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The Harbinger

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In a picturesque California town, the deafening sound of bells brings dozens of people to their knees. Three days later a horrific accident claims their lives. Among the dead is the twin brother of Artemis Andronikos, a beautiful attorney, who abandons the ill-fated vacation and returns home to grieve.

Her mourning is interrupted by Lucy Breem a reporter who suspects a connection between the strange bell sound and subsequent deaths. Disturbed by the possibility that the phenomenon had presaged her brother’s death, Artemis agrees to join forces with Lucy to investigate the mysterious premonitions. Utilizing her considerable physical and deductive talents, Artemis battles nefarious forces and seeks information from friends in high places. Their research takes them to various global venues. But the solution to the mystery proves illusive and the couple discovers that neither science nor religion can provide an explanation for what has become known as the Harbinger.

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First published June 15, 2020

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1,683 reviews9,893 followers
July 7, 2020
2.50 Stars. This was an interesting concept but not the kind of book for me. It’s never fun to write a negative review especially when a book does not have many ratings yet, but I have to be honest. This was a real struggle for me. After 15% I was tempted to DNF, after 30% I was very tempted to DNF but because this was a review copy I forced myself to finish. I appreciate that this book was different since I love different but this was too weird even for me.

The premise of this story is that some people are hearing bells than three days later they die. What does this mean? Is this a religious experience, is it a disease, or is there a science explanation? No one really knows and this book is about a group of people, some trying to find answers and the others using the phenomenon for political power or religious wealth. Like I said before, an interesting and unusual concept but it just did not come together for me.

My first issue was the multi POV’s. I just am not a fan of so many POV’s especially when you are in the head of a lot of unlikable characters. The only people’s heads I wanted to be in were Artemis and Lucy who were the main characters out of the bunch. Their story was much more interesting but that was only half the book.

Unfortunately, Artemis and Lucy had their issues too. They have a romance together but it is mostly the author telling us about the romance instead of us experiencing it. I felt that the psychic distance was too far away so I could not connect with the characters or their relationship like I had hoped.

Artemis is written as a mystery. She has some sort of physic or paranormal ability but we don’t really know what. The reason we don’t know is the author was saving that for a big twist near the end. I get that and I really liked the twist. In fact it was probably my favorite part of the book. The problem is in not knowing what’s going on with Artemis makes it that we don’t know or understand her character. We don’t know what her motivations are or who she is as a person. Instead she comes off as a Mary Sue. She is the best fighter since knows every style known to man, she’s a powerful lawyer with plenty of smarts, and she’s supermodel gorgeous so that every single person that sees her, they all want to get in her pants. I normally don’t mind Mary Sue’s all that much. I love kickass women characters so sometimes I like a Mary Sue, but not here. I was so sick of everybody walking by getting a hard-on just being near Artemis.

I did like the twist at the end (it is why I rounded my rating up instead of down like I planned) and since this is a series it sounds like the story might be headed in a better direction. The problem is I had so much trouble finishing this book that I don’t feel comfortable taking a chance on another installment. Again, I appreciate this author writing something really different but it just was not the type of book I enjoy.

A copy was given to me for an honest review.
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1,980 reviews107 followers
January 1, 2021
This was an odd read for me.

There were so many POV's and the mystery of the Harbinger was a hard one to grasp. I really liked the dynamic between Artemis, Lucy and Angie though.
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December 28, 2020
I haven't started a book and immediately wanted it to end for so long. It pains me to have to rate it so low, especially one that already has very few reviews.

The premise was nice: some people hear the painful bell chimes in their heads and die exactly three days afterward. I liked the juxtaposition of the current pandemic with the non-disease Harbinger. And the way this book itself served as a harbinger of the current downfall of the world is very clever. However, the execution did not grasp my attention, and I lost interest shortly after I started the story.

The first three quarters of the book were kind of a drag. There were many, many, many POVs. While that created a sense of urgency along with the inconspicuous switch of viewpoints within scenes, it kept me from connecting with any of the characters. The conversations between the them were choppy, and the narration consisted of very short sentences with repetitive structures. Most of the time, I saw no real reason for chapter breaks and found the story monotonous and emotionally detached. Oftentimes, the character interactions felt unnatural and left me reeling. There were also a lot of telling in place of showing when it comes to emotions such as sadness and love. I don’t think I have ever frowned as many times while reading as I had during this one. Throughout most of the book, I didn't even care who was dying.

Admittedly, I had mentally checked out after being 40% into the book but still pushed myself to finish it. It was a relief when, upon reaching the 75% mark, the story picked up and I actually started anticipating what was going to happen. I also liked the final reveal of identities.

The Harbinger was marketed as a romance but it is not. The romance between the leads, Artemis Andronikos and Lucinda "Lucy" Breem, was instalove at best. Actually, we don’t even see enough to conclude it is instalove when it first started. I was honestly shocked by the progression of their relationship.

I liked three characters in this book: Lucy's daughter Angie, and the husband-and-wife duo astrophysicist Wolfgang Strang and Willa. As for the lead, Artemis, I found her unlikable. She finds dangerous situations funny and suggests things she cannot execute. She has a really weird sense of what is appropriate and doesn’t seem to be the type who communicates before acting. But I have to say that she is really badass, especially toward the end of the book.

Though almost unrelated to the book, I wanted to comment on the bells, aka the Harbinger. In Mandarin, the words "bell" and "clock" are both zhong (鐘). There is a superstition of not gifting clocks because the phrase song zhong (送鐘) pronounces exactly the same as "burying one's parent" (送終). I find bells and death eerily related after realizing this.

The only thing that I really love is the naming of the characters. Artemis is obviously the goddess of hunting, Lucinda is "light," Uberdorf is "about remote village," and Angie is "messenger of God." The name Ichabod probably provisioned his death at the very beginning of the story, too. Also, Wolfgang Strang is a combination of the first name of Mozart, hence the connection of music, and a last name that reminds me of the famous mathematician Dr. Gilbert Strang.

The Harbinger is the first book in the Artemis trilogy, and while I wish I was excited about the sequel, I am not. But I think the rest of the series will be better judging by the last quarter of the book and am certainly intrigued by how Eicher would name future characters.

I received an e-ARC from NineStar Press via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
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358 reviews5 followers
June 30, 2020
When I started reading this book I found the concept intriguing; people hear bells in their head and 3 days later they die.Is it evolution, God, aliens, a disease of infection? As in real life when something new happens that changes the world a little bit, nobody knows for sure but, as always, certain people try to use it to gain more power/money/whatever they need. What I liked about this book is that it made you think about our place in the universe, the conscious mind and religion among other things. That being said, it's not a book I would pick up again. I can't categorize the genre..there was a romance between two women, but not fleshed out at all and the writer skipped forward a lot telling us they talked or did this, but the reader never gets to experience it with them so I didn't get invested enough in the characters and there were a lot of sideplots with different characters so it didn't feel like a romance to me. Mystery would be more accurate as a genre.
A lot of the story didn't make sense to me and didn't fulfill my expectations when reading the blurb. For example they keep calling Artemis a hero...but why exactly? And don't get me wrong, I would love a house on Maui, but flying your partner, her mom and her daughter out over New Year, show her the house you bought for them all and nobody thinks that is a bit sudden? So unfortunately I have to give 2.5 stars, the book does have a lot of promise and the writing isn't bad either but, to me, it needs to get fleshed out a little bit more. Especially on the side of character development.

*** An ARC was provided in exchange for a honest review. ***
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883 reviews104 followers
March 1, 2021
I liked the premise of this novel - why is there a phenomenon where you hear bells three days before you die? I was quite interested to get to the explanation of this but think this novel took too long for us to get there.

This novel is just shy of 100,000 words and you can really feel it. I think if this was shorter and faster paced, it would've been more engaging for the reader. At some points I found myself completely uninterested in all of the random characters and their short subplots about their experiences with the bells. I really just wanted to keep moving with the main characters and their investigation, as well as Uberdorf and Governor Hemsley's subplots.
358 reviews1 follower
August 25, 2020
I volunteered to read this book, through netgalley in exchange, for an honest review. This book is well written and the characters are described well. This is the first book in this series. I enjoyed Artemis's character and Lucy's character. In this story it mentions that the harbinger is almost like the rapture in a way. I enjoyed everything about this book. The author did a great job. Although it did hit home a little because of how Artemis loses her brother to the harbinger. I would recommend this book. This ebook is in stores now for $6.49 (USD).
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431 reviews
March 2, 2021
This was a struggle for me. Lex Kent’s review summed up my thoughts really well. Lots of POVs that made it hard to connect with the characters. I almost DNF, and while the story got better near the end, it’s not enough to make me want to read the sequel.
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545 reviews27 followers
July 28, 2020
Interesting genre spanning novel. Some romance, some mystery, some fantasy.

When you hear the bells, you die three days later. Thus begins the arrival of the Harbinger. Beginning in California and slowly spreading around the world, the Harbinger brings changes to the communities is encounters. Not everyone hears the Harbinger, some die without hearing it. It is the uncertainty of its meaning but the clarity of its end result. Some panic, others go on binges, one creates a cult which makes him rich while others die.

Artemis was at the sight of the first Harbinger deaths, with her brother in the first round of victims. Lucy is a small-newspaper reporter who seeks to explain the Harbinger to readers. Together, as the two become closer, they seek to unravel the mystery of the Harbinger, finding the precognition of death to be a small part of a much larger (think evolutionary change) type of event.

**I received this book from the publisher via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.**
2 reviews
October 6, 2020
A very well written, engaging book that’ll make you wonder, & wait impatiently for the next 2 books…

I don’t want to give away the story by doing a chapter by chapter review, I’ll just say that it’s a wonderful, very original story, its 31 chapters, contained in 382 pages, are a most delightful read to the last printed word; I’m left impatiently waiting for the next Artemis’ book to come out.

This book offers many of the subjects that I love to read about. Lets’ see:
Beautiful/Hot, Smart Protagonists: Check
Science Fiction: Check
Mythology: Check
Beautiful/Hot Protagonist and Leather: Check
Mystery: Check
Romance: Check
Beautiful/Hot Protagonists “dancing” to The Music of the Night: Check
Banter: Check
Evil People getting their comeuppance: Check
Beautiful/Hot Protagonist kicking butt: Check
Intrigue: Check
Drama: Check
…And for those people who turn on their televisions to “see what blew up today”, there is some of that too.

I’ve been (not too) patiently waiting for this book to get to me, the wait was very well worth it, this is the kind of book that I can’t put down, I must read one more page, one more chapter. It is well written; I love Mary’s bardic style and her talent at fleshing out her characters and make them come alive in the pages.

I confess that I had to do a couple of Google checks (Hello, KIC 8462852, aka Tabby’s Star, aka WTF Star), and I’m glad I did, that bit of information had escaped my awareness, and if not for Mary’s excellent book I’d still wouldn’t know it.

IMHO, she’s weaving a complex story resembling a Unalome, it’s beautiful and meaningful, a single path on its way to enlightenment, with twists and turns but inexorably approaching its straight line and ultimately its 3 dots… 1 dot down, 2 to go. :-)

I’ve read all (I think) of Mary’s previous works and I’ve enjoyed them all, though of course I do have my favorites. This is both the same and different than her previous works, the same because it is awesome writing, different because she’s exploring a gigantic storyline with a rich and interesting amalgam of characters and offshoots, in my view all leading to the same point: Enlightenment... if only we’re open to it.

I am not prone to do reviews, and I won’t pretend to represent all readers’ tastes in books, we all have our preferences, but if you enjoy any of the topics I list above you should give this book a try, you’ll be glad that you did.

…And no, I wasn’t given the book for free to post a positive review, I bought the book, had a wonderful time reading it, and this is just my own humble opinion on it.
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1,475 reviews
October 21, 2020
The Harbinger drops us right onto the Pacific Coast Trail and into the mystery pretty quickly. Mary Eicher then keeps the pace up throughout the book as the mystery broadens off the PCT trail to world wide intrigue. The romance happens pretty quickly too. Everything happens fast. Eicher barely lets you process one revelation before you are facing another one.

This can be a very good tool as characters that you come to like may not stick around long as the mystery shows no favoritism. I will warn you that death comes for all ages and in various forms. Eicher spares no one as everyone goes through some process of pain as a result or a symptom of the mystery.

The premise is an intriguing one and a familiar one as we are living through a pandemic. The story has nothing to do with how we are living today, yet you will see similarities as the human condition reacts the same in most circumstances as history has shown us. Eicher blends this realistically. There are some unanswered questions at the end of the story, but there is a book two. Yay!

Artemis is a character you want to follow because she is just so badass. She can defend herself, others, and looks at the whole versus just the one. I am interested to see where Eicher takes her. I am so looking forward to the ride.

I received an ARC of this book and I am writing a review without prejudice and voluntarily.
1 review
June 28, 2021
This book starts with a bang and then gets better with every page. I have been reading books at a ridiculous pace since being cooped up in my house and this book I may read again, again and then once more. I literally dream about Temmie and Lucy and Wolf. Why can’t these people be my circle of friends???
I stumbled across NineStar and randomly chose 4 books. I started with the Harbinger and then assumed I had found the magic publishing company who chooses authors that can actually write! The next 1 1/2 books were hugely disappointing but there is some hope in the 4th. Perceptions(book 2 in the Artemis series) just arrived and I am diving in this evening. So excited to get back to a world with Temmie in it.
4 reviews
March 13, 2021
Recommended by a friend, now I recommend it to you as I truly loved this book. I owe my mate a dinner where we can pretend to be half as interesting as the characters in this book.
The concept is absolutely original, steeped in science and mystery and clever as hell. Just finished the 2nd book in the series and it keeps up the pace, fantastic! Am an avid reader and have not found a series this exciting or addicting in years. Bound to be hit.
1 review
September 8, 2020
I highly recommend The Harbinger. It is a fun read with lovable characters and a different take on mythology. The story moves quickly and is very entertaining. It is sort of Wonder Woman meets Ancient Aliens. Great Fun!
2 reviews
August 4, 2020
A very well written, engaging book that’ll make you wonder & wait impatiently for the next 2 books.

I don’t want to give away the story by doing a chapter by chapter review, I’ll just say that it’s a wonderful, very original story, its 31 chapters, contained in 382 pages, are a most delightful read to the last printed word; I’m left impatiently waiting for the next Artemis’ book to come out.

This book offers many of the subjects that I love to read about. Lets’ see:
Beautiful/Hot, Smart Protagonists: Check
Science Fiction: Check
Mythology: Check
Beautiful/Hot Protagonist and Leather: Check
Mystery: Check
Romance: Check
Beautiful/Hot Protagonists “dancing” to The Music of the Night: Check
Banter: Check
Evil People getting their comeuppance: Check
Beautiful/Hot Protagonist kicking butt: Check
Intrigue: Check
Drama: Check
…And for those people who turn on their televisions to “see what blew up today”, there is some of that too.

I’ve been (not too) patiently waiting for this book to get to me, the wait was very well worth it, this is the kind of book that I can’t put down, I must read one more page, one more chapter. It is well written; I love Mary’s bardic style and her talent at fleshing out her characters and make them come alive in the pages.

I confess that I had to do a couple of Google checks (Hello, KIC 8462852, aka Tabby’s Star, aka WTF Star), and I’m glad I did, that bit of information had escaped my awareness, and if not for Mary’s excellent book I’d still wouldn’t know it.

IMHO, she’s weaving a complex story resembling a Unalome, it’s beautiful and meaningful, a single path on its way to enlightenment, with twists and turns but inexorably approaching its straight line and ultimately its 3 dots… 1 dot down, 2 to go. :-)

I’ve read all (I think) of Mary’s previous works and I’ve enjoyed them all, though of course I do have my favorites. This is both the same and different than her previous works, the same because it is awesome writing, different because she’s exploring a gigantic storyline with a rich and interesting amalgam of characters and offshoots, in my view all leading to the same point: Enlightenment... if only we’re open to it.

I am not prone to do reviews, and I won’t pretend to represent all readers’ tastes in books, we all have our preferences, but if you enjoy any of the topics I list above you should give this book a try, you’ll be glad that you did.

…And no, I wasn’t given the book for free to post a positive review, I bought the book, had a wonderful time reading it, and this is just my own humble opinion on it.
5 reviews
June 28, 2021
Loved it! I am a serious science-fiction fan and boy did this deliver. A unique tale, unlike anything I have read before where science, religion and the paranormal all meet and pick a fight with one another. I had a great time trying to figure out what the Harbinger was and how it would change the world, seriously fun and thought provoking.
It has been a while since I have become so attached to characters in a story and I fell for many of them in The Harbinger. The star, Artemis, is brilliant and excitingly fantastic to read about as she kicks the world's ass but I unexpectedly fell for the hilarious and quirky astrophysicist, Wolfgang Strang. He is the most charming and odd man who adds depth and emotion to the action-filled and mysterious tale.
Really, really well done!!
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