! The first two chapters have absolutely no bearing on anything. But that's just par for the course, as I soon learned.
The whole book was just all over the place. Character development was a complete zero. You're given a few facts about the main characters, but there's no character growth arc or even anything relatable or particularly likeable about them. There are a bunch of mostly unnecessary secondary characters, all possessing the personality of poorly-drawn stick figures. The antagonist just shows up out of nowhere & starts being mind-blowingly evil; one of the main characters falls prey to the absolute WORST & most poorly developed case of insta-love I've EVER encountered; & the only thing I know for certain about the primary narrator is that she wears ridiculously high heels & has a lot of snarky comebacks. Oh, & she's a witch. A poorly trained but very powerful one who has apparently lived 400+ years while learning nothing about the supernatural world she lives in.
I call Max the "primary narrator" because for some truly useless reason there are multiple POVs in this book. Max's best friend Striker has a few chapters & I am genuinely baffled as to why that is. Particularly considering that one of them is LITERALLY the same scene Max just lived through from his POV even though he was IN THE ROOM WITH HER THE WHOLE TIME. I'm not sure the author really understands how to use multiple POVs.
Even the characters don't know what's going on. As I mentioned, despite being alive for 100s of years, neither of them seems to know much about the world they live in. That includes being unaware of what kind of creatures THEY are-- or rather, what kind of Ethereals they are, that is, since it seems that witches & demons & angels etc are known as Ethereals in this world, but I can't even be 100% on that because there is NO worldbuilding. Like none at all. I don't understand a damn thing about the world of this book. Absolutely nothing is adequately explained.
This book was barely readable, and I definitely won't be continuing the series or reading more by this author. Give this one a pass & don't waste your time!