I read the whitecrest book a little while ago and i remember liking it. I just finished the Abrams Mansion book last night and while it is a great story line the writer knows absolutely nothing about medicine, injuries, recovery from injuries, (like, the guy fell and broke his arm so why is he then in a wheelchair and how can he navigate the wheelchair with one arm in a cast) and house construction including wiring - if you have a fuse box, which you would have in a house of that age, you would not then be flipping breakers. there are many many annoying things like that throughout the whole book along with your standard proofreading problems such as consistency in the story line, extraneous words hanging in a sentence after obvious changes, misplaced punctuation, etc. **was it new carpet or new laminate flooring or new hardwood? pick one. **how do you move an airstream trailer (that has been stationary for years) - repeatedly - with a small electric car? oh, and then later it went from being an airstream trailer (that you can't move with a little electric car) to a "little van". **at the top of one page she was drinking cappuccino. at the bottom of the same page it was a black coffee. all that being said, it really was a good story. she should have hired a proofreader/editor.