A woman disappears and her parents rent out her house just after 3 weeks? Not likely.
An 11 month old baby pushes his lawnmower in the front yard? Most 11 month babies can't walk let alone push a toy over an uneven surface such as a lawn.
A "professional" organizer who is always saying how messy her house is? I wouldn't hire her that is for sure.
Finding a skull and not call the police immediately - going home first?
Yep, Ms. Rosett is right on track with another book full of discrepencies and ideas not at all consistent with who her 2 dimensional characters portray.
OMG! Ellie is telling the people that have been putting up flyers for almost a year how to do it better? Like not one of them has a brain to figure out how to hang flyers? That if a light pole has a flyer already, why put up 4 more? Divide the town in to sections? Really? What a novel idea!
I don't like Ellie and that is a major flaw of the writer. If the reader doesn't like the main character the rest of the story is destined to fail also.
Each of these books in this series has "organizing tips", placed at the end of chapters no less that certainly would draw the reader out of the story. I skipped these tips entirely finding them a uselss distraction - unless that is the author's plan so readers won't remember the discrepancy from one page to the next. Most books based on a theme put that theme at the end of the book: recipes, sewing, decorating, etc.
DISCREPENCIES to the max. How can Nita transcribe a notebook that is in police custody and she herself says the detective is trying to get someone to transcribe it? All within 2 paragraphs of one another. This is terrible writing and terrible editing. Then to have Nita request Ellie to take the transcriptions she is working on and match them to newspaper articles? What is wrong with this picture? THEN Nita recommends Ellie for her wonderful organizing skills to Scott? Wonderful skills that the woman has no first hand information about?
Like I have said previously: Ellie is a 2 dimensional character that the author builds up with other characters of less dimension. This is a terrible excuse for writing.
Ellie gets closely followed by a car, semi-runs, then finds out it is Colleen who wasn't sure it was Ellie and that is why she, the driver followed Ellie in such an erratic fashion? Get real!
To think I am not even halfway through the book yet. worse yet, I have 3 more books to go before I get through the series. I bought the books and I will read them despite it all.
The author has Ellie, the not too bright heroine, organize the closet of STAND, where she alone makes the decision of what is thrown out and what should be shredded, and what should be kept and filed? I wouldn't trust Ellie to organize my trash. The premise is totally ridiculous.
Vehicles sitting at the bottom of a lake for almost 60 years will not have recognizable license plates. The vehicles themselves will be rusted, probably in unidentifiable pieces. Water, even in a lake, moves. OMG! I hate using the text abbreviation. Then later a body is finally found and immediately identified as Jodi? Impossible. Forensics, Ms. Rosett, forensics. DNA identification takes time. Check your sources.
The entire Topaz angle was ridiculous. Name recognition equals facial recognition? Poor scapegoat. Oh and the earrings made from keys? Yeah, they would have ripped an earlobe.