I was a little skeptical about Those Below the Tree House when I first dove into this novel, as the first third of the book focuses on a lot of telling, not showing, character traits and development. However, once I got to the core of the freak's take over of the neighborhood, I was hooked and could not put this book down!
*Spoilers Ahead!*
So let's start off with what I didn't like, because there isn't a lot of it, but it is what stopped this book from being a full five-star rating for me. I'm not sure I am a fan of how Matt Hayward introduces his minor characters. Tony's mom, step-dad, and friend Jacob all play pretty pivotal roles in the story, however, we know little about them other than what Tony blatantly explains to the reader. On top of that, for how major their existences and deaths are to Tony, it felt strange that they weren't given more depth and felt more like the cliches of a drunken stepfather, a neglectful mom, and a sort of lame friend you only hang out with out of convenience. Had Hayward taken the time to hash some of these minor characters out more, then I feel like the beginning of the book would have been a lot stronger. Since he didn't, the book felt really rushed at the beginning. I think if about 30-50 more pages had been added for the set up of the entire novel, that this book would have been an easy 5 stars.
So then, what did I love about this book? Three major things jumped out at me as I was reading: 1. The monsters are really cool. They're definitely a spin-off of zombies, but if zombies were some kind of strange spore moss monster. I loved the initial uncertainty of whether or not the victims of the moss monsters (known as freaks) were still alive or not. This is definitely something that sets these creatures apart from zombies, but also totally reminds me of the monsters in the video game The Last of Us, especially when the kids start mutating.
2. The kids in the story have a really great dynamic and they show tons of character development that is lacking elsewhere in the novel. Our narrator, Tony, is absorbed with his love of music, even when he is running for his life, but he's also not the leader of the group. He's just a 13-year-old who is trying to cope with the end of his world as he knows it through his guitar. This was such an interesting take for a coming of age horror story, and I really liked how his love of music became his therapy during all of the distress he went through. Then we get to Rodgers. Poor Rodgers. I found this character incredibly annoying and useless at first, but his story arc was definitely my favorite, and he by far has the most gut-wrenching death. The suicide of a child is probably one of the most horrifying things in the world, and Hayward did a really incredible job at showing Rodgers' depression and downward spiral. Lee was awesome. I found it strange that this 16-year-old was friends with kids three years younger than him and I didn't quite believe the reasoning given in the story, but I did love the inclusion of someone older to help these younger kids find their way through this catastrophe. And Lee was definitely the most interesting character of the bunch. Finally, there is Kit. Kit was my favorite character. He was basically Henry Bowers if Henry Bowers joined the Loser's Club instead of going insane. Kit had the best back story, the best redemption arc, and the most unnecessary death. His death really angered me because I felt like it wasn't needed, Tony didn't really mourn or react to it, and it was nowhere near as dramatic as the deaths of the other kids. Kit had redeemed himself. He deserved to survive.
And finally, 3. The Biblical Butcher. The biblical butcher made no sense to me as to how or why he was there, but that kind of added to how creepy he was. The scene of him standing in Kit's house when Tony entered the bedroom was the most unsettling scene in the entire novel and I absolutely loved it! He reminded me greatly of the Space Cowboy in Stephen King's Gerald's Game, who is one of my favorite monsters in all of horror lit. It was also the twist that this novel really needed in order to keep it interesting and dangerous beyond just the monsters and the kids' mental health. Tony's reflection on Kit missing his father twice really got me thinking that there's so much we don't know about these characters and that I wanted this book to be twice as long just so I could get more!
So, as you can probably tell, I really loved this book and have a ton of things to say about it, but as I just stated above, my biggest problem with this book is that it wasn't long enough to give me everything I wanted out of the story and characters. Granted, it doesn't need to be 1,100 pages and add an ancient space turtle, but I do think that about 100 pages more of background and character development would have launched this book into an instant horror classic.