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Keeper of the Keys #1
City of Starlight
A trunk, a dagger, a map, and a...cat?
When her aunt passes away, she leaves Kaidyn an old trunk of bizarre contents and one of her cats. After accidentally opening a portal, Kaidyn is thrown into a country divided by a massive wall and overwhelmed with ancient magic.
Thrust between two royal houses, both claiming rights to the throne, Kaidyn isn't sure who or what to believe. One thing soon becomes clear: she is the next Keeper of the Keys, an ancient lineage of human women tasked with balancing the wild magic and serving the true monarch of Evirness.
Kaidyn must overcome the self-doubt that plagues her from a birth deformity with the help of a formidable guard captain and unlikely friends if she ever wishes to find her way home.
Times are strange in Evirness, and Kaidyn is the only one who can bring down the wall and stop the gateways from wreaking havoc, but will she fulfill her ancestral duties or run back to the safety of her own world?
When her aunt passes away, she leaves Kaidyn an old trunk of bizarre contents and one of her cats. After accidentally opening a portal, Kaidyn is thrown into a country divided by a massive wall and overwhelmed with ancient magic.
Thrust between two royal houses, both claiming rights to the throne, Kaidyn isn't sure who or what to believe. One thing soon becomes clear: she is the next Keeper of the Keys, an ancient lineage of human women tasked with balancing the wild magic and serving the true monarch of Evirness.
Kaidyn must overcome the self-doubt that plagues her from a birth deformity with the help of a formidable guard captain and unlikely friends if she ever wishes to find her way home.
Times are strange in Evirness, and Kaidyn is the only one who can bring down the wall and stop the gateways from wreaking havoc, but will she fulfill her ancestral duties or run back to the safety of her own world?
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August 21, 2024
'You have the freedom of your own destiny.'
A beautiful tale of friendship, strength, courage, and self-discovery.
When Kaidyn's aunt passes away, she leaves her an old trunk of bizarre contents and a cat.
After accidentally opening a portal, Kaidyn is thrown into a country divided by a massive wall and overwhelmed with ancient magic.
Stuck in this world where she 'was no one, had no one, was nothing and had nothing,' confused and plagued by doubts, Kaidyn slowly realises her arrival hadn't been quite accidental. She is the next Keeper of the Keys an ancient lineage of human women tasked with balancing the wild magic and serving the true monarch of Evirness.
With no knowledge about magic or the new 'crazy, barbaric, medieval shithole' she seems to have landed in, Kaidyn is supposed to bring down the wall and stop magic gateways from wreaking havoc in Evirness, when she wants nothing more than to get back home.
She is apparently the only one who could do it. If only she would believe she can!
This is how her story begins. One of challenges accepted, risks taken, fears faced and mistakes made. The story of a girl trying to find her way home and reshape herself into someone worthy in her own eyes.
'There comes a time when one must choose to take on a challenge, to be willing to make mistakes, to be willing to fail, to have anything worthwhile in life. To be anything. I was choosing that time, in this place, to find me. To no longer be weak. To persevere through challenges, to face my fears, to change my view of myself. I'd rather take the chance and risk failure than never try at all.'
But to do that. our girl must not only learn to see the deformed hand she was born with, as a strength and not a flaw. She must build up a self esteem practically crushed after years of feeling different, fragile and not good enough. And her struggle was one of the highlights of this tale for me.
Kaidyn is given a chance to become that strong and confident person she is supposed to be, in a world that teaches her about love, lust, strength, courage and genuine friendship. But if she will be brave enough to take it, you'll need to read this to find out. :D
What should you expect if you decide to give it a try?
Great characters with wonderful dynamic in a nicely drawn world, fun banter and totally awesome friendship, intriguing magic and a fabulous message.
We all have a dent or two in our self-esteem. Some perhaps even more than others. And through Kaidyn, we get to see that sometimes it is enough to just try setting self-doubt aside and start feeling and knowing we are enough. And sometimes, we might just need a well meant boot in the ass to get us there.
The book ends in a mild cliffhanger that made me wish I had the sequel close at hand. Quite a few questions are left unanswered and things unexplained, but this is a series after all so I won't hold that against it.
If you love fantasy, friendship and beautifully written journeys of self-discovery, give this one a try and you won't be disappointed.
It's downright magical.
Happy reading everyone
and remember
it's always better
to 'take the chance and risk failure than never try at all.'
A beautiful tale of friendship, strength, courage, and self-discovery.
When Kaidyn's aunt passes away, she leaves her an old trunk of bizarre contents and a cat.
After accidentally opening a portal, Kaidyn is thrown into a country divided by a massive wall and overwhelmed with ancient magic.
Stuck in this world where she 'was no one, had no one, was nothing and had nothing,' confused and plagued by doubts, Kaidyn slowly realises her arrival hadn't been quite accidental. She is the next Keeper of the Keys an ancient lineage of human women tasked with balancing the wild magic and serving the true monarch of Evirness.
With no knowledge about magic or the new 'crazy, barbaric, medieval shithole' she seems to have landed in, Kaidyn is supposed to bring down the wall and stop magic gateways from wreaking havoc in Evirness, when she wants nothing more than to get back home.
She is apparently the only one who could do it. If only she would believe she can!
This is how her story begins. One of challenges accepted, risks taken, fears faced and mistakes made. The story of a girl trying to find her way home and reshape herself into someone worthy in her own eyes.
'There comes a time when one must choose to take on a challenge, to be willing to make mistakes, to be willing to fail, to have anything worthwhile in life. To be anything. I was choosing that time, in this place, to find me. To no longer be weak. To persevere through challenges, to face my fears, to change my view of myself. I'd rather take the chance and risk failure than never try at all.'
But to do that. our girl must not only learn to see the deformed hand she was born with, as a strength and not a flaw. She must build up a self esteem practically crushed after years of feeling different, fragile and not good enough. And her struggle was one of the highlights of this tale for me.
Kaidyn is given a chance to become that strong and confident person she is supposed to be, in a world that teaches her about love, lust, strength, courage and genuine friendship. But if she will be brave enough to take it, you'll need to read this to find out. :D
What should you expect if you decide to give it a try?
Great characters with wonderful dynamic in a nicely drawn world, fun banter and totally awesome friendship, intriguing magic and a fabulous message.
We all have a dent or two in our self-esteem. Some perhaps even more than others. And through Kaidyn, we get to see that sometimes it is enough to just try setting self-doubt aside and start feeling and knowing we are enough. And sometimes, we might just need a well meant boot in the ass to get us there.
The book ends in a mild cliffhanger that made me wish I had the sequel close at hand. Quite a few questions are left unanswered and things unexplained, but this is a series after all so I won't hold that against it.
If you love fantasy, friendship and beautifully written journeys of self-discovery, give this one a try and you won't be disappointed.
It's downright magical.
Happy reading everyone
and remember
it's always better
to 'take the chance and risk failure than never try at all.'
July 4, 2025
This story really touched my heart. Kaid resonated with me because of the way she was treated in the real world and seeing her grow and become so confident in the new strange world, despite a disability and insecurity. Found family, conquering the inner negative dialogue, friendship and so much love are the main themes and they are done well. Watching Kaid settle into and accept her role as the Keeper of the Keys was very sweet. The romance, very slow burn and chaste, suited the story and was based on respect, trust and friendship, the best kind of start. The side characters all bring something wonderful to the book and of course, I can't help but to mention FAIN! Oh how I love him!
The only negative was the over use of "he/she kicked up his/her lips" it was a strange phrase and used so many times. It was distracting once I saw it.
I look forward to seeing what happens next in the Keeper of the Keys series!
my rating is 4 25
The only negative was the over use of "he/she kicked up his/her lips" it was a strange phrase and used so many times. It was distracting once I saw it.
I look forward to seeing what happens next in the Keeper of the Keys series!
my rating is 4 25
August 9, 2024
It's been a while since I've read such a lovely book! I finished it in a few hours, that's how much I enjoyed it! Kaidyn is the most amazing character, there was something about her that I felt a kinship with. I absolutely loved the very understated humour, in her thoughts as well as what she spews out! One would think she is the sassiest, unreserved, mouthiest character, which she is, but what's remarkable is that she's a shy reserved individual, one who doesn't have friends and has a deformity on her hand. Have I got your attention now? Because she certainly had mine throughout! I loved the genuine confusion she portrays, I'd be as confused if I experienced what she did! You have no idea how well this story unfolds, from the death of her aunt, who Kaidyn assumed was a recluse who lived for her cats, to finding herself in another Realm. Yep, she falls through a portal. And what a world she finds herself in! She is shocked to discover her aunt was linked to this world and that Kaidyn inherited her aunt's role. I loved how she tries so desperately to deny that she has magic, even after amazing feats. Used by one faction, accepted by another, whilst all she wants is to go home, to her world. Until Reid...then she starts to unravel. The tension between Reid and Kaidyn was, quite honestly, hot, although nothing actually happened, the way it was written was wow! Ooops, I'm gushing... Sorry,there's a great plot, all the characters are so likeable, well maybe I'm exaggerating a tad, all bar two are the most beautiful characters. I loved the building up of the storyline, the intrigue, the motives, the drama and I most definitely can't wait for more!
January 8, 2022
What if you lived a whole life in a magical world and were forced to leave it behind, always wanting to return?
Kaidyn's Aunt Millie passes away and the family are tasked with clearing out her house. Kaidyn's world is changed when she finds a trunk in the attic and a mysterious journal that seems to be written by her late Aunt.
Thrown into a strange world so different to what she's used to, it takes her some time to find her feet as she unravels the mystery surrounding her aunt and her connection to the Keeper of the Keys.
I didn't feel the connection with Kaidyn and Payson. But the connection that Kaidyn establishes with the court members felt so natural and the banter was great.
The representation for disability was handled well, Kaidyn had a hand deformity since birth and the author incorporates it within the story throughout with real life implications.
Pacing was fairly consistent, there was some parts in the middle that slowed down a little but overall it was a gripping read.
Fans of magic, portals, grumpy/sunshine, pushing boundaries, rival kings and slow burn romance subplots will enjoy this book. There is a miscommunication trope but in context with the characters it makes sense and hopefully will allow room for a second chance trope in book two.
With a mild cliffhanger, but not enough to hurl the book away on anger, I'm truly excited for the second book!
May fire drakes consume your bullies 🔥
Kaidyn's Aunt Millie passes away and the family are tasked with clearing out her house. Kaidyn's world is changed when she finds a trunk in the attic and a mysterious journal that seems to be written by her late Aunt.
Thrown into a strange world so different to what she's used to, it takes her some time to find her feet as she unravels the mystery surrounding her aunt and her connection to the Keeper of the Keys.
I didn't feel the connection with Kaidyn and Payson. But the connection that Kaidyn establishes with the court members felt so natural and the banter was great.
The representation for disability was handled well, Kaidyn had a hand deformity since birth and the author incorporates it within the story throughout with real life implications.
Pacing was fairly consistent, there was some parts in the middle that slowed down a little but overall it was a gripping read.
Fans of magic, portals, grumpy/sunshine, pushing boundaries, rival kings and slow burn romance subplots will enjoy this book. There is a miscommunication trope but in context with the characters it makes sense and hopefully will allow room for a second chance trope in book two.
With a mild cliffhanger, but not enough to hurl the book away on anger, I'm truly excited for the second book!
May fire drakes consume your bullies 🔥
June 25, 2025
City of Starlight follows Kaidyn, who inherits a mysterious trunk from her late aunt—containing magical objects that pull her into the world of Evirness. There, she learns she’s the next in a line of “Keepers of the Keys,” tasked with sealing dangerous magical gateways and confronting a realm divided by both politics and a literal wall.
I found it difficult to get into the book at first. The beginning moved slowly and i didn't particularly like the part on the side of the wall where Kaidyn arrives. For a while I wasn’t sure if I would continue the series. But the second half really drew me in. Kaidyn as a character felt refreshingly real, especially in how she talked about her hand—it wasn’t glossed over or used for cheap drama, but portrayed with honesty and depth. I also loved the friendships she formed, which gave the story warmth and emotional grounding.
Her bond with the horses, as well as her connection to Silas and the gentle love story, were highlights for me.
The ending felt a bit rushed, and while I didn’t feel like there was a strong climax, I still finished the book wanting more. I’m definitely curious to see where the series goes next and especially the romance between Kaidyn and her love interest.
I found it difficult to get into the book at first. The beginning moved slowly and i didn't particularly like the part on the side of the wall where Kaidyn arrives. For a while I wasn’t sure if I would continue the series. But the second half really drew me in. Kaidyn as a character felt refreshingly real, especially in how she talked about her hand—it wasn’t glossed over or used for cheap drama, but portrayed with honesty and depth. I also loved the friendships she formed, which gave the story warmth and emotional grounding.
Her bond with the horses, as well as her connection to Silas and the gentle love story, were highlights for me.
The ending felt a bit rushed, and while I didn’t feel like there was a strong climax, I still finished the book wanting more. I’m definitely curious to see where the series goes next and especially the romance between Kaidyn and her love interest.
December 21, 2021
Kaidyn has just lost her aunt, and found herself in a new world, with a new duty. As the Keeper of the Keys, she must fulfill her ancient lineage and keep order. But she new to all of this, and isn't sure if she can be what everyone needs her to be.
I adored Kaidyn's character, and the way she handles her birth deformity/defect. She's relatable, interesting and a character you just fall in love with when you meet her.
The writing was great, giving us enough details for us to see this new world, without being bored with the logistics of every little thing. The pacing was fairly steady, more on the slower side but still easy to read.
I'm interested in seeing where the author goes next.
I adored Kaidyn's character, and the way she handles her birth deformity/defect. She's relatable, interesting and a character you just fall in love with when you meet her.
The writing was great, giving us enough details for us to see this new world, without being bored with the logistics of every little thing. The pacing was fairly steady, more on the slower side but still easy to read.
I'm interested in seeing where the author goes next.
January 13, 2023
I was extremely privileged to be one of the first to read this book as an alpha reader and proofreader. I absolutely love the story and was harassing Trisha for more 😂 I fell in love with the characters (well, most of them anyway!) and the world building was so good I could picture it as if I was there with them all. This is a really well written book with a great plot and I can’t wait for book 2 to be ready for me 😁💜
January 23, 2022
I loved this book! It was so well written - character development was very good. Author writes main character that is relatable - I found myself wishing that I could be Kaidyn to enter this world that she found herself in. Her struggles appeared real and her experiences were just as I would think I would have as well. And can I say hello Reid!! Loved the slow burn! I can't wait for the next book. That ending.....oh my goodness! Bravo to Trisha Lynn for that cliff hanger!
January 23, 2022
Oh My Gosh!
This could not possibly end this way?
I want to see Kaidyn kick the witches ass!
I have read both of these books in 2 days. The pages could not move fast enough.
The awakening in her to become More.
Her ability to Be More.
Her disfigured hand was nothing in the realm she was spirited to.
Having lived in the human world she was made to feel ashamed and hid her hand.
Going back is the answer to her feeling whole again.
This could not possibly end this way?
I want to see Kaidyn kick the witches ass!
I have read both of these books in 2 days. The pages could not move fast enough.
The awakening in her to become More.
Her ability to Be More.
Her disfigured hand was nothing in the realm she was spirited to.
Having lived in the human world she was made to feel ashamed and hid her hand.
Going back is the answer to her feeling whole again.
August 21, 2025
I fell into this book quickly and loved it.
Kaidyn is quite relatable to most of us, I think. Smart, introspective, sardonic, with some confidence issues. I think portal fantasies work best when the character that falls through to the other side is someone that we can relate to. So that we can be on their side through their trials. Kaidyn is quite relatable. I really liked her. Her great aunt was a Keeper in the magical land and as Kaidyn drops into the same land, so, so will she be.
This is the first book in a 3 book series and this first book concentrates on Kaidyn becoming more confident and capable and introducing the cast of characters.
The magic framework in these books is mysterious and interesting. Definitely doesn't follow a standard format for such and we aren’t given a lot of clues in book one about how it works. I like this, it’s intriguing.
This book was a pleasant, enjoyable read with characters it was easy to love. It hit the category of when you get to that last page of the book and your kindle auto-throws up the ‘read the next book’ page and you’re somewhere that has wifi so you go, ‘of course I’ll read the next one now.’ This, in spite of the fact that there’s a book there, next in my TBR, that I quite want to read.
Kaidyn is quite relatable to most of us, I think. Smart, introspective, sardonic, with some confidence issues. I think portal fantasies work best when the character that falls through to the other side is someone that we can relate to. So that we can be on their side through their trials. Kaidyn is quite relatable. I really liked her. Her great aunt was a Keeper in the magical land and as Kaidyn drops into the same land, so, so will she be.
This is the first book in a 3 book series and this first book concentrates on Kaidyn becoming more confident and capable and introducing the cast of characters.
The magic framework in these books is mysterious and interesting. Definitely doesn't follow a standard format for such and we aren’t given a lot of clues in book one about how it works. I like this, it’s intriguing.
This book was a pleasant, enjoyable read with characters it was easy to love. It hit the category of when you get to that last page of the book and your kindle auto-throws up the ‘read the next book’ page and you’re somewhere that has wifi so you go, ‘of course I’ll read the next one now.’ This, in spite of the fact that there’s a book there, next in my TBR, that I quite want to read.
June 27, 2025
City of Starlight by Trisha Lynn
Diverse/BIPOC, YA/Coming of Age, Romantic Fantasy
Two Kings, one Keeper, a stonewall that needs to come down. Kiadyn is left a trunk full of gemstones, a map, and a journal when her aunt died. She’s also left a cat, and a job in an alternate world as the keeper of magic. After accidentally going through a portal and finding out she’s the keeper of magic all she wants to do is go home but she ends up making friends which makes it harder for her to want to go back home.
My first thought was that Kaidyn seemed a bit immature for a 19 year old but there were plenty of mature themes despite that and it has been a while since I’ve read YA. I think that the naïve personality of Kaidyn was intentional. The world building was fantastic. I felt like I could really see what Kaidyn was seeing. The way Kaidyn described everything as classic storybook fantasy was a nice touch! Also, the spiders sound terrifying, I could never battle a giant spider. I’d definitely run the opposite way. Overall, I enjoyed this one and I have definitely added book 2 to my tbr list!
Diverse/BIPOC, YA/Coming of Age, Romantic Fantasy
Two Kings, one Keeper, a stonewall that needs to come down. Kiadyn is left a trunk full of gemstones, a map, and a journal when her aunt died. She’s also left a cat, and a job in an alternate world as the keeper of magic. After accidentally going through a portal and finding out she’s the keeper of magic all she wants to do is go home but she ends up making friends which makes it harder for her to want to go back home.
My first thought was that Kaidyn seemed a bit immature for a 19 year old but there were plenty of mature themes despite that and it has been a while since I’ve read YA. I think that the naïve personality of Kaidyn was intentional. The world building was fantastic. I felt like I could really see what Kaidyn was seeing. The way Kaidyn described everything as classic storybook fantasy was a nice touch! Also, the spiders sound terrifying, I could never battle a giant spider. I’d definitely run the opposite way. Overall, I enjoyed this one and I have definitely added book 2 to my tbr list!
May 29, 2022
A beautiful story of friendship, strength, courage, adventure and self discovery.
I really enjoyed this story it was a light fun read. I loved reading about Kaidyn and how her character changed throughout the story. I really liked the evolving relationships with Marida who is very sweet and caring, Aven the cheeky, funny down to earth kind of guy who you would love to be your friend! Then there is Reid who is the brooding alpha male but also has a sweet caring side. It was nice to see their relationship grow and bloom into something real it was nice and refreshing.
I look forward to the next instalment to see where this story will go as it did end on a cliff hanger so now I’m itching to know what happens next considering how it was left 👀
I received an arc copy from the author in exchange for an honest review 😊
I really enjoyed this story it was a light fun read. I loved reading about Kaidyn and how her character changed throughout the story. I really liked the evolving relationships with Marida who is very sweet and caring, Aven the cheeky, funny down to earth kind of guy who you would love to be your friend! Then there is Reid who is the brooding alpha male but also has a sweet caring side. It was nice to see their relationship grow and bloom into something real it was nice and refreshing.
I look forward to the next instalment to see where this story will go as it did end on a cliff hanger so now I’m itching to know what happens next considering how it was left 👀
I received an arc copy from the author in exchange for an honest review 😊
November 5, 2025
Kaiden is sucked into the world of Evirness after her Aunt Millie died and left her an old chest that only she can unlock. Evirness is filled with beauty and a terrifyingly wild magic that has been left to fester too long. She learns that she is the keeper of keys, someone who is now responsible for tempering the wild magic and keeping the people safe. But how can she do that, when all she want to do... is go home.
✨️ Magic potrals from our world to another
✨️ Main character with physical disability learning to be strong and independent
✨️ Really cool magic system and brilliant world building
✨️ Oh my God giant spiders!!! Wtf!!!
✨️An adorable romance starts to bloom, he lets/helps her to be strong
This book was so good. I enjoyed every second reading it! I really enjoyed the storyline and felt like the plot had a good amount of action and character development and felt like it has a good balance of intricate world building while not overloading the reader by unfamiliar terms.
I loved the characters, Aven was my favourite by far because how could I not love the wise-cracking, innuendo-filled, adorable and hilarious best friend! I loved the main love interest and there were some serious vibes between him and Kaiden, which I loved.
I did have some trouble with Kaiden, I felt at times she was childish and repetitive and definitely shattered, but enjoyed her growth from that into the warrior she became and I appreciated how she struggled to accept herself and her deformity, because trauma doesn't just go away. It's a rollercoaster so I really loved the last several chapters (apart from 1 scene 😭 IYKYK) because they made her feel more authentic!!! I will definitely be continuing this series and I look forward to seeing what happens next!
✨️ Magic potrals from our world to another
✨️ Main character with physical disability learning to be strong and independent
✨️ Really cool magic system and brilliant world building
✨️ Oh my God giant spiders!!! Wtf!!!
✨️An adorable romance starts to bloom, he lets/helps her to be strong
This book was so good. I enjoyed every second reading it! I really enjoyed the storyline and felt like the plot had a good amount of action and character development and felt like it has a good balance of intricate world building while not overloading the reader by unfamiliar terms.
I loved the characters, Aven was my favourite by far because how could I not love the wise-cracking, innuendo-filled, adorable and hilarious best friend! I loved the main love interest and there were some serious vibes between him and Kaiden, which I loved.
I did have some trouble with Kaiden, I felt at times she was childish and repetitive and definitely shattered, but enjoyed her growth from that into the warrior she became and I appreciated how she struggled to accept herself and her deformity, because trauma doesn't just go away. It's a rollercoaster so I really loved the last several chapters (apart from 1 scene 😭 IYKYK) because they made her feel more authentic!!! I will definitely be continuing this series and I look forward to seeing what happens next!
July 1, 2025
Loved it!!
The beginning was a little slow, but I’m so glad I stuck with it—totally worth it. Watching Kaidyn grow, find her strength, and realize that even if she was made a little different, she was made with purpose? So powerful. The way she comes into her own despite the people around her being… well, assholes, was so satisfying. I adore her relationship with Aven, we all need a bestie reminding us we have a great ass. 😂
And that slow burn romance? Hot. 🔥 If I had one tiny wish, it’s that this was written for a slightly more mature audience—just sayin’ 😉
Already diving into the next one—can’t wait to see where the story goes!
The beginning was a little slow, but I’m so glad I stuck with it—totally worth it. Watching Kaidyn grow, find her strength, and realize that even if she was made a little different, she was made with purpose? So powerful. The way she comes into her own despite the people around her being… well, assholes, was so satisfying. I adore her relationship with Aven, we all need a bestie reminding us we have a great ass. 😂
And that slow burn romance? Hot. 🔥 If I had one tiny wish, it’s that this was written for a slightly more mature audience—just sayin’ 😉
Already diving into the next one—can’t wait to see where the story goes!
February 5, 2023
I was skeptical about this book while I was getting into it. The brief sentences and quick descriptions felt, lack of detail. But I as I kept reading and ultimately finished. I loved it. I understood. Solid story line, you fall in love with the characters, you are rooting for Reid and Kaid. It was a great novel. I just ordered the second book :)
June 28, 2025
A simple straightforward fantasy story.
I enjoyed this journey and need answers to so many questions.
I'll admit I wasn't a fan of the narration but the story got me through.
I enjoyed this journey and need answers to so many questions.
I'll admit I wasn't a fan of the narration but the story got me through.
December 10, 2021
Good book
Well constructed characters the story draws the reader in and as it develops you find yourself engaged at a basic level.
Well constructed characters the story draws the reader in and as it develops you find yourself engaged at a basic level.
May 31, 2024
3.5 stars rounded up bc I don’t punish self-publishing authors for issues an editor would have fixed.
City of Starlight, despite some flaws, was overall an enjoyable and engaging read! I’m definitely itching to read its sequel! It’s a portal fantasy and the parts of the book in the portal world (which is like 90% of the book) were pretty compelling. The world building was decent and I appreciate the magic system. The concept of magic as a chaotic neutral sort of force that needs to be balanced is not unheard of but definitely less common than the magic wielders being in charge of whether it is good/bad. However, I wish the MC was a more active magic user rather than a vessel thru which the magic works when it needs to. Her magical victories felt rather unearned because they kind of “do” themselves. Her battle victories on the other hand felt much more like an accomplishment. Her character arc, while predictable, is still compelling, especially given that she has a disability so she’s not just leveling up physically but also in her own self-image and self-confidence. Yay for self-acceptance!
This book is self published, and there are times when you can tell. The first couple of chapters in the real world and when she first enters the portal world are a little rough, there’s weird phrasing and some mental monologue repetition but it’s 100% worth sticking with, because those issues largely disappear. The author clearly had a great story and world in her mind but just had a little difficulty launching it. Once launched it’s way better. I’m definitely willing to give grace and leeway to essentially editing issues for self published authors, I felt like the payoff was more than worth it.
City of Starlight, despite some flaws, was overall an enjoyable and engaging read! I’m definitely itching to read its sequel! It’s a portal fantasy and the parts of the book in the portal world (which is like 90% of the book) were pretty compelling. The world building was decent and I appreciate the magic system. The concept of magic as a chaotic neutral sort of force that needs to be balanced is not unheard of but definitely less common than the magic wielders being in charge of whether it is good/bad. However, I wish the MC was a more active magic user rather than a vessel thru which the magic works when it needs to. Her magical victories felt rather unearned because they kind of “do” themselves. Her battle victories on the other hand felt much more like an accomplishment. Her character arc, while predictable, is still compelling, especially given that she has a disability so she’s not just leveling up physically but also in her own self-image and self-confidence. Yay for self-acceptance!
This book is self published, and there are times when you can tell. The first couple of chapters in the real world and when she first enters the portal world are a little rough, there’s weird phrasing and some mental monologue repetition but it’s 100% worth sticking with, because those issues largely disappear. The author clearly had a great story and world in her mind but just had a little difficulty launching it. Once launched it’s way better. I’m definitely willing to give grace and leeway to essentially editing issues for self published authors, I felt like the payoff was more than worth it.
June 23, 2024
A great story about Finding your self worth
I love how the heroine discovered her self worth. To be propelled into a different realm of reality And discover all the positive about her. Fighting alongside warriors, Tapping into magic she didn't know she had, In finding love for the 1st time. The story ends On On a cliffhanger And I cannot wait To read the next installment.
I love how the heroine discovered her self worth. To be propelled into a different realm of reality And discover all the positive about her. Fighting alongside warriors, Tapping into magic she didn't know she had, In finding love for the 1st time. The story ends On On a cliffhanger And I cannot wait To read the next installment.
June 8, 2025
Exotic lands, dangerous magics and a love story that may never be.
Kaidyn Flynn’s discovery of a cat named Silas sets her on a journey she didn’t see coming and, frankly, would not have chosen. Silas leads her to an old trunk which contains a journal and clothing of a style she’s never seen. There are also a couple of gems, which lead her to a new land through a portal.
In this land she learns so many things that change her spirit and bring her into her third decade as a strong, capable woman. Her first experience with a man brings up all the angst she never had a chance to experience as a teen. She vacillates between wanting to stay in the new land with friends, and a man she’s come to love - or wanting to come home to see her brother. Other family too, but it’s Kaid with whom she’s close.
The book is well-written and I am over the moon about the storyline. The world-building is astounding, conflict is always in the background when it’s not at the forefront, so the story moves a,one at a brisk pace. There are enough plot-threads dangling that are keeping me guessing about book two of the trilogy.
Kaidyn Flynn’s discovery of a cat named Silas sets her on a journey she didn’t see coming and, frankly, would not have chosen. Silas leads her to an old trunk which contains a journal and clothing of a style she’s never seen. There are also a couple of gems, which lead her to a new land through a portal.
In this land she learns so many things that change her spirit and bring her into her third decade as a strong, capable woman. Her first experience with a man brings up all the angst she never had a chance to experience as a teen. She vacillates between wanting to stay in the new land with friends, and a man she’s come to love - or wanting to come home to see her brother. Other family too, but it’s Kaid with whom she’s close.
The book is well-written and I am over the moon about the storyline. The world-building is astounding, conflict is always in the background when it’s not at the forefront, so the story moves a,one at a brisk pace. There are enough plot-threads dangling that are keeping me guessing about book two of the trilogy.
November 1, 2022
I was suprised to enjoy this book so much that I can't wait to read the follow up. One of the best read this year.
June 2, 2022
Looking forward to more.
This novel was a good start to what might be a great series. However, Im really struggling with what to say about this book, thus this review is a little longer than what I'd normally write. It was a good book. It had great aspects, but also shows areas for improvement. There are many things I liked about this book, but also some I didn't.
The main character, Kaidyn, has a hand deformity she was born with making a more lonely individual with low self esteem and low confidence. Through most of the book Kaidyn does not believe herself or let's herself believe she is this great keeper of keys. While her doubt and lack of faith is realistic, it was hard to get into the book because of it. Because of her doubt, the beginning is a bit slow, but it picks up pace towards the middle. Kaidyn starts to grow to be a more confident and brave young woman who you can't help but admire.
The sentence structure in the beginning seemed a bit choppy with lots of short sentences, but it smooths out quickly. There were a few typos, but I never let those affect my ratings.
I enjoyed the polt/story line for the most part, and I really loved the world. The author also uses lots of imagery and details when describing people and places that make the world so much better. The idea of the keeper of keys and the creatures and the gates is awesome. I really liked some of the secondary character and many are wonderfully written. (My favorite being the funny, kind and hilarious Aven) However, I feel like the platonic affection/friendship between Kaidyn and some of the characters was a little too instant.
I can't say I liked the decisions the main character, Kaidyn made towards the end but they're somewhat understandable. I was really enjoying the book throughout the middle right up until near the end. I don't really like where the story went but I do like where the story will be headed next.
This book has some mixed feelings from me but I did enjoy reading it and am looking forward to continuing Kaidyn's journey. I would recommend this book to people that are okay will a booking being a little slow in the beginning, those who love coming of age novels, and those who enjoy an MC who (eventually) doesn't let the circumstances she was born to get her down. I would rate this book 3.75 stars.
This novel was a good start to what might be a great series. However, Im really struggling with what to say about this book, thus this review is a little longer than what I'd normally write. It was a good book. It had great aspects, but also shows areas for improvement. There are many things I liked about this book, but also some I didn't.
The main character, Kaidyn, has a hand deformity she was born with making a more lonely individual with low self esteem and low confidence. Through most of the book Kaidyn does not believe herself or let's herself believe she is this great keeper of keys. While her doubt and lack of faith is realistic, it was hard to get into the book because of it. Because of her doubt, the beginning is a bit slow, but it picks up pace towards the middle. Kaidyn starts to grow to be a more confident and brave young woman who you can't help but admire.
The sentence structure in the beginning seemed a bit choppy with lots of short sentences, but it smooths out quickly. There were a few typos, but I never let those affect my ratings.
I enjoyed the polt/story line for the most part, and I really loved the world. The author also uses lots of imagery and details when describing people and places that make the world so much better. The idea of the keeper of keys and the creatures and the gates is awesome. I really liked some of the secondary character and many are wonderfully written. (My favorite being the funny, kind and hilarious Aven) However, I feel like the platonic affection/friendship between Kaidyn and some of the characters was a little too instant.
I can't say I liked the decisions the main character, Kaidyn made towards the end but they're somewhat understandable. I was really enjoying the book throughout the middle right up until near the end. I don't really like where the story went but I do like where the story will be headed next.
This book has some mixed feelings from me but I did enjoy reading it and am looking forward to continuing Kaidyn's journey. I would recommend this book to people that are okay will a booking being a little slow in the beginning, those who love coming of age novels, and those who enjoy an MC who (eventually) doesn't let the circumstances she was born to get her down. I would rate this book 3.75 stars.
May 14, 2023
Overall it was an okay read, but not entirely my cup of tea. The synopsis seemed promising which made me eager to start reading. I liked the possibilities the story had to offer, but unfortunately, in my opinion, they were not worked out to their full potential (for example, I would have liked to get to know more about the Keepers, or about the great evil that’s probably behind all of it). But maybe that’ll be part of the next book(s). However, there are enough descriptions of the surroundings and such that you can imagine yourself walking next to Kaidyn, which made it easier to immerse yourself in the story.
As for the characters, there were several that I liked such as Aven and Marida, but I was a bit disappointed in Kaidyn's character due to her acting immature, constantly changing her mind and being blind to what is happening right in front of her. Nevertheless she learns how to cope with her deformity and how it doesn’t have to be a weakness. She also grows through the book into a confident and stronger character, which is nice to see. Her use of language felt a bit forced/artificial sometimes, with certain curse words occurring at times almost every other page (not that I mind some cursing, but it’s mostly 2 sentences she uses for this and they return a lot, which I couldn’t unsee once I noticed it).
If I do not connect well with the main protagonist, as is the case with Kaidyn, it usually makes it much harder for me to get through the book and less likely to continue reading. But in this case I still managed to see it through to the end, even though I got a bit frustrated from time to time.
Hence my score of 2.5/5. However hard I tried, there were too many elements that made me have to pull myself through the book. This feeling I truly regretted as the synopsis seemed very interesting to me. So like I said, maybe it was just not my cup of tea.
I received an advanced copy of this book for review.
As for the characters, there were several that I liked such as Aven and Marida, but I was a bit disappointed in Kaidyn's character due to her acting immature, constantly changing her mind and being blind to what is happening right in front of her. Nevertheless she learns how to cope with her deformity and how it doesn’t have to be a weakness. She also grows through the book into a confident and stronger character, which is nice to see. Her use of language felt a bit forced/artificial sometimes, with certain curse words occurring at times almost every other page (not that I mind some cursing, but it’s mostly 2 sentences she uses for this and they return a lot, which I couldn’t unsee once I noticed it).
If I do not connect well with the main protagonist, as is the case with Kaidyn, it usually makes it much harder for me to get through the book and less likely to continue reading. But in this case I still managed to see it through to the end, even though I got a bit frustrated from time to time.
Hence my score of 2.5/5. However hard I tried, there were too many elements that made me have to pull myself through the book. This feeling I truly regretted as the synopsis seemed very interesting to me. So like I said, maybe it was just not my cup of tea.
I received an advanced copy of this book for review.
August 29, 2022
A slow-build romantic portal fantasy - Outlander meets Narnia
I loved this book & can’t wait for the next instalment in the trilogy!
19yo Kaidyn’s aunt Millie dies and leaves her a mysterious trunk in the attic. That and a cat. When she conjures a portal to a different realm, finds out her aunt was a kick-ass warrior, she doesn’t expect to start believing that she herself has magic. I liked the premise - a magical world in trouble and only Kaidyn as the Keeper can balance the magic.
I liked the homage nod to Narnia (through the portal + lantern and how time passed differently on Earth while she spent months away); and to the Game of Thrones (King of the North?). The irony of prince Payson’s name was aptly fun (paysan=peasant in French). I was hoping for a better love match for Kaidyn from the start and yay, Reid was definitely a better choice (although I did want to whack him over the head with a pan a few times). I looooved the enemies-to-lovers (one can hope!) and slow sizzle between Kaidyn and Reid as well as her bickering with her newfound friends. Most of all, I liked the portrayal of someone with a deformed hand finally seeing herself as capable and courageous (with some help from her friends, but also through her own choices). Transforming Kaidyn’s weak arm into something else was brilliant (hint: the title). Thank goodness the way the 1st book ended the way it did, otherwise the cliffhanger would’ve left me growling. Keep on writin’, keep’em coming!
Recommended for lovers of YA action-adventure, YA oortal fantasy and slow burn mostly clean romantic fantasy (there were some f-words, but so far only beated looks & kisses).
I loved this book & can’t wait for the next instalment in the trilogy!
19yo Kaidyn’s aunt Millie dies and leaves her a mysterious trunk in the attic. That and a cat. When she conjures a portal to a different realm, finds out her aunt was a kick-ass warrior, she doesn’t expect to start believing that she herself has magic. I liked the premise - a magical world in trouble and only Kaidyn as the Keeper can balance the magic.
I liked the homage nod to Narnia (through the portal + lantern and how time passed differently on Earth while she spent months away); and to the Game of Thrones (King of the North?). The irony of prince Payson’s name was aptly fun (paysan=peasant in French). I was hoping for a better love match for Kaidyn from the start and yay, Reid was definitely a better choice (although I did want to whack him over the head with a pan a few times). I looooved the enemies-to-lovers (one can hope!) and slow sizzle between Kaidyn and Reid as well as her bickering with her newfound friends. Most of all, I liked the portrayal of someone with a deformed hand finally seeing herself as capable and courageous (with some help from her friends, but also through her own choices). Transforming Kaidyn’s weak arm into something else was brilliant (hint: the title). Thank goodness the way the 1st book ended the way it did, otherwise the cliffhanger would’ve left me growling. Keep on writin’, keep’em coming!
Recommended for lovers of YA action-adventure, YA oortal fantasy and slow burn mostly clean romantic fantasy (there were some f-words, but so far only beated looks & kisses).
July 9, 2025
I listened to the audiobook and there were some things I didn’t like - for instance, the narrator would sometimes put in weird pauses that interrupted the flow of ideas. Also some things were mispronounced or repeated twice and I don’t know if that was a narrator flaw or if that was in print, but it was very noticeable to listen to. (I did NOT remove a star because of the narrator.)
But the story! (Please forgive all misspellings because hello audiobook) Kaidyn’s aunt Millie passes away, leaving Kaidyn a cat and a trunk of mysterious objects, which opens a portal to another realm. Here Kaidyn learns that she is a Keeper of the Keys and what she has seen as a disability is actually something special here. Well, once she gets beyond the wall that is.
I don’t understand how she spent time with Anon and his family and ended up liking the son as a friend; there was minimal development with this. However, on the other side of the wall, I loved Kaidyns interactions with Reed, Ayven, Merida and how she developed friendships with them and also some more confidence in herself
I did remove a star because of the ending. (I would have only removed a half star if Goodreads gave me that option) After all the strength Kaidyn has, all the growth over nor seeing her disability as a weakness anymore, suddenly a misunderstanding has her reverting back to a very childish, selfish, immature girl. And her actions were out of what I was expecting from the girl she was becoming.
But the story! (Please forgive all misspellings because hello audiobook) Kaidyn’s aunt Millie passes away, leaving Kaidyn a cat and a trunk of mysterious objects, which opens a portal to another realm. Here Kaidyn learns that she is a Keeper of the Keys and what she has seen as a disability is actually something special here. Well, once she gets beyond the wall that is.
I don’t understand how she spent time with Anon and his family and ended up liking the son as a friend; there was minimal development with this. However, on the other side of the wall, I loved Kaidyns interactions with Reed, Ayven, Merida and how she developed friendships with them and also some more confidence in herself
I did remove a star because of the ending. (I would have only removed a half star if Goodreads gave me that option) After all the strength Kaidyn has, all the growth over nor seeing her disability as a weakness anymore, suddenly a misunderstanding has her reverting back to a very childish, selfish, immature girl. And her actions were out of what I was expecting from the girl she was becoming.
July 18, 2025
Portals and gemstones
Kaidyn is almost a normal girl - except for her deformed left hand, which makes her an outcast. When her deceased aunt Millie leaves in her last will a mysterious trunk to Kaidyn, little does she know what an adventure it will start. Magic? Portals? Warriors and weaponry and horse riding? All there. And easy camaraderie, when she can feel like she belongs for the first time. Only, the pressure from being the Keeper is so high..
I really enjoyed the book. It has a light atmosphere, the air of finally something good happening, despite the trouble and darkness in Evirness. Kaidyn is forced to grow up and change fast, but she is a natural. Sometimes it even feels she progresses too fast, but I enjoyed it abyway. The romance packs some heat, and I would love to see more of this.
Kaidyn is almost a normal girl - except for her deformed left hand, which makes her an outcast. When her deceased aunt Millie leaves in her last will a mysterious trunk to Kaidyn, little does she know what an adventure it will start. Magic? Portals? Warriors and weaponry and horse riding? All there. And easy camaraderie, when she can feel like she belongs for the first time. Only, the pressure from being the Keeper is so high..
I really enjoyed the book. It has a light atmosphere, the air of finally something good happening, despite the trouble and darkness in Evirness. Kaidyn is forced to grow up and change fast, but she is a natural. Sometimes it even feels she progresses too fast, but I enjoyed it abyway. The romance packs some heat, and I would love to see more of this.
February 20, 2022
Really enjoyed this fantasy, multi demensional adventure. Great writing, great world building. It reminded me of Outlander but different worlds instead of times. Kaid is a young girl who inherits a chest from her great aunt. What she doesn't know is she also inherited her magic and her job as Keeper of the Keys in another world. A world where there is magic, giant spiders and even dragons! It is more medival than he current world and instead of being the shy quiet outcast, she is a famous and highly regarded Magical Keeper. The ending does leave you on a bit of a cliff so hoping the next book is here soon!
February 21, 2022
What great story!
City of Starlight was soooo good, I hadn’t finished it yet, but I sent a text to one of my granddaughters that she needed to read it! Wonderful how Kaidyn was growing in strength both physically and mentally. I am glad that there is another book to follow, I hope it is more of Reid and Kaidyn.
I would like to see more, maybe one for each of the following characters: Marida, Aven, Bronwen, Kavall, Lyria and Kial. I received an autographed copy of City of Starlight in a contest, and also purchased it as a kindle ebook.
I will enjoy re-reading this book, and will purchase more of Trisha Lynn’s (and T.L. Thorne’s) books in the future.
City of Starlight was soooo good, I hadn’t finished it yet, but I sent a text to one of my granddaughters that she needed to read it! Wonderful how Kaidyn was growing in strength both physically and mentally. I am glad that there is another book to follow, I hope it is more of Reid and Kaidyn.
I would like to see more, maybe one for each of the following characters: Marida, Aven, Bronwen, Kavall, Lyria and Kial. I received an autographed copy of City of Starlight in a contest, and also purchased it as a kindle ebook.
I will enjoy re-reading this book, and will purchase more of Trisha Lynn’s (and T.L. Thorne’s) books in the future.
August 29, 2024
✨Portal Fantasy✨
Love the story line : ⭐️⭐️⭐️
🎧This book had a lot of great qualities including the mysterious history of aunt Mildred, disability representation, and lovable sidekicks. I do wish this story didn’t have so much foul language especially for a fantasy world. The story is slow at times and rushed at others. However, the concept of the book and the portal jumping aspect is fun!
Content: high amount of foul language (he**, piss**,sh**, fu**, bit**, etc.), intense description of attraction, innuendo, sexual jokes and mature topics mentioned, kissing described
Love the story line : ⭐️⭐️⭐️
🎧This book had a lot of great qualities including the mysterious history of aunt Mildred, disability representation, and lovable sidekicks. I do wish this story didn’t have so much foul language especially for a fantasy world. The story is slow at times and rushed at others. However, the concept of the book and the portal jumping aspect is fun!
Content: high amount of foul language (he**, piss**,sh**, fu**, bit**, etc.), intense description of attraction, innuendo, sexual jokes and mature topics mentioned, kissing described
April 28, 2022
Wow. The tug and pulled between Kaidyn and Reid is strong, resilient, and kept me turning the page. (I read a lot of romance.) But more than that, the world was vivid and felt real to me. I bought into the fantasy completely. And the struggle is epic, or working its way there. Kaidyn does not believe she’s heroine material. Boy, is she wrong. And Reid is an exceptional foil to her lacking beliefs. The story doesn’t end here, something that has me off to search out the next book in the series.
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