Everybody’s got their goals. Hina to win big at gymnastics, Chinatsu to win big at basketball, and Taiki to take it straight to nationals. But, between shifting goals, the reality of competition, and good old hormones, nothing’s as simple as just going out there and playing.
It is not exaggerating to suggest that every time Hina pops up, this manga gets roughly 30% better. As much as the Chinatsu and Taiki vibe is getting better and better, Hina is a catalyst of the first order. This is one of the rare times that I have really thought the rival brought something to the table (even if she should be wiping the floor with Chinatsu, but I can’t have everything).
The first section of this volume focuses on Hina’s lack thereof, as her recognition of those damned feelings of hers starts to first distract, then impact, when it comes to her rhythmic gymnastics work. As predicted, here we go…
Or do we? Maybe, just maybe, you can be a mess and still get the job done. I love how this all plays out and having Hina stay strong while being a lovesick mess is fantastic stuff. She’s ridiculously well-written for her role and shows that she’s not all talk.
It’s no great secret that the pressure on any competitive athlete is massive, but the expectations on Hina, who also has a famous father whose footsteps she’s following in, are crushing and she knows it. It’s what she does with that knowledge that makes this a treat to read.
After she gets a pep talk from Taiki, who clearly doesn’t know what he’s unleashing, things return to normal. Except for the edge on her interactions now - Hina knows what she’s doing. But… so does Chinatsu. Fried chicken has never been such a battleground.
Chinatsu gets a little more of a kick in the pants from the Hina situation, but she’s also got her own struggles with proving that all her practice wasn’t just for show and that she’s not just a wannabe. Which everybody knows, but doesn’t stop some opponents from dismissing her as nothing.
There’s just enough to keep the sports sections interesting, but not turn this into a full-on hardcore sports manga. It’s got a balance between the competitive trials of the leads along with their romantic struggles.
Taiki is heavily focused on winning, with his sights set on nationals, but he’s only barely won a match against his senpai in club and there’s always going to be a bigger fish. While the outcome isn’t terribly shocking, it really smacks the reality of the situation home for our boy.
Even his famous forward-facing can’t stay perfectly intact in the face of his dreams being crushed hard, but the way he recovers from it suggests big things in the future. And Taiki’s only kicked it into overdrive relatively recently - Hina and Chinatsu have been pushing for a lot longer to get where they are.
This is a well-written story and no mistake. I like the characters who aren’t Hina, Hina herself is one of my favourite characters in a long, long time, and it’s both charming and has a really good vibe. The premise was a hard swallow, but the results speak for themselves. The cohabitation situation even becomes a sticking point for poor Taiki as well and I love seeing it used for something other than shenanigans.
With a couple volumes down, the story really nails the dynamic between all these characters and having them not be love-centric every single moment like you’d see in a traditional shojo gives it a bit more realism that helps set it apart. It’s not hard to imagine this playing out in the real world at times and the slow burn between Chinatsu and Taiki is developing nicely.
4.5 stars - the Hina sections at the start are 5 stars all the way, the latter tournament stuff is good to great, around 4-4.5 stars depending on the moment. Rounded up because of the general quality on display here. And maybe also for the way it looks like it’s about to go for fan service and then smacks it down in amusing fashion.