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Ceristen #1
The Journey
Fred Thorne must shoulder the full care and protection of his sisters after a fire leaves them homeless and friendless. He sets out to follow the last advice given to him by his great-aunt: Take the girls to Menevace, to the refuge home.
But the road to Menevace is fraught with bandits, famine, and unknown dangers.
The Journey follows the three Thorne siblings through rejection, captivity, and an increasing downward spiral of guilt as Fred fails time and time again to protect his family from the dangers of a hostile world.
Can the Thornes find a place of rest and safety? Will their journey ever end?
Dangerous cities, breathtaking creatures, and an incredible adventure awaits in this debut novel by Verity A. Buchanan.
Endorsements
This is a delightful read! Buchanan is a cunning fantasy wordsmith who weaves a powerful tale of family love and struggles in the midst of dangers within and without. The Journey is both figurative and literal—and Buchanan blends those elements well. It’s easy to grow attached to the main characters, as they’re three-dimensional, flawed, and remarkably sincere. She also offers both interesting and surprising twists along the way. It’s a relatively short read and well worth your time.
Allen Steadham
Author of Mindfire and The Jordan of Algoran Series
The Journey by Verity Buchanan is a tale of change and growth where sorrow turns into joy, and mourning turns into dancing. It is packed full of adventure and conflict, and the relationship between the siblings within the story is deep and strong. The Journey is, at the core, a truly heartwarming story.
Katie Clark
Author of The Enslaved Series
218 pages, Kindle Edition
First published October 1, 2019
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About the author
Verity A. Buchanan
5 books60 followersVerity A. Buchanan grew up drinking in the glacier-formed ridges, jewel-blue lakes, and sprawling orchards of Northern Michigan. Enthralled by love of the land, she lives in search of fresh sights and settings, so as to ground her stories as far as possible in the honesty of experience.
When not scribbling down snippets of dialogue or staring hopelessly at a blinking cursor, Verity is probably browsing Lord of the Rings, pouring out emotions on the piano, or undertaking amateur photography and audio mixing. Her enthusiasm for people finds an outlet in teaching piano, working customer service at her local farm market, and forging connections with readers and colleagues across the globe.
When not scribbling down snippets of dialogue or staring hopelessly at a blinking cursor, Verity is probably browsing Lord of the Rings, pouring out emotions on the piano, or undertaking amateur photography and audio mixing. Her enthusiasm for people finds an outlet in teaching piano, working customer service at her local farm market, and forging connections with readers and colleagues across the globe.
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August 20, 2019
In a style reminiscent of the classics, Verity delivers a Tolkienesque tale that is sure to delight readers of all ages. Filled with relatable characters, fantastical creatures, and a story whose history is as deep as any great fantasy out there, the author tastefully weaves a delightful narrative that is sure to satisfy the appetite of any true adventurer.
When tragedy strikes the Thorne family, the remaining eldest, Fred, embarks on a quest with his two sisters to safety. While the idea of a "character goes on journey" plot line did not exactly interest me in the start, my fears were quickly put to rest and my interest piqued at the way Verity writes her novel. The unexpected does happen--and sometimes the expected too--and I was quite literally on the edge of my seat until the conclusion of the story, wondering if the siblings would ever have a happy ending at all. But I shall leave others to discover that themselves. :)
Having also read the other books of the series not yet in print, I can testify that this first book is just a teaser of the reader-loving goodness that is yet to come. Excellent work, Verity, as always!
When tragedy strikes the Thorne family, the remaining eldest, Fred, embarks on a quest with his two sisters to safety. While the idea of a "character goes on journey" plot line did not exactly interest me in the start, my fears were quickly put to rest and my interest piqued at the way Verity writes her novel. The unexpected does happen--and sometimes the expected too--and I was quite literally on the edge of my seat until the conclusion of the story, wondering if the siblings would ever have a happy ending at all. But I shall leave others to discover that themselves. :)
Having also read the other books of the series not yet in print, I can testify that this first book is just a teaser of the reader-loving goodness that is yet to come. Excellent work, Verity, as always!
July 25, 2019
With the first chapter or two, I had absolutely no idea what this story was about. I didn't know what was going to happen. I didn't know why I should care about this gold-hearted but indecisive and dare I say naive Fred; the gentle and emotional Marjorie; the stubborn and snappish Sandy.
I know now.
This series is a labor of love, a life of dedication, and the result of a fine-tuned mind steadily sustained on the best of literature. It shows. Oftentimes I think I am not even smart enough for this place and these words. More than anything else, it has always reminded me of Tolkien, with the sweeping detail of its landscapes, its heavy plots, its names that jumble in my head. There is so much here. It is an entire world apart from our own. But there is a heart wholly separate from Tolkien, a simplistic beauty, for the root and core of Ceristen is its families. Its people. Fiona. Mordred. Marcus. Kenneth. Dickson. Fenris. Laufeia. All just names to me once, but I cannot imagine that now, for they are real and they live and breathe inside me and I feel their pain and their joy. Each character gets their moment in the spotlight, especially in the first two books, and when a new character steps up and takes the torch, you think you can never love them as much as the old...and then you do. You do.
The plot is genius. Screaming twists, terror, tension, palpable sorrow and humor and peace ebbing and flowing. She is a brilliant, brilliant writer. I have never guessed anything correctly because I am always blindsided in the best possible way, a way that leaves me thinking, "But yes, of course."
Not one detail is left askew. Not one word implausible. This series is a work of toil, and headache, and sleeplessness, and I know that, but in reading the words flow effortlessly as the next breath. It seems as though Ceristen is real, and has always been here, and this is merely a telling of real tales, rather than a creation birthed from the dust of an abnormally gifted imagination.
It is beautiful, all of it. And having been granted more of the series, I know there is greater splendor to come than we readers yet can anticipate. Since I entered Ceristen nigh on two years ago, my heart has been broken and mended and broken again and mended, a thousand times over. And I will let it happen again a thousand times more, because walking into Ceristen feels like coming home. And isn't that why we read great fantasy? To awaken our souls to our real home in that far country, where there is a never-ceasing glory yet beyond our reach?
So to go back to that first November day, why do I care about Fred, Marjorie, Sandy? Mordred, Fiona, Fenris, the General? Because I do care, desperately. And I know you will, too.
September 3, 2024
I loved the thoughtful, old-fashioned style of this book! It took a simple story and spun it into something deeper and richer.
Fred was by far the best character! (And he goes through sooo much. Why? 😭) I was surprised, though, by how invested I felt in Sandy, too, given that she had something of a nasty streak. I definitely want to see what’s in store for the siblings after this.
Certain events in the plot seemed a little too convenient, but I was overall satisfied, and the worldbuilding intrigued me. I feel, like Fred did, that I’ve only scratched the surface of what there is to discover. I want to learn more in the next book!
Fred was by far the best character! (And he goes through sooo much. Why? 😭) I was surprised, though, by how invested I felt in Sandy, too, given that she had something of a nasty streak. I definitely want to see what’s in store for the siblings after this.
Certain events in the plot seemed a little too convenient, but I was overall satisfied, and the worldbuilding intrigued me. I feel, like Fred did, that I’ve only scratched the surface of what there is to discover. I want to learn more in the next book!
August 9, 2019
I’ve never read a fantasy novel quite like this before and I read a lot of fantasy. There’s no world-ending problem, no war, no secret conspiracy, no usurpation of the throne (there are plenty of missing siblings, however). It’s just about a broken little family looking for a home and becoming a little more whole and a little bigger in the process.
I pondered how to describe this book while reading it. If I had to summarize it, I'd say that the The Journey is like a Pilgrim's Progress with the narration of a fairy tale set in a Tolkien-ish world. The style of prose is very old-fashioned, reminding of classic children's literature. Parts of the narration and certain descriptions of the character's feelings and appearances brought to mind old fairy tales. The world-building reminded me of Tolkien. Not in the elves and dwarves sense but like I'd stepped into a very old world full of kingdoms with histories and languages and rivalries that existed long before the story.
I usually quickly tire of travel description in fantasies and was pleasantly surprised that despite the leagues and leagues Fred and his siblings cover, I never felt like I was reading about people walking and walking and walking. Something is always happening whether that be bandits, missing siblings, angry villagers, more missing siblings, and so on.
Watching Fred, Sandy, and Marjorie grow over their journey was definitely my favorite part of the book. Fred's shift from fearing responsibility and letting others mock him to accepting it and then from being afraid of failing to realizing his own courage and strength was lovely to witness. Marjorie's constant tears irked me in the beginning but even though she didn't get as much page time as her sister, the way she learned to turn her sensitive nature into sharp perception won me over in the end. Sandy's bitter desire to stay the same and fear over becoming not-herself was my favorite though. Watching her long for her brother's approval and her sister's comfort but being too stubborn to admit it felt so...true and human. I couldn't help but cheer when she finally embraced her own maturing.
I did find myself wishing that the story would slow down a bit and let me linger in a character's head or on a moment of emotion. Some places felt too fast and I didn't get to slow down and enjoy parts of the actual journey or the character's emotional "journey" (haha) as much as I wanted to. This might be part of the reason I really liked Sandy's pov. I felt like I got a better look at her than some of the other characters.
I compared it to Pilgrim's Progress earlier and that description holds true. The book has an almost episodic nature as the siblings wander from one unlikely scrap into another while finding the occasional place of refuge along their way to the wonderful but nebulous new home they're searching for. I didn't care for the blatant allegory of Pilgrim's Progress but The Journey is much less in-your-face with what symbolism it has and I liked that. Even when certain events should have come across as coincidental or contrived, the tone of the narrative and my desire to see the characters react to them helped make them feel more natural.
I've read some of the author's newer, not-yet-published works, and I think I prefer her style in those to TJ's. Because of that, and the way the book sometimes skims over certain moments, I'm giving it fours stars. Despite this, I'm glad I got to travel with the Thornes on their journey and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens now that they've found their long-awaited home. If you like books with a classic-feel or want to try a fantasy outside of the ordinary, I would recommend picking up this book and taking the journey it has to offer.
I pondered how to describe this book while reading it. If I had to summarize it, I'd say that the The Journey is like a Pilgrim's Progress with the narration of a fairy tale set in a Tolkien-ish world. The style of prose is very old-fashioned, reminding of classic children's literature. Parts of the narration and certain descriptions of the character's feelings and appearances brought to mind old fairy tales. The world-building reminded me of Tolkien. Not in the elves and dwarves sense but like I'd stepped into a very old world full of kingdoms with histories and languages and rivalries that existed long before the story.
I usually quickly tire of travel description in fantasies and was pleasantly surprised that despite the leagues and leagues Fred and his siblings cover, I never felt like I was reading about people walking and walking and walking. Something is always happening whether that be bandits, missing siblings, angry villagers, more missing siblings, and so on.
Watching Fred, Sandy, and Marjorie grow over their journey was definitely my favorite part of the book. Fred's shift from fearing responsibility and letting others mock him to accepting it and then from being afraid of failing to realizing his own courage and strength was lovely to witness. Marjorie's constant tears irked me in the beginning but even though she didn't get as much page time as her sister, the way she learned to turn her sensitive nature into sharp perception won me over in the end. Sandy's bitter desire to stay the same and fear over becoming not-herself was my favorite though. Watching her long for her brother's approval and her sister's comfort but being too stubborn to admit it felt so...true and human. I couldn't help but cheer when she finally embraced her own maturing.
I did find myself wishing that the story would slow down a bit and let me linger in a character's head or on a moment of emotion. Some places felt too fast and I didn't get to slow down and enjoy parts of the actual journey or the character's emotional "journey" (haha) as much as I wanted to. This might be part of the reason I really liked Sandy's pov. I felt like I got a better look at her than some of the other characters.
I compared it to Pilgrim's Progress earlier and that description holds true. The book has an almost episodic nature as the siblings wander from one unlikely scrap into another while finding the occasional place of refuge along their way to the wonderful but nebulous new home they're searching for. I didn't care for the blatant allegory of Pilgrim's Progress but The Journey is much less in-your-face with what symbolism it has and I liked that. Even when certain events should have come across as coincidental or contrived, the tone of the narrative and my desire to see the characters react to them helped make them feel more natural.
I've read some of the author's newer, not-yet-published works, and I think I prefer her style in those to TJ's. Because of that, and the way the book sometimes skims over certain moments, I'm giving it fours stars. Despite this, I'm glad I got to travel with the Thornes on their journey and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens now that they've found their long-awaited home. If you like books with a classic-feel or want to try a fantasy outside of the ordinary, I would recommend picking up this book and taking the journey it has to offer.
April 26, 2021
I really enjoyed THE JOURNEY! Such a beautiful sibling story - one of my favorite kinds. Sandy was my favorite character, I think. I loved her snappish ways and the growth she undergoes throughout. But I cheered every time they found a new, lost Thorne sibling! This book really is a journey - a high fantasy, Tolkien-esque journey with hardships and progress and endearing characters. These siblings are like cacti the way they stick it out in the harshest conditions. A lesson in endurance, to be sure...something everyone could use.
January 14, 2020
This book is like if Louisa Alcott had written Lord of the Rings. I know that’s an odd description, but I can’t think how else to describe it, and if you think you might enjoy an unusual combination of very sweet with fantasy adventures, you really need to read this book.
(Full disclosure, it was written by my niece, and while my review is completely honest, I make no claims that it’s unbiased, because of course knowing it was written by my niece influenced how I read it.)
Content is essentially nonexistent— there is an expected amount of danger and injury (and even a death or two) for an adventure story, but surprisingly little actual violence or fighting, and no adult type content at all. Perhaps readers who are very sensitive to themes of older siblings shouldering responsibility due to absentee adults, or to children in danger, should be cautious, but in general I think young advanced readers who like adventure would be fine with this book.
(Full disclosure, it was written by my niece, and while my review is completely honest, I make no claims that it’s unbiased, because of course knowing it was written by my niece influenced how I read it.)
Content is essentially nonexistent— there is an expected amount of danger and injury (and even a death or two) for an adventure story, but surprisingly little actual violence or fighting, and no adult type content at all. Perhaps readers who are very sensitive to themes of older siblings shouldering responsibility due to absentee adults, or to children in danger, should be cautious, but in general I think young advanced readers who like adventure would be fine with this book.
June 24, 2024
This story is an absolutely delightful read with characters that you'll dislike and characters that you'll love and even some that you would like to see again!
Verity has done an excellent job in not just covering a physical journey but also the journey that we all undertake as we grow and change as people. This story will leave you wanting more of the world and the people in it.
Verity has done an excellent job in not just covering a physical journey but also the journey that we all undertake as we grow and change as people. This story will leave you wanting more of the world and the people in it.
September 6, 2019
Very classic vibes and a promising start.
I kept thinking of Pilgrim's Progress while reading, except The Journey is not at all allegorical. Like Pilgrim's Progress, you have someone(s) on a journey, with a vague destination, who are helped and hindered on their way. And the prose reminded me of classics similar to Pilgrim's Progress as well.
The siblings bounce from misadventure to misadventure in their attempt to find a new home more than follow a linear plot. Coincidence and providence ran rife, which did unfortunately press the limits of my suspension of disbelief.
I had a bit of difficulty connecting to the characters. I think this is partly the writing style--it's a very classic style. This isn't a bad thing. The stately prose has its own appeal, and is written well. It's just not my favorite. This style is simply by its nature less immersive, and while at times I could sympathize with the characters--especially poor Fred (poor, poor Fred), who goes through so much and tries so hard and has such low self-esteem--I didn't truly empathize with them.
I liked the unique, more domestic focus of The Journey, and the way the siblings grow. The way some of them dread change, others embrace it, and others try to force themselves into a mold they can't fit, was an interesting exploration.
Overall, The Journey is an easy-going exploration of the lives of three dispossessed siblings and the lands they roam through. It's not high adventure, but there is adventure. It's a sweet story with a gentle heart amid moments of peril.
If you love more character-driven than plot-driven, very clean, wholesome stories about siblings with complex relationships who make mistakes, complex prose reminiscent of classic literature, and a more down-to-earth fantasy novel with minimal fantasy elements, you'll likely enjoy this book.
I kept thinking of Pilgrim's Progress while reading, except The Journey is not at all allegorical. Like Pilgrim's Progress, you have someone(s) on a journey, with a vague destination, who are helped and hindered on their way. And the prose reminded me of classics similar to Pilgrim's Progress as well.
The siblings bounce from misadventure to misadventure in their attempt to find a new home more than follow a linear plot. Coincidence and providence ran rife, which did unfortunately press the limits of my suspension of disbelief.
I had a bit of difficulty connecting to the characters. I think this is partly the writing style--it's a very classic style. This isn't a bad thing. The stately prose has its own appeal, and is written well. It's just not my favorite. This style is simply by its nature less immersive, and while at times I could sympathize with the characters--especially poor Fred (poor, poor Fred), who goes through so much and tries so hard and has such low self-esteem--I didn't truly empathize with them.
I liked the unique, more domestic focus of The Journey, and the way the siblings grow. The way some of them dread change, others embrace it, and others try to force themselves into a mold they can't fit, was an interesting exploration.
Overall, The Journey is an easy-going exploration of the lives of three dispossessed siblings and the lands they roam through. It's not high adventure, but there is adventure. It's a sweet story with a gentle heart amid moments of peril.
If you love more character-driven than plot-driven, very clean, wholesome stories about siblings with complex relationships who make mistakes, complex prose reminiscent of classic literature, and a more down-to-earth fantasy novel with minimal fantasy elements, you'll likely enjoy this book.
September 1, 2021
An exciting fantasy world with themes of family, relationships, and belonging.
This book is different from many of the fantasy books I've read because of the heavy emphasis on family and family relationships. Following along with Fred and his sisters, you really feel like they are struggling to hold on to what little they have left, and the pressures put on them.
The lore in this world is one of my favorite parts of this book. Each kingdom and country has its own feel and traditions, which is no small task to flesh out, and I think Verity does it incredibly well! I mean, she went full Tolkien and creating multiple languages!
There are several characters within the book who have POVs, which I enjoy seeing because each one is so different and they have different wants/expectations about how things should go.
My main gripe is there are a lot of scene breaks where we also tend to switch POVs, which I'm not a fan of. I like to dig into characters and sit with them through things, and that doesn't happen. It also tended to mess with the flow of the story on occasion.
Even still, this book was quite enjoyable and I'm looking forward to the other books she's written and find out what happens to the Thorne family along the way!
This book is different from many of the fantasy books I've read because of the heavy emphasis on family and family relationships. Following along with Fred and his sisters, you really feel like they are struggling to hold on to what little they have left, and the pressures put on them.
The lore in this world is one of my favorite parts of this book. Each kingdom and country has its own feel and traditions, which is no small task to flesh out, and I think Verity does it incredibly well! I mean, she went full Tolkien and creating multiple languages!
There are several characters within the book who have POVs, which I enjoy seeing because each one is so different and they have different wants/expectations about how things should go.
My main gripe is there are a lot of scene breaks where we also tend to switch POVs, which I'm not a fan of. I like to dig into characters and sit with them through things, and that doesn't happen. It also tended to mess with the flow of the story on occasion.
Even still, this book was quite enjoyable and I'm looking forward to the other books she's written and find out what happens to the Thorne family along the way!
August 25, 2022
I love reading (and rereading) The Journey because of its commentary on the life we live. It's not often that a fantasy book takes on such a graceful, yet quaint prose. This is a perfectly brief book, but it made me think for long after. The author makes it clear that the story is not necessarily about the events that happen, not necessarily about the characters that we observe, but about what those events and characters reveal about themes of familial love and growing up. In this way, The Journey will not be the right fit for everyone. It's not your typical fantasy. There are no grand quests, sweeping, vibrant worlds, or alluring magic. But for me, I still felt enchanted by this little book and its big themes. If you're a fan of dark versus light and food-for-thought reads, you may fit into this niche audience. It's one of those books I could reread again and again without getting tired of it!
May 27, 2020
I probably would have griped about this not being in a more modern style a couple years ago. Now I see it as its style, and although I will say if it wasn't by you I may not have read and that I can see a lot of people being turned off... It's your style. It was consistent through the book, it made for a light, fast read (not in an insulting way), and it just kind of worked for the book?
Still not a fan of the style, but that doesn't mean I disliked the book. I liked it. Style probably kept me from loving it, but I still liked it. Enough so that yes, I will be buying others. And trust me, if it hurt me to read, I would just act like I had too many other things to read to buy it xD
This may seem like a very whack way to go about the review, but I think it's important for others to know because it is a very niche style. Probably more for people who genuinely love and treasure the older fantasies, something I only read for the story and not for an appreciation for the art craft of its style. Like, if you truly adore the way that people like Tolkien write, you'll probably appreciate Ver's style way more than I ever could.
Now, to just the story itself and not the writing style... In a world where many fantasy stories are epic and world ending and out-of-this-world fantastical, The Journey is just very personal. You see bits of magic, but none of these main characters are slinging spells. They aren't fighting against any other foe except the hardships of life and the butthole-ness of people. In a weird way, "the journey" is both their greatest foe and their greatest ally, pushing them until they almost break yet making them become a much tighter -- maybe larger -- family.
It is a breath of fresh air to have these characters who you are just experiencing growing. As a high-action fantasy fanatic, it did sometimes feel a little too unexciting, but I could also appreciate how it always had something going on for the family (I just have my preferences and really wanted some magical fighting xD).
Almost all my gripes are about execution, but it's just very reminiscent of the older styles, and you can see Ver's love for those in her writing. So although I think there are better ways to make things come across for a wider, modern audience... She has her niche and she sticks to it well, and I cannot insult her on that. I will even give her leeway on her semi-colons -- which I hate being overused in modern writing -- because it does fit the older writing she is recreating (I am never gonna live this down... Keep in mind, I still disagree in modern, Ver <.<).
The only other gripe I have is sometimes I feel like the book needed to be a smidge longer to give more time to Sandy? Sometimes she really felt like an afterthought, and I liked the premise of her character, so it was disappointing. It did come full circle, and I like how it tied in with Fred, but it just didn't feel as earned as Fred's growth.
But yes, I definitely recommend this book who appreciate the older, more classical fantasies who also want that more personal journey of a family just trying to survive against the world.
Still not a fan of the style, but that doesn't mean I disliked the book. I liked it. Style probably kept me from loving it, but I still liked it. Enough so that yes, I will be buying others. And trust me, if it hurt me to read, I would just act like I had too many other things to read to buy it xD
This may seem like a very whack way to go about the review, but I think it's important for others to know because it is a very niche style. Probably more for people who genuinely love and treasure the older fantasies, something I only read for the story and not for an appreciation for the art craft of its style. Like, if you truly adore the way that people like Tolkien write, you'll probably appreciate Ver's style way more than I ever could.
Now, to just the story itself and not the writing style... In a world where many fantasy stories are epic and world ending and out-of-this-world fantastical, The Journey is just very personal. You see bits of magic, but none of these main characters are slinging spells. They aren't fighting against any other foe except the hardships of life and the butthole-ness of people. In a weird way, "the journey" is both their greatest foe and their greatest ally, pushing them until they almost break yet making them become a much tighter -- maybe larger -- family.
It is a breath of fresh air to have these characters who you are just experiencing growing. As a high-action fantasy fanatic, it did sometimes feel a little too unexciting, but I could also appreciate how it always had something going on for the family (I just have my preferences and really wanted some magical fighting xD).
Almost all my gripes are about execution, but it's just very reminiscent of the older styles, and you can see Ver's love for those in her writing. So although I think there are better ways to make things come across for a wider, modern audience... She has her niche and she sticks to it well, and I cannot insult her on that. I will even give her leeway on her semi-colons -- which I hate being overused in modern writing -- because it does fit the older writing she is recreating (I am never gonna live this down... Keep in mind, I still disagree in modern, Ver <.<).
The only other gripe I have is sometimes I feel like the book needed to be a smidge longer to give more time to Sandy? Sometimes she really felt like an afterthought, and I liked the premise of her character, so it was disappointing. It did come full circle, and I like how it tied in with Fred, but it just didn't feel as earned as Fred's growth.
But yes, I definitely recommend this book who appreciate the older, more classical fantasies who also want that more personal journey of a family just trying to survive against the world.
September 30, 2019
First of all: the prose. Wow! It's so smooth, elegant, and perfect for the genre. Tolkien would be proud! I'd love this on audio book. Especially if it was read by Benedict Cumberbatch. I mean come on. I'd pay to hear him say "thindran!" (I'm hoping it's similar to the way he pronounces penguin).
That being said, I also really enjoyed the character development. It was on point. Our main characters all have a lot of growing to do. Fred, who takes responsibility for his younger siblings and carries the world on his shoulders I found sympathetic from the start. Spunky, sassy Sandy had to grow on me a bit. But rest assured she sees the error of her ways and grows out of it.
The world building I found subtle. It was just enough without slowing down the story, avoiding info dumps and pages and pages of description. It was blended into the narrative, as if we've been in Legea all our lives. I'm curious to learn more about the history off all the different countries our friends traveled through.
My only bit of critique is that I would have liked to read from Marjorie's point of view as well as Sandy and Fred's. Although the beginning was rough on her as well, she grew into her supportive role. Her character is strong, yet understated.
Also, I feel like could have included more of Cecelia and Isabelle at the end. Sometimes I forgot they were even there, so I think they could have played a more active role during that last stretch of the journey.
All in all a great wholesome read that I'd recommend for both young and old readers. I'm glad this is the first part of a series because I'm left here wanting to know more about these characters and where their lives will take them.
That being said, I also really enjoyed the character development. It was on point. Our main characters all have a lot of growing to do. Fred, who takes responsibility for his younger siblings and carries the world on his shoulders I found sympathetic from the start. Spunky, sassy Sandy had to grow on me a bit. But rest assured she sees the error of her ways and grows out of it.
The world building I found subtle. It was just enough without slowing down the story, avoiding info dumps and pages and pages of description. It was blended into the narrative, as if we've been in Legea all our lives. I'm curious to learn more about the history off all the different countries our friends traveled through.
My only bit of critique is that I would have liked to read from Marjorie's point of view as well as Sandy and Fred's. Although the beginning was rough on her as well, she grew into her supportive role. Her character is strong, yet understated.
Also, I feel like could have included more of Cecelia and Isabelle at the end. Sometimes I forgot they were even there, so I think they could have played a more active role during that last stretch of the journey.
All in all a great wholesome read that I'd recommend for both young and old readers. I'm glad this is the first part of a series because I'm left here wanting to know more about these characters and where their lives will take them.
January 18, 2020
I don't usually go for journey stories, due to weak plot, but this one kept me interested. The beautiful language and scene-by scene tension was enough to carry the story forward.
My favorite stuff: the vivid descriptions of everything. The brutally honest look at human nature in the form of Sandy. Family reunions. The map.
My least favorite stuff: the Series-Of-Unfortunate-Events vibe. Too many easy escapes.
Overall, I enjoyed the read.
My favorite stuff: the vivid descriptions of everything. The brutally honest look at human nature in the form of Sandy. Family reunions. The map.
My least favorite stuff: the Series-Of-Unfortunate-Events vibe. Too many easy escapes.
Overall, I enjoyed the read.
May 27, 2024
I find myself very conflicted, writing this ARC review. So I guess I’ll start with the things I liked.
I liked Fred, Marjorie, and Sandy. Sometimes characters suffer from too much sameness so it’s like the author just hit copy and paste with all of them, or they just end up feeling like cardboard cutouts rather than real people with real problems. However, this book did not have that issue. Our main trio were all very different people with different motives and different inward struggles! I have to say Fred is my favorite, poor boy.
I did also quite like the descriptions of the landscape or a new character. There’s a point where one of the characters climbs to the top of a mountain and sees everything sprawled out below him for miles and miles and I was right there with him, seeing it too.
However, I think the biggest struggle I had with the book is that I do not really like Lord of the Rings (don’t all stab me with pitchforks at once), and this seemed very inspired by Lord of the Rings. I guess in that respect I am not the target audience, because the slow pace of it made it difficult for me to get through. I also found that much of the plot revolved around coincidences.
If epic journey tales like Lord of the Rings are more your thing than mine, then I think you will love this one. The characters are sweet, too. I’ll be interested in seeing what else Buchanan produces!
I liked Fred, Marjorie, and Sandy. Sometimes characters suffer from too much sameness so it’s like the author just hit copy and paste with all of them, or they just end up feeling like cardboard cutouts rather than real people with real problems. However, this book did not have that issue. Our main trio were all very different people with different motives and different inward struggles! I have to say Fred is my favorite, poor boy.
I did also quite like the descriptions of the landscape or a new character. There’s a point where one of the characters climbs to the top of a mountain and sees everything sprawled out below him for miles and miles and I was right there with him, seeing it too.
However, I think the biggest struggle I had with the book is that I do not really like Lord of the Rings (don’t all stab me with pitchforks at once), and this seemed very inspired by Lord of the Rings. I guess in that respect I am not the target audience, because the slow pace of it made it difficult for me to get through. I also found that much of the plot revolved around coincidences.
If epic journey tales like Lord of the Rings are more your thing than mine, then I think you will love this one. The characters are sweet, too. I’ll be interested in seeing what else Buchanan produces!
January 1, 2025
2024 Edition review:
I really enjoyed the updated version of The Journey! As with the first time I read this book, the characters captured my heart. Fred's tender spirit and quiet courage, Marjorie's kindness and empathy, and Sandy's internal struggles between her childish self and a more selfless maturity.
Although much of the book was spent travelling, I didn't find it tedious. There were plenty of villainous scoundrels throwing a wrench in the Thorne's plans. But there were also virtuous heroes who remind the reader that there is good in the world, as dark as things may appear.
The world building was vivid. Although I am not great at keeping fantasy locations and politics straight, I was able to get a grasp on those aspects of the story. The descriptions were beautiful, as was the writing style.
The ending was one of hope, despite all the hardships the Thorne siblings had been through. I am very much looking forward to reading the next book in the series.
2022 Review: This book... 🤩 I had been wanting to read it for a while and I’m so glad I finally did.
This book follows the journey of three siblings: Frederick, Marjorie & Sandy as they seek a new home. As they travel they pass through many dangerous places and meet both friends and foes. Verity wrote the locations so vividly, that they each stood out as distinct and memorable. My favourite was Fell Pass.
This was very much a character driven story. Each of the siblings were fascinating.
Frederick was a protector and caretaker for the girls. He is so sweet and I want to give him a hug and a pep talk, he needs it badly!
Marjorie the older of the two girls, grew on me throughout the story. She matured so much and became the glue holding the family together. I absolutely love her!
Sandy was so well written. I didn’t know whether to hate or love her. Her arc was so satisfying, and in the end she reminded me a bit of Jo March.
This has become one of my favourite reads of the year, and I look forward to reading the rest of the series!
I really enjoyed the updated version of The Journey! As with the first time I read this book, the characters captured my heart. Fred's tender spirit and quiet courage, Marjorie's kindness and empathy, and Sandy's internal struggles between her childish self and a more selfless maturity.
Although much of the book was spent travelling, I didn't find it tedious. There were plenty of villainous scoundrels throwing a wrench in the Thorne's plans. But there were also virtuous heroes who remind the reader that there is good in the world, as dark as things may appear.
The world building was vivid. Although I am not great at keeping fantasy locations and politics straight, I was able to get a grasp on those aspects of the story. The descriptions were beautiful, as was the writing style.
The ending was one of hope, despite all the hardships the Thorne siblings had been through. I am very much looking forward to reading the next book in the series.
2022 Review: This book... 🤩 I had been wanting to read it for a while and I’m so glad I finally did.
This book follows the journey of three siblings: Frederick, Marjorie & Sandy as they seek a new home. As they travel they pass through many dangerous places and meet both friends and foes. Verity wrote the locations so vividly, that they each stood out as distinct and memorable. My favourite was Fell Pass.
This was very much a character driven story. Each of the siblings were fascinating.
Frederick was a protector and caretaker for the girls. He is so sweet and I want to give him a hug and a pep talk, he needs it badly!
Marjorie the older of the two girls, grew on me throughout the story. She matured so much and became the glue holding the family together. I absolutely love her!
Sandy was so well written. I didn’t know whether to hate or love her. Her arc was so satisfying, and in the end she reminded me a bit of Jo March.
This has become one of my favourite reads of the year, and I look forward to reading the rest of the series!
December 31, 2025
I loved Fred though I wanted to shake the truth into him a few times.
In some ways, the story felt a little episodic, short segments that joined together to make the larger story. I loved how gentle the writing style was though that didn’t lessen the tension or hardship of the story at all.
It took me a little to really be drawn into the book, but by the end I was rooting for the characters and I’m very curious about what happens next.
In this book:
Strong older brother and determined younger sisters
References to family loss/tragedy
References to family neglect
Mythical creatures
Traveling between many towns and countries
Some physical conflicts and injuries
In some ways, the story felt a little episodic, short segments that joined together to make the larger story. I loved how gentle the writing style was though that didn’t lessen the tension or hardship of the story at all.
It took me a little to really be drawn into the book, but by the end I was rooting for the characters and I’m very curious about what happens next.
In this book:
Strong older brother and determined younger sisters
References to family loss/tragedy
References to family neglect
Mythical creatures
Traveling between many towns and countries
Some physical conflicts and injuries
August 27, 2019
What can I say about this book? When I read it for the first time in draft form, I was blown away by the realistic portrayal of sibling relationships, and the gorgeous world and setting.
Having read it twice now, I love it even more.
I love Fred. As an oldest sibling myself, I relate to the mental struggles he faces throughout this journey, both physically and mentally.
Sandy's hilarious, but you understand her joys and sorrows. Like her other siblings, she's relatable. And I love her for it.
Marjorie is the mother figure, so she is wise and understanding...but I'll be honest, she's my least favorite out of the three. Not that it's a bad thing, she just is.
So, what about the story?
It unfolds slowly, taking its time to get to know the siblings and their individual struggles. But, though it is slow, there are a few twists and turns in there that I honestly didn't expect when I first read it.
The world though, my goodness.
I love Legea. I want to read more about it. This story apparently only gives you a small sampling of it and I want more. Please, Verity, finish The Village edits soon.
So, I loved it. I loved every minute of it. Buy it, put it on your shelf. It's worth a second and third read. I can't wait till it's officially released.
I received a complimentary copy in exchange for an honest review. Even so, the views expressed in this review are my own. Trust me, I wouldn't have it any other way.
Having read it twice now, I love it even more.
I love Fred. As an oldest sibling myself, I relate to the mental struggles he faces throughout this journey, both physically and mentally.
Sandy's hilarious, but you understand her joys and sorrows. Like her other siblings, she's relatable. And I love her for it.
Marjorie is the mother figure, so she is wise and understanding...but I'll be honest, she's my least favorite out of the three. Not that it's a bad thing, she just is.
So, what about the story?
It unfolds slowly, taking its time to get to know the siblings and their individual struggles. But, though it is slow, there are a few twists and turns in there that I honestly didn't expect when I first read it.
The world though, my goodness.
I love Legea. I want to read more about it. This story apparently only gives you a small sampling of it and I want more. Please, Verity, finish The Village edits soon.
So, I loved it. I loved every minute of it. Buy it, put it on your shelf. It's worth a second and third read. I can't wait till it's officially released.
I received a complimentary copy in exchange for an honest review. Even so, the views expressed in this review are my own. Trust me, I wouldn't have it any other way.
November 3, 2019
The Journey shows that high fantasy doesn't need to be a complicated story about a gazillion Kings who fight wars about silly things that none of the commoners care about (but still give their lives for said King). The Journey takes all magical elements of high fantasy: the world, the creatures,the bandits and bad men lurking in every corner and transforms into an almost slice of life kind of story of three ordinary siblings going on a journey to find a new home and finding family along the way.
But there's more. The Journey is only the beginning.The author carefully drops hints and introduces characters that will play a bigger role in the sequel(s)
Though The Journey is not my favourite book of the Ceristen Series (The Claw is), it lays the foundation of the epic world that is Legea and provides the origin story of Fred, Marjorie, Sandy, Gwenda and many more.
Extra bonus points because you kept the 'Sandy yawned' opening in, Verity. Sadly Goodreads doesn't allow six out of five.
But there's more. The Journey is only the beginning.The author carefully drops hints and introduces characters that will play a bigger role in the sequel(s)
Though The Journey is not my favourite book of the Ceristen Series (The Claw is), it lays the foundation of the epic world that is Legea and provides the origin story of Fred, Marjorie, Sandy, Gwenda and many more.
Extra bonus points because you kept the 'Sandy yawned' opening in, Verity. Sadly Goodreads doesn't allow six out of five.
November 21, 2020
There are not many fantasy novels that are written in the classical style. The Journey reminds me of reading the older books, such as The Prisoner of Zenda.
The language and syntax used within the book gives this a high-fantasy read. It is nice to read a book that doesn't contain magic or magical creatures. The Journey delves more on the adventure of one small family who are traveling to the last place that can offer them hope. And along the way there are surprises from within and without.
It the internal conflict of this literary fantasy that kept me intrigued.
A wonderful book for all ages and one that quickly endeared itself to my heart.
The language and syntax used within the book gives this a high-fantasy read. It is nice to read a book that doesn't contain magic or magical creatures. The Journey delves more on the adventure of one small family who are traveling to the last place that can offer them hope. And along the way there are surprises from within and without.
It the internal conflict of this literary fantasy that kept me intrigued.
A wonderful book for all ages and one that quickly endeared itself to my heart.
January 4, 2021
It was beautiful. Simple seems to be a derogative term, but it’s not in this case. This book was lovely, with just the right amount of mystery to keep you hooked and full of characters to adore and keep you engaged. It wasn’t one of those high-intensity reads that grip you like death until the last possible sentence. No, The Journey was like a calm canoe ride down a winding river. So much to see, so many things to admire, both calming and gentle yet exciting all the same.
The writing style was unique and eccentric, demanding too much of me should I ever try reading it aloud (I’m not so eloquent). It takes you back in time, or maybe just to another time, another place out of this world, and yet it was so down to earth all at once. The characters enthralled me, and arguably Sandy was one of my very favourites for both her authenticity and character arc. Fred, of course, stole my heart as he was designed to. The story itself was always moving, never really dragging on endlessly, which was refreshing—there was always a new thing to discover with every turn of the page.
I’ve never written a book review before, nor do I know the ‘lingo’ for it. Am I supposed to list pros and cons? I’ll just speak genuinely.
I will be honest: it wasn’t exactly my kind of read. I usually prefer the action, the suspense, the drama, the aNgSt. Verity gave me a book that was heartfelt, full of trials and discovery, a story about family, the value of it, and hope. It was a read destined to pull at the heartstrings, designed to be read in life’s calm moments, like a snowy evening by the fire with a nice warm cup of tea. Bonus if read by candlelight: it adds to the vibe.
All in all, I was not disappointed. Verity’s debut novel was a wonderful success, and my only regret was that it wasn’t longer.
Tldr: Beautiful, calm book full of love, family, and hope; purchase ASAP and read by candlelight for best experience.
The writing style was unique and eccentric, demanding too much of me should I ever try reading it aloud (I’m not so eloquent). It takes you back in time, or maybe just to another time, another place out of this world, and yet it was so down to earth all at once. The characters enthralled me, and arguably Sandy was one of my very favourites for both her authenticity and character arc. Fred, of course, stole my heart as he was designed to. The story itself was always moving, never really dragging on endlessly, which was refreshing—there was always a new thing to discover with every turn of the page.
I’ve never written a book review before, nor do I know the ‘lingo’ for it. Am I supposed to list pros and cons? I’ll just speak genuinely.
I will be honest: it wasn’t exactly my kind of read. I usually prefer the action, the suspense, the drama, the aNgSt. Verity gave me a book that was heartfelt, full of trials and discovery, a story about family, the value of it, and hope. It was a read destined to pull at the heartstrings, designed to be read in life’s calm moments, like a snowy evening by the fire with a nice warm cup of tea. Bonus if read by candlelight: it adds to the vibe.
All in all, I was not disappointed. Verity’s debut novel was a wonderful success, and my only regret was that it wasn’t longer.
Tldr: Beautiful, calm book full of love, family, and hope; purchase ASAP and read by candlelight for best experience.
November 24, 2020
This book seems to be more character based than action based; yet there’s definitely no lack of action. The characters are very realistic and believable. What teenage girl has not struggled with the changes occurring in her life and/or character? And what boy in his early twenties has not felt inadequate to face the challenges before him? The characters in The Journey go through these struggles and more. They also develop at a realistic pace- not spur of the moment/all of a sudden, but gradually.
The action keeps the story moving. Overall a worthwhile, enjoyable read although you may have to read it slower to get the full benefit.
The action keeps the story moving. Overall a worthwhile, enjoyable read although you may have to read it slower to get the full benefit.
May 29, 2025
An interesting opening to this upper YA/NA fantasy series. Elements of it reminded me both of Pilgrim's Progress and A Series of Unfortunate Events. I'm interested to read the next two books in this set.
February 13, 2024
The Journey (Second Edition)
I don’t want to seem like I’m hating on this book. Clearly, it was not written for my taste. I asked to read it and it was by the graciousness of the author I was allowed to not only take part in her story, but encouraged to leave a review no matter how honest. Therefore, I want you to understand my problems with the book and I in turn encourage you to read it to decide for yourselves. Because while it may not have been written for me, it might be for you.
My biggest problem was I could not get around the style and the language. The majority of the book felt like it was written in Elizabethan English with Tolkien’s penchant for wordiness. To be fair, this is the exact same problem I had when reading The Lord of the Rings and why I largely did not like LoTR. Some people may like it, but I was not one of them. In my opinion, if you can use a few words to describe something, dozens are not needed.
A major issue within the story is the prevalence of coincidences. The plot seems to unfold largely through happenstance rather than as a consequence of the characters' choices, aside from the overarching decision to embark on the journey. Life, in my view, is shaped more by our actions and the repercussions thereof, rather than by random chance. This reliance on coincidences detracted from the believability and agency of the characters.
Though the journey is fright with peril, they are largely saved by coincidences or perhaps better described as the deus ex machina. In a book that is largely character driven, I felt at no time did they ever do anything to change their own fate. Perhaps I could be wrong here having been boggled down in the language, but at least for what I perceived to be the three main events in the journey each time they are saved by something other than anything they did and two of those times were nature based.
Furthermore, while the journey is fraught with danger, the characters often find themselves conveniently saved by chance or deus ex machina interventions. Despite being character-driven, the protagonists seem passive in shaping their own destinies, relying instead on external factors for salvation. I never felt like there was any danger to the family which only seemed to push me further and further away from finishing the book.
Sometimes, it was confusing who’s prospective I was reading. Fred dominates most of the book, but occasionally Sandy would appear. I believe this is because of some reveal towards the end, but I felt even that it did little to contribute. Sandy could have easily been absorbed by Fred and I don’t think it would have changed much.
I want to say there was something about the book that I liked. Marjorie was my favorite character. Her qualities were enduring and reminded me of my own wife. I was intrigued about the idea of it maybe being a metaphor for life’s journey, but if it was, it fell flat. There were touching moments especially between Fred and the young girl or Charles and Marjorie, but those were few and far between.
In conclusion, while this book may not have resonated with me personally, I recognize its potential appeal to others. I encourage readers to approach it with an open mind, as individual tastes and preferences vary.
I don’t want to seem like I’m hating on this book. Clearly, it was not written for my taste. I asked to read it and it was by the graciousness of the author I was allowed to not only take part in her story, but encouraged to leave a review no matter how honest. Therefore, I want you to understand my problems with the book and I in turn encourage you to read it to decide for yourselves. Because while it may not have been written for me, it might be for you.
My biggest problem was I could not get around the style and the language. The majority of the book felt like it was written in Elizabethan English with Tolkien’s penchant for wordiness. To be fair, this is the exact same problem I had when reading The Lord of the Rings and why I largely did not like LoTR. Some people may like it, but I was not one of them. In my opinion, if you can use a few words to describe something, dozens are not needed.
A major issue within the story is the prevalence of coincidences. The plot seems to unfold largely through happenstance rather than as a consequence of the characters' choices, aside from the overarching decision to embark on the journey. Life, in my view, is shaped more by our actions and the repercussions thereof, rather than by random chance. This reliance on coincidences detracted from the believability and agency of the characters.
Though the journey is fright with peril, they are largely saved by coincidences or perhaps better described as the deus ex machina. In a book that is largely character driven, I felt at no time did they ever do anything to change their own fate. Perhaps I could be wrong here having been boggled down in the language, but at least for what I perceived to be the three main events in the journey each time they are saved by something other than anything they did and two of those times were nature based.
Furthermore, while the journey is fraught with danger, the characters often find themselves conveniently saved by chance or deus ex machina interventions. Despite being character-driven, the protagonists seem passive in shaping their own destinies, relying instead on external factors for salvation. I never felt like there was any danger to the family which only seemed to push me further and further away from finishing the book.
Sometimes, it was confusing who’s prospective I was reading. Fred dominates most of the book, but occasionally Sandy would appear. I believe this is because of some reveal towards the end, but I felt even that it did little to contribute. Sandy could have easily been absorbed by Fred and I don’t think it would have changed much.
I want to say there was something about the book that I liked. Marjorie was my favorite character. Her qualities were enduring and reminded me of my own wife. I was intrigued about the idea of it maybe being a metaphor for life’s journey, but if it was, it fell flat. There were touching moments especially between Fred and the young girl or Charles and Marjorie, but those were few and far between.
In conclusion, while this book may not have resonated with me personally, I recognize its potential appeal to others. I encourage readers to approach it with an open mind, as individual tastes and preferences vary.
October 11, 2022
I loved this story about one broken family becoming more whole, with its quiet, hopeful depiction of healing! It initially starts out slower, but before I knew it I was fully invested in the Thornes and their quest for safety and a home. The siblings’ journey is fraught with peril and full of surprises, but what I love most about this story is how ripe it is with moments of personal growth. Both Fred and Sandy have well-drawn character arcs, but even Marjorie grows from our initial perception of her. I especially grew to love Sandy as a character. I waffled initially on liking her, but after finishing her arc I feel like that was because she is so human – full of both flaws and potential, warring inside. Her attempts to cling to something that she can keep the same when everything and everyone around her is changing was so relatable. Buchanan uses the characters’ POVs exceptionally well. Their voices, concerns, and desires felt very real and I sometimes forgot how deeply through a particular character’s eyes I was seeing until she switched to another POV. It made the moments of growth more potent and surprising when filtered through each character’s lens.
The story has a very classic style in both the language and the plot itself. Although there are no sweeping, world-ending stakes, the world still feels big, but never in a way that bogs the story down. Each place they journey through gives a sense of a distinct culture, history, and environment. The descriptions were gorgeous and I could picture the settings clearly in my head. I honestly wish we could have spent more time in certain places.
If you like character-driven adventures about people looking for a home and bringing a family together along the way, definitely give this a read! I am looking forward to reading my way through the rest of the series.
The story has a very classic style in both the language and the plot itself. Although there are no sweeping, world-ending stakes, the world still feels big, but never in a way that bogs the story down. Each place they journey through gives a sense of a distinct culture, history, and environment. The descriptions were gorgeous and I could picture the settings clearly in my head. I honestly wish we could have spent more time in certain places.
If you like character-driven adventures about people looking for a home and bringing a family together along the way, definitely give this a read! I am looking forward to reading my way through the rest of the series.
December 22, 2019
What can I say? I really loved this book. Everything from the poetic writing style, the captivating plot and the cast of characters.
My favorite character was Fred. Although I only have one sibling, I could relate to Fred wanting to protect, provide and care for the younger ones, no matter the cost. I always enjoy character growth, but I found it very interesting that one of the siblings saw herself changing and she DIDN'T like it. Usually growth is welcomed because it's for the better.
The journey the siblings took was full of rough roads, unexpected bends, and tearful reunions. It amazed me that so much of their lost family was scattered about and all it took was the first step out the door to find them. I would like to know what became of the others and Hunter.
Overall, a great read that had a very Lord of the Rings feel to it. Very much looking forward to the next installment. Highly recommend.
My favorite character was Fred. Although I only have one sibling, I could relate to Fred wanting to protect, provide and care for the younger ones, no matter the cost. I always enjoy character growth, but I found it very interesting that one of the siblings saw herself changing and she DIDN'T like it. Usually growth is welcomed because it's for the better.
The journey the siblings took was full of rough roads, unexpected bends, and tearful reunions. It amazed me that so much of their lost family was scattered about and all it took was the first step out the door to find them. I would like to know what became of the others and Hunter.
Overall, a great read that had a very Lord of the Rings feel to it. Very much looking forward to the next installment. Highly recommend.
January 12, 2021
STORY
This novel is led strictly by a character-driven plot, resulting in vivid and well-structured characters! We follow siblings as they search for a new home in this coming-of-age story, and the story itself, while it could have used more plot and stakes, was well-written. The debut author has a unique voice that I look forward to read more from.
However, I think the story was best fit for a middle grade audience. Middle grade audiences do well with character-central novels. This novel reminded me of Sarah, Plain and Tall, only it is marketed as YA and is fantasy, so if it had been marketed to MG (I think it fits this category better, it is very clean and easy to read!), I think it'd be perfect as-is. As a middle grade reader, I would have loved this! It has great characters, doesn't linger on any scene or subject, and the descriptions are pretty!
In regards to story, also, it was extremely well-timed and all too easy, most of the time. Every time a bad thing happened, it was immediately fixed with no repercussions. I found myself feeling like each event was just a lead up for another timely, rather unbelievable plot device, which I didn't enjoy.
However, as a YA novel, it failed to deliver a YA novel's balance of character and plot. I would give this to a middle schooler, not a young adult, so that's still a win! It's a solid MG novel, if it had been published and marketed as such.
THEMES
This novel deals with themes such as loyalty, bravery, and courage, as well as a sense of belonging. I really enjoy these themes! This book was no exception! A super well-woven tale that got great themes across without being preachy or dry.
CHARACTERS
Debut author Buchanan has a solid grasp of what makes character's tick and did a splendid job at weaving a character-driven tale. I thoroughly enjoyed Fred, finding him sweet and likable. I enjoyed the sibling relationships and how each of them had to grow as the story progressed.
This being said, the characters' arcs were mostly rushed. I don't have a clear understanding as to why Marjorie suddenly changed. I think Sandy's rush to love her baby sister was also random and unfitting. Fred had the best arc, however, and I did enjoy the characters overall.
Also, I will note another thing regarding characters I found too timely, in spoilers. They continued to find their siblings. That's sweet, but it became hard to believe after the first sibling. Also, how could their older siblings just forget they had a home? It was unrealistic they would just start a new life without returning home, ever. And no one was upset about this, either. Very strange.
OVERALL
I received this book as a complimentary copy and this review is my own. Overall, this book was a good novel, with strong characters, sweet description, and perfect build up for a second installment! I encourage you to try this book out if you enjoy clean Christian fiction, fantasy, retellings, etc, or if you want to gift a young reader with a fun novel!
3 stars, rounded t0 3.5!
This novel is led strictly by a character-driven plot, resulting in vivid and well-structured characters! We follow siblings as they search for a new home in this coming-of-age story, and the story itself, while it could have used more plot and stakes, was well-written. The debut author has a unique voice that I look forward to read more from.
However, I think the story was best fit for a middle grade audience. Middle grade audiences do well with character-central novels. This novel reminded me of Sarah, Plain and Tall, only it is marketed as YA and is fantasy, so if it had been marketed to MG (I think it fits this category better, it is very clean and easy to read!), I think it'd be perfect as-is. As a middle grade reader, I would have loved this! It has great characters, doesn't linger on any scene or subject, and the descriptions are pretty!
In regards to story, also, it was extremely well-timed and all too easy, most of the time. Every time a bad thing happened, it was immediately fixed with no repercussions. I found myself feeling like each event was just a lead up for another timely, rather unbelievable plot device, which I didn't enjoy.
However, as a YA novel, it failed to deliver a YA novel's balance of character and plot. I would give this to a middle schooler, not a young adult, so that's still a win! It's a solid MG novel, if it had been published and marketed as such.
THEMES
This novel deals with themes such as loyalty, bravery, and courage, as well as a sense of belonging. I really enjoy these themes! This book was no exception! A super well-woven tale that got great themes across without being preachy or dry.
CHARACTERS
Debut author Buchanan has a solid grasp of what makes character's tick and did a splendid job at weaving a character-driven tale. I thoroughly enjoyed Fred, finding him sweet and likable. I enjoyed the sibling relationships and how each of them had to grow as the story progressed.
This being said, the characters' arcs were mostly rushed. I don't have a clear understanding as to why Marjorie suddenly changed. I think Sandy's rush to love her baby sister was also random and unfitting. Fred had the best arc, however, and I did enjoy the characters overall.
Also, I will note another thing regarding characters I found too timely, in spoilers. They continued to find their siblings. That's sweet, but it became hard to believe after the first sibling. Also, how could their older siblings just forget they had a home? It was unrealistic they would just start a new life without returning home, ever. And no one was upset about this, either. Very strange.
OVERALL
I received this book as a complimentary copy and this review is my own. Overall, this book was a good novel, with strong characters, sweet description, and perfect build up for a second installment! I encourage you to try this book out if you enjoy clean Christian fiction, fantasy, retellings, etc, or if you want to gift a young reader with a fun novel!
3 stars, rounded t0 3.5!
December 1, 2023
This book isn’t my usual type of read, but I think it was very well written and will definitely be a great fit for readers of a different type. For reference, I tend to prefer fast-paced fantasy with lots of magic, super high stakes, plot-driven stories, lots of danger and adventure, and quick/plain writing.
The Journey has a classic feel in its writing style—it reminds me of old-timey books and classics like Narnia or Lord of the Rings in language and style. It’s beautiful and will definitely grab the interest of folks who crave that fancier, classic style. It reads almost like a classic storybook.
It’s very character focused rather than plot focused. There is a lot of lovely focus on a brother and his sisters, with their relationships developing as they journey. And some of the younger characters experience a coming-of-age arc as they develop into adults. This story is definitely a story about a family looking out for each other. It’s very sweet.
As for the plot itself, this is where I probably struggled the most and why it wasn’t a perfect fit for me. The plot exists, and there’s tension and conflict throughout, so I never felt bored. However, it was… cozy? Basically, the protagonists lose their home and most go on a journey to find another. They have a destination in mind, but there’s no real urgency about getting there, other than they need a place to make a home. It doesn’t have overarching high stakes (which I prefer), but the goal is always there, so the plot never feels aimless.
And despite the low-stakes feeling, there is ample danger and tension throughout the journey, and the little mini quests DO have higher stakes (with life-and-death situations involved). This is going to sound weird, but I would best describe this story as a fantasy, human version of the movie, Homeward Bound (cookies to anyone who remembers that movie). This book is basically a travel narrative, but there’s lots of danger along the way, including multiple kidnappings, lots of evil people, and natural disasters. Things do keep the story feeling tense and exciting throughout.
This is definitely low fantasy, with pretty much no magic. A magical creature makes a brief appearance, but not much else. The worldbuilding in this world is excellent, though, and includes history and politics. Folks looking to learn about a fantasy world in a cozier setting will have a blast here.
Overall, there’s a lot to love with this story. It’s very well written, the world is nicely developed, and the story has tension that keeps you turning pages throughout. And it’s CLEAN!! I always love finding clean fantasy!
If you’re like me and are looking for explosive magic and intense plots, I would recommend at least giving this book a try. It was enjoyable! If you don’t need explosive magic and intense plots and are looking more for low fantasy with family cuteness, DEFINITELY give this book a try—you’ll love it.
NOTE: I'm reviewing the second edition (2024) of this story.
I received a free copy of this book from the publisher. This is my honest review.
The Journey has a classic feel in its writing style—it reminds me of old-timey books and classics like Narnia or Lord of the Rings in language and style. It’s beautiful and will definitely grab the interest of folks who crave that fancier, classic style. It reads almost like a classic storybook.
It’s very character focused rather than plot focused. There is a lot of lovely focus on a brother and his sisters, with their relationships developing as they journey. And some of the younger characters experience a coming-of-age arc as they develop into adults. This story is definitely a story about a family looking out for each other. It’s very sweet.
As for the plot itself, this is where I probably struggled the most and why it wasn’t a perfect fit for me. The plot exists, and there’s tension and conflict throughout, so I never felt bored. However, it was… cozy? Basically, the protagonists lose their home and most go on a journey to find another. They have a destination in mind, but there’s no real urgency about getting there, other than they need a place to make a home. It doesn’t have overarching high stakes (which I prefer), but the goal is always there, so the plot never feels aimless.
And despite the low-stakes feeling, there is ample danger and tension throughout the journey, and the little mini quests DO have higher stakes (with life-and-death situations involved). This is going to sound weird, but I would best describe this story as a fantasy, human version of the movie, Homeward Bound (cookies to anyone who remembers that movie). This book is basically a travel narrative, but there’s lots of danger along the way, including multiple kidnappings, lots of evil people, and natural disasters. Things do keep the story feeling tense and exciting throughout.
This is definitely low fantasy, with pretty much no magic. A magical creature makes a brief appearance, but not much else. The worldbuilding in this world is excellent, though, and includes history and politics. Folks looking to learn about a fantasy world in a cozier setting will have a blast here.
Overall, there’s a lot to love with this story. It’s very well written, the world is nicely developed, and the story has tension that keeps you turning pages throughout. And it’s CLEAN!! I always love finding clean fantasy!
If you’re like me and are looking for explosive magic and intense plots, I would recommend at least giving this book a try. It was enjoyable! If you don’t need explosive magic and intense plots and are looking more for low fantasy with family cuteness, DEFINITELY give this book a try—you’ll love it.
NOTE: I'm reviewing the second edition (2024) of this story.
I received a free copy of this book from the publisher. This is my honest review.
February 10, 2025
This story was so unique! It’s really hard for me to pin down a category to put this in, because I believe it should go in one all its own!
I LOVED the introspection, sibling dynamics and character development that played out over the course of the book. It was stellar! That, together with the breathtaking vistas painted in a beautiful classical prose, made The Journey a wonderful and insightful novel that is unforgettable!
I loved the soft pacing and subtle fantasy elements (i.e. occasional glimpse of fantastical creatures, crafted storyworld with detailed, thought-out histories), though there was also plenty of danger, sacrifice, rescues and escapes! Somehow this book managed to be both exciting AND calming! Very much slow-build storytelling, but also punctuated by fast-paced action morsels. It was fantastic and I am in love with both this story and Author Verity A. Buchanan’s writing style!
I am SO looking forward to reading the next book in the Ceristen Series (The Village) and the third as well, which I hear will be releasing soon! Eep! New author/series/books to love! Worth getting ahold of and 100% recommended! It was SUCH a good story!
I LOVED the introspection, sibling dynamics and character development that played out over the course of the book. It was stellar! That, together with the breathtaking vistas painted in a beautiful classical prose, made The Journey a wonderful and insightful novel that is unforgettable!
I loved the soft pacing and subtle fantasy elements (i.e. occasional glimpse of fantastical creatures, crafted storyworld with detailed, thought-out histories), though there was also plenty of danger, sacrifice, rescues and escapes! Somehow this book managed to be both exciting AND calming! Very much slow-build storytelling, but also punctuated by fast-paced action morsels. It was fantastic and I am in love with both this story and Author Verity A. Buchanan’s writing style!
I am SO looking forward to reading the next book in the Ceristen Series (The Village) and the third as well, which I hear will be releasing soon! Eep! New author/series/books to love! Worth getting ahold of and 100% recommended! It was SUCH a good story!
June 5, 2022
This is the debut novel of Verity A. Buchanan and quite an enjoyable read! The beginning is a bit slow, but really picks up and becomes harder to put down as the book progresses. Her prose, while somewhat unique and different, is engaging and her descriptions are clear and paint a vivid picture. There are quite a few characters, but she doesn’t lose any of them to the wayside and slowly feeds the reader more information about the Thorne family and the dynamics of the siblings.
September 10, 2019
This book has been a long time in the making. Several years of worldbuilding went into this story and it really shows. In a general sense I stick to the original point that I made a long time ago that Verity A. Buchanan's writing style is beautiful and reads possibly even better than classical fantasy. She takes a lot of influence in writing structure from Tolkien, but she cuts out pretty much all of the unnecessarily long pieces on the history of simple objects, yet she keeps the world feeling lived in and old. While I personally prefer an action-based plotline that focuses more on a larger picture, I absolutely adored the characters and watching them grow as they made generally realistic changes and decisions. Plus it helped that enough strife and conflict happened to keep the story going.
Now I go into specifics, so spoilers ahead.
Now I go into specifics, so spoilers ahead.
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