Utter disappointment
It’s no secret that I haven’t loved this author’s last, oh I don’t know, six or so books? But this one was an absolute flop and almost a zero. I’ll try to keep it short(ish), but here are a few reasons why I desperately need you to change it up, dear author I used to love:
1. Keely. I was never the hugest fan, but she’s as outright unlikable as Tyra became in Tabby’s, Millie’s, and Rush’s books. Enough with the “you need to prove you’re worth anything to me” women, Kit. Please. It’s unappealing.
2. Carolyn. She’s Natalie all over again, except she appeared to want to change. I’ll give kudos for that, but the stereotypical mean girl with an addiction is old. Let’s move away from the toxic nastiness and “you should have confidence issues because you’re not skinny like me” game. It is, sadly, a recurring theme in your books and it smacks of someone not liking fellow women.
3. Find a new well to draw from. Please. Enough of inserting the Rock Chick series people into everything. And I see that Resurrection MC will likely have more of the same...if they’re ever written. I mean, people waited for Wood and Mase in LA for years, so I think it’s time to let this group go. Please and thank you.
4. Shizlayaya or whatever? You’re not Snoop. It’s not 1992. And it’s insulting to see such caricatures of Black men and women in your books. Please, for the love of whoever, stop with the OTT nonsense. You have talent. Don’t cheapen it like this.
Yes, I know I’m going to attract some serious hate for this. But someone needs to be more than a sycophant about these books. So, like Kristof, I guess it’s up to me to tell you. Ditch the yes-men and women, find fresh notebooks to plot from, and show me that you haven’t lost your mojo. Because constantly going back to the same three or four plot variances and the same people makes me sad. They’ve had their stories told. Branch out. You wrote some great books. You just need some original ideas, or at least a new setting that doesn’t bring Lee or Elvira or any of the people who have been written to a nub into it.