After their date… if it could be called that… maybe… Hibiki and Minato are having trouble connecting. But when they finally bridge the gap, it decides to open right up again as Hibiki’s worst character trait finally goes a bit too far… just in time for the series finale.
Yes, it’s Goodbye, Melancholic! this time around as we bid a short and sweet farewell to another little yuri series. But how do we relationship in this final volume? And does everything get where we think it should?
The first section, as Hibiki and Minato both dance around Minato’s declaration of like to her senpai is a ton of fun. I really enjoy the way the story shows them concurrently at loose ends and just unable to do the little bit more.
When this culminates in the actual re-confession, it’s a reminder to Hibiki (and the audience) that Minato goes along with things because it’s easier for her, not because she doesn’t have her own thoughts. And if pressed, she can make her own choices.
Which Hibiki gets to experience again as she goes back to her pushy default that defined her in the first volume and made her a bit less of a sympathetic character. Even framed as ‘for your own good because you’re worth more than you think’, it’s a bad call and it’s clear that the story knows it too.
And no animal gets backed into a corner without lashing out and Minato strikes hard and deep, knowing the absolute worst possible thing to say to wound the girl that she loves. It is the perfect example of a heated moment where words come out that you’ll not only regret, but can’t take back.
That’s a whirlwind of drama that’s pretty decent, especially because Hibiki is ultimately right but not going about it in a way that respects Minato. It’s complicated in its simplicity and the writing is at its strongest during this portion of the story.
However, as much as I love how everything looks and sounds in this story, but I have to admit that it’s just lacking some undefinable something that would make it absolutely perfect for me.
Part of it is, indeed, the fast forward that hits once the argument is finally resolved, as the school year passes in a blink of an eye, to its narrative detriment. It hits a few notes, but, like many other series, it just doesn’t know what to do when the couple get together.
The other part is that the chemistry between our leads is very, very good, but it never quite hits the higher temperatures of a more intense story (even their arguing feels lower wattage than other, similar series). One great moment with Hibiki does not an entire series make.
The ending is quite good and finally gives poor Minato a bit of a glow-up, but not too much, which I appreciated, and spends its time just beforehand ruminating on the troubles of a relationship maintaining itself over a distance. This in particular doesn’t feel like anything new, but it’s got some interesting ideas about worry that I appreciated.
The other bummer is that we don’t get much for the other band members. There’s a bonus chapter for the very popular Emma that is very eyebrow-raising and quite the chapter to go out on. But the duo who got so much time last volume are stuck with some bonus pages that we aren’t going to get (sigh).
4.5 stars - I think that’s fair, especially without nudging it to 5, as this is so very good, but it’s not in my personal pantheon of yuri classics. It does a lot more with its mere three volumes, mind, than most stories and is definitely worth the experience.