Taiki is on his last year of junior high. Chinatsu is on her first year of high school. He likes her a lot and resolves to put himself on equal footing by competing at badminton as well as she does at basketball. But Chinatsu might be moving overseas, unless a very lame cliché can come to Taiki’s rescue.
Oh boy, this manga comes out super strong. I love the dynamic of Taiki being younger and trying to impress the high school girl he cares about (who definitely thinks more of him than he realizes). His plan is very of his age and I like that Chinatsu comes off as more mature than him in the way she’s written. Their dynamic is note perfect for an older girl and a younger guy.
But when this spectre of Chinatsu going abroad comes up, well, what was going really strong veers off into one of the dumbest premises in manga - forced cohabitation. I won’t even pretend it’s a surprise because once the first hint starts dropping you know where it’s going.
What this adds to the story is a grand total of not much, since it mostly causes plot contrivances more than any real developments and that’s a damn shame because otherwise this is a really solid book. Like, really solid, with some clever acknowledgement of the nonsense that you think and gets under your skin with young love.
For a shonen manga there’s precious little ogling so far too (even Taiki’s imagination is underdeveloped compared to his contemporaries) and lots of good work done with the action. Taiki starts to put even more work in and it yields results, it’s a simple but effective tale.
I also really loved the addition of his friend, Kyo, who is the pessimistic realist to Taiki’s gung-ho idealism. And Hina, their rhythmic gymnastics pal/nuisance who is just better than them and she knows it. Throw in a rival just waiting in the wings, unaware that he’s an obstacle until the very end, and a solid cast is coming together.
I think my other real issue with the story is that Hina might be more interesting than Chinatsu. There’s an extended conversation between Taiki and Hina later on about sacrifice and effort that is probably the most interesting part of the story and really makes me more intrigued in that pairing over the story’s focus. It’s not that Chinatsu is bad, I just think Hina’s better (Hina probably would too).
It’s a good book, don’t get me wrong. I genuinely enjoyed this and look forward to more and with me and shonen titles that’s a high bar to clear without a dollop of irony being added. This is a solid start, though it sadly could have been great with a little extra tweaking. It’s the rare case of having incredibly strong characters stuck in a pretty pedestrian plot.
Finally, I’d also say that you shouldn’t judge a book by its cover, as I think the cover art on this one is spectacularly dull, but what’s inside is perfectly solid with some rather nice flourishes.
3 stars - you can easily nudge it up a couple of spots if you don’t mind the story getting deflated a couple times. This would definitely be in the 3.5-4 range if it did just a little bit more with its story other than rely on some annoying narrative crutches.