A couple of inconsistencies and such, but still a good story
This book was pretty good and had a couple of major things happen in it, definitely making things escalate for the next book. There were only a couple of things I didn't like about the book:
Inconsistencies.
In one scene, Hunter is holding Millie's hand. The chapter ended, and when the next chapter began, the scene resumed, and it was Landon holding her hand.
When they arrived in Boston, they were told each suite had four adjoining rooms, but there were actually five.
Finally, in the previous book, Hunter already admitted that he liked Millie and wanted to 'win her heart.' In this book, he cuts himself off when talking to her at one point and seems shy that he nearly said out loud that he had feelings for her, despite already doing so previously.
** MINOR, KIND-OF-NOT A SPOILER**
All she's done up until about 63% into the second book was kiss or make out work a few of the guys. One chapter ends with her beginning to kiss one of the guys, then the scene fades out. The next chapter says, "... basking in the afterglow of the love we had made." "Once again, I hooked up with one of the guys..." It makes it SOUND like they 'went all the way,' but later, she admits to one of the other guys that she kissed one of the others. The writing makes it pretty confusing, and I feel it could have been worded a lot better. Not to mention that I'd love to actually READ these scenes! I'm getting the impression more and more that these are meant for teens.
Also, I mentioned in my review that I thought it may have been a mistake that the wolf-form Shade spoke. It wasn't - in this world, animal forms can speak out loud. It's also still all Millie's POV, not multiple, so that didn't change.