Isabelle's life hasn't been easy. After her mother's death, her father has disappeared, leaving her and her younger sister in the care of Aunt Jo. When her sister sets her heart on visiting a psychic, Isabelle decides to humor her. She never expects that the trip would result in a one-way ticket to a camp where she will learn how to use the good within her to battle evil. Can she achieve moral balance or will her desire to be reunited with her sister put her life in danger?
I found this book very difficult to read. I received an advanced copy (in return for an honest review) and it was poorly formatted for the kindle. While the print version on Amazon does not seem to have these issues, the paragraphs were not indented, making it difficult to determine who was speaking during dialogue. There were also many places where scene breaks did not seem to make sense. While I first attributed this to formatting issues, I soon realized that some chapters ended in the middle of a scene, just to continue at the beginning of the next chapter. This made it difficult to follow the story. Overall, scenes tended to blend into one another without obvious starts or endings, leaving me confused about what was happening. It almost felt as if I were reading a comic strip collection where pages were missing. I got glimpses of scenes, but couldn't figure out what had been happening before it.
I also found the worldbuilding a little difficult to follow. I really liked the concepts in this book, but there were places where I felt too much information was given at once, places where information was repeated unnecessarily, and places where I would have liked more information. For example, we learn about the exercises at the camp when Isabelle first arrives, as well as the fact that some people are stronger in some senses than others and that some people must work harder than others. However, for reasons I could not understand, this information was all repeated again at the end of camp. The reader already knew all this, as should all the characters who had been there as long as, if not longer, than the main character.
For a book with a present tense point of view, much of the story takes place in the past tense, indicating something that happened before the scene. I would have rather seen it happen than be told about it after the fact. There were also occasional slips into the second person and some head hopping, making it even harder to follow what was going on.
My other big problem with this story was that the main character, in fact all the characters, are in their early twenties. If she is an adult, why is her aunt her guardian? Shouldn't she be her sister's guardian? And why would they have curfews and segregated dorms at camp? None of this is explained. In fact, when Isabelle reveals her age at camp, I was surprised to learn she wasn't fourteen. She and her campmates all act much younger than I would expect and I often forgot they were adults.
Overall, this book felt incomplete. While it did have a definite beginning, middle, and end, I didn't walk away feeling I fully understood the story.