"And now, nearly a century after the Clan invasion, two Clans race to be the first to reach Terra. On one side is Alaric Ward, Khan of Clan Wolf, a brilliant warrior and complex mix of the best of the Clans and the Inner Sphere. He comes to save the Inner Sphere from itself, intending to construct a new empire among the stars. His main adversary is Chingis Khan Malvina Hazen, the brutal, ruthless leader of Clan Jade Falcon. Forged in a tradition where only the strong survive, she leads her touman not to save the Inner Sphere, but to raze it to ashes and rebuild it according to her own twisted vision."
The overall story is good and interesting, laying out more of the future history and setting the stage for the iLClan, and a great conflict between Clans Wolf and Jade Falcon.
However...
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...really, the Jade Falcon have no impact to the storyline. They are more of a side interest, and other than being a potential competition foil for Wolf to see who gets to Terra first, play pretty much no role in the main storyline. The juicy potential conflict and drama between the two Clans was actually pretty sedate and chill. In fact, if you removed all references to the Jade Falcon having any role in the assault on Terra, very little would change in the story. I mean, Alaric (Clan Wolf manipulative Khan) messed with the Falcon leadership, but Hazen (Jade Falcon sociopath Khan) did nothing but play a part in the background. Maybe in the sequel ("Hour of the Wolf" something will come of this. But in this book...the Jade Falcon are a pale character distracting from the rest of the story. There was a so much potential to what the Jade Falcon could have brought to the table that was left out. Ding on one star. :-/
The only other thing that bugged me about the story is how Clan Wolf got through the Fortress Republic hyperspace shield. Oh, it's outlined in pretty decent detail the accounting for how they got the information, but...what and who led up to this happening? Why did the person who provided the information do it in the manner they did? What was the motive behind it all? I *fully* expected this to play out in a very different manner than the way it did (which is to say, it was but a storyline distraction). It would have been more believable storyline-wise if the science class of Clan Wolf figured out on their own the path through the Fortress Republic shield rather than the contrived and unfulfilled manner in which they learned the information. In fact, Clan Wolf just goes along with "oh, someone gave us the information to bypass the Fortress Republic defense shield. We don't know who it was that gave us the information, how they managed it to get in and out (yeah, there are some oddities with the surveillance cameras, but...eh, let's ignore them), what their motives or agenda were for doing this, but hey! Let's go forward with this! SURELY it's not a trap..." (and it wasn't). There was a lot of potential in this one event that utterly failed to live up to what it could have been. Ding on one star. :-/
Otherwise it was a pretty good story and insightful view into Clan Wolf's (via Alaric) scheming and calculated planning for the assault on Terra. And maybe the above two items will see fruition in the sequel?