I did not finish this book. This is some of the worst writing I've seen. Run-on sentences with no punctuation and end up being an entire paragraph, and OH SO DESCRIPTIVE!
"Juliette had survived the incident with the Baileys and a few days later walked into the Marina Club, signed in, undid her coat, put her scarf into her bag, walked up to the bar, ordered herself a lemonade and joined Holly and Sallie at the table over by the window."
"She stood there sipping on the hot chocolate to give her a bit of energy and chatted with Doris about the goings-on at the hospital, about how Doris had had to take her forty-year-old daughter to emergency with a suspected case of sepsis in her ear from a dodgy tattoo and how she'd decided that she was going to put off her retirement for a few more years because she wanted to buy a caravan further down the coast."
Both of these are entire paragraphs, one sentence!
WHEW. Things like "walked to the car, lifted the handle, opened the door, got into the seat, put the key into the ignition and turned it, put the car into 'drive,' pulled out of the car park..." Okay so I made that one up, but that's how it is throughout. So very descriptive.
One section where a friend calls Juliette and her daughter "my lovelies" in every.single.sentence.
It's just too much. Poor writing; an occasional comma would be nice. Even better, a period to separate a paragraph into two or three sentences.
I don't know when I last didn't finish a book, but it was driving me nuts. Not finishing this book, this series, or anything else by this writer.