There’s much to be improved
This book maybe just wasn’t for me, there was really great potential but there was a lot of Ofer the top emotions and actions. First of all the female lead while badass, was a little too rednecky trailer trashy for me to get down with. A little rough around the edges is totally fine, but she was borderline screwing her bf (more like whoring) that she didn’t seem to care much for because she saw no other way to continue on with life or know how to support herself to get out of her situation. Between her crap boyfriend and unstable mom both of them emotionally abusive saying there’s no need to learn or get an education, or ect. Tommy (the bf) was so overwhelming sexual and trashy I debated finishing this because I was not sure if he was a constant character that I’d be stuck reading about. Thankfully that ended.
As for the guys, the only one that had a storyline was the wolf shifter who’s name was wolf? Wulf? I don’t know anymore... but personally, come up with a better name. I mean come on! “Hi I’m wolf/wulf a wolf shifter” he didn’t say that in the book, thank god but I mean please give us a real name. The other two males really came out of nowhere, with no storyline, you have no idea really about them or their backround. It was poorly constructed and the follow through wasn’t there.
Also, the antagonists in this book didn’t make sense. Super over the top emotions and ect. Add in the grammatical errors and spelling mistakes and this book was a one star.
This series needs better development and delivery. Dear author, do better.