I liked this a lot more than I thought I would. The first sentence was off putting.
“Sevastiano was on the brink of a sex-fest with a lissom blond model when he was interrupted by his mobile phone.”
I guess I should be thankful he wasn’t actually banging her. I don’t get why authors think it’s a great idea to start books with the H being with an OW. Just tell me he’s a gross manwhore 10,000 timers or so - like you know you will - somewhere in there I don’t need to see it firsthand.
So after we get past that unnecessary garbage, it thankfully improves. Slowly. Sevastiano is a caring, thoughtful brother. As a love interest he kind of sucks at first. He seeks out the h, Amy, in a quest for revenge on the man who’s wronged his sister. He doesn’t intend for Amy to be hurt but he’s kind of dumb.
He’s instantly into her and tries to resist getting romantic. He just wants to string her along long enough to execute his revenge. Of course, that’s not how it goes. He claims her vCard. He continues along with his plan assuming she’ll forgive him because she’s so sweet and caring.
Spoiler alert: she does not forgive him. She leaves him and he insists he won’t chase her. After 10 days he’s starting to sweat though. Luckily for him, he’s unwittingly knocked her up and she reaches out. Mr. Smug is ready to distastefully spit out an apology and get back to being together. She’s still not having it. She drops the baby bomb and refuses his help.
Then she loses her job and home in the same day. How very convenient. I’ll give it to h, she reaches out and he swoops in like a knight in shining armor but she still keeps him at arms length. Eventually he does seem to finally get it. I think the pregnancy, job loss and homelessness were a bit of a cop out but mostly I felt satisfied with his grovel and I’m hard to please.
Story 4/5, Heat 1.5/5, Angst 3/5
Medium burn - she gives up the v card around 40%.
No condoms, virgin h, absolute manwhore, tiny OW drama, no OM drama, push away from h, 10 day separation. No cliffhanger and HEA with epilogue.
Safety - I’m going to say the safety is iffy. The actual OW interaction isn’t much despite the beginning of the book. The H tells us that he attempted to bang an OW while trying to resist h but he “couldn’t go through with it”. I find that dubious.