So, this is probably the best BattleTech novel based around the Capellan Confederation, and I realise this is a low bar because there's what, 8 of them in total including this one?
Written entirely from the perspective of Danai Liao-Centrella, it picks up after her appearance in the novella A Splinter of Hope, as she and her troops prepare to leave the world of New Syrtis following her cease-fire with Julian Davion. Danai is an interesting character, introduced in the MechWarrior Dark Age novels, but it felt like there was an editorial decision in that series to make the BattleTech universe 'more mature' and Danai got that in the neck, first being the victim of sexual abuse at the hands of Caleb Davion in one book, and then in a novel about her emotional fallout of that event, she discovered she's actually the product of incest between her brother and sister. There's a lot of baggage going into this one.
Here, Danai is assigned to conquer the planet Hall (a world that repeatedly gets it in the neck, having also been the setting for Stephen Mohan's recent Embers of War, set almost 100 years peioe to this story), but she's also been given the planet Castrovia as a landhold, traditionally the Duke of Castrovia is the heir to the throne of the Capellan Confederation, suggesting that her brother/father Daoshen intends for her to follow in his footsteps. To this end, Danai's distant cousin Mina Liao is assigned to teach her how to rule people according to the precepts of the Confederation as opposed to just leading soldiers into battle - which Danai naturally bristles at because she's in many ways BattleTech stock character #3, the noble who's more comfortable in a 'Mech cockpit than the throne room.
And that's sort of the drive of this novel, there's some fights, in typical Schmetzer fashion he gives us POV chapters from Danai and her troops, but also from the RAF troops defending Hall and goes to efforts to make both sides feel sympathetic, and you do end up wanting both sides to win. It's a good way to keep the idea of there being no bad guys/no good guys in BattleTech going in the fiction, and I love the clever tricks the RAF uses to try and even the odds against the numerically superior CCAF. The problem is that the book doesn't end so much as it stops. There's no real dramatic or action-based climax and while the book suggests Danai has taken Mina's lessons to heart, it doesn't fully sell that in her actions. It feels like it should have either been 50-100 pages longer with more of a dramatic drive at the end, or to just have a totally reworked back quarter and removed Danai's exploits after she leaves Hall.
The real strength of the novel is in its portrayal of the Capellan people. While the sourcebooks have told us about the caste system in dry analytical text, and we've had snippets of the vast gulf between being a Capellan citizen and one of the Federated Suns a couple of times - one of the Jihad sourcebooks had a conversation between a FedSuns businessman on a recently conquered world and the Capellan officials who are filling him in on the new word order and how his status as a member of the Servitor caste means that his business now belongs to the state - or a short story back in the BattleCorps days from the perspective of some Capellan factory workers who are afraid of the "freedom" the Federated Suns brings - including the freedom to have to pay rent, or worry about whether you can afford to eat. Here we see how the caste system locks together and provides a kind of strength to the Capellan people, how they look to the Directorship and the Sheng for leadership, and the responsibility those upper castes have for the lower ones. It's a bit like Starship Troopers - I don't know if I'd want to live in that system, but I appreciate it for having people argue why it's good.