Asako and Kintaro have been learning to live together and are looking further down the road. Then the past rears its ugly head and it just goes to show that even the best of us can make mistakes. Including writers.
Oh, I wanted this series to not do this to me. I really did. It’s been so good about showing what a real couple who love and support one another might look like and always took surprising, in a good way, resolutions to its problems.
Then this book happens. The festival story is cute enough - implausible, but charming. A nice little date moment. Then a very sweet and somewhat feverish (both ways) cold story. Throughout all of the above we see some seeds of foreshadowing being planted, which then bloom into something rather unwanted when Asako goes to visit her friend.
Her friend is really interesting and the two have a very unique dynamic that I rarely see explored in books like this and that’s a nice change of pace - I had such a hard time reading their vibe and that was a good thing.
And then somebody Asako knew in elementary school sees her and calls her by the name the children used to use to tease her and… this book completely falls apart for me. I have massive issues with how this all gets presented.
I’m not saying there aren’t people who would call you by your old school nickname, but elementary school? And this person seems genuinely mannered so it absolutely does not track with her using a cruel nickname from so long ago. It flies in the face of common sense, though I suppose this person does twist the knife a little (fine, a lot).
Look, bullying is real and I’m not trying to discount Asako’s reaction to it either. I just… we’ve seen literally nine volumes of character growth and it all goes flying out the window as one remark sends Asako into a death spiral.
And I’m not saying this doesn’t happen, but it is a LOT when she lives with her boyfriend, has friends, and a good job that she likes. The whole thing just doesn’t ring true in the least and watching her and Kintaro struggle because she won’t open up to him is emotionally and narratively painful.
From where the character is now I can’t see the path to where she ends up (and how quickly), nor the way Kintaro just waits and waits before deciding to force the issue after being passive-aggressive over a movie.
Maybe it’s just me; no offence intended if you’ve experienced this and can totally relate to it. My own reactions to something like this are far different and it seems like a lot all at once. For me, it’s the flattest this series has ever been.
3 stars. I can’t give it more than that because this was deeply, deeply dissatisfying to me. It’s one thing to try to do something different with the story, but quite another to whiff it so hard. There’s very little of what I love of these two characters in this volume.