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The Immortality Trials
Greer Roberts has never wanted immortality. It was a privilege only allowed to the rich, magically gifted and powerful. There was no way she was going to enter the trials in order to win the prize of eternal life, considering humans never won and she would have to bargain with years off her own life to play the government's sick game. It was a price she was not willing to pay.
Except now she doesn’t have a choice.
Someone has falsely admitted her into The Immortality Trials and unless she can prove an imposter enrolled her she will have to compete or sacrifice her own life cycle. Kyra, past trial winner and warlock, begrudgingly becomes her best option for an ally. What quickly starts off as cold disdain with Kyra, quickly turns into an intoxicating seduction that Greer cannot seem to resist despite her better judgment.
More mysteries start to unfold as immortals appear dead, old secrets are revealed and unlikely powerful friends offer aid. Something dark is brewing in the Republic and Greer finds herself in the middle of it.
Greer must solve more than one mystery in order to keep herself alive. Her battle starts as soon as the Trials begin, the question is will she have enough time to save herself and the ones she loves before her time runs out?
Except now she doesn’t have a choice.
Someone has falsely admitted her into The Immortality Trials and unless she can prove an imposter enrolled her she will have to compete or sacrifice her own life cycle. Kyra, past trial winner and warlock, begrudgingly becomes her best option for an ally. What quickly starts off as cold disdain with Kyra, quickly turns into an intoxicating seduction that Greer cannot seem to resist despite her better judgment.
More mysteries start to unfold as immortals appear dead, old secrets are revealed and unlikely powerful friends offer aid. Something dark is brewing in the Republic and Greer finds herself in the middle of it.
Greer must solve more than one mystery in order to keep herself alive. Her battle starts as soon as the Trials begin, the question is will she have enough time to save herself and the ones she loves before her time runs out?
- GenresFantasyUrban Fantasy
465 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 8, 2022
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April 26, 2022
“How was I supposed to escape this nightmare if it wasn’t in my dreams?”
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Thanks to Madison Nicole for providing an ARC of The Immortality Trials in exchange for an honest review.
⇢The Immortality Trials in under 10 words
- A Magical competition
- The Hunger Games but paranormal
- Likeable characters
⇢Thoughts
This was a fun read! Right from the start, I was intrigued by both the characters and the unique concept, and I was right to be. The story itself was somehow both unique and filled with the great fantasy tropes we all know and love, and the cast of characters was very well-suited to that. The representation was great to see, as well.
⇢Thoughts
To go more in-depth with the characters, I thought they were super well done. Each of the characters was distinct from the others, and I even enjoyed seeing the minor characters because it was always cool to be introduced to a new species.
Greer was a great main character, I liked her bravery and how it never prevented her from being vulnerable too. I would have loved to have seen that vulnerability in greater depth— there was clearly a lot that Greer had faced and it felt like there was more room to explain her past.
The one comment I have about the characters was their relationships. Greer and Lux’s friendship was super well done, but many of the other friendships as well as Greer and Ky’s relationship developed a bit too quickly for my taste! It would have been nice if Greer’s friendship with Nova and Waverly had developed a bit slower, just to be more realistic.
⇢The Writing
This book was self-published, and that showed up a bit in the writing. Nothing that was too concerning but there were some editing issues, and certain phrases just seemed to be repeated a bit too often! One thing I noticed is that the author tended to repeat physical descriptions of the characters as they were talking, for example, “X said, with their eyebrows raised” or “as their shoulders shrugged” etc rather than emotional descriptors. Normally I wouldn’t notice something like that but it felt like it happened quite often, and because of that, I missed out on actually understanding how the characters were feeling since I was only told how they looked. Was that a huge problem? No. Just something that stood out to me!
⇢The Ending
That ending! I did not see much of that coming, and I’m intrigued to see where this story goes.
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March 8, 2022
Thanks to the author for sending me an e-ARC.
Urban fantasy has never been my preferred genre, but The immortality trials was a pleasant surprise.
It did remind a bit of Crescent city, and not because the FMC is a redhead 😅, but because of the mystery/investigation factor.
Greer is just a human living her life in a world where humans are at the bottom of the pyramid. Not the easiest life, but not the worst either, because she has friends she can always count on.
Up until one day when she finds out somebody entered her in the Immortality trials, where the winner will be gifted with immortality.
Greer never considered entering the trials, because how could she stand any chance to win when humans usually barely manage to pass the first 2 trials.
At fist I thought the plot will be set in future, or a different world, but it seems like it’s more of an alternate present, because they have google and Audi R8 lol 😂
Overall I really enjoyed the story, I think it’s a really good written debut novel, the only reason I gave it 4 stars was because some things felt repetitive, and I also felt like the relationships she created with the people around her were kind of rushed.
It is an adult book for sure, it has some good spice and I’m really excited to see how Greer’s story will continue, because that ending left me wanting to throw my kindle across the room.
Urban fantasy has never been my preferred genre, but The immortality trials was a pleasant surprise.
It did remind a bit of Crescent city, and not because the FMC is a redhead 😅, but because of the mystery/investigation factor.
Greer is just a human living her life in a world where humans are at the bottom of the pyramid. Not the easiest life, but not the worst either, because she has friends she can always count on.
Up until one day when she finds out somebody entered her in the Immortality trials, where the winner will be gifted with immortality.
Greer never considered entering the trials, because how could she stand any chance to win when humans usually barely manage to pass the first 2 trials.
At fist I thought the plot will be set in future, or a different world, but it seems like it’s more of an alternate present, because they have google and Audi R8 lol 😂
Overall I really enjoyed the story, I think it’s a really good written debut novel, the only reason I gave it 4 stars was because some things felt repetitive, and I also felt like the relationships she created with the people around her were kind of rushed.
It is an adult book for sure, it has some good spice and I’m really excited to see how Greer’s story will continue, because that ending left me wanting to throw my kindle across the room.
March 11, 2022
I really wanted to like it…but I didn’t.
The premise was really cool and drew me in, but the writing to me felt amateur. The book desperately needs another round of edits. I got annoyed by all the dialogue ending in ellipses when it should have just ended in a period, and (this may be a personal preference) the amount of times the main character referred to men as “males” was just too much. The way everyone’s clothes and hair are described in excruciating detail for every new scene is tiresome.
Also when the fourth trial was to rescue a hostage that was taken, I felt that was just a blatant rip-off of Harry Potter and the Triwizard Tournament.
I think with some heavy edits this book could really shine, and it’s definitely not the worst debut for a new author. However, I would definitely not call it good.
The premise was really cool and drew me in, but the writing to me felt amateur. The book desperately needs another round of edits. I got annoyed by all the dialogue ending in ellipses when it should have just ended in a period, and (this may be a personal preference) the amount of times the main character referred to men as “males” was just too much. The way everyone’s clothes and hair are described in excruciating detail for every new scene is tiresome.
Also when the fourth trial was to rescue a hostage that was taken, I felt that was just a blatant rip-off of Harry Potter and the Triwizard Tournament.
I think with some heavy edits this book could really shine, and it’s definitely not the worst debut for a new author. However, I would definitely not call it good.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
March 20, 2022
This book was recommended by a friend. I am happy to report that it is just as good as she raved about it. I was instantly drawn into this magical world that author, Madison Nicole created. Not only that but the characters are amazing. None of them felt like second or third string characters. They all played important roles in the story.
For being a mortal, Greer never came off as a weakling compared to those who had powers like her best friend, Lux and love interest Ky. The chemistry between Ky and Greer is so spicy. They will make you need a tall glass of cold water.
Also, can I just take a moment to mention the plot twist that I did not see coming towards the end of the story. I mean...it will leave you sitting on the edge of your seat. I can't wait to read book two.
For being a mortal, Greer never came off as a weakling compared to those who had powers like her best friend, Lux and love interest Ky. The chemistry between Ky and Greer is so spicy. They will make you need a tall glass of cold water.
Also, can I just take a moment to mention the plot twist that I did not see coming towards the end of the story. I mean...it will leave you sitting on the edge of your seat. I can't wait to read book two.
March 4, 2022
Wow! I will first be upfront that I received an ARC of this book this week when I came across Madison's TikTok.
Let me say that this book was incredible and everything I wanted out of an urban fantasy novel. Think Triwizard Tournament meets Hunger Games meets the second half of ACOTAR. Add in found family, strong world building, and a story that sucks you in and keeps you up late reading and truly feels like a new adult novel. I mean, what more could I have possibly want in a book?!
I can't wait to see what comes next from Madison Nicole and if this is her debut novel, then I think she is one to watch!
So highly recommend! Go pre-order this book! I honestly believe you will love it!
Let me say that this book was incredible and everything I wanted out of an urban fantasy novel. Think Triwizard Tournament meets Hunger Games meets the second half of ACOTAR. Add in found family, strong world building, and a story that sucks you in and keeps you up late reading and truly feels like a new adult novel. I mean, what more could I have possibly want in a book?!
I can't wait to see what comes next from Madison Nicole and if this is her debut novel, then I think she is one to watch!
So highly recommend! Go pre-order this book! I honestly believe you will love it!
May 22, 2022
It's hard to summarise how I feel about this book. I loved the premise, and the actual trials sections of the book were thrilling (except the final trail, but the intrigue at that part was enough to make up for it). I had a hard time getting through the first half because of the relationship building between the characters. Lux and Greer was the only friendship that felt real to me as the others all seemed very rushed and everyone spoke to eachother a little strangely.
I'm excited to see how this author grows as she continues to write, I saw a lot of potential! There were a lot of story elements which at times felt a bit overwhelming, but they were mostly juggled well. I can't decide whether I wish the book was longer and more world building occured, or if I wish the pace had been faster, but at times I struggled to piece together the universe of the story.
I would have rated this more highly if it wasn't for the character relationships leaving me feeling a bit strange purely because they didn't feel genuine to me despite the amount of time spent on them. But the story was good and I'm interested in the next installment!
I'm excited to see how this author grows as she continues to write, I saw a lot of potential! There were a lot of story elements which at times felt a bit overwhelming, but they were mostly juggled well. I can't decide whether I wish the book was longer and more world building occured, or if I wish the pace had been faster, but at times I struggled to piece together the universe of the story.
I would have rated this more highly if it wasn't for the character relationships leaving me feeling a bit strange purely because they didn't feel genuine to me despite the amount of time spent on them. But the story was good and I'm interested in the next installment!
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December 1, 2025The Hunger Games meets Crescent City in this urban fantasy that has the MC fighting for her life, literally. Fans of Jennifer L. Armentrout's writing style will enjoy this novel where the action is largely driven by characters' introspection and inner monologues. Author Madison Nicole has built a complex and unique world filled with fun characters you'll want to grab a drink with.
March 25, 2022
This book was okay. I liked the idea of it all but I don’t think it came out as well as it should/could have.
I felt like the entire thing was very rushed. Everything was way too easy for the main character. Pretty much every solution or aid was just handed to her. She made all of her friends right away. She also pretty much fell in love with the love interest within two days so that was disappointing.
Things were also extremely repetitive. The deep connection between her and her best friend seemed to be brought up every other page which I feel was unnecessary considering it had already been touched on with great detail.
All of the characters instantly became best friends and cared for each other deeply. Which does happen sometimes but it was kind of far fetched in this scenario.
There were some things that didn’t make sense or just should have been expanded upon.
SPOILER:
So the whole premise of the plot is the main character competing in the immortality games. These games are made to sound extremely hard and nearly impossible for humans, but the main character easily completed all of them. I get that she actually has powers but it just doesn’t add up. I also don’t understand how a game so important that grants you immortality had such loose rules. For the first trial the contestants weren’t held anywhere and could just attempt the trial whenever they wanted. The first trial also seemed like a joke. Kidnapping another contestant randomly?
I also did not understand the maze. There are different species and they are allowed to use their powers. So the ones that could wield power could blast their way through with fire, or the flying ones could just fly overhead? It didn’t mention this, but it was what I thought right away. Greer made it to the mazes end in like 10 minutes just by walking through. It doesn’t make sense.
I believe good books have buildup, challenges, and plot twists. Everything in this book just seemed too easy. Maybe some people will like that but it personally wasn’t the best in my opinion.
I felt like the entire thing was very rushed. Everything was way too easy for the main character. Pretty much every solution or aid was just handed to her. She made all of her friends right away. She also pretty much fell in love with the love interest within two days so that was disappointing.
Things were also extremely repetitive. The deep connection between her and her best friend seemed to be brought up every other page which I feel was unnecessary considering it had already been touched on with great detail.
All of the characters instantly became best friends and cared for each other deeply. Which does happen sometimes but it was kind of far fetched in this scenario.
There were some things that didn’t make sense or just should have been expanded upon.
SPOILER:
So the whole premise of the plot is the main character competing in the immortality games. These games are made to sound extremely hard and nearly impossible for humans, but the main character easily completed all of them. I get that she actually has powers but it just doesn’t add up. I also don’t understand how a game so important that grants you immortality had such loose rules. For the first trial the contestants weren’t held anywhere and could just attempt the trial whenever they wanted. The first trial also seemed like a joke. Kidnapping another contestant randomly?
I also did not understand the maze. There are different species and they are allowed to use their powers. So the ones that could wield power could blast their way through with fire, or the flying ones could just fly overhead? It didn’t mention this, but it was what I thought right away. Greer made it to the mazes end in like 10 minutes just by walking through. It doesn’t make sense.
I believe good books have buildup, challenges, and plot twists. Everything in this book just seemed too easy. Maybe some people will like that but it personally wasn’t the best in my opinion.
December 24, 2022
I got this book in a giveaway from TikTok and I finally got around to reading it. This was a interesting urban fantasy that was fast paced and had a mystery aspect to it.
This story has a little bit of Hunger Games, a little bit Goblet of Fire trial along with mythical beings and gods. Then add in a mystery sub-plot and a sprinkling of spice.
Greer is a human- and in her world- that makes her weak. She is best friends with one of Odessa’s elite, Lux who is a powerful shifter. A tiger is his go to.
People- humans and mythical beings alike- can compete in the Immortality Trials, 1000 go in and only one can win immortality. The trade off, if you lose you either lose a part of your life or you are signed up to work for the government. There are 5 trials, each more dangerous than the last.
A human has never successfully competed in the trials but when Greer is impersonated and tied to a blood contract, she has to compete in the trials or…
This was fast paced and fun! Some of the character depth lacked a little for me due to the relationships forming really quickly. The relationship between Greer and Lux was sweet and loving- I do love the found family trope.
Kyras backstory and twist at the end was really interesting and I like that he had a little bit of a dark past. He and agrees relationship was good as well.
The ending left me wanting to know what is going to happen next and I’m ready for book 2.
This story has a little bit of Hunger Games, a little bit Goblet of Fire trial along with mythical beings and gods. Then add in a mystery sub-plot and a sprinkling of spice.
Greer is a human- and in her world- that makes her weak. She is best friends with one of Odessa’s elite, Lux who is a powerful shifter. A tiger is his go to.
People- humans and mythical beings alike- can compete in the Immortality Trials, 1000 go in and only one can win immortality. The trade off, if you lose you either lose a part of your life or you are signed up to work for the government. There are 5 trials, each more dangerous than the last.
A human has never successfully competed in the trials but when Greer is impersonated and tied to a blood contract, she has to compete in the trials or…
This was fast paced and fun! Some of the character depth lacked a little for me due to the relationships forming really quickly. The relationship between Greer and Lux was sweet and loving- I do love the found family trope.
Kyras backstory and twist at the end was really interesting and I like that he had a little bit of a dark past. He and agrees relationship was good as well.
The ending left me wanting to know what is going to happen next and I’m ready for book 2.
March 23, 2022
3.5 stars (I really wish we could give 1/2 stars)
This is a strong debut novel for a first time author. The world created is intriguing as well as each of the characters. I found the plot to be interesting and while slow at some stages, it definitely picked up speed halfway through the book. The representation in the LGBTQ+ community as well as mental health struggles was a plus for me. It was good go touch on that in an alternative fantasy universe. Also loved the twists throughout the book and didn’t expect anything in the last 100 pages or so! The book ended off where I wanted more and went “wait that’s it?”. Hopefully a sequel is in the works.
Some minor things I noticed (and could very much be a me thing) was in the writing itself. I felt like there was an overload of “I said” “She said” “He said” after every sentence when two characters in the scene were having a conversation. I didn’t think it was necessary and felt a bit repetitive and obvious who was replying to the statement. Additionally, the clothing and hair being described in heavy detail in every scene became a bit much and I found myself skipping over that section about 250 pages in. 😅 Also it felt a bit weird using the term males instead of men? It read a bit weird to me but that could totally be a personal preference.
Overall strong start to a fantasy series and an interesting world that is built. Cant wait for more!
This is a strong debut novel for a first time author. The world created is intriguing as well as each of the characters. I found the plot to be interesting and while slow at some stages, it definitely picked up speed halfway through the book. The representation in the LGBTQ+ community as well as mental health struggles was a plus for me. It was good go touch on that in an alternative fantasy universe. Also loved the twists throughout the book and didn’t expect anything in the last 100 pages or so! The book ended off where I wanted more and went “wait that’s it?”. Hopefully a sequel is in the works.
Some minor things I noticed (and could very much be a me thing) was in the writing itself. I felt like there was an overload of “I said” “She said” “He said” after every sentence when two characters in the scene were having a conversation. I didn’t think it was necessary and felt a bit repetitive and obvious who was replying to the statement. Additionally, the clothing and hair being described in heavy detail in every scene became a bit much and I found myself skipping over that section about 250 pages in. 😅 Also it felt a bit weird using the term males instead of men? It read a bit weird to me but that could totally be a personal preference.
Overall strong start to a fantasy series and an interesting world that is built. Cant wait for more!
March 4, 2022
When I say that this was a devastatingly good book, I mean it. Madison Nicole's debut novel sucked me in and it DELIVERED. The parallels to real life issues underscore the entire story, making the plot feel very close to home and close to the readers heart. It's packed full of representation for BIPOC, Immigrants, and the LGBTQIA community. It also subtlety addresses class differences and feminism in novel ways. The entire cast of characters is engaging and compelling, each with their own quirks, their own faults, and their own attributes. The romantic partnerships in the book were BEAUTIFULLY written all around, and the spice was perfect! I loved the depth of commitment that this found family had for each other, and I can't wait to see where they pick up and where the journey takes them in the coming books.
April 27, 2022
This book was really sold as harry potter meets the hunger games meets percy jackson. And it was in the best and the worst ways possible. The idea of this book and the underlying plot was 5 stars for me, the execution not so much. There were a few things i didn’t enjoy:
- it’s written in the first time person and i just in general don’t enjoy that. It also made the book quite repetitive. I got lost in the characters this that it completely distracted me from the ongoing plot
- the relationships all felt a little forced or happened too quickly for these people to be the best of friends
- not enough time was spent on the trials themselves and there was little to no emotional payoff or tension during the trials
- instagram and netflix existed??? i’m just imagining half bears, faeries, nymphs etc sat around watching orange is the new black idk ???
I don’t want to be a hater but i was really excited to read this book and really wanted to love it.
- it’s written in the first time person and i just in general don’t enjoy that. It also made the book quite repetitive. I got lost in the characters this that it completely distracted me from the ongoing plot
- the relationships all felt a little forced or happened too quickly for these people to be the best of friends
- not enough time was spent on the trials themselves and there was little to no emotional payoff or tension during the trials
- instagram and netflix existed??? i’m just imagining half bears, faeries, nymphs etc sat around watching orange is the new black idk ???
I don’t want to be a hater but i was really excited to read this book and really wanted to love it.
March 13, 2022
I had the honor of being chosen as an ARC reader in exchange for an honest review. This book brought me out of a reading slump. The story has twists and turns that kept me on the edge of my seat. I love a book that brings something you never expected to the table and the Immortality Trials delivered on all accounts. I loved the blend of urban fantasy with social structures and issues that reflect our own world just enough to jab your heart strings while still allowing the escapism we turn to fantasy for. Greer and Kyra are both so relatable in their own ways and I’m so invested in them. A beautiful debut novel.
March 29, 2022
Fantasy Romance with a dash of Dystopian vibes. This book reminded me of a mashup between Crescent City, The Hunger Games and the Tri-Wizard Cup. The last half of the book in particular flew by. The romance was lovely, and had great heat that didn’t take away from the story.
This book does deal with anxiety, depression, suicidal thoughts, but it’s done in a way that’s truly beautiful…but be mindful of triggers heading in!
Overall I can’t wait to see what comes next and would highly recommend this book to fantasy lovers
This book does deal with anxiety, depression, suicidal thoughts, but it’s done in a way that’s truly beautiful…but be mindful of triggers heading in!
Overall I can’t wait to see what comes next and would highly recommend this book to fantasy lovers
March 4, 2022
I just finished this books about 3 minutes ago and I am speechless. AMAZING. If you’re looking for the next Sarah J Maas, Madi is the real deal. She wrote an amazing book that had me laughing, crying, biting my nails, all of the emotions.
This story was the perfect mix of the Crescent City series and the Hunger Games (but spicy 🌶). Amazing relationships, friendships, character development. Just amazing writing overall.
I already can’t wait for book 2!!
This story was the perfect mix of the Crescent City series and the Hunger Games (but spicy 🌶). Amazing relationships, friendships, character development. Just amazing writing overall.
I already can’t wait for book 2!!
March 9, 2022
Madison Nicole has done a wonderful job on her debut novel. I was drawn in early on and I think so many people can relate to Greer! I think we all have to fight our own internal demons and this shows the strength in fighting the darkness. Congratulations Madison and I can’t wait to read the next book!
March 21, 2022
blown away
Honestly I’ve been in a book slump this book was wonderful and was so amazingly well written I was very impressed! The story was good and the characters were enjoyable and the mystery kept me guessing!
Honestly I’ve been in a book slump this book was wonderful and was so amazingly well written I was very impressed! The story was good and the characters were enjoyable and the mystery kept me guessing!
March 8, 2022
A strong debut novel. The plot was very good medium to fast paced throughout the book. There was a sense of urgency whenever they're needed to be, strong character development and relationships between the characters was very good. A little bit info dumpy about the characters in the beginning but being the first book in a series it was fine. The ending left room for the next book in the series without having an annoying cliffhanger. Can't wait to read more about this fun urban fantasy world.
*I received an advanced reader copy of this book in exchange for my honest review.
*I received an advanced reader copy of this book in exchange for my honest review.
April 10, 2022
Loved this debut novel!!
Text I sent a friend the day I started it: “This ARC I’m reading is like Hunger Games but with supernatural beings… not even 1/5 through it and I’m anticipating the next scenes…. Anticipating like I’m excited, not I’m able to predict them”.
It’s the mature fantasy, with mystery that I love. The character building was fantastic, and the feminism, BIPOC, and LGBTQ+ representation was everything I’ve ever wanted from a book. Subtle but realistically diverse and representative of reality.
There are some editing misses, but not many that really detract from the story in any big way. The only developmental critique I had was that the main characters friendship with two other women happened super fast, and I didn’t get to read the details of that development though I love each of the characters and their friendship… I just wanted more information on how they got so close.
Towards the end of the book I slowed down reading… I have trouble finishing books I love when I can’t immediately pick up the next book in the series! I don’t know how long we will have to wait for book two but I am on pins and needles to know where this story goes.
The final chapters don’t read like a cliff hanger per say, but they do leave you thirsting for the next part in the story!
Definitely worth checking out, highly recommend!
Text I sent a friend the day I started it: “This ARC I’m reading is like Hunger Games but with supernatural beings… not even 1/5 through it and I’m anticipating the next scenes…. Anticipating like I’m excited, not I’m able to predict them”.
It’s the mature fantasy, with mystery that I love. The character building was fantastic, and the feminism, BIPOC, and LGBTQ+ representation was everything I’ve ever wanted from a book. Subtle but realistically diverse and representative of reality.
There are some editing misses, but not many that really detract from the story in any big way. The only developmental critique I had was that the main characters friendship with two other women happened super fast, and I didn’t get to read the details of that development though I love each of the characters and their friendship… I just wanted more information on how they got so close.
Towards the end of the book I slowed down reading… I have trouble finishing books I love when I can’t immediately pick up the next book in the series! I don’t know how long we will have to wait for book two but I am on pins and needles to know where this story goes.
The final chapters don’t read like a cliff hanger per say, but they do leave you thirsting for the next part in the story!
Definitely worth checking out, highly recommend!
January 17, 2023
Great first book from a new author!
What I liked: the fast pace, well thought out characters and the plot twist.
What I didn't like: how the internal monologues tended to go on for too long and how some word choices could have been better, for example life cycle is reportedly used when I think life span could have been a better choice.
Tropes: urban fantasy and chosen family.
Favourite characters: Kyra, Greer, Lux, Waverly and Nova. Waverly was actually my favourite of them all, I found myself excited to read any time she was present.
Notable scenes: finding out she was in the trials, there is smut in here and it's well written, all the trials, forming friendships, the plot twist, Kyra's background, necromancy, a scene between Kyra and the President lmao and one of Lux's shifts.
I felt a wide range of emotions during this book: excited, happy, sad, angry, empathetic, confused, annoyed and suspenseful.
The story was great, you can tell it was inspired by goblet of fire and hunger games but it also very much stands on its own.
Greer, I love as a character. A sassy, strong woman who has mental health struggles, which is great and I empathise with having a few myself.
Lux was a great character, I liked how his go to shift was a tiger, but the shift later? Wow. Their friendship was over explained many times but it's good to see a close relationship of found/chosen family without saying being involved.
Kyra is an awesome pyro warlock who was also a previous winner, who actually listens and communicates properly. His backstory was interesting too.
Nova was also an interesting character and described as a beautiful woman. I'd love to get to know her more.
I really loved Waverly and hope to see more of her too.
I loved how there was mental health struggles and LGBT+ representation.
I loved the plot twist and I can't wait to read more when the next comes out!
What I liked: the fast pace, well thought out characters and the plot twist.
What I didn't like: how the internal monologues tended to go on for too long and how some word choices could have been better, for example life cycle is reportedly used when I think life span could have been a better choice.
Tropes: urban fantasy and chosen family.
Favourite characters: Kyra, Greer, Lux, Waverly and Nova. Waverly was actually my favourite of them all, I found myself excited to read any time she was present.
Notable scenes: finding out she was in the trials, there is smut in here and it's well written, all the trials, forming friendships, the plot twist, Kyra's background, necromancy, a scene between Kyra and the President lmao and one of Lux's shifts.
I felt a wide range of emotions during this book: excited, happy, sad, angry, empathetic, confused, annoyed and suspenseful.
The story was great, you can tell it was inspired by goblet of fire and hunger games but it also very much stands on its own.
Greer, I love as a character. A sassy, strong woman who has mental health struggles, which is great and I empathise with having a few myself.
Lux was a great character, I liked how his go to shift was a tiger, but the shift later? Wow. Their friendship was over explained many times but it's good to see a close relationship of found/chosen family without saying being involved.
Kyra is an awesome pyro warlock who was also a previous winner, who actually listens and communicates properly. His backstory was interesting too.
Nova was also an interesting character and described as a beautiful woman. I'd love to get to know her more.
I really loved Waverly and hope to see more of her too.
I loved how there was mental health struggles and LGBT+ representation.
I loved the plot twist and I can't wait to read more when the next comes out!
June 30, 2022
Great Bones
The overall story is fantastic, but is in need of an good editor or a handful of peer edits. There are typos, formatting inconsistencies, plot inconsistencies, repeated phrases, sentences that appear to be mashups of two different thoughts, and so many ellipses.
At the core though, it’s a GREAT story.
Greer, nearly 25, finds herself entered into a competition she never signed up for. She has support though, and gains friends along the way, that are dead set on making sure she succeeds. In the process of making her way through the Immortality Trials (a series of tasks that takes a group of 1000 down to 100, with one being crowned the winner of immortality) she and her group tries to figure out WHO entered her in the first place.
Most of the tasks given, are absolutely brilliant. I loved the fact Greer had to face her fears, and the swimming marathon had me on the edge of my seat. I wish I’d known what happened to her emotional support backpack and mermaid (I assumed neither survived, but it wasn’t spelled out)
Task one, I didn’t quite understand. The first 1000 to finish, were to be contestants in the rest of the trials, but how were the initial line of “finders” selected? If you were “found” and brought in, you lost. And if you fail to “find” your target and turn them in, you lost. The only way to win, is to defeat your “finder” and “find” your target and bring them in. What about people who entered the trails, but had failed to be “found” and had never been given a target?
The relationship between Greer and her roommate/friend (I think his name is Lon, or Len, but I’m horrid with names) is fantastic. As well as the progression between our two leads. I wouldn’t have minded more development between Greer, the ladies, and the necromancer.
With some editing, this could be a five star (for me).
The overall story is fantastic, but is in need of an good editor or a handful of peer edits. There are typos, formatting inconsistencies, plot inconsistencies, repeated phrases, sentences that appear to be mashups of two different thoughts, and so many ellipses.
At the core though, it’s a GREAT story.
Greer, nearly 25, finds herself entered into a competition she never signed up for. She has support though, and gains friends along the way, that are dead set on making sure she succeeds. In the process of making her way through the Immortality Trials (a series of tasks that takes a group of 1000 down to 100, with one being crowned the winner of immortality) she and her group tries to figure out WHO entered her in the first place.
Most of the tasks given, are absolutely brilliant. I loved the fact Greer had to face her fears, and the swimming marathon had me on the edge of my seat. I wish I’d known what happened to her emotional support backpack and mermaid (I assumed neither survived, but it wasn’t spelled out)
Task one, I didn’t quite understand. The first 1000 to finish, were to be contestants in the rest of the trials, but how were the initial line of “finders” selected? If you were “found” and brought in, you lost. And if you fail to “find” your target and turn them in, you lost. The only way to win, is to defeat your “finder” and “find” your target and bring them in. What about people who entered the trails, but had failed to be “found” and had never been given a target?
The relationship between Greer and her roommate/friend (I think his name is Lon, or Len, but I’m horrid with names) is fantastic. As well as the progression between our two leads. I wouldn’t have minded more development between Greer, the ladies, and the necromancer.
With some editing, this could be a five star (for me).
March 6, 2022
🔥 The Immortality Trials Review 🔥
When I tell yall this book will immediately suck you in!!! I didn't want to stop reading! I was forced to because...adulting. Buy man, this book was on my mind the whole time I couldn't read it! I just wanted the moving and everything to be done with so I could get back to this!!
Why was I so stuck on this book??? Because this book has everything I am always looking for in fantasy novels!!! Fantastic world building, phenomenal characters, sarcasm, drool worthy men and women, different kinds of magic, suspense, mystery, twists and turns, relationship and character building, and last but most definitely not least, an awesome storyline that sinks into you deeper and deeper as you keep reading!!
I was absolutely blown away!! Not just because of how great the story is, or all of the amazing detail Madison put into the world building, but because THIS is her debut novel!!! She is releasing a fucking masterpiece as her debut novel!!! Reading this you can see how much research and thought she put into this book!! I can't even imagine all of the research she did and how long it took her to put together this national treasure of a book!!!
I want to live and breathe this book!!! I think it's very clear that I am absolutely obsessed with this!!! And I have added Madison to my favorite authors list because holy moly I can't wait to see what else she has in store for us all!!
She really gave me everything in this book!! You need to read this book!!! GO run and preorder it!!!! Heck, when this is released I'll buy the ebook for the first 10 people who DM me wanting to read this and leave a review because I really feel that EVERYONE needs to read this!!!!
When I tell yall this book will immediately suck you in!!! I didn't want to stop reading! I was forced to because...adulting. Buy man, this book was on my mind the whole time I couldn't read it! I just wanted the moving and everything to be done with so I could get back to this!!
Why was I so stuck on this book??? Because this book has everything I am always looking for in fantasy novels!!! Fantastic world building, phenomenal characters, sarcasm, drool worthy men and women, different kinds of magic, suspense, mystery, twists and turns, relationship and character building, and last but most definitely not least, an awesome storyline that sinks into you deeper and deeper as you keep reading!!
I was absolutely blown away!! Not just because of how great the story is, or all of the amazing detail Madison put into the world building, but because THIS is her debut novel!!! She is releasing a fucking masterpiece as her debut novel!!! Reading this you can see how much research and thought she put into this book!! I can't even imagine all of the research she did and how long it took her to put together this national treasure of a book!!!
I want to live and breathe this book!!! I think it's very clear that I am absolutely obsessed with this!!! And I have added Madison to my favorite authors list because holy moly I can't wait to see what else she has in store for us all!!
She really gave me everything in this book!! You need to read this book!!! GO run and preorder it!!!! Heck, when this is released I'll buy the ebook for the first 10 people who DM me wanting to read this and leave a review because I really feel that EVERYONE needs to read this!!!!
April 17, 2022
1.5 stars. Came across a tiktok about this book and was super interested from the character description and even pre-ordered. However..it’s not terrible but also not very good to be completely honest 😅 It seemed like there’s way more repetitive internal dialogue than actual story so the characters and plot just kind of fall flat.
The story is interesting in itself but the modern 2020s verbiage amongst the characters made it pretty difficult to envision this happening in a different reality. (Unless it’s the same exact reality as ours but with monsters and magic? Idk) And because both POVs spoke like a teen girl, sometimes I forgot whose chapter I was even reading.
Absolutely love books that represent LGBTQIA+ and POC but this one just didn’t quite hit that mark.
The story is interesting in itself but the modern 2020s verbiage amongst the characters made it pretty difficult to envision this happening in a different reality. (Unless it’s the same exact reality as ours but with monsters and magic? Idk) And because both POVs spoke like a teen girl, sometimes I forgot whose chapter I was even reading.
Absolutely love books that represent LGBTQIA+ and POC but this one just didn’t quite hit that mark.
May 3, 2022
Disclaimer: I was sent an e-ARC of this book after finding Madison's TikTok.
Overall, I was pleasantly surprised. I very much enjoyed this book and the different characters. I would've preferred a bit more 'Spice' but that absolutely does not take away from the book.
Greer is so awesome. She gets beaten down so many times but pushes through and gets stronger. I love how we learn about her struggles in-depth and the support she has on all sides.
The pacing is good, there is no point that just drags along. I read the entire book over 2 days and it was very hard to put down to go to sleep.
I was not expecting the ending! I really want to know what happens next!
Madison did a fantastic job on her debut novel 👏
Overall, I was pleasantly surprised. I very much enjoyed this book and the different characters. I would've preferred a bit more 'Spice' but that absolutely does not take away from the book.
Greer is so awesome. She gets beaten down so many times but pushes through and gets stronger. I love how we learn about her struggles in-depth and the support she has on all sides.
The pacing is good, there is no point that just drags along. I read the entire book over 2 days and it was very hard to put down to go to sleep.
I was not expecting the ending! I really want to know what happens next!
Madison did a fantastic job on her debut novel 👏
October 10, 2022
This was an engaging, well thought out book. The characters were compelling, and there were just enough side stories and focus on them to make the book feel well rounded and complex rather than having a singular focus. I had a few moments of wondering whether the trials would extend into the next book, and worry that the last few were going to feel rushed and cramped, but they were done really well. I'm looking forward to the next book, though I was very disappointed at the FMC's unwillingness to believe the MMC's side at the end given her supposed conquering of her fears and demons earlier, and I think getting passed that will be a slightly annoying plot point in the next book.
March 11, 2022
I started this book and was already hooked by the end of the first chapter! There are these two lines in the book that will give nothing away but does give you a wonderful glimpse at who Greer is, 'I hated when people said bad things only happen to you because you can handle it. As if the Universe was testing you all the damn time for fun.' This book is amazing it is well thought out it shows love, compassion, courage, passion and friendship in a way that will leave you wanting more from this Author!
March 16, 2022
Let me say this was an ARC read and I’m super happy to have the opportunity to read this book.
I loved it! The book moved well, I felt connected to the characters and the interactions felt natural and the story moved nicely without overdoing or under doing. My heart built up so much with Ky and Greer and holy shit did I get spilt in two with the cliffhanger. I am so at a loss with words with the perfectness of it all.
It did have some grammatical errors but nothing you couldn’t figure out.
1000% recommend
I loved it! The book moved well, I felt connected to the characters and the interactions felt natural and the story moved nicely without overdoing or under doing. My heart built up so much with Ky and Greer and holy shit did I get spilt in two with the cliffhanger. I am so at a loss with words with the perfectness of it all.
It did have some grammatical errors but nothing you couldn’t figure out.
1000% recommend
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
March 11, 2022
If the Hunger Games met The Goblet of Fire for adults, this would be the book.
It was an action packed, spicy new adult urban fantasy that was well written by a new debut author!
The 1 star knock was only that I felt some of the internal dialogue was repetitive, especially in the first half of the book and it took a little bit for the two POV to get their own voice.
I can't wait to find out what happens next.
I was given an ARC of this book.
It was an action packed, spicy new adult urban fantasy that was well written by a new debut author!
The 1 star knock was only that I felt some of the internal dialogue was repetitive, especially in the first half of the book and it took a little bit for the two POV to get their own voice.
I can't wait to find out what happens next.
I was given an ARC of this book.
April 3, 2022
I got this book at a pop-up for some local businesses and holy crap, I can't rave about it enough. A mix of Harry Potter, Hunger Games, maybe a little Star Wars? Sign me up. Ms SJM better step over because this was seriously one of the best fantasy books I have read in a long time. The world building, the character development, the freaking trials, 10000/10, could not recommend fast enough. Finished the whole book in like 24 hours and will be impatiently waiting for the next book she puts out.
April 9, 2022
I loved it! The plot is amazing and such a ride! There’s a lot going on all at once, but it’s handled pretty well! I will say some of the reveals seem kind of random and forced, but nothing too awkward. Altogether it’s a great book! I love the LGBTQ+ representation and the characters are all great. I do wish we knew more about Nova and Waverly, as they seem super interesting, but sadly not too much is known about them yet beyond the basics.
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