If too many cooks spoil the broth, what does too much expectation do to a book by a favourite author?
Set in West Bengal as India readies herself for freedom against a foreign rule, Independence by Chitra Banerjee Divakaruni is the story of three sisters, written from their individual POVs.
The story begins with the vibe of Pride and Prejudice (or so it strikes me) though soon it melts away, letting the book's own spirit surface to the pages.
I have loved Chitra Banerjee Divakaruni's works for many things - two prime factors being the easy flow of her prose and the interesting, seemingly real character arcs. Here both seem too forced. The prose, obviously intentionally devoid of comma at many places, seem too pretentious, as if styled too look high and mighty. The colon, used to narrate dialogues, is another eye sore. I understand that this is 'style' but to me they are just disappointment.
I didn't like some of the stark sentences too. They could not fit naturally. Thus the writing style was a disappointment. But I take heart that either my favourite author is exploring more or is aiming high for some awards. She deserves them.
Like lightning that flashes for a brief moment into the heart of the dark sky, sometimes I still found sentences in the prose, one here, one there that were reminiscent of her earlier style. They were a solace and they made me crave for more.
I think the novel would have been justified better if it was titled The Crazy Sisters. 😀 Throughout the novel, Priya and Deepa do whatever they want. I wanted to make them stand in a corner and drive some sense into their heads. Jamini is the only sister/character that bears the trademark complexity and arc, that I have come to expect from and love in Chitra Banerjee Divakaruni's character. Only she seems real.
The climax is not rushed, but given a little more time to develop, I think it would have helped the book better.
Well, I think I make it sound as if I hated the book? No, I didn't. Despite all the disappointment I point out, this was an unputdownable read for me. But as I said, my expectation from this author is high, and I think, rightly so. Though I did not feel invested in any character, and though, so many times, I found the plot movement forced, I was always eager to know what happened next. This charm, the author still manages to pull off for me and I end up reading the last fifty pages of Independence with the light of my phone torch, till 3 a.m.
I think this book will work better for non-Indians who are not well aware of our struggle for Independence. The author presents history well, but for most Indians, there is nothing new to know here. Also, how the political movements affect the lives of the three sisters is also plotted to startling effects; Priya and Deepa's feats are not impossible, but most Indians will know that these are larger than life scenarios.
There's a certain escapade scene, which though quite filmy, actually dazzles me; at that point in the novel, I find myself sitting up straight and tense. The moment came unaware to me and I loved it.
Oh, and I loved the snatches of Bengali songs with which the prose is peppered. Not too many, yet enough to stir my nostalgia.
I feel this book didn't work too much for me because it's not written for me, it's written for international audience or atleast for a reader who is not too well versed with Bengali characters and culture. What I see in Independence is glimpses, what I wanted was a life size mirror that could pull me into the spirals of images and sounds from a time gone by.
Nevertheless, it has been after a long time that I could read a physical book from start to end. The book is beautifully made, right from its cover to its layout. Despite being hardbound, it is lightweight. The mother of the three sisters stitch kaatha (kantha) spreads, something I had seen my grandma stitch. Grandma would even stitch small kaatha spreads for my dolls. Holding the beautifully designed book brought back those warm memories. From the book oozed a warmth that reminded me of my grandma and my childhood; days and memories warmed by kaatha spreads made with love.
Q: Do I recommend Independence to my fellow readers?
A: If you have not read Chitra Banerjee Divakaruni before, I would recommend Sister of my Heart by the author instead. If you have and now want to read this, I would say - go ahead, but not with too high expectations.
Rating 3.5/5