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Fine Eyes and Pert Opinions: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
Darcy is at his wits end.
As guardian to his younger sister, he wants her to become a properly accomplished woman--she is coming out soon, after all. But Georgiana steadfastly refuses despite the encouragement of Elizabeth Bennet, long time Darcy family friend.
Darcy invites a few guests to Pemberley in the hopes of encouraging Georgiana's improvement with a taste of society.
Unexpected additions to the party prove dangerously distracting, leaving the Darcy family on the brink of disaster.
Elizabeth holds the key to their restoration, but she has fled Pemberley, unable to tolerate another day in the Darcys' company.
Will Darcy relinquish his pride and prejudice to seek out a woman below his notice before his family is irreparably ruined?
As guardian to his younger sister, he wants her to become a properly accomplished woman--she is coming out soon, after all. But Georgiana steadfastly refuses despite the encouragement of Elizabeth Bennet, long time Darcy family friend.
Darcy invites a few guests to Pemberley in the hopes of encouraging Georgiana's improvement with a taste of society.
Unexpected additions to the party prove dangerously distracting, leaving the Darcy family on the brink of disaster.
Elizabeth holds the key to their restoration, but she has fled Pemberley, unable to tolerate another day in the Darcys' company.
Will Darcy relinquish his pride and prejudice to seek out a woman below his notice before his family is irreparably ruined?
247 pages, Kindle Edition
Published October 1, 2019
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Maria Grace
100 books315 followersSix time BRAG Medallion Honoree, #1 Best-selling Historical Fantasy author Maria Grace has her PhD in Educational Psychology and is a 16-year veteran of the university classroom where she taught courses in human growth and development, learning, test development and counseling. None of which have anything to do with her undergraduate studies in economics/sociology/managerial studies/behavior sciences. She pretends to be a mild-mannered writer/cat-lady, but most of her vacations require helmets and waivers or historical costumes, usually not at the same time.
She stumbled into Jane Austen fan-dom in the mid '90s with Emma Thompson's Sense and Sensibility film, having somehow graduated HS without ever having read Austen. It was only a short leap then to consume all of Austen's works, in all their various media forms. In the hopes of discovering more works by Austen, she stumbled into the fan fiction forums, which naturally led to asking 'What if...' herself. Twenty nine books later, she still asks that question.
She writes gaslamp fantasy, historical romance and non-fiction to help justify her research addiction.
She stumbled into Jane Austen fan-dom in the mid '90s with Emma Thompson's Sense and Sensibility film, having somehow graduated HS without ever having read Austen. It was only a short leap then to consume all of Austen's works, in all their various media forms. In the hopes of discovering more works by Austen, she stumbled into the fan fiction forums, which naturally led to asking 'What if...' herself. Twenty nine books later, she still asks that question.
She writes gaslamp fantasy, historical romance and non-fiction to help justify her research addiction.
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November 17, 2021
4.5 rounded up to 5 stars
I always enjoy Ms. Grace's stories, and this one is no exception. It's unique, taking a giant leap outside of canon, and some may argue that it's not really a Pride and Prejudice variation because it IS so different. But if you accept that she has just taken the primary characters and started them out in different situations, it's an intriguing premise, and the idea is developed and executed well despite a couple of plot glitches.
Right from the onset, there are three major changes in the backstory. The first is that Mr. Bennet is the Darcys' clergyman rather than the Master of Longbourn. The Bennets lives in Lambton near Pemberley, and all five daughters have grown up there. The second is that Mrs. Bennet just died six months ago, and she is described to have been "a gentle, kind and gracious soul" (unlike Jane Austen's Mrs. Bennet).
The third, and a major focus of this story, is that Georgiana appears to be a troublesome ward for her brother and cousin, having frustrated multiple tutors, governesses and companions in their efforts to make her an accomplished young lady. (Interestingly, even Mrs. Younge didn't last long, bringing that particular storyline to a dead end.) Darcy can't understand why Georgiana won't apply herself to her studies and is at his wit's end. After all, she's clearly intelligent enough - she plays the pianoforte beautifully (by ear) and can speak French with perfect pronunciation. Again, I don't find her essential character to be that different from the original, but she is given a serious secret that adversely affects her behavior.
Miss Elizabeth Bennet is a steadying influence for both Georgiana and Darcy. They both trust and confide in her, often seeking her advice. This leads Darcy, despite his own misgivings, to host a house party at Pemberley - the hope is that having Georgiana plan some of the activities will allow her to enjoy some success and approval from her demanding brother.
The guests are Colonel Fitzwilliam, Anne de Bourgh, Charles Bingley and his sister Caroline, plus two new and rather larger-than-life characters, both literally and personality-wise: Sir Alexander Garland and Miss Blanche Garland. Although the Bennets would not ordinarily be included, eventually Georgiana's desire for Elizabeth's assistance leads to the two eldest sisters being invited to join.
The house party is quite eventful. The Garlands are outspoken and unpredictable, and the very rigid and proper Mr. Darcy isn't certain they're positive influences for Georgiana, though he is somewhat attracted to Miss Garland. A lost wager on an archery contest has Sir Alexander directing the group in planning a house performance of the play he is writing. A game of pall mall (it's sort of like croquet) leads to a serious injury, and Elizabeth must take charge and tend to the injured.
Poor Elizabeth! She's constantly put upon, so this "party" isn't much of one for her. Characteristically, she's fuming and wants to explode. However, her father has impressed upon her the necessity of remembering her place, so she keeps her peace. Miss Bingley and Miss de Bourgh are particularly dismissive of the vicar's daughter, and at times the rest of the group thoughtlessly excludes Elizabeth. Jane isn't of much help; she and Mr. Bingley are busy falling in love. Elizabeth frequently finds herself in awkward situations and holds a number of significant secrets.
Among Elizabeth's secrets, one was entrusted to her by Darcy and Georgiana's mother years ago. Considering the difficulty the two siblings have had getting along, I do think Elizabeth should have divulged it sooner. (Mrs. Darcy instructed her to wait for "the right time.") It's also apparent that Mrs. Reynolds would recognize the source of Georgiana's troubles and would have informed Darcy years ago. I recognize that either of these would spoil the story as written, but they are legitimate plot holes.
If you overlook those, it's a beautifully written story with believable characters. I especially love what finally prompts Darcy to realize how much he loves Elizabeth and needs her to be the Mistress of Pemberley.
Content is clean.
I always enjoy Ms. Grace's stories, and this one is no exception. It's unique, taking a giant leap outside of canon, and some may argue that it's not really a Pride and Prejudice variation because it IS so different. But if you accept that she has just taken the primary characters and started them out in different situations, it's an intriguing premise, and the idea is developed and executed well despite a couple of plot glitches.
Right from the onset, there are three major changes in the backstory. The first is that Mr. Bennet is the Darcys' clergyman rather than the Master of Longbourn. The Bennets lives in Lambton near Pemberley, and all five daughters have grown up there. The second is that Mrs. Bennet just died six months ago, and she is described to have been "a gentle, kind and gracious soul" (unlike Jane Austen's Mrs. Bennet).
The third, and a major focus of this story, is that Georgiana appears to be a troublesome ward for her brother and cousin, having frustrated multiple tutors, governesses and companions in their efforts to make her an accomplished young lady. (Interestingly, even Mrs. Younge didn't last long, bringing that particular storyline to a dead end.) Darcy can't understand why Georgiana won't apply herself to her studies and is at his wit's end. After all, she's clearly intelligent enough - she plays the pianoforte beautifully (by ear) and can speak French with perfect pronunciation. Again, I don't find her essential character to be that different from the original, but she is given a serious secret that adversely affects her behavior.
Miss Elizabeth Bennet is a steadying influence for both Georgiana and Darcy. They both trust and confide in her, often seeking her advice. This leads Darcy, despite his own misgivings, to host a house party at Pemberley - the hope is that having Georgiana plan some of the activities will allow her to enjoy some success and approval from her demanding brother.
The guests are Colonel Fitzwilliam, Anne de Bourgh, Charles Bingley and his sister Caroline, plus two new and rather larger-than-life characters, both literally and personality-wise: Sir Alexander Garland and Miss Blanche Garland. Although the Bennets would not ordinarily be included, eventually Georgiana's desire for Elizabeth's assistance leads to the two eldest sisters being invited to join.
The house party is quite eventful. The Garlands are outspoken and unpredictable, and the very rigid and proper Mr. Darcy isn't certain they're positive influences for Georgiana, though he is somewhat attracted to Miss Garland. A lost wager on an archery contest has Sir Alexander directing the group in planning a house performance of the play he is writing. A game of pall mall (it's sort of like croquet) leads to a serious injury, and Elizabeth must take charge and tend to the injured.
Poor Elizabeth! She's constantly put upon, so this "party" isn't much of one for her. Characteristically, she's fuming and wants to explode. However, her father has impressed upon her the necessity of remembering her place, so she keeps her peace. Miss Bingley and Miss de Bourgh are particularly dismissive of the vicar's daughter, and at times the rest of the group thoughtlessly excludes Elizabeth. Jane isn't of much help; she and Mr. Bingley are busy falling in love. Elizabeth frequently finds herself in awkward situations and holds a number of significant secrets.
Among Elizabeth's secrets, one was entrusted to her by Darcy and Georgiana's mother years ago. Considering the difficulty the two siblings have had getting along, I do think Elizabeth should have divulged it sooner. (Mrs. Darcy instructed her to wait for "the right time.") It's also apparent that Mrs. Reynolds would recognize the source of Georgiana's troubles and would have informed Darcy years ago. I recognize that either of these would spoil the story as written, but they are legitimate plot holes.
If you overlook those, it's a beautifully written story with believable characters. I especially love what finally prompts Darcy to realize how much he loves Elizabeth and needs her to be the Mistress of Pemberley.
Content is clean.
October 2, 2019
He is a gentleman; I am a gentleman’s daughter; so far we are equal. ~ Jane Austen
But what if … Elizabeth Bennet was not a gentleman’s daughter?
The opening of “Fine Eyes and Pert Opinions” quickly establishes the relationship between Fitzwilliam Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet, the Vicar’s daughter. The two have a long friendship and Darcy depends on Elizabeth for understanding of his rather difficult younger sister.
Georgiana has suffered through several unsatisfactory companions, none lasting more than a few months. What can Darcy do to help his sister mature into the young lady she is meant to be? Elizabeth suggests she needs experience with people. Why not invite several friends to a house party? The Bingleys will attend; as will the Darcy cousins, Colonel Fitzwilliam and Anne de Bourgh. To Darcy’s surprise, friends of the Colonel will also visit: Sir Alexander Garland and his sister, Miss Blanche Garland. Darcy is well-acquainted with the Bingleys and his cousins, of course. The Garland siblings are unknown to everyone except the Colonel and they are surprising individuals. Sir Alexander is the largest man Darcy has ever known and his sister is as tall as Darcy himself. Darcy immediately begins to think of her as Valkyrie.
When equality is the aim, mediocrity is the result; when excellence is the aim, equality finds its true place. ~ Dr. Idel Dreimer
Georgiana has a characteristic that would probably be diagnosed in today’s world but was unacknowledged in the Regency. Low self-esteem results and she depends on her friendship with Elizabeth for support, emotional and physical. Jane and Elizabeth Bennet are invited to the Pemberley house party to aid Georgiana.
The Garlands attempt to take charge of the house party. Sir Alexander, an amateur playwright, proposes the group stage his new play. Reluctantly, Darcy agrees to the plans, only to have his boundaries exceeded.
The moment we break faith with one another, the sea engulfs us and the light goes out. ~ James Baldwin
Both the Garlands have secrets and courses of action that are hidden from the others.
How much damage can the Garlands create?
What is the genesis of Georgiana’s condition?
How is Elizabeth involved with the Garlands?
What was the relationship between Darcy and his father?
I enjoyed this look at an Elizabeth from a much lower social class than in canon. It is obvious almost from the beginning that Darcy and Elizabeth have deep feelings for each other but they know they can never marry.
The book is well-written, clean, and mostly free of errata. I recommend it to anyone who enjoys JAFF.
The author gave me an early copy of this book with no promise of a review, good or bad.
The longer we live, the more we find we are like other persons. ~ Oliver Wendell Holmes
But what if … Elizabeth Bennet was not a gentleman’s daughter?
The opening of “Fine Eyes and Pert Opinions” quickly establishes the relationship between Fitzwilliam Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet, the Vicar’s daughter. The two have a long friendship and Darcy depends on Elizabeth for understanding of his rather difficult younger sister.
Georgiana has suffered through several unsatisfactory companions, none lasting more than a few months. What can Darcy do to help his sister mature into the young lady she is meant to be? Elizabeth suggests she needs experience with people. Why not invite several friends to a house party? The Bingleys will attend; as will the Darcy cousins, Colonel Fitzwilliam and Anne de Bourgh. To Darcy’s surprise, friends of the Colonel will also visit: Sir Alexander Garland and his sister, Miss Blanche Garland. Darcy is well-acquainted with the Bingleys and his cousins, of course. The Garland siblings are unknown to everyone except the Colonel and they are surprising individuals. Sir Alexander is the largest man Darcy has ever known and his sister is as tall as Darcy himself. Darcy immediately begins to think of her as Valkyrie.
When equality is the aim, mediocrity is the result; when excellence is the aim, equality finds its true place. ~ Dr. Idel Dreimer
Georgiana has a characteristic that would probably be diagnosed in today’s world but was unacknowledged in the Regency. Low self-esteem results and she depends on her friendship with Elizabeth for support, emotional and physical. Jane and Elizabeth Bennet are invited to the Pemberley house party to aid Georgiana.
The Garlands attempt to take charge of the house party. Sir Alexander, an amateur playwright, proposes the group stage his new play. Reluctantly, Darcy agrees to the plans, only to have his boundaries exceeded.
The moment we break faith with one another, the sea engulfs us and the light goes out. ~ James Baldwin
Both the Garlands have secrets and courses of action that are hidden from the others.
How much damage can the Garlands create?
What is the genesis of Georgiana’s condition?
How is Elizabeth involved with the Garlands?
What was the relationship between Darcy and his father?
I enjoyed this look at an Elizabeth from a much lower social class than in canon. It is obvious almost from the beginning that Darcy and Elizabeth have deep feelings for each other but they know they can never marry.
The book is well-written, clean, and mostly free of errata. I recommend it to anyone who enjoys JAFF.
The author gave me an early copy of this book with no promise of a review, good or bad.
The longer we live, the more we find we are like other persons. ~ Oliver Wendell Holmes
October 3, 2019
I first read a good portion of this variation as "The Vicar's Daughter" on the author's blog. Then I received an ARC under this title and realized that it was the same story.
Elizabeth's father is a vicar in nearby Lambton while her mother is recently deceased. Elizabeth has known the Darcy family and even visited and conversed with both the Darcy mother and father. They are now also deceased. Elizabeth knows the family's history as Mrs. Darcy has revealed to her the written family history which is kept in a trunk in a gallery at Pemberley. The fact that Mrs. Darcy did none of her own transcriptions is part of an important "secret" which affected her and now her daughter. Georgiana has been called many names, i.e., stupid, stubborn, ignorant, etc. all having to do with what we now call a "learning disability". However, in this tale no excuse is allowed for her lack of accomplishment in area of reading, writing, etc. She can, however, memorize passages, with help, and has that talent with music and even speaking French.
Darcy has come to find Elizabeth to have much sense and counts on her to counsel him on various issues. She advises him to have a house party to allow Georgiana to experience a little of society before she comes out. Interacting with new acquaintances and making some of the plans for food and entertainment will give her experience in new areas. Most of the people invited to the house party are known to her: cousins, Anne & Richard and the Bingleys, but Richard has brought two surprise guests: Sir Alexander and his sister, Miss Garland. He is a playwright and she is a beautiful and accomplished lady of society. She immediately sets her sights on Darcy and she is everything he could want in a wife...on paper. And as we read on we learn that Elizabeth knows Sir Garland from the short season she experienced in London several years back.
Garland has a new play and wants to use in for a home theatrical. When the older Bennet sisters are asked to be part of the effort Mr. Bennet gives his permission for them to stay at Pemberley but he has conditions he asks of Darcy. Darcy is to make sure they are "protected". Mr. Bennet is more careful with his daughters in this story than he was in canon.
There are some surprises herein and the author uses JA's words in a flashback to one "comprising" event.
Darcy has been looking for a bride who may have just been under his nose all along but when he is shocked into realizing that...she is gone and he learns it is to be a permanent arrangement.
Elizabeth's father is a vicar in nearby Lambton while her mother is recently deceased. Elizabeth has known the Darcy family and even visited and conversed with both the Darcy mother and father. They are now also deceased. Elizabeth knows the family's history as Mrs. Darcy has revealed to her the written family history which is kept in a trunk in a gallery at Pemberley. The fact that Mrs. Darcy did none of her own transcriptions is part of an important "secret" which affected her and now her daughter. Georgiana has been called many names, i.e., stupid, stubborn, ignorant, etc. all having to do with what we now call a "learning disability". However, in this tale no excuse is allowed for her lack of accomplishment in area of reading, writing, etc. She can, however, memorize passages, with help, and has that talent with music and even speaking French.
Darcy has come to find Elizabeth to have much sense and counts on her to counsel him on various issues. She advises him to have a house party to allow Georgiana to experience a little of society before she comes out. Interacting with new acquaintances and making some of the plans for food and entertainment will give her experience in new areas. Most of the people invited to the house party are known to her: cousins, Anne & Richard and the Bingleys, but Richard has brought two surprise guests: Sir Alexander and his sister, Miss Garland. He is a playwright and she is a beautiful and accomplished lady of society. She immediately sets her sights on Darcy and she is everything he could want in a wife...on paper. And as we read on we learn that Elizabeth knows Sir Garland from the short season she experienced in London several years back.
Garland has a new play and wants to use in for a home theatrical. When the older Bennet sisters are asked to be part of the effort Mr. Bennet gives his permission for them to stay at Pemberley but he has conditions he asks of Darcy. Darcy is to make sure they are "protected". Mr. Bennet is more careful with his daughters in this story than he was in canon.
There are some surprises herein and the author uses JA's words in a flashback to one "comprising" event.
Darcy has been looking for a bride who may have just been under his nose all along but when he is shocked into realizing that...she is gone and he learns it is to be a permanent arrangement.
October 30, 2022
Not my favourite
Reviewed in Canada on October 4, 2019
I did not enjoy this book, unfortunately. I usually enjoy this author, but I had a difficult time being drawn into the story. I thought the house party would never end, and the Garlands were horrible. Georgiana was barely tolerable. I didn’t like Darcy’s portrayal at all. I understand this isn’t canon, and I expect variations to be different, but giving Darcy’s famous words about Lizzy being tolerable to another character, especially a creep like Garland is a no! There was a lot of dialogue, which I usually love, but it was sometimes difficult to follow whose words or thoughts they actually were. I hate being so critical, but this book just didn’t work for me.
Reviewed in Canada on October 4, 2019
I did not enjoy this book, unfortunately. I usually enjoy this author, but I had a difficult time being drawn into the story. I thought the house party would never end, and the Garlands were horrible. Georgiana was barely tolerable. I didn’t like Darcy’s portrayal at all. I understand this isn’t canon, and I expect variations to be different, but giving Darcy’s famous words about Lizzy being tolerable to another character, especially a creep like Garland is a no! There was a lot of dialogue, which I usually love, but it was sometimes difficult to follow whose words or thoughts they actually were. I hate being so critical, but this book just didn’t work for me.
October 18, 2019
“She’s an old soul with young eyes, a vintage heart, and a beautiful mind.” –Nicole Lyons
Rating: PG-13: a few scenes were a bit steamy and suggestive, but otherwise, clean. I read the first few chapters of this as a WIP on the author’s website. I also preordered it as soon as it was available.
Maria Grace, our dear wonderful author, has created a whole ‘nother universe for this story. It was odd seeing Mr. Bennet written as the vicar at Pemberley. Mrs. Bennet was deceased and this story picked up at the end of the mourning period for her. Mrs. Bennet was portrayed as sweet, kind and generous of spirit. What?? Well, not so kind. Jane and Lydia were her favorites and Elizabeth was not. At least that rang true from canon. Elizabeth was glad she was no longer required to wear black.
Mr. Bennet was wise, arthritic and used a cane to help him get around. Elizabeth had been friends with and to the people at Pemberley for the last ten years. She was very useful to Lady Anne Darcy before her death and she helped read to the elder Mr. Darcy before his death. She had also become friends with the younger Darcy and Georgiana.
“A strong woman builds her own world. She is one who is wise enough to know that it will attract the man she will gladly share it with.” –Ellen J. Barrier, How to Trust God When All Other Resources Have Failed
This Elizabeth was wise and quite useful to Darcy as he wrangled with a younger sister and her youthful outbursts and behavior. She was having difficulty and he simply could not find solutions for solving her problems. Elizabeth, of course, knew the root of her issues and tried to help where she could. Darcy was forever seeking her advice on this or that. On several of their debates, you could really see the gulf between their opinions as well as the difference between their stations. Many times, he, more so than she, would huff and storm off in a snit due to those differences of opinion. She and Darcy could argue the sky was a certain shade of blue. It was hilarious watching them stand their ground on their differences. And yet, he would seek her opinion before anyone else on something he felt was important. He trusted and respected her and occasionally even thought she was wise. Well, sometimes.
Darcy and Georgiana hosted a house party and EVERYTHING that could go wrong did. Our usual antagonists were present. Fitzwilliam arrived with cousin Anne de Bourgh, who was such a snit. Thank goodness, Lady Catherine stayed home. Charles Bingley arrived with sister Caroline, who was a jealousy harpy. Fitzwilliam had also invited two friends, Viscount Garland and his sister Blanche.
“On the left side of a strong woman, stands a strong man; he is strengthened by her character.” –Ellen J. Barrier
On several of the excursions and party plans, the Bennet family were also invited. Elizabeth was everything useful and encouraged Georgiana who participated even though she was not officially out yet. Mr. Bennet had to wrangle Lydia on occasion and that was good to see him take her on due to her behavior. In fact, I’ve never seen him handle her so well in any JAFF story. I really enjoyed that part.
There were many secrets in this story. So much so, I felt like I was in the dark half the time. It was a while before we realized Georgiana’s secret. Teachers will pick up on it immediately. Back in the day, students didn’t have the help they do now for difficulties with learning. For a Darcy to have problems of this nature, was considered a slap on the family name. This was a big part of the problems between the elder Darcy and his son. That story was told through snippets and I thought I’d never find out what happened. The elder Darcy’s illness made the younger Darcy adverse to the local surgeon approaching him in any capacity. The hints were bad enough. I don’t think I could have stood the full story.
Then we have the business with Garland and his sister. What-the-heck? What was it about them that drove me crazy? I could not like them. I tried, really, I tried. He was an obnoxious snob and we learn that he had a prior history with Elizabeth that ended her Season in London. What happened with him caught me completely by surprise. I didn’t see that coming. Our author really pulled a good one and I still have questions.
Blanche… I couldn’t like her. Was it because her name was Blanche? I found myself with visions of Jane Eyre cruising through my head and her Blanche Ingram antagonist. What was with her? Did she really want Darcy? She was sultry and had him all stirred up in the worst way. What was her deal? Questions, oh, lots of questions. She was everything he should want but was everything he didn’t need. Enough said.
I highly recommend this JAFF [Jane Austen Fan Fiction] as it is completely different. I volunteered to read an ARC and the opinions and views expressed are my own.
Rating: PG-13: a few scenes were a bit steamy and suggestive, but otherwise, clean. I read the first few chapters of this as a WIP on the author’s website. I also preordered it as soon as it was available.
Maria Grace, our dear wonderful author, has created a whole ‘nother universe for this story. It was odd seeing Mr. Bennet written as the vicar at Pemberley. Mrs. Bennet was deceased and this story picked up at the end of the mourning period for her. Mrs. Bennet was portrayed as sweet, kind and generous of spirit. What?? Well, not so kind. Jane and Lydia were her favorites and Elizabeth was not. At least that rang true from canon. Elizabeth was glad she was no longer required to wear black.
Mr. Bennet was wise, arthritic and used a cane to help him get around. Elizabeth had been friends with and to the people at Pemberley for the last ten years. She was very useful to Lady Anne Darcy before her death and she helped read to the elder Mr. Darcy before his death. She had also become friends with the younger Darcy and Georgiana.
“A strong woman builds her own world. She is one who is wise enough to know that it will attract the man she will gladly share it with.” –Ellen J. Barrier, How to Trust God When All Other Resources Have Failed
This Elizabeth was wise and quite useful to Darcy as he wrangled with a younger sister and her youthful outbursts and behavior. She was having difficulty and he simply could not find solutions for solving her problems. Elizabeth, of course, knew the root of her issues and tried to help where she could. Darcy was forever seeking her advice on this or that. On several of their debates, you could really see the gulf between their opinions as well as the difference between their stations. Many times, he, more so than she, would huff and storm off in a snit due to those differences of opinion. She and Darcy could argue the sky was a certain shade of blue. It was hilarious watching them stand their ground on their differences. And yet, he would seek her opinion before anyone else on something he felt was important. He trusted and respected her and occasionally even thought she was wise. Well, sometimes.
Darcy and Georgiana hosted a house party and EVERYTHING that could go wrong did. Our usual antagonists were present. Fitzwilliam arrived with cousin Anne de Bourgh, who was such a snit. Thank goodness, Lady Catherine stayed home. Charles Bingley arrived with sister Caroline, who was a jealousy harpy. Fitzwilliam had also invited two friends, Viscount Garland and his sister Blanche.
“On the left side of a strong woman, stands a strong man; he is strengthened by her character.” –Ellen J. Barrier
On several of the excursions and party plans, the Bennet family were also invited. Elizabeth was everything useful and encouraged Georgiana who participated even though she was not officially out yet. Mr. Bennet had to wrangle Lydia on occasion and that was good to see him take her on due to her behavior. In fact, I’ve never seen him handle her so well in any JAFF story. I really enjoyed that part.
There were many secrets in this story. So much so, I felt like I was in the dark half the time. It was a while before we realized Georgiana’s secret. Teachers will pick up on it immediately. Back in the day, students didn’t have the help they do now for difficulties with learning. For a Darcy to have problems of this nature, was considered a slap on the family name. This was a big part of the problems between the elder Darcy and his son. That story was told through snippets and I thought I’d never find out what happened. The elder Darcy’s illness made the younger Darcy adverse to the local surgeon approaching him in any capacity. The hints were bad enough. I don’t think I could have stood the full story.
Then we have the business with Garland and his sister. What-the-heck? What was it about them that drove me crazy? I could not like them. I tried, really, I tried. He was an obnoxious snob and we learn that he had a prior history with Elizabeth that ended her Season in London. What happened with him caught me completely by surprise. I didn’t see that coming. Our author really pulled a good one and I still have questions.
Blanche… I couldn’t like her. Was it because her name was Blanche? I found myself with visions of Jane Eyre cruising through my head and her Blanche Ingram antagonist. What was with her? Did she really want Darcy? She was sultry and had him all stirred up in the worst way. What was her deal? Questions, oh, lots of questions. She was everything he should want but was everything he didn’t need. Enough said.
I highly recommend this JAFF [Jane Austen Fan Fiction] as it is completely different. I volunteered to read an ARC and the opinions and views expressed are my own.
November 24, 2019
Avid Reader
I enjoyed reading about Darcy and Elizabeth 's 10 year love for each other in spite of their social class differences. A book without the Wickham and Collins melodrama was truly enjoyable. I was surprised by Colonel Fitzwilliam 's prejudice against Elizabeth and Aunt Madeline 's refusal to allow Darcy to speak with Elizabeth after she helped in rescuing Georgina. Mr. Bennet is a vicar instead of a landowner, which makes him lower than usual on the social scale. Georgina inherited dyslexia from her mother, which caused Darcy 's father to put undue pressure on him and Georgina. Both siblings fall into a trap set by the Garland cousins, which almost destroys them. Elizabeth saved the day again.
I enjoyed reading about Darcy and Elizabeth 's 10 year love for each other in spite of their social class differences. A book without the Wickham and Collins melodrama was truly enjoyable. I was surprised by Colonel Fitzwilliam 's prejudice against Elizabeth and Aunt Madeline 's refusal to allow Darcy to speak with Elizabeth after she helped in rescuing Georgina. Mr. Bennet is a vicar instead of a landowner, which makes him lower than usual on the social scale. Georgina inherited dyslexia from her mother, which caused Darcy 's father to put undue pressure on him and Georgina. Both siblings fall into a trap set by the Garland cousins, which almost destroys them. Elizabeth saved the day again.
January 14, 2020
An Excellent Deviation That Could Be More Deeply Explored
Rating: 3.5 out of 5 stars
If you have encountered Maria Grace’s books before, then you know she isn’t afraid to come up with wholly unique variations and implement new situations, personalities, and histories for Jane Austen’s characters. I’ve thoroughly enjoyed Ms. Grace’s extensive creativity in her stories – and I was excited to learn about the inventive twists in her latest Pride and Prejudice variation – Fine Eyes and Pert Opinions. In this latest original take, there is a combination of unique alterations – Mr. Bennet is the vicar at Kympton under the Darcy’s patronage, Elizabeth has lived near Pemberley for ten years and has developed strong friendships with both Mr. and Miss Darcy, and the Bennets and the Darcys have close ties and longer history together – including Mr. Darcy’s parents.
One of the elements I deeply loved about this variation, and something that makes it wonderfully unique, is that it borrows some elements from Jane Austen’s Mansfield Park! How interesting to see (arguably) Jane Austen’s most beloved work blended with (dare I say it?) her least loved work! To see a blind Mr. Darcy who relies on and craves counsel from his opinionated friend yet doesn’t recognize her worth, to see an Elizabeth Bennet who hides her affections and admiration for him because she is aware she doesn’t meet his expectations, and to see a house party assemble at Pemberley with a worldly set of siblings who introduce drama, theatricals, and mischief were all fresh and intriguing twists that many will recognize from Mansfield Park.
Another aspect of this premise I loved was seeing a house party take place at Pemberley. The purpose of the house party was to help Georgiana prepare for her entrance in society, and the guests in attendance produced a lot of interesting interactions and developments. Especially Ms. Grace’s original characters – the flirtatious baronet playwright, Sir Alexander and the much sought-after heiress, Miss Blanche Garland. The Pemberley house party proves to be an eventful one with picnics and archery contests, musical exhibitions and flirtations, unexpected morning encounters and surprising secrets. It was quite a riveting series of events!
While I thoroughly loved and appreciated all the new and inventive twists Ms. Grace implemented in her story, I wished each was explored a bit more deeply. I loved seeing Elizabeth and Darcy as friends, I loved the new characters that shake things up, I loved the alluded to (personal) challenges that both Mr. and Miss Darcy face, and although it feels a little incongruous, I loved seeing an Elizabeth exhibit the same fragility and insecurity as Fanny Price. However, many of the developments that took place often felt a bit abrupt (Blanche’s machinations, Sir Alexander’s affections) and underdeveloped (Georgiana’s storyline, Darcy’s realization and actions). I feel like the story could have been more plausible and satisfying had some of these excellent premises and twists been fleshed out a little bit more. In addition, there were some scenes where the dialogue felt a little too unreserved, open, and in one case, suggestive for this time period.
However, despite my quibbles I found myself absorbed and entertained by this latest variation from Maria Grace! This book is a wonderful choice for readers who enjoy stories with strong departures from the Pride and Prejudice canon, who are intrigued by a story with echoes of Mansfield Park, and who appreciate detailed depictions of Regency life and times.
Austenesque Reviews
Rating: 3.5 out of 5 stars
If you have encountered Maria Grace’s books before, then you know she isn’t afraid to come up with wholly unique variations and implement new situations, personalities, and histories for Jane Austen’s characters. I’ve thoroughly enjoyed Ms. Grace’s extensive creativity in her stories – and I was excited to learn about the inventive twists in her latest Pride and Prejudice variation – Fine Eyes and Pert Opinions. In this latest original take, there is a combination of unique alterations – Mr. Bennet is the vicar at Kympton under the Darcy’s patronage, Elizabeth has lived near Pemberley for ten years and has developed strong friendships with both Mr. and Miss Darcy, and the Bennets and the Darcys have close ties and longer history together – including Mr. Darcy’s parents.
One of the elements I deeply loved about this variation, and something that makes it wonderfully unique, is that it borrows some elements from Jane Austen’s Mansfield Park! How interesting to see (arguably) Jane Austen’s most beloved work blended with (dare I say it?) her least loved work! To see a blind Mr. Darcy who relies on and craves counsel from his opinionated friend yet doesn’t recognize her worth, to see an Elizabeth Bennet who hides her affections and admiration for him because she is aware she doesn’t meet his expectations, and to see a house party assemble at Pemberley with a worldly set of siblings who introduce drama, theatricals, and mischief were all fresh and intriguing twists that many will recognize from Mansfield Park.
Another aspect of this premise I loved was seeing a house party take place at Pemberley. The purpose of the house party was to help Georgiana prepare for her entrance in society, and the guests in attendance produced a lot of interesting interactions and developments. Especially Ms. Grace’s original characters – the flirtatious baronet playwright, Sir Alexander and the much sought-after heiress, Miss Blanche Garland. The Pemberley house party proves to be an eventful one with picnics and archery contests, musical exhibitions and flirtations, unexpected morning encounters and surprising secrets. It was quite a riveting series of events!
While I thoroughly loved and appreciated all the new and inventive twists Ms. Grace implemented in her story, I wished each was explored a bit more deeply. I loved seeing Elizabeth and Darcy as friends, I loved the new characters that shake things up, I loved the alluded to (personal) challenges that both Mr. and Miss Darcy face, and although it feels a little incongruous, I loved seeing an Elizabeth exhibit the same fragility and insecurity as Fanny Price. However, many of the developments that took place often felt a bit abrupt (Blanche’s machinations, Sir Alexander’s affections) and underdeveloped (Georgiana’s storyline, Darcy’s realization and actions). I feel like the story could have been more plausible and satisfying had some of these excellent premises and twists been fleshed out a little bit more. In addition, there were some scenes where the dialogue felt a little too unreserved, open, and in one case, suggestive for this time period.
However, despite my quibbles I found myself absorbed and entertained by this latest variation from Maria Grace! This book is a wonderful choice for readers who enjoy stories with strong departures from the Pride and Prejudice canon, who are intrigued by a story with echoes of Mansfield Park, and who appreciate detailed depictions of Regency life and times.
Austenesque Reviews
October 3, 2019
A Pride and Prejudice variation whereby it has been ten years since Mr Bennet had taken the living at Kympton, near Pemberley. Also six months that the kindly soul that was Mrs Bennet had passed. But the Darcys are used to asking their close friend Elizabeth Bennet for her advise and suggestions. Which is not always taken, but she hopes to repair the fragile relationship between the siblings.
But a small house party is now planned to help Georgiana before her coming out. The only unknown guest are the friends of Colonel Fitzwilliam, Sir Alexander Garland and his sister Blanche. It is the Colonel's hope to matchmake at the party. Will the behaviour of some of these guests have far reaching consequences.
An enjoyable and well-written variation as I would expect from the author. With its well described cast of characters.
Received an ARC from the author.
But a small house party is now planned to help Georgiana before her coming out. The only unknown guest are the friends of Colonel Fitzwilliam, Sir Alexander Garland and his sister Blanche. It is the Colonel's hope to matchmake at the party. Will the behaviour of some of these guests have far reaching consequences.
An enjoyable and well-written variation as I would expect from the author. With its well described cast of characters.
Received an ARC from the author.
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September 20, 2019Review to come October 31st.
January 4, 2021
Alternate World
In “Remembering The Past” Mr. Bennet was an admiral in the English Navy. In this book he is Darcy’s parson.
Georgiana is a problem sister. She cannot read or write very well. Today we know some people are dyslexic. But in Regency times you could be considered sub-human and shunned by the family. So Georgiana has all sorts of personal problems that Darcy must contend with. Lizzy has been helpful so she is around the Darcys a lot.
As Lizzy and Darcy begin to fall in love. No one can see them being married. Lots of story threads to read about. Excellent book.
In “Remembering The Past” Mr. Bennet was an admiral in the English Navy. In this book he is Darcy’s parson.
Georgiana is a problem sister. She cannot read or write very well. Today we know some people are dyslexic. But in Regency times you could be considered sub-human and shunned by the family. So Georgiana has all sorts of personal problems that Darcy must contend with. Lizzy has been helpful so she is around the Darcys a lot.
As Lizzy and Darcy begin to fall in love. No one can see them being married. Lots of story threads to read about. Excellent book.
October 7, 2019
An ambitious effort
This one is AU with quite a few original characters, is missing several canon characters and has plotlines aplenty. It has little to do with the source material and leaves some threads blowing hither and yon. That said, though I had trouble liking several of these characterizations and really didn't care about the fate of others, I couldn't put the book down till I finished. Curiosity or desperation? Beats me.
This one is AU with quite a few original characters, is missing several canon characters and has plotlines aplenty. It has little to do with the source material and leaves some threads blowing hither and yon. That said, though I had trouble liking several of these characterizations and really didn't care about the fate of others, I couldn't put the book down till I finished. Curiosity or desperation? Beats me.
October 6, 2019
What a unique and interesting premise.
Review to come.
Review to come.
March 20, 2020
Engaging story
Different circumstances and interesting characters in this tale of underestimated friendship. She is always there for him until, one day, she isn't and his world is upended. A most worthy read!
Different circumstances and interesting characters in this tale of underestimated friendship. She is always there for him until, one day, she isn't and his world is upended. A most worthy read!
October 5, 2019
I wanted to like this. I really did. I didn’t, and I wouldn’t review it except that I received an ARC in exchange for a review.
First, this is not the cast of characters I’ve come to love. Granted, I’ve read hundreds of JAFF titles at this point, so perhaps the characters in my mind are more influenced by those authors than by Miss Austen, but I do not believe this is her cast of characters either. Elizabeth is wise, perfect, demure, and sweet. Barely a hint of fire. Darcy does have a temper, but not much else that’s memorable. He wasn’t the aloof yet still somehow honorable gentleman I’m used to reading. I didn’t care for him. Georgie was spoiled, headstrong, and immature. Colonel Fitzwilliam was unlikeable- lacking in morals and with a low opinion of the nature of others as well. Mr. Bennett- ugh! I saw no trace of the indolent yet loving man. He was acerbic, strict, and bullheaded.
I was almost immediately disinterested by the departure from the character traits I expected to see, but the carnal focus + innuendo halfway through the story completely killed it for me. Elizabeth’s rival for Darcy’s affections is gorgeous. And she knows it. She plays her assets to her greatest advantage. Darcy dreams of enjoying her. She invites him to her room, knowing she would be under the influence of laudanum (again). Colonel Fitzwilliam urges him to take her up on it. Elizabeth gets a carte blanche offer. There are some inappropriate touches enjoyed, once again thanks to laudanum. It is truly an off the wall story. To say it deviates from P&P is an understatement.
Sorry, author! I applaud your effort and courage in sharing your work, but... this one was very much not for me.
First, this is not the cast of characters I’ve come to love. Granted, I’ve read hundreds of JAFF titles at this point, so perhaps the characters in my mind are more influenced by those authors than by Miss Austen, but I do not believe this is her cast of characters either. Elizabeth is wise, perfect, demure, and sweet. Barely a hint of fire. Darcy does have a temper, but not much else that’s memorable. He wasn’t the aloof yet still somehow honorable gentleman I’m used to reading. I didn’t care for him. Georgie was spoiled, headstrong, and immature. Colonel Fitzwilliam was unlikeable- lacking in morals and with a low opinion of the nature of others as well. Mr. Bennett- ugh! I saw no trace of the indolent yet loving man. He was acerbic, strict, and bullheaded.
I was almost immediately disinterested by the departure from the character traits I expected to see, but the carnal focus + innuendo halfway through the story completely killed it for me. Elizabeth’s rival for Darcy’s affections is gorgeous. And she knows it. She plays her assets to her greatest advantage. Darcy dreams of enjoying her. She invites him to her room, knowing she would be under the influence of laudanum (again). Colonel Fitzwilliam urges him to take her up on it. Elizabeth gets a carte blanche offer. There are some inappropriate touches enjoyed, once again thanks to laudanum. It is truly an off the wall story. To say it deviates from P&P is an understatement.
Sorry, author! I applaud your effort and courage in sharing your work, but... this one was very much not for me.
October 8, 2019
If there was theme for this Pride and Prejudice inspired story, it would be you don't know what you've got until its gone. The story features the Darcy family, friends and family as they usually are, but Mr Bennet is the vicar in Lambton with his 5 daughters. Elizabeth is therefore, not a gentlewoman, but an invaluable resource to the Darcy family. Darcy family secrets are brought light by some new friends. The newcomers create havoc that must be dealt on a physical and emotional level.
Neither Elizabeth or Darcy understand their feelings, which makes for some interesting situations, discoveries, and a beautiful happily ever after.
Neither Elizabeth or Darcy understand their feelings, which makes for some interesting situations, discoveries, and a beautiful happily ever after.
June 2, 2020
Eww...No!.No! No! Run Elizabeth!
There has been P&P stories I've read that made me not care if Darcy and Elizabeth had an HEA. There has been stories where I felt Darcy should cut bait because Elizabeth was annoying and/or seemed more like Lydia. But this!!! First, Elizabeth comes across more like Mary (minus the scriptures.) The story speaks of her being pert, but she is actually seem more like a motherly church mouse. There is no liveliness in her and she seems to lack self-esteem.
Then there is Darcy (roll eyes.) I'm okay with Darcy's character IF the author would have showed that he truly had a change of heart. Instead, we get Darcy in a relationship/engagement to another women for 80% of the book. Although he isn't in love with her, he is definitely in lust with her and think she is the most beautiful woman alive. When the woman was jilting Darcy he was mesmerized by her beauty, thinking someone should paint a picture of her. Not only that, but after she walked away, he said that he felt empty...uh? If the lady didn't state she was leaving England, I can most definitely see Darcy seeing her at a gathering and pining for this woman or even cheating on Elizabeth with her. So PLEASE explain to me why I am suppose to believe Darcy's love for Elizabeth? Why am I suppose to be happy Elizabeth accepted his proposal two or three weeks after Darcy was dumped? Darcy even admits to Elizabeth after they are engaged to each other that what took place with miss Garland still hurts a bit...Noooo! This Darcy and Elizabeth storyline doesn't ring true to me.
Another thing I has a hard time grasping is how Darcy and Richard were chosen to be Georgiana's guardians. They were incompetent. Richard is too busy doing nothing, except noticing looks between Miss Garland and Darcy, I guess because he wished it was him. Meanwhile the man Richard invited was openly flirting with Georgiana. Darcy was nonchalant about the attention paid towards his sister, and even when Geogiana was discovered he would have sent her elsewhere if he had more family...smh.
I guess I'm also suppose to believe in 1 paragraph that Elizabeth came up with a plan to prevent a scandal and to find a way for everyone to live in peace and harmony (it only took one paragraph because the writer decided to tell us instead of show us.) I can go on, the only reason I didn't give it one star is because I thought it had potential.
There has been P&P stories I've read that made me not care if Darcy and Elizabeth had an HEA. There has been stories where I felt Darcy should cut bait because Elizabeth was annoying and/or seemed more like Lydia. But this!!! First, Elizabeth comes across more like Mary (minus the scriptures.) The story speaks of her being pert, but she is actually seem more like a motherly church mouse. There is no liveliness in her and she seems to lack self-esteem.
Then there is Darcy (roll eyes.) I'm okay with Darcy's character IF the author would have showed that he truly had a change of heart. Instead, we get Darcy in a relationship/engagement to another women for 80% of the book. Although he isn't in love with her, he is definitely in lust with her and think she is the most beautiful woman alive. When the woman was jilting Darcy he was mesmerized by her beauty, thinking someone should paint a picture of her. Not only that, but after she walked away, he said that he felt empty...uh? If the lady didn't state she was leaving England, I can most definitely see Darcy seeing her at a gathering and pining for this woman or even cheating on Elizabeth with her. So PLEASE explain to me why I am suppose to believe Darcy's love for Elizabeth? Why am I suppose to be happy Elizabeth accepted his proposal two or three weeks after Darcy was dumped? Darcy even admits to Elizabeth after they are engaged to each other that what took place with miss Garland still hurts a bit...Noooo! This Darcy and Elizabeth storyline doesn't ring true to me.
Another thing I has a hard time grasping is how Darcy and Richard were chosen to be Georgiana's guardians. They were incompetent. Richard is too busy doing nothing, except noticing looks between Miss Garland and Darcy, I guess because he wished it was him. Meanwhile the man Richard invited was openly flirting with Georgiana. Darcy was nonchalant about the attention paid towards his sister, and even when Geogiana was discovered he would have sent her elsewhere if he had more family...smh.
I guess I'm also suppose to believe in 1 paragraph that Elizabeth came up with a plan to prevent a scandal and to find a way for everyone to live in peace and harmony (it only took one paragraph because the writer decided to tell us instead of show us.) I can go on, the only reason I didn't give it one star is because I thought it had potential.
February 19, 2023
A quality read not to my taste
I had overlooked this title somehow and was excited to read at first as it starts out with the twist of ODC being long acquainted friends, with Mr. Bennet widowed and having the Kympton living. Elizabeth has acted as Darcy’s confidant and adviser vis-à-vis his sister and when the idea of a Pemberley house party to help acclimate Georgiana to society comes up, I thought there may be some fun repartee and hijinks in store with Anne de Bourgh, the Bingleys, the Bennets and other Derbyshire denizens invited. Sadly though, it almost immediately turns into a rather dull version of Mansfield Park, with most of the PP characters turning into scenery.
Seeing Darcy stripped of all his best qualities and portrayed as a less sympathetic Edmund Bertram, a clueless addle-pate who is ruled for most of the story by his libido is.. not enjoyable. The Colonel, too, is a boorish idiot who lacks not only his usual canniness but also the affable charm we’ve come to rely on from his character. It’s never a good sign when you dislike one of the most likable characters in the genre. Even Mr. Bennet and the Gardiners, who most often provide the reader a break from tension with their comforting and easy ways, are overly stern scolds. So many characterizations are just off and it’s grating rather than a “refreshing” departure from canon.
In the end, the conflict created by the Garlands (Crawfords) fizzles without much fanfare and we are left with Darcy’s lightbulb moment in the last dozen pages. Not very romantic. He made much more of Blanche Garland’s décolletage than of his love for Elizabeth Bennet.
I had overlooked this title somehow and was excited to read at first as it starts out with the twist of ODC being long acquainted friends, with Mr. Bennet widowed and having the Kympton living. Elizabeth has acted as Darcy’s confidant and adviser vis-à-vis his sister and when the idea of a Pemberley house party to help acclimate Georgiana to society comes up, I thought there may be some fun repartee and hijinks in store with Anne de Bourgh, the Bingleys, the Bennets and other Derbyshire denizens invited. Sadly though, it almost immediately turns into a rather dull version of Mansfield Park, with most of the PP characters turning into scenery.
Seeing Darcy stripped of all his best qualities and portrayed as a less sympathetic Edmund Bertram, a clueless addle-pate who is ruled for most of the story by his libido is.. not enjoyable. The Colonel, too, is a boorish idiot who lacks not only his usual canniness but also the affable charm we’ve come to rely on from his character. It’s never a good sign when you dislike one of the most likable characters in the genre. Even Mr. Bennet and the Gardiners, who most often provide the reader a break from tension with their comforting and easy ways, are overly stern scolds. So many characterizations are just off and it’s grating rather than a “refreshing” departure from canon.
In the end, the conflict created by the Garlands (Crawfords) fizzles without much fanfare and we are left with Darcy’s lightbulb moment in the last dozen pages. Not very romantic. He made much more of Blanche Garland’s décolletage than of his love for Elizabeth Bennet.
November 28, 2021
A darker style for this author
Shades of Mansfield Park wander throughout this alternate Pride and Prejudice universe. The Bennets live in Derbyshire and Mr. Bennet is the vicar of Kympton, while the family has known the Darcy s for many years. Elizabeth is not exactly like Fanny Price, but she is definitely not self confident. Non-canon characters resembling the Crawfords create havoc at Pemberley, while Georgiana is a very troubled teenager with learning disabilities. Lots of angst for everyone!
Shades of Mansfield Park wander throughout this alternate Pride and Prejudice universe. The Bennets live in Derbyshire and Mr. Bennet is the vicar of Kympton, while the family has known the Darcy s for many years. Elizabeth is not exactly like Fanny Price, but she is definitely not self confident. Non-canon characters resembling the Crawfords create havoc at Pemberley, while Georgiana is a very troubled teenager with learning disabilities. Lots of angst for everyone!
December 24, 2021
Miss Elizabeth Bennett is always helping the Darcys and to one in particular she is practically invisible.
See the on going friendship between Miss Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy, set in Derbyshire, in the shadow of Pemberly. Mister Bennett and his girls live in the vicarige on the Pemberly property. In this version you're introduced to two new unscrupulous people, one which Elizabeth has met before, and it was not pleasant. See Darcy badgered, bullied and betrayed. See Mr. Bennett take an active role in his daughters lives. You'll love this story.
See the on going friendship between Miss Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy, set in Derbyshire, in the shadow of Pemberly. Mister Bennett and his girls live in the vicarige on the Pemberly property. In this version you're introduced to two new unscrupulous people, one which Elizabeth has met before, and it was not pleasant. See Darcy badgered, bullied and betrayed. See Mr. Bennett take an active role in his daughters lives. You'll love this story.
July 22, 2021
Maria Grace continues to prove that she is one of the best writers of JAFF today.
In this variation, Mr. Bennet is the vicar of Pemberley, so Lizzy and Mr. Darcy have literally grown up next door to each other. However, he takes her friendship for granted, until a near-disastrous relationship opens his eyes to his real feelings.
** HIGHLY RECOMMENDED **
In this variation, Mr. Bennet is the vicar of Pemberley, so Lizzy and Mr. Darcy have literally grown up next door to each other. However, he takes her friendship for granted, until a near-disastrous relationship opens his eyes to his real feelings.
** HIGHLY RECOMMENDED **
September 28, 2022
New twist
I've never read a P&P variation having Mr Bennet as a parson. It was an interesting idea.
I had trouble with Darcy's attitude until nearly the end. He comes too slow to see the light. I did not care for this Colonel Fitzwilliam, either. I'm not used to seeing him have this type of prejudice. Did not like the Garlands at all.
This is a one time read for me.
I've never read a P&P variation having Mr Bennet as a parson. It was an interesting idea.
I had trouble with Darcy's attitude until nearly the end. He comes too slow to see the light. I did not care for this Colonel Fitzwilliam, either. I'm not used to seeing him have this type of prejudice. Did not like the Garlands at all.
This is a one time read for me.
January 23, 2024
Beautifully written, but full of unlikeable characters and unnecessary plot points. I found it hard to be drawn in and didn’t particularly enjoy reading it, although I finished it faster than some other 3* books thanks to the good writing - no endless wallowing in repetitive internal monologues (a pet peeve).
August 4, 2020
Elizabeth Bennet is my Fanny Price....
November 1, 2022
Very excellent and different story
This story us a comical different p and p variation I felt it was excellent it was a turn pager at times and we new villains on the stage well written and enjoyable I totally recomend it will not disappoint.
This story us a comical different p and p variation I felt it was excellent it was a turn pager at times and we new villains on the stage well written and enjoyable I totally recomend it will not disappoint.
February 13, 2020
Sweetness and light vs a Valkyrie
Lizzy in this work is lovely. She is witty and clever but she does not have the impertinence gene and is actually very much like Jane, though a little more worldly. She is everyone's go to person, especially Georgiana, who, it is made obvious, suffers from dyslexia. Because she is called stupid by a legion of companions, she is rebellious and miserable. Her brother is also miserable because he just does not know how cope with his sister.
The Bennets, sans Mrs Bennet, who has died six months before this story begins, live in the vicarage at Kympton where Mr Bennet has been the incumbent for the last ten years. Lizzy is a regular presence at Pemberley—though not as often since she has been in mourning—and both Darcy's take her very much for granted.
This story is mostly set around a house-party that descends upon Pemberley, not entirely welcomed by Darcy, but as Miss Elizabeth suggested it to give Georgiana a small taste of society, he agrees. Darcy's cousins, Richard Fitzwilliam (resigned from the army) and Anne de Bourgh and Mr and Miss Bingley make up the majority of the party, but it is two friends of Richard's Sir Alexander Garland, fairly recently risen to a baronetcy and his sister Blanche who quickly become the life of the party, but not necessarily in a good way. Jane and Elizabeth Bennet also stay at Pemberley for the festivities at Darcy's request. Chaos invariably ensues.
Darcy's head is turned by the very beautiful Blanche but it is not long before he realises that she has a dark side, but he has already become betrothed to her. Lizzy leaves the party after things become too heated between her and the baron and it is only after she is gone that Darcy realises he just does not rely on her, he loves her.
The book was well written and entertaining, very much what one expects from the pen of Maria Grace. There is no Wickham and no Mr Collins or Lady Catherine, though Sir Alexander could easily be a Wickham substitute.
4 stars. 🌟🌟🌟🌟
Lizzy in this work is lovely. She is witty and clever but she does not have the impertinence gene and is actually very much like Jane, though a little more worldly. She is everyone's go to person, especially Georgiana, who, it is made obvious, suffers from dyslexia. Because she is called stupid by a legion of companions, she is rebellious and miserable. Her brother is also miserable because he just does not know how cope with his sister.
The Bennets, sans Mrs Bennet, who has died six months before this story begins, live in the vicarage at Kympton where Mr Bennet has been the incumbent for the last ten years. Lizzy is a regular presence at Pemberley—though not as often since she has been in mourning—and both Darcy's take her very much for granted.
This story is mostly set around a house-party that descends upon Pemberley, not entirely welcomed by Darcy, but as Miss Elizabeth suggested it to give Georgiana a small taste of society, he agrees. Darcy's cousins, Richard Fitzwilliam (resigned from the army) and Anne de Bourgh and Mr and Miss Bingley make up the majority of the party, but it is two friends of Richard's Sir Alexander Garland, fairly recently risen to a baronetcy and his sister Blanche who quickly become the life of the party, but not necessarily in a good way. Jane and Elizabeth Bennet also stay at Pemberley for the festivities at Darcy's request. Chaos invariably ensues.
Darcy's head is turned by the very beautiful Blanche but it is not long before he realises that she has a dark side, but he has already become betrothed to her. Lizzy leaves the party after things become too heated between her and the baron and it is only after she is gone that Darcy realises he just does not rely on her, he loves her.
The book was well written and entertaining, very much what one expects from the pen of Maria Grace. There is no Wickham and no Mr Collins or Lady Catherine, though Sir Alexander could easily be a Wickham substitute.
4 stars. 🌟🌟🌟🌟
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November 19, 2019I've loved every book I've read so far by Maria Grace, and her latest Pride and Prejudice variation, Fine Eyes & Pert Opinions, was no exception. In her latest novel, Grace imagines Elizabeth Bennet as the daughter of a vicar who lives only a mile or so away from Pemberley. She's basically grown up with Mr. Darcy and is a close friend to him and his sister, so it's no surprise that he turns to her for advice whenever a problem (usually with Georgiana) crops up. However, her parents have made sure she knows the importance of not aspiring above her social station.
Things grow complicated when Elizabeth encourages Mr. Darcy to hold a house party at Pemberley, where Georgiana can practice for her coming out by acting as hostess and learning how to act in polite society. Chaos erupts with the arrival of their guests, Mr. and Miss Bingley, Colonel Fitzwilliam, Anne de Bourgh, and Grace's original characters: Sir Alexander Garland and his sister, Miss Blanche Garland. It's not long before the novel seems to mirror Mansfield Park, with Darcy and Elizabeth as a sort of Edmund Bertram and Fanny Price and the Garlands as Henry and Mary Crawford -- complete with a theatrical production.
Grace had me on the edge of my seat, as I had no idea where the plot was going and I couldn't fathom how a happily ever after could occur. The Garlands were both overwhelming with their strong personalities and willingness to throw convention to the wind, and it was even difficult to like Darcy and Elizabeth at times. However, I think that is what made the novel interesting and hard to put down. I just had to go with the flow and accept the different circumstances in which Darcy and Elizabeth found themselves. And I wasn't at all disappointed with the outcome.
Fine Eyes & Pert Opinions is not your typical Pride and Prejudice variation, but a breath of fresh air in its departure from canon and the risks Grace took with Austen's beloved couple. If you're looking for something unique and exciting, a little shocking at times, with strong (especially the original) characters, and a different take on Darcy and Elizabeth, then you'll definitely want to give this one a try.
Review originally posted on Diary of an Eccentric
Things grow complicated when Elizabeth encourages Mr. Darcy to hold a house party at Pemberley, where Georgiana can practice for her coming out by acting as hostess and learning how to act in polite society. Chaos erupts with the arrival of their guests, Mr. and Miss Bingley, Colonel Fitzwilliam, Anne de Bourgh, and Grace's original characters: Sir Alexander Garland and his sister, Miss Blanche Garland. It's not long before the novel seems to mirror Mansfield Park, with Darcy and Elizabeth as a sort of Edmund Bertram and Fanny Price and the Garlands as Henry and Mary Crawford -- complete with a theatrical production.
Grace had me on the edge of my seat, as I had no idea where the plot was going and I couldn't fathom how a happily ever after could occur. The Garlands were both overwhelming with their strong personalities and willingness to throw convention to the wind, and it was even difficult to like Darcy and Elizabeth at times. However, I think that is what made the novel interesting and hard to put down. I just had to go with the flow and accept the different circumstances in which Darcy and Elizabeth found themselves. And I wasn't at all disappointed with the outcome.
Fine Eyes & Pert Opinions is not your typical Pride and Prejudice variation, but a breath of fresh air in its departure from canon and the risks Grace took with Austen's beloved couple. If you're looking for something unique and exciting, a little shocking at times, with strong (especially the original) characters, and a different take on Darcy and Elizabeth, then you'll definitely want to give this one a try.
Review originally posted on Diary of an Eccentric
October 21, 2019
A very different take on Austen's Pride and Prejudice!! Mr. Bennet is the longtime rector of the Pemberley living, and he and his five daughters are coming out of mourning for Mrs. Bennet, a very different type of woman than portrayed in Austen's original. Thus, the Bennet girls have grown up in the environs of Pemberley, and Elizabeth has become a trusted friend and confidant of Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy, especially where Georgiana is concerned. Georgiana is more spoiled and less shy in this variation, but she has learned to consult Elizabeth on all of her complaints about her controlling older brother.
When Darcy is at his wit's end in dealing with a moody and changeable 16-year-old, Elizabeth suggests having a small house party in which Georgiana can take on some responsibilities and thus feel more grown-up. Colonel Fitzwilliam obliges by bringing along some guests who seem to be more than a little questionable in more ways than one.
This Austen variation includes allusions to events in Mansfield Park and perhaps even Persuasion as well as Pride and Prejudice. It's a masterful mash-up of Austen characters and themes, and also addresses more serious social and personal issues. In other words, there are some themes to chew on here, themes that reach all the way into the 21st century.
A brilliant book, full of heart and soul, Fine Eyes and Pert Opinions is a difficult book to put down...and an even harder one to forget.
When Darcy is at his wit's end in dealing with a moody and changeable 16-year-old, Elizabeth suggests having a small house party in which Georgiana can take on some responsibilities and thus feel more grown-up. Colonel Fitzwilliam obliges by bringing along some guests who seem to be more than a little questionable in more ways than one.
This Austen variation includes allusions to events in Mansfield Park and perhaps even Persuasion as well as Pride and Prejudice. It's a masterful mash-up of Austen characters and themes, and also addresses more serious social and personal issues. In other words, there are some themes to chew on here, themes that reach all the way into the 21st century.
A brilliant book, full of heart and soul, Fine Eyes and Pert Opinions is a difficult book to put down...and an even harder one to forget.
October 3, 2019
This is an intriguing story with a different Darcy and Elizabeth. Even though the characters are fundamentally the same as we expect , Darcy was even more introverted, more moody , more male.
While Elizabeth was still unknowingly lovely, opinionated but very cautious.
The 3 other characters that stepped a little out of their usual mold was Colonel Fitzwilliam ( pushy pushy pushy), Georgiana (difficult teen with major issues), and Mr Bennet (as we all ever wanted of him).
Two pivotal characters were Sir Alexander garland and his sister Blanche. Once they stepped into the story, the plot heated up!
Honestly, at times I was concerned that ODC would not be .
The plot flows with intensity and purpose.
Ms Grace brings us to our knees in hopes of a HEA . Her books only get better !
I found nothing to trainer over. Good editing, strong plot and unforgettable characters!
While Elizabeth was still unknowingly lovely, opinionated but very cautious.
The 3 other characters that stepped a little out of their usual mold was Colonel Fitzwilliam ( pushy pushy pushy), Georgiana (difficult teen with major issues), and Mr Bennet (as we all ever wanted of him).
Two pivotal characters were Sir Alexander garland and his sister Blanche. Once they stepped into the story, the plot heated up!
Honestly, at times I was concerned that ODC would not be .
The plot flows with intensity and purpose.
Ms Grace brings us to our knees in hopes of a HEA . Her books only get better !
I found nothing to trainer over. Good editing, strong plot and unforgettable characters!
November 17, 2019
Good story, but .....
I really enjoyed this variation, but it took some time to adjust to the personalities of Elizabeth, Darcy, Richard, and Mr. Bennett. E is so status conscious and D so oblivious that they are almost unbelievable. The absence of Wickham, Lady Catherine, and others plus the new characters make this an entirely new plot rather than a P&P variation. I have read many variations, but I find this one disappointing unless one disregards canon completely. I thoroughly enjoyed the dragon series, so my discomfort is due to my own emotional history rather than the merits of the story.
I really enjoyed this variation, but it took some time to adjust to the personalities of Elizabeth, Darcy, Richard, and Mr. Bennett. E is so status conscious and D so oblivious that they are almost unbelievable. The absence of Wickham, Lady Catherine, and others plus the new characters make this an entirely new plot rather than a P&P variation. I have read many variations, but I find this one disappointing unless one disregards canon completely. I thoroughly enjoyed the dragon series, so my discomfort is due to my own emotional history rather than the merits of the story.
October 9, 2019
At first, I was not sure I was going to like this narrative enough to finish the book. Admittedly, I’m kinda picky when it comes to my JAFF. I want a swoony Mr. Darcy. I was NOT swooning. Also, this story was giving me Mansfield Park vibes and Mansfield Park might be my least loved Austen novel. BUT! This isn’t really a P&P/MP mash up and the writing is very good. I loved Elizabeth’s strength and fortitude, as well as Mr. Bennet’s protectiveness. There are several really interesting and unique story points that keep it an interesting and quick read.
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